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Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
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Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
ProtoBusterSword > 08-06-2018, 11:29 AM
Hello once again, fellow =SB='ers! Proto here once again bringing back my development blog on my fanfiction "Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE.
Due to the Genesis Wave being set off, I'm starting over again. With this blog, that is. Due to this being completely unseen on my end, I can't remember ALL the updates I've given you guys (not that it even mattered, almost nobody except Metallix read the very first post in that thread) and thus, I'm going to have to make do with the google document (Link below) that houses the project so far. Please let me know how I'm doing with this fanfiction. I can always touch it up once I'm done with the whole thing (in which I'm not even near that milestone yet) if you have any grammar/overall structure tips for me.
The Project so far!
Also, I might as well share this too, I have a logo for this little project.
![[Image: DDLC_Severance_Logo.png]](https://image.ibb.co/hNiyty/DDLC_Severance_Logo.png)
Not bad, huh? I'm planning on redoing this logo AFTER the fanfiction has been written and squared away.
So yeah, that's it. Click the link, read what little I have, and let me know what you think!
-Proto -
RE: Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
Wingzzzzy > 08-06-2018, 02:27 PM
This sounds like a fun read. -
RE: Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
ProtoBusterSword > 08-06-2018, 03:11 PM
Thanks! I'll try to keep it like that! -
RE: Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
ProtoBusterSword > 08-15-2018, 10:18 AM
8/15/18 UPDATE: Finished "Fourth Idea: The Beginning (Part 1)"
Man, did that take me awhile to type. I would went all the way and have my main OC start the usual events of DDLC (Sayori catching up to us, pestering us to join a club, etc, etc.) but looking back at what I've typed out, how descriptive I was, I simply said to myself "that's enough, split it into 2 parts!"
Next update, "Fourth Idea: The Beginning (Part 2)"
Happy reading!
-Proto -
RE: Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
Sonicfan059 > 08-16-2018, 02:03 PM
Nice I like the logo! I’ll read all of it when I get home. -
RE: Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
ProtoBusterSword > 08-16-2018, 02:09 PM
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RE: Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
ProtoBusterSword > 09-16-2018, 09:16 AM
9/16/18 UPDATE: Finished "Fourth Idea: The Beginning (Part 2)"
There we go. Now this fanfiction can get started properly. Of course I would've described everything that happened in that one scene, but at this point, I wanted to get this idea done. So you know what this means.
Next Update, OUR FIRST BOSS FIGHT!! "Fifth Idea: Boss Fight-Corrupted Sayori/Seg realizes Severance.EXE"
Plus, It's a good time to mention that from here on out, my ideas are going to be ALL OVER THE PLACE. They're not going to be in order from point A to Point Z, seeing as the idea list I had made for myself is the exact same way. i just typed out idea hook after idea hook. Buckle in, kiddos and kiddettes! Until next time!
-Proto -
RE: Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
ProtoBusterSword > 10-04-2018, 01:45 PM
10/4/18 UPDATE: Began work on "Fifth Idea: Boss Fight-Corrupted Sayori/Seg realizes Severance.EXE"/JoJo References? NANI?!
TONDA GOSSA everyone! Got a few things to update y'all on. First of all, "Fifth Idea: Boss Fight-Corrupted Sayori/Seg realizes Severance.EXE" is now underway. I didn't get to the fighting portion of it yet, but it's coming!
Secondly, I have decided to add a little something extra to this document in progress. To make the ideas I've started on look less like I just left them incomplete, I'm going to add THIS...
![[Image: Blank+_193ac6f70293e9f71fcf8385cac9e8c9.png]](https://2static1.fjcdn.com/comments/Blank+_193ac6f70293e9f71fcf8385cac9e8c9.png)
YUP, I'M INDEED GOING THERE. This arrow (MINUS the musical copyright infringement!) will be at the foot of any idea I've started on. I've always loved this little meme and decided to do something with it.
Stay tuned bros and bro-ettes!
-Proto -
RE: Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
ProtoBusterSword > 10-12-2018, 08:54 AM
10/12/18 UPDATE: Continued work on "Fifth Idea: Boss Fight-Corrupted Sayori/Seg realizes Severance.EXE"
Ok, actually in truth this update was supposed to be posted yesterday, but I was busy with other things. But here's where the idea stands: I have gotten into the fight properly, and showcased a special move of Segs, called the "Seg Sphere" I also decided to incorporate more Zalgo text into the idea, as it's not Sayori who's talking but rather Monika. She's the one controlling them after all.
There's not much left to do in this idea. Just have to finish the fight, showcase how Seg learns the titular move (Severance.EXE) and call it a day.
Until next time!
-Proto -
RE: Doki Doki Literature Club: SEVERANCE (DEV BLOG FOR FANFIC)
ProtoBusterSword > 10-17-2018, 07:05 PM
10/17/18 UPDATE: WE'VE DONE IT, DUDES/DUDETTES! "Fifth Idea: Boss Fight-Corrupted Sayori/Seg realizes Severance.EXE" IS FINALLY DONE!! Whew!
Here's some base notes on the idea:
-Gave Sayori a last name (Fun Fact: The last name "Shimizu" means "Clean, Pure Water" in Japanese. Since Sayori usually associates her depression with Rainclouds, I figured that this name would reflect her now-enlightened state of being, now that she's not corrupted anymore.)
-There are three lines of what appears to be gibberish. I assure you it's not. Run that through a Base64 decoder.)
Next up, We witness the creation of a weapon that sounds unorthodox, but in the hands of a certain pink-haired manga reading cupcake-baking tsundere...It's her calling card. Stay tuned!
