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=SB= Tournament VI: Signups; SIGNUPS ARE NOW CLOSED
Topic Started: Jan 21 2013, 12:09 AM (2,627 Views)
Lord Talancir D'Landior
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Tournament Character Profile


Approved Characters
 

  • TUC - Claru Dante
  • Earth Warrior - Polemistis
  • Lilfate - Mevnomba Dondred, AKA Ven
  • Lifio - Lifio Waterson
  • Fenroar - Fenroar Strauss
  • Josh the hedgehog - Josh
  • Special Operative Blaire - Blaire Fields
  • Pai Chan - Raelean Sivth
  • Call of Kunai Steel Opz - Aaron Kunai
  • Jack Frost - Ezekial Wolffe
  • Ludichaos - APT-001C Gespenst Type-AI “Wraith”
  • Stark - Leon "Combo" Kaigo

Pending Characters
 

  • Richard Feynman (kale) - Sílfide Gensai
  • The Fish - Fish
Edited by Talancir D'Landior, Feb 4 2013, 07:36 AM.
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Lord Talancir D'Landior
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note to all: If there are Edits to be made to your profile, please indicate said edits in Bold.

please do not send me PMs regarding my commentary. DF has to look at what is being said and either agree with me, disagree with me, or add more questions. Therefore:

Josh the Hedgehog

Josh, still needing an opinion from you on whether or not shooting 30 rounds on full auto is fair. also, how many clips are you carrying and how many rounds per clip?

Sword Examples, please. What I'm getting at is... is it like a dagger, arm-length, 'floor to navel' (longsword), or two handed?

ok, three hits for regular hits? if this is what you meant, then I think this is fair, so long as your shadow copies' integrity is scaled down in a huge away against stronger attacks.

So....... how often can you use your Dark Gem in a match? what will deplete its charge faster?

Alright, I see what you mean by Enchanted Light Sources... but this may need to be reexamined. My primary concern is that you have included a weakness that will not matter, provided that none of your opponents have anything that qualifies. If you have a weakness that doesn't really apply in this tournament, then it might as well not exist, in which case you only really have two weaknesses.


TUC, Good to go. Earth Warrior, also good to go.


Lifio, I only have a question about your Inexperience weakness. Give me an idea of how often he could tire himself through using his powers. if he were to use them in every post, how may posts would you make before he was completely exhausted?




Edited by Talancir D'Landior, Jan 23 2013, 07:16 PM.
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ok, holy crap.... tried to get through two more, but darn it, too late in the night after work and now I can't think straight. I'll try again tomorrow.
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here's some questions that Talancir asked me, and these are my answers too:

Josh, still needing an opinion from you on whether or not shooting 30 rounds on full auto is fair. also, how many clips are you carrying and how many rounds per clip?
Josh only carries 3 clips, each holding about 300 bullets, and yes, 30 rounds per post is fair...

Sword Examples, please. What I'm getting at is... is it like a dagger, arm-length, 'floor to navel' (longsword), or two handed?
well it pretty much takes out a lot of types, but daggers are too short to be disarmed...

ok, three hits for regular hits? if this is what you meant, then I think this is fair, so long as your shadow copies' integrity is scaled down in a huge away against stronger attacks.

So....... how often can you use your Dark Gem in a match? what will deplete its charge faster?
it will be often, and there are only a select few moves that can drain it, well light-type sapping moves that is...it'll be tricky to sap it though because of how small it is...

Alright, I see what you mean by Enchanted Light Sources... but this may need to be reexamined. My primary concern is that you have included a weakness that will not matter, provided that none of your opponents have anything that qualifies. If you have a weakness that doesn't really apply in this tournament, then it might as well not exist, in which case you only really have two weaknesses.
so does this mean I only need two weaknesses?
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Jan 25 2013, 11:01 AM
here's some questions that Talancir asked me, and these are my answers too:

Josh, still needing an opinion from you on whether or not shooting 30 rounds on full auto is fair. also, how many clips are you carrying and how many rounds per clip?
Josh only carries 3 clips, each holding about 300 bullets, and yes, 30 rounds per post is fair...

Sword Examples, please. What I'm getting at is... is it like a dagger, arm-length, 'floor to navel' (longsword), or two handed?
well it pretty much takes out a lot of types, but daggers are too short to be disarmed...

ok, three hits for regular hits? if this is what you meant, then I think this is fair, so long as your shadow copies' integrity is scaled down in a huge away against stronger attacks.

So....... how often can you use your Dark Gem in a match? what will deplete its charge faster?
it will be often, and there are only a select few moves that can drain it, well light-type sapping moves that is...it'll be tricky to sap it though because of how small it is...

Alright, I see what you mean by Enchanted Light Sources... but this may need to be reexamined. My primary concern is that you have included a weakness that will not matter, provided that none of your opponents have anything that qualifies. If you have a weakness that doesn't really apply in this tournament, then it might as well not exist, in which case you only really have two weaknesses.
so does this mean I only need two weaknesses?
Not trying to take away his job or anything, the others I'll leave up to Talancir or DF of course. But for your last question, I'll just save him the trouble and tell you now what he meant. Talancir meant that it's probably unlikely anybody in the tournament has something to counter one of your character's said weaknesses. You need three weaknesses like everyone else, but you have to revamp that weakness he talked about into something that every opponent could possibly take advantage of, or just have another weakness entirely. So no.
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Josh -
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Josh only carries 3 clips, each holding about 300 bullets, and yes, 30 rounds per post is fair...
My god, those are no mere clips. Those are magazine drums! :O
Uzi with 100 round drums
ok, note the size of a 100 round magazine drum. a 300 magazine drum, which you say you have, is three times that size. after doing some research, 300 rounds weigh about 2.86 kilograms... let's call it 3 kg so we can account for the weight of the magazine drum without the bullets. the uzi is 3.5 kg. you're pushing 7 kg with your gun and a 300 round drum (which, of course, doesn't seem to exist. the largest size I've seen is 165 round drums, which is bulky enough)?

