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=SB= RP Tournament VI - OOC Chat
Topic Started: Jan 22 2013, 05:51 PM (11,300 Views)
Lord Talancir D'Landior Jan 22 2013, 05:51 PM Post #1
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 Because we need one, here we go.

EDIT: Because this was posted after the last post I made, TUC and Josh, I made some comments about your submissions.
Edited by Talancir D'Landior, Jan 22 2013, 05:53 PM.
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Breakfast Princess May 20 2013, 09:15 AM Post #676
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The most important meal of the day
 Oh please (-_-) You don't honestly believe that, do you? Fine then. Get out of the Loser's Bracket and I'll whoop you again.
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Eren Jaeger May 20 2013, 10:42 AM Post #677
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"I will kill ALL of the Titans!"
 Hey, that was a contributing factor to both of the judges that cost me points. Push come to shove, it would have been a tie and Talancir would have judged.

But I could care less honestly, it's just a simple roleplaying tournament that doesn't really judge crucial factors of life and all of that jazz. Just having fun with it is all.
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Breakfast Princess May 20 2013, 01:48 PM Post #678
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 It is fun, and like all games, it is even more fun when you win. Hopefully we get to go against each other again. See if any of your passive aggressive smack talk holds any water xD dont forget the periods next time!
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Eren Jaeger May 20 2013, 07:42 PM Post #679
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"I will kill ALL of the Titans!"
 If you wanna scrap, there's still a private RP of ours under water. D:<

Push come to shove, I might pull it together and see you in the finals. XD
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Ludichaos May 21 2013, 12:56 AM Post #680
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[Outrealm Vagabond]
 Yeah, I admit I was kind of splitting hairs at that point. But I didn't really have much else to set you two apart in that regard. Still, every slip up counts. I know that all too well.

And she'll whoop you again once you get out of the Loser's Bracket assuming she beats me. I ain't rolling over and playing dead this far in. ¦P
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Breakfast Princess May 21 2013, 02:49 AM Post #681
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 @TKC I'M GETTING TO THAT OKAY?! Geesh.

@Ludi Iiii dunno man. Two people already have fighting me. It's kind of a talent of mine, I guess. Think you can handle it?
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Eren Jaeger May 21 2013, 02:36 PM Post #682
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"I will kill ALL of the Titans!"
 She actually wouldn't, but it's cute that you think that, senor.

-avoid dots-

-win-
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HollyYoshiPosted Image May 21 2013, 06:36 PM Post #683
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 Alright, let’s begin with this little spell of judging from yours truly, shall we?

Grammar

TKC: Well, I’m pleased to state that I found a single grammar error in your posts. The single error came from this little statement;

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This area isn't as large as Combo was used to fighting


The problem came from the fact that you suddenly switched to present tense when you had been using past tense before then. Remember, keep things in the same tense. Other than that, I saw no issues.

Score: 9.5/10

Lycalo: Unfortunately, I did notice more issues with your grammar. For instance, there were a few times when you wrote ‘to’ when you should have written ‘too’, plus you had an issue as well where you used present tense instance of the past you had been using elsewhere. Also, you had an instance where you repeated a phase; ‘Tharros continued to stare his opponent down his opponent.’ Other than that, your grammar was solid.

Score: 8/10
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Fair Play

So, the both of you didn’t seem to have much of an issue with this segment. You both had attacks hit, as few attacks as there were. As well, how your characters reacted to the attacks and all that was done in a realistic fashion.
For that, both of you earn a 9/10.

Environmental Adaptation

TCK: I have to say, you did a pretty good job on this. There were many mentions of the arena in your posts. Acknowledgement is always, always a good thing. If I had to name one flaw, it’s the fact that I didn’t see as much use of the arena as I would have liked. There was a good amount, and I do commend you for that, but I would have liked to see a little more. Like when you created shockwaves in the bar, you could have had things shake and fall. It’s the little things that make all the difference.

I’d give you a 8/10

Lycalo: As for you, you also did well on this I thought. And you gave better use of the lobby in this one. I especially liked the reactions from the crowd in your posts. So, I’d say you did a good job. Though, just like with TCK, I think there should have been a bit more. Other than that, you did a fine job.

Therefore, I’d say you earn a 8.5/10

Entertainment

I’m going to say right now that the lack of actual fighting did hurt this area a little bit. I would have loved to see more blows traded between you to. However, what few attacks there were I felt were entertaining. Plus I liked the banter and dialogue between the two of you, thought it was clever and well-written.

You both get a 8/10

Now we add everything up;

TKC: 34.5

Lycalo: 33.5

So, if I add up Lifio’s totals….Then that means TKC wins the match!
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Chompman May 21 2013, 08:50 PM Post #684
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 ok, now that both Blaire and Lif judged, i'm excited for our upcoming battle!!!!
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Ludichaos May 22 2013, 06:30 AM Post #685
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 Cakes: Maybe. But the last few weren't machines. I don't think you can get a mech to back down so easily. So I reckon I'll be fine.

Rad: Well no. Not if she doesn't win. ¦L

But from what I've seen she's a pretty tenacious fighter. There are no certainties, my friend. -finger waggle-
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Breakfast Princess May 22 2013, 10:46 AM Post #686
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 Yeah I know it's a machine, I had Rael notice it too in the Lobby. I figure now she doesnt have to hold back or feel pity or waste her Darma healing her opponent this time. It could be good or bad... Good because she can use her full power knowing she isn't damaging a human and bad because like you said, you probably won't be forced to forfeit no matter how hard I try. But it should cause for an interesting match and I'm excited to get started. I'd like a fourth consecutive win under my belt. Wouldn't it be cool to win the tourney with NO losses or trips to the Loser's Bracket? That'd be awesome!
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Ludichaos May 22 2013, 10:54 AM Post #687
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 Well only one of us can go through with no losses, I'm afraid. I wonder which one of us it'll be.

And I noticed that. Machines have feelings too you monsterrrr. But yeah, that'll be... something.

You can expect the thread to be up sometime today. Just gotta visualise the Arena so I can enter and describe it appropriately and whatnot.
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Eren Jaeger May 22 2013, 12:31 PM Post #688
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"I will kill ALL of the Titans!"
 I appreciate the judges taking the time to judge the match and I'll take their advice into heavy consideration for future matches.

Well, since I've been declared the winner, do I post Combo finishing off the match or do we just skip straight to being healed after the infirmary?
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Lord Talancir D'Landior May 22 2013, 12:35 PM Post #689
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May 22 2013, 12:31 PM
do I post Combo finishing off the match
that would be helpful, TKC. thank you.
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Breakfast Princess May 22 2013, 01:52 PM Post #690
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May 22 2013, 10:54 AM
Well only one of us can go through with no losses, I'm afraid. I wonder which one of us it'll be.

And I noticed that. Machines have feelings too you monsterrrr. But yeah, that'll be... something.

You can expect the thread to be up sometime today. Just gotta visualise the Arena so I can enter and describe it appropriately and whatnot.
Yeah I know I cant wait to see that'd be so cooool.

Yeah and she doesnt care xP its not really a matter of feelings but rather a matter of... Moral decency. But machines dont get that consideration because they are just machines!

And okay i'm in no rush, I have 2 off days in a row coming up so if you aren't terribly busy the next couple days we can prolly get this match started off really quickly with a few posts each at least.
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