Burno, My Fan Character!

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Burno, My Fan Character!
Topic Started: Dec 4 2008, 12:27 AM (98 Views)
RaDaR125	Dec 4 2008, 12:27 AM Post #1
Silver Posts: 378 Group: E-Rank Soldier Member #9,063 Joined: June 14, 2008	(Alright, before I start, this is my first fan-fiction type thing, so comments welcome.) Burno Backstory Born on the planet Rapugnus into a rogue human race, things turned bad as soon as Burno was brought into his world. His home planet had declared war on Mobius on the day he was born. But the fighting only started when Burno was about 14. His high school, Genesis High was bombarded during Science class. "... Burno...? BURNO!!" yelled the impatient physicist. "Hmm? What?" Burno replied. "We were just discussing uses of magnesium, and you have not shown a spark of interest," his teacher began. "Perhaps a weeks' detention would-" A large explosion was heard. It was not the teacher's rage. The Mobians had arrived. The ground shook. The skies were alit with explosions and search lights. The Mobian soldiers surrounded the school. What did they want with a high school? Meanwhile, Burno's classroom had plunged into panic. Terrified faces were spread all around, everyone hoping they'd escape unscathed. Everyone, including the teacher, approached Burno. He was the most experienced with this sort of thing, and everyone knew it. "Burno... What do we do?" asked Melony. Melony had known Burno since he was born. In her opinion, Burno was a brave hearted person, who knew what to do nearly all the time. He had once saved her from a burning house, and she still felt the need to pay him back. The only bad thing about him was he didn't care if he got hurt. This was because he thought it was his fault the war started. "Well, we can't just sit around. We need to get ready for them," he replied. "I have a plan..." The Mobians burst through the door. They were heavily armed, not to mention well experienced. They were told to look for people worth training to fight on their side, but who or what were they going to find in a high school? All of a sudden, a small man wearing a large white coat came running towards them with a chair. He attacked with a swift swing of the chair, but it was no use. The soldiers armour was too thick to penetrate. The scientist was thrown aback by the two, and they walk towards him in order to finish him off. The door was left unguarded! The whole class crept outside, except for Burno and Melony. They were spotted by the Mobians. "Hey, you two, get back here!" One shouted. "Should we take them hostage?" Asked the other. "The girl, yes. But we kill the boy." He aimed a pistol straight at Burno, and fired. Burno felt no pain, but Melony was lying in front of him, unconscious. "How the hell did you miss that?" Questioned the Mobian soldier, who was not holding a gun. "She must of jumped in front... So, we're going to have to take HIM with us instead!" He replied hastily. Burno punched the ground. He was so angry... So overcome. He wanted to kill them both, but he knew Melony wouldn't want that. He had to escape. But how? "Damn you... You killed her..." The angry teenager rose his fist. But when he rose his fist, purple energy flowed around him, and a flame formed in the palm of his hand. Burno knew exactly what to do. He turned round, and grabbed the largest piece of magnesium he could find on the desk. The Mobians were too busy reloading their guns to realise. Burno held the magnesium on the palm of his hand. He had been paying attention when the teacher had shown the magnesium. The teen concentrated hard. Fire spouted from his hand, and the magnesium was burning. He quickly tossed it at the Mobians. It flashed extremely brightly, and it blinded the Mobians temporarily. Burno took this time to escape out the door. A man in a white coat followed closely behind. Outside the school, no Mobians were in sight. Burno assumed that they had moved to another location. However, they had left one escape pod behind, for reasons unknown to him. He had forgotten two soldiers were still inside the school. Suddenly, firing could be heard from behind. For the first time, he realised his teacher was right behind him. He had been shot down. The lonely teen knew he had to leave his planet. He ran towards the escape pod, though he was very tired. He pushed himself towards the escape pod, and jumped right in. There were no controls. Just a big red button. With all the doubt in the world, he slammed the button down. It literally just sparkled, then was gone like a rocket. He peered out the small window. He was heading for the planet, Mobius. Stats: Name: Burno Hammon Age: 14 Gender: Male Species: Human Appearance: Dark shade of cream skin colour, medium sized brown hair, brown eyes. Red jacket, white undershirt, blue shorts. Birth date: 31st August IQ: 110 Birth place: Genesis hospital Stats: Agility=21 Speed=6 Power=12 Defense=3 Intelligence=23 Skill=25 Theme Song= In Pieces- Linkin Park (I will most likely add to this, but comments so far?) (EDIT:Still adding...) Edited by RaDaR125, Dec 6 2008, 02:46 PM.
	This is sorta my first attempt at fan fiction, except for the fact it's part of a bio. Please read over and comment if you have the time. And enjoy. Ah... The joys of the Nintendo 64! Crap, It looks like Barrie Scott may not advertise much longer... Shadow ~~Sez~~ Says: Type out your DAMN words.