His ability to control the uzi on full auto must be absolutely horrible. And he's got three of them? you know that you can reload between matches, right? But then, since Uzis are known to be horribly inaccurate at medium-to-long range (as opposed to short-to-medium range), I suppose you must be trying to compensate for the accuracy of the weapon itself and the ability of your character.

I'd feel better about your uzi if you carried only 100 round magazine drums, for a total of 300 rounds. At 30 max rounds fired per post, you won't have to reload often. I doubt you'd even run out in a single match.

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-Shadow copy: Josh creates a copy of himself made from dark gaia, which can take some blows before dissipating, this can also give him a little breathing space for thinking. up to 3 copies can be active at once, they can be recognised as copies because they have soulless eyes and they take 3 blows before dissipating.
I forgot to ask.... how many copies can he make in a single post? Also, do you plan to use your Dark Gem to power this ability? I would suggest that you do.

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-Shadow lift: Josh uses his dark gaia to lift up any object, any person or himself into the air, Josh can also move his hands around to either turn the object he's shadow lifting OR to crush them, temporarily crippling the target if it's a person. this isn't affect by heavy armor BUT the natural weight of someone does make it harder to use and it doesn't affect anyone that uses light magic.
This seems like an overpowered skill, but this could be balanced out by considering the following:
Is there anything your opponent could do to attempt to resist this skill?
Do you plan to use your Dark Gem to power this ability? I would suggest that you do.

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-with some people, it's hard to disarm them...
This is really.... vague. What do you mean by this?


Fenroar -
The format you typed for your weaknesses is all together. is that one or three?


Lilfate -
You have my approval, sir. Once DF approves you, you are good to go.
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firstly, I thought UZIs usually have 300 rounds, so lets make it 100 rounds per clip instead...
secondly, Shadow copy can be used without a dark gem charge but it won't last as long as one with a dark gem charge...also only one copy is made per post...
thirdly, as I said before, people who are naturally heavy can make Shadow lift harder to use, and yes, it'll use a dark gem charge no matter what...
finally, the last weakness means that his sword can disarm but some people are skilled enough with their weapon to avoid being disarmed easily...
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Josh! I'm just going to give you a suggestion concerning Shadow lift. Can you ultimately make it only meant for objects and your self. Whereas if you wish, take use of the crowds as you see wish. Yet the control to lift someone's character will ultimately leave any choice to avert impossible for your opponent. That makes it an overpowered move and it can't be used, unless you specifically make adjustments to it.
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-His trusty sword, Triple Threat, designed to be able to disarm the opponent and to make demons think it's holy

Why not make this one of your skills for instance, if it's to complicated. Seen as you mentioned to make demons. As in, able to summon them am I correct?

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Lifio = Characters approved after I've seen the edits. Just have to wait for Talancir to confirm and your in.

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Fenroar I'm just going to add what Talancir requested.
Could you perhaps add the weakness in order. Otherwise I'd say your in.

Note, I could see at least two of them, but I may just not see it thoroughly whether there's a third.

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hey Warzak, let me just say something...
firstly, it doesn't make demons, it's designed like a cross, making demons THINK it's a holy weapon...
secondly, I might as well make shadow lift only work on himself and objects, since people have been saying it's way too overpowered, so one minute...
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Josh!
Fair enough, just wanted to have that clarified. I'm okay with this.
Character approved. Talancir has the last word however.
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ok, well I thought UZI clips have 300 rounds until Talancir pointed out it would be a drum round...
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Jan 25 2013, 09:55 PM
Fenroar -
The format you typed for your weaknesses is all together. is that one or three?
Whoops. Yeah, they're all separate. I'll go make the quick edit then.
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Just posting here to say I saw I was approved, so thanks guys. And no, DF, I was expecting anything less xD After all, it was copied and paste from the other tournament ^.^ I'll head over to the inter-round topic then. :D
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sorry for delay, one and all. Calculus homework is what it is, and it's taking a lot of my time. I will manage this, though:

Lifio - You are now awesome, and you can begin posting in the inter-round lobby.

Josh - I hope you're not being insulted by any of our proddings. the idea behind all this is that DF and I are asking these questions before any of your opponents ask them (and your match suffers as a result of you trying to explain what your character can do). If you can have an understandable profile that doesn't leave anything to imagination or loopholes, then you're standing on as solid a foundation as you can manage.

anyway, please elaborate on your vague weakness in your profile, and you should be good to go with your profile, after all the edits are made.


Fenroar - you have my approval. I do believe that you have DF's approval as well (provided I'm not wrong), so you ought to be able to post in the inter-round lobby.
Edited by Talancir D'Landior, Jan 27 2013, 08:16 PM.
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