Lightning the fox

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Lightning the fox; My first female fan-character
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Shadrocker	Feb 18 2013, 06:11 AM Post #1
Angel Island Act 2 Posts: 52 Group: D Rank Adventurer Member #13,407 Joined: January 22, 2013	Here's the info for My female FC. Name: Renne Thunders the fox Alias: Lightning, Thunder, and Queen (by Christopher) Age: 13 (almost 14) Gender: Female Species: Fox (specific name is unknown). Date of Birth: January 27 Place of Birth: Laslad (the Dallas of Mobius). Current Residence: Salpen. Occupation: Pop Singer. Alignment: Good. Physical Description: Height: 3'5 Weight: 51.3 lbs. Appearance: Thin sky blue fur, rainbnes with balck stars on itow hair in 6 in. long ponytail and bangs halfway down forehead, blue eyes, bushy tail that almost touches the ground, pointy ears, innocent smile, very average body proportions, and white lightning bolt shaped highlights on sides of tail. Attire: Yellow classical sneakers, black T-shirt with gold lightning bolt, navy jeans that go slightly above ankles, emerald green braces (what Christopher needs for his teeth LOL ), black belt, white leather gloves, and yellow headphones with black stars on it. Personal Info: Personality: Kind, friendly, electric, slightly hyperactive, happy, and free. Hobbies/talents: Singing, dancing, listening to music, putting static on people's ears (because it's fun), gymnastics, making lyrics, and playing with Christopher and Justin. Likes: Pop music, karaoke, dancing, the sound of thunder, thunderstorms, rain, Christopher singing to her, and watching movies to make funny commentary (usually with Christopher or Justin). Dislikes: Clear days, being made fun of, watching Christopher or Justin get hurt in a fight, getting hurt, and boys that harrass her. Items: A regular Ipod touch and sledgehammer (used to mock Thor). Vehicle: A lightning yellow Camero with 2 black lightning shaped racing stripes. Trivia: Secretly loves Christopher. Sometimes refers to both Christopher and Justin as weird when they talk in British accents. Sings Christopher's nickname "Boomer". Dances with Christopher to any pop music. Interested in being a mormon like Christopher. Wants to perform with Revolving Kaos in one performance. Has no relationship with Justin. Is a Texas fan. Battle Info: Skills: Agility and electrokinesis. Techniques: Few karate moves, sledger (slams target with sledgehammer only if neccesary), and lightning storm (fire lightning at targets). Strengths: Lightning, energy of any type, and static. Weaknesses: Water, metal (can be a magnet at times), and inhumid enviroments. Weapons: A sledgehammer. History of Renne is unknown.
	I'm just nobody, but a strange one. And what makes you strange makes you special If we look inside ourselves, then we'll know who just we are~Jon Bon Jovi Are you hangin at the edge of your seat?~Freddie Mercury


Clementine	Feb 18 2013, 09:14 AM Post #2
Yep. Posts: 1,397 Group: A Rank Hero Member #12,099 Joined: May 26, 2011 Steam ID: Maximus123458 Game Currently Playing: Megaman X6	Well, i don't have much to say about this, the character's alright but i feel you're taking the lazy route by giving her electricity powers and never explaining why. I know for a fact that Tails was born with two tails and Sonic was just naturally born with his speed (Or maybe it's his shoes.) but that's just video game logic. In roleplays and fan fictions you're allowed way more realism and in my opinion, realism is an important aspect in those kind of things. It's not like i want you to listen to me. As things go, i'm just stating my opinion. Like said, the character's alright. It sounds like a pretty uplifting person. But i'm not exactly sure if you truly decided that her history and reason why she has such powers are "Unknown", or you just didn't feel like explaining it. I mean, just what is Laslad, The Dallas of Mobius? Is it like, something from the Archie comics or what? How did she became a known pop singer? What brought her to move from Laslad, to this "Salpen" place? Well, we never know because supposedly her history is unknown. Getting to know your character is important as well, especially in roleplays with a huge story. The other roleplayers are probably gonna want to know each other, so if a one gets slightly personal and asks where were you before whatever in the roleplay happened, and you say "I dunno" that's gonna be a bit awkward, and usually making up things as you go doesn't turn out so well. Feel free to call me out on whatever you want, sometimes i might skip a detail or two, but it would be pretty neat if there was more to your character then just the fact she was electric and a pop singer for reasons that we never really know.



Josh the hedgehog	Feb 18 2013, 09:46 AM Post #3
Those who do good, do... Posts: 2,450 Group: S Rank Hero Member #12,907 Joined: April 24, 2012 Playstation Network ID: joshyboist Xbox Live Gamertag: starlighter XX	I have to agree with Clementine, you need to give more information about Lightning, such as how did she become a pop singer and how did she get her electrical powers...
	Betrayal is a dangerous thing... "In my world...It's kill or be killed..." -Josh "Better run, coward..."-Sinistar


Shadrocker	Feb 18 2013, 10:34 AM Post #4
Angel Island Act 2 Posts: 52 Group: D Rank Adventurer Member #13,407 Joined: January 22, 2013	I'll see what I can do, but as for now I'll answer your concerns, the reason why Renne moved from laslad to Salpen was because her father was in the military and his family had to move overseas, she has electrokinesis after being stuck by lightning , she became a pop singer because singing is her pride/life, laslad is a city on Mobius that's just like Dallas, Texas and Salpen is a city just like Naples, Italy (and it's not a friendly place to live in either) After making a fan-character, I set up one of those ask blogs so you can get info. That's all I need to say.
	I'm just nobody, but a strange one. And what makes you strange makes you special If we look inside ourselves, then we'll know who just we are~Jon Bon Jovi Are you hangin at the edge of your seat?~Freddie Mercury


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