Timothy Ulysses, Crusader	Dec 4 2008, 12:35 AM Post #2
Oh no... I've become too attached to my avatar! I can't bear to change it! Posts: 2,184 Group: =SB= Governors Member #6,733 Joined: March 17, 2008 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic Chronicles: The Dark Brotherhood Current Mood: Bored Blog Wait... I have a blog?	Bio requires more detail. Back story looks great, but I sense evidence of unthemed powers, tsk tsk tsk. I'll have to keep an eye on this one for further analysis. Good work so far. Keep at it!
	"I've heard legends of that person, how he traveled the breadth of the land reducing all he touched to rubble..." Spoiler: click to toggle Pearls of wisdom (Currently looking for quotes that AREN'T mine): Spoiler: click to toggle Spoiler: click to toggle Venoma3d TUC...just just...dah why do I bother <__> Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader So, let's recap; Shadow's ring bracers aren't just some peculiar and incredibly dubious fashion statement; they are in fact devices (whether they be magical, mystical or technological in nature) used to contain his godmodded powers to a more bareable level that remains safely under nine thousand. They are also used to hide his emorific wrists. Am I following this properly so far? Spoiler: click to toggle SuperShadowgal If you do not use proper grammar, Lady Fury shall kick your a$$! Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader According to the Laws of Awesomeness, if the need is dire and the circumstances call for it, Amy automatically trumps all other characters. Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader Amy Rose without a doubt; how can you not love Spontaneous Hammer Generation and Extraordinary Rage as powers? She owns many robots with her super pwning hammer. I think her problem is that if caught by surprise, she automatically drops her hammer, no Dexterity roll required (in case you're wondering, that was possibly another one of my epically failing jokes). Besides, to REALLY start beating things up, she needs to be 'in the zone'. The trigger seems to vary from time to time, from "Don't interrupt me while talking to Sonic," and "I'm pissed because I can't find Sonic," to "So-and-so insulted me," and "It's that time of the month again." Plus she's like Mr T in that due to the Law of Sheer Awesomeness, she can beat the crap out of anyone she wishes (downing an Egg Fort singlehandedly is a prime example of her awesome factor). It's a shame she can't pity foo's; then she'd be the epitomy of destruction. Thumbs up to the day Lady Fury learns Pity Foo'. Spoiler: click to toggle Um... help? Spoiler: click to toggle Wowzaa1 Banned because I LOVE YOU. Timothy Ulysses Crusader BANNED: For... wait, WHAT? Spoiler: click to toggle sMy PANCAKES Remember kids... naplam is used on OTHER people. NOT yourself. Spoiler: click to toggle Quote: Bones of Terror: Good, now Timothy have some company when he is online. Rouge X Darkness: About time. Shadow's missing his blades TUC, time to give them back <3 Timothy Ulysses, Crusader: What's that supposed to mean exactly? Rouge X Darkness: It means you can stop being an emo about being the only person from Down Under on here My fancharacters and my highly acclaimed Master Codex of Superpowers! ___________________ Artwork by Sniper, gif by sMy PANCAKES. Yes, ALL of my characters wield or have been influenced by magic or magical items. So? Spoiler: click to toggle Friends: sonicblaze, wowzaa1, DragonFlame, Beta Ray Banhammer, sMy PANCAKES, Miracle, FireFly, Talancir, lilsonic, Godzilla Firestorm, Cy-Fox, the King of Hyrule (wait, what?), ??? Please note that I won't add you without your asking first (because I'm paranoid or shy, one of the two). I have Facebook AND MSN! PM me for details. For the last time, YES, I hate Shadow!


RaDaR125	Dec 4 2008, 08:19 AM Post #3
Silver Posts: 378 Group: E-Rank Soldier Member #9,063 Joined: June 14, 2008	I will, but I'll need to figure out what's missing. Also, what do you mean by "unthemed powers"?
	This is sorta my first attempt at fan fiction, except for the fact it's part of a bio. Please read over and comment if you have the time. And enjoy. Ah... The joys of the Nintendo 64! Crap, It looks like Barrie Scott may not advertise much longer... Shadow ~~Sez~~ Says: Type out your DAMN words.


