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Nobius Chronicles; Many stories, 1 universe.
Topic Started: Sep 15 2012, 07:16 PM (378 Views)
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Everyone had their bows and arrows, tomahawks, spears, and blowguns aimed at their tied-up captive. They swung the rest of the rope over a sturdy branch before raising him high off the ground. The captive barked at the natives before laughing.

"We've ambushed you, captured you, and yet you are laughing." said the village chief. "Do you find your execution funny, murderer?"

Their captive looked down at the chief. "Look at them," he said. "They are scared of me. They have their weapons aimed at me, a helpless captive, yet they still quiver in fear.. I am Ironfang, they have every right to fear me. I can break out of these ropes right now, but I'd rather wait a little while longer. When I decide to free myself, I will make sure you regret capturing me, and you will not enjoy what happens next.."

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Part 1: Hylin the Halfbreed
Chapter 1: The Initiation

Tied to a tree, a beaten, weak, miserable and starving Hylin given up all hope of ever returning home. The slashes on the left side of his face would burn as the sun hit them. He knew howling for help would serve no purpose, but he didn't stop trying. His father Ironfang approached him with a grin. "Your howl, it is that of a wolf." said his father. "You have been fighting the wolf within you for a long time, but now it is calling out for help. It wants to be free!"

Hylin looked up to see Ironfang's face. "I can't believe I believed you. You swore you wouldn't kill those people. You swore mother would be safe! You lied. You can't be my father, those stories, they-"

"They were all true!" Ironfang interrupted with a joyous tone. "The killing, the stealing, you! It's all true!"

"But, why?"

"You were the gift of regret I gave to your mother for thinking she captured me all those years ago. I told her I would come back for you when the day came and kill anyone who got in my way! No matter how much you deny it, you are my son, my successor, and I you will become one of us!"

Hylin growled at Ironfang. He kept shaking, trying to free himself from the ropes that was stopping him from attacking his father. "You see?" asked Ironfang. "It's pointless, your aggression is a sign the wolf wants to be free from those ropes."

Ironfang walked away laughing, leaving Hylin bound to the tree for the 19th night in a row without any food or water. He continued howling for help, but eventually ended up exhausting himself before passing out from starvation again.

Morning came and the entire gang began packing their tents and storing their tools and weapons in preparations for traveling. When Ironfang when back into the woods with his followers to collect Hylin, they saw that the ropes were cut and Hylin was gone. Ironfang tracked Hylin's whereabouts to find him. He found various dead animals among the trail of blood. When he came to the end of the trail, he saw Hylin on top of a hill with a deer in his hands. He howled before running to Ironfang, standing before him. "I never felt this sensation before, dad!" said Hylin as he dropped the deer.

"Your Insensationable blood lust amuses me." said Ironfang as he patted Hylin on the head. "You left barely any blood, had it not been me looking for you, I don't think anyone would have found you."

"Thank you, father. I.. I want to be like this.. Forever.."

"Do not worry, Hylin, I will show you that there is more to being a wolf than killing whatever you want. You won't have to waste time on those PATHETIC animals. 20 days.. 20 was all you needed to unlock your real personality. I will train you to control this. Welcome to the gang."

"How did you know it was 20?" Hylin questioned.

"Because-"

A bullet struck the tree next to Ironfang. Hylin quickly moved from tree to tree to see what was happening. The Ironfang Gang was clashing with some traveling soldiers who were doing training exercises.
Before Ironfang could make it to the battle, all the wolves backed away to find Hylin already slaughtering them with their own weapons. With the last man killed, Hylin howled before he began feeding on the men. He threw a few bodies at the gang, as a sign for them to feast on them.

Later that night, everyone was sleep except Hylin who was staring into the campfire, thinking of everything he's been missing when he was 'pretending' to be a fox. He was startled when he heard a twig snap. It was his girlfriend Tira the Wolf. She sat on his lap and slowly reached in for a kiss before hugging him.

"I'm so proud of you, Hylin!" Tira said with joy. "You've finally embraced the wolf within you."

"I know." Hylin replied. "It's all because of you."

"We can finally be together forever, my soon to be to master."

"You know, we can become the top of the gang if we wanted to."

"What do you mean, otherthrow your father?"

"Yes. I my father may be the leader, but he is growing slow for his age. This is no longer about facing him when the day came or avenging my mother. This is about me and you, now. As long as we are together, I do not regret being full wolf.."

"But you aren't full wolf, Hylin! You're still half fox and-"

Hylin choked Tira before she could react nor catch her breath. "To hell with being half fox, I am a wolf, I am merciless, and I will soon be immortal!"

He then released Tira. She stood up and walked back to the female quarters. "You've changed Hylin." She then took a deep breathe as she rubbed her neck. "Just remember which half I fell in love with."

She then vanished in the pitch black of the night. Hylin stood up and punched a tree. He looked up at the moon, thinking hard about weather he really has changed.

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NOBIUS:

Nobius is a fiction world based off a fiction planet called Mobius.
It is called Nobius (Or originally Nohbias) because it is a planet of Mobians.
Due to this being a different dimension, are called Nobians.
Nothing about Nobius is similar to Mobius besides the fact that they are anthromorphic beings.
Edited by Sinistar, Sep 15 2012, 07:25 PM.
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This is a good start, but you should have explained Hylin's past. This is a bit confusing in that sense.
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Sep 18 2012, 07:00 PM
This is a good start, but you should have explained Hylin's past. This is a bit confusing in that sense.
His past is in his fan character profile. Didn't want to repeat half the things already mentioned twice, but instead let the story take place after such mentioned events and past is revealed.
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"I believe we are done here. I will let you live, but in return, you will bear my child. You are nothing but a vessel to the future of the Ironfang gang, and if you try to prevent the birth of the halfbreed, I will make you suffer for an eternity."

Part 1: Hylin the Halfbreed
Chapter 2: Hate

A new morning shined across the horizon. Hylin stayed up all night throwing woodchips in the camp fire. After much thinking about what Tira told him the previous night, he snuck over to the female quarters to speak to Tira. When he arrived at the quarters, he noticed that Tira's tent was empty. He heard faint sobbing in the forest and proceeded to follow the sounds. The sounds led to a small field of mushrooms and tall grass surrounded by the many trees in the forest. He noticed Tira and one of her friends sitting next to eachother talking about him and hid behind the nearest tree to listen.

"Who gave that necklace to you, then?" Asked Tira's friend.

"It was a gift from Hylin." replied Tira as she was wiping the tears from her eyes. "It means alot to me."

"Ironfang's son? Isn't he a filthy halfbreed?"

Tira quickly turned her head away from the necklace and towards her friend Amber. "Don't call him that. It's not like he had a choice."

Hylin looked at his hands. The serious look on his face started to lighten up. "Well why haven't you two been as close to eachother as you use to?" asked Amber. "You seemed pretty upset after whatever happened between you two last night."

"The Hylin I knew was sweet, polite, and always looked towards a brighter future. I use to be seen as a monster, as another nurse and maid, but when I met Hylin, he made me feel like a person. Like I mattered. But now.."

"Now what?"

"He's changed. He's no longer Hylin the Halfbreed, but Hylin the Wolf. I didn't want him to change into a wolf, I wanted him to accept the fact that he is part wolf!"

"Then perhaps it's time you changed too. I mean, he may have changed, but the barrier that would forever keep you two from ever being together is gone. He is here, he is a wolf. This as well be fate."

Tira put on the necklace and stood up. "Go and be with him, Tira." said Amber as she stood up. "He can still be Hylin the Halfbreed, you just have three options. You can remind him he's not a wolf, accept his changes and put your views of the old him behind or.."

"Or what?" replied Tira.

"Or you can let him go, and allow him to be who he wants to be without anyone telling him otherwise."

Amber walked past Tira with her eyes closed and a smirk on her face. She walked back to camp with Tira slowly following. Before she left the area, she heard a twig snap and quickly snapped her body in the direction it came from. She pulled out her knife, waiting for whoever was behind the tree to come out. When she got to the tree, a squirrel climbed up the tree and camoflauged with the brown, crispy leaves.

Hylin was heading to Ironfang's tent when he felt an uneasy feeling. He turned to the right to noticed a tall, old wolf who looked too frail to fight staring at him. He ignored the old wolf and proceeded to his father's tent. When he arrived at his father's tent, he found him holding a picture of someone. "Ironfang." Hylin called out with a calm voice. Ironfang turned out and threw the picture in a corner. Hylin silently walked past Ironfang and retrieved the picture. When he looked at the picture, he was about what he saw.

It was a picture of Ironfang and Hylin's mother Sapphire holding the young infant Hylin. "What. What is this?!" said Hylin as he approached Ironfang with his blade in his hand and a great look of anger in his eyes. "I don't understand, people told me you raped my mother before leaving her for dead!"

"You will never understand!" said Ironfang. "I may have been stronger, but I was also foolish. All the stories you heard about me are true, but the story about what happened that day I first met your mother was a lie. We both knew having a halfbreed child would bring nothing but trouble wherever we went, so we decided that your mother would raise you herself, going with the lies he told so your mother was treated more as a victim than a 'whore'. I told her to raise you well until the time came that you become the warrior that would eventually take my place."

Hylin fell on his knees. "I don't understand! Who is he? Why my mother of all people!?"

Hylin launched at Ironfang, knocking him against a weapon shelf. "Do you have ANY idea how much hell I have gone through?!"

Ironfang remained silent. Hylin dropped his weapon and ran as fast as he could from the campsite. Hylin sat at the lake for hours. He was kicking and throwing punches at the water. Every time he saw his reflection, he would get angrier. "Damn it all. Damn my father. Damn my mother. Damn Tira. Damn everyone!"

Hylin felt a faint presence watching him in the trees. "I know you're there. Show yourself or die by my claws, spy."

"Relax, it's only me." said Amber as she approached Hylin. She was dressed in a slightly tribal and exposed clothing. "Do you always dress like that?" asked Hylin.

"Only when I got hunting."

"What do you want, shouldn't you be gossiping with Tira some more?"

"I knew you were listening, that why I sealed the conversation. I simply want to talk."

Hylin looked at his reflection in the water again. "Make it quick."

"You and I both know you desire to become a full fledge wolf. You love the power, it gives you power, it gives you an edge."

"Yeah, so what?"

"You heard our conversation Tira and I had. She doesn't like the new you. She maybe even fear you. She only wants Hylin the Halfbreed. You want a woman who accepts you. Someone who understands your views. Someone who sees you as a fiull-fledge wolf."

Hylin turned to Amber and locked eye to eye.

"You need me just as I need you."

"But Tira-"

"Doesn't want you anymore. The full moon is tonight. You and I, we are destined to be together. Two unstoppable wolves.."

"But she. I.. You."

Amber reached in and kissed Hylin. She opened her eyes with a look of evil, looking back at Tira who had just arrived to apologize to Hylin. She stormed back into the forest, heartbroken.


Edited by Sinistar, Sep 20 2012, 02:32 PM.
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"Those were the words he told Sapphire before he violated her in front of the the elders and children and left her in the remains of her burning village. Everyone knows that the Ironfang gang was known for killing men and women and the the elder and children to fend for themselves, but never did I think the Great Ironfang the Remorseless would put a woman through a great deal of embarrassment, misery and pain. Definately a worse fate than death when everyone knows the story and left with no choice but to raise a halfbreed." said a man in a black robe.

"She may hate Ironfang after what he did to her village, but she loves that child to death. What would happen if Ironfang were to find her and the child?"



Part 1: Hylin the Halfbreed
Chapter 3: Lust



The sun was beginning to fall and Ironfang and his gang was preparing for the Blood Ritual. The full moon was tonight, and Ironfang has found another village to attack. He's been so focused on his son that he almost forgot to bring his weapons. He knew Hylin was going to find out the whole story eventually and done everything in his power to make him feel more at home. He approached Hylin who was staring at the sky and places his hand on Hylin's shoulder. "Feeling better, Hylin?" asked Ironfang.

"About my parents keeping secrets from me?" said Hylin in a sarcastic tone. "Not at all, Ironfang, not at all."

"Is that so? Why are you so tense then? Nervous about the Blood Ritual tonight?"

"No, but I am aware of your Blood Ritual. It can only be performed during a full moon and unless you've fed on the blood of the strongest men, you'll never be able to control the beast within."

"You experienced the power of the ritual before?"

Hylin looked at Ironfang's scar on the hand that was on his shoulder. "I don't become like you do during a full moon, Ironfang."

Ironfang took his hand off Hylin's shoulder. "What do you mean?"

"I was born on a full moon, I am always at my strongest. I just don't know how to control it. Every night, weird things would happen. My hands, my eyes, and my fur would glow. I had powers I never knew existed. I thought it was just me until my mother told me the truth about my strange abilities."

Ironfang scanned Hylin for his markings. It was the first time he ever seen anyone with wolf blood to not have the markings of the beast. "I see. You are more than even I can comprehend. So if you're not nervous, then what is it then?"

Hylin looked down at the grass beneath him. "Amber."

"Amber?" Ironfang repeated.

"Amber Redtail, from the female quarters. My current girlfriend."

Ironfang laughed and slapped Hylin in the back so hard that it knocked him off the tall stump he was sitting on. "Amber Redtail of the Mountain Wolves? Impressive. She's the only female amongst the clan who has ever been accepted as a hunter. She's proven herself since she was only 6. Good for you, Hylin, you found yourself a female within our campsite. She'll make a fine partner."

"Thanks."

Hylin then remembered that he was asked by the women in the female quarters to take Tira hunting for deer. He grabbed his mother's bow and arrows and made his way to the female quarters. Before he stepped through the entrance, he thought about what Amber said ealier ago about Tira.

"You need me just as I need you."

"But Tira-"

"Doesn't want you anymore. The full moon is tonight. You and I, we are destined to be together. Two unstoppable wolves.."


Hylin remembered the kiss that came after those words. He never felt such a rush surge through his body before. He may have found the perfect hunting partner and girlfriend. He entered the camp and found Tira fiddling with her necklace. "Tira!" Hylin yelled out. "I was asked to take you hunting."

Tira gave Hylin a weak smile. "I forgot! Let me grab my weapons!"
Hylin couldn't understand the situation. I thought Tira would be avoiding him after he attacked her for reminding him of his deluded blood. Tira stepped out of her tent with her sword and a knife. Hylin and Tira stared at eachother for a moment. "Never thought I'd be the one to teach you how to hunt, Tira." said Hylin as he was inspecting his bow.

"Never thought you'd be so adventurous until you chose to live like a wolf." said Tira as she was sheathing her knife. "Let's go!"

The two left the campsite and ventured far into the forest. They spent hours hunting deers, mooses, and rabbits. Hylin was impressed by Tira's ability to move about the forest without alarming a single animal. It was almost as if she was never there. Eventually, the two found a nice spot to relax and enjoy the rest of the night away from the campsite. Hylin made a fire to cook the deer meat he collected for dinner.
Tira was staring at her necklace, gazing upon the gemstone embedded in it. There was barely any form of communication between them. Every time Hylin looked at Tira, she'd look the other way. Every time Tira looked at Hylin, he would pretend like he was inspecting his bow.

Tira took a deep breathe and sat next to Hylin before looking at him again. "Hylin, I need to tell you something."

Hylin dropped his bow by the pile of leaves he used to make a bed. "Why bother? I know everything."

"Everything?" Tira asked.

"Yes. I was there when you and Amber was talking this morning. You obviously can't accept the fact that I have chosen to follow the life of a wolf. You would rather half some pathetic halfbreed than a powerful wolf!"

"Hylin, it's not like that-"

"Then what is it then? Make up your mind! Why did you want me to take you hunting in the first place?"

"Because I want to change for you!"

Speechless, Hylin turned his away from Tira. "If that was true, why did you let Amber and I kiss..?"

"How did you-"

"I knew you were there. You just stood there and watched. You don't need to change for me, Tira. I have Amber."

Tira grabbed Hylin's arm before he can stand up. "Why are you doing this, Hylin? She doesn't love you, she's just trying to keep you away from ever going back to the old you!"

Hylin pulled away from Tira. He grabbed his bow and arrows. "Or maybe she understands me more than you do. We aren't together anymore. Next time