Timothy Ulysses, Crusader	Dec 4 2008, 06:21 PM Post #4
Oh no... I've become too attached to my avatar! I can't bear to change it! Posts: 2,184 Group: =SB= Governors Member #6,733 Joined: March 17, 2008 Gender: Male Favorite System: Xbox Favorite Sonic Game: Sonic Chronicles: The Dark Brotherhood Current Mood: Bored Blog Wait... I have a blog?	http://sonicblast.org/topic/7174/2/#new Themes, man, THEMES!
	"I've heard legends of that person, how he traveled the breadth of the land reducing all he touched to rubble..." Spoiler: click to toggle Pearls of wisdom (Currently looking for quotes that AREN'T mine): Spoiler: click to toggle Spoiler: click to toggle Venoma3d TUC...just just...dah why do I bother <__> Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader So, let's recap; Shadow's ring bracers aren't just some peculiar and incredibly dubious fashion statement; they are in fact devices (whether they be magical, mystical or technological in nature) used to contain his godmodded powers to a more bareable level that remains safely under nine thousand. They are also used to hide his emorific wrists. Am I following this properly so far? Spoiler: click to toggle SuperShadowgal If you do not use proper grammar, Lady Fury shall kick your a$$! Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader According to the Laws of Awesomeness, if the need is dire and the circumstances call for it, Amy automatically trumps all other characters. Spoiler: click to toggle Timothy Ulysses Crusader Amy Rose without a doubt; how can you not love Spontaneous Hammer Generation and Extraordinary Rage as powers? She owns many robots with her super pwning hammer. I think her problem is that if caught by surprise, she automatically drops her hammer, no Dexterity roll required (in case you're wondering, that was possibly another one of my epically failing jokes). Besides, to REALLY start beating things up, she needs to be 'in the zone'. The trigger seems to vary from time to time, from "Don't interrupt me while talking to Sonic," and "I'm pissed because I can't find Sonic," to "So-and-so insulted me," and "It's that time of the month again." Plus she's like Mr T in that due to the Law of Sheer Awesomeness, she can beat the crap out of anyone she wishes (downing an Egg Fort singlehandedly is a prime example of her awesome factor). It's a shame she can't pity foo's; then she'd be the epitomy of destruction. Thumbs up to the day Lady Fury learns Pity Foo'. Spoiler: click to toggle Um... help? Spoiler: click to toggle Wowzaa1 Banned because I LOVE YOU. Timothy Ulysses Crusader BANNED: For... wait, WHAT? Spoiler: click to toggle sMy PANCAKES Remember kids... naplam is used on OTHER people. NOT yourself. Spoiler: click to toggle Quote: Bones of Terror: Good, now Timothy have some company when he is online. Rouge X Darkness: About time. Shadow's missing his blades TUC, time to give them back <3 Timothy Ulysses, Crusader: What's that supposed to mean exactly? Rouge X Darkness: It means you can stop being an emo about being the only person from Down Under on here My fancharacters and my highly acclaimed Master Codex of Superpowers! ___________________ Artwork by Sniper, gif by sMy PANCAKES. Yes, ALL of my characters wield or have been influenced by magic or magical items. So? Spoiler: click to toggle Friends: sonicblaze, wowzaa1, DragonFlame, Beta Ray Banhammer, sMy PANCAKES, Miracle, FireFly, Talancir, lilsonic, Godzilla Firestorm, Cy-Fox, the King of Hyrule (wait, what?), ??? Please note that I won't add you without your asking first (because I'm paranoid or shy, one of the two). I have Facebook AND MSN! PM me for details. For the last time, YES, I hate Shadow!


RaDaR125	Dec 19 2008, 07:12 AM Post #5
Silver Posts: 378 Group: E-Rank Soldier Member #9,063 Joined: June 14, 2008	Ahh, I think I get it now. So, for example, he should have all the abilities of a flame?
	This is sorta my first attempt at fan fiction, except for the fact it's part of a bio. Please read over and comment if you have the time. And enjoy. Ah... The joys of the Nintendo 64! Crap, It looks like Barrie Scott may not advertise much longer... Shadow ~~Sez~~ Says: Type out your DAMN words.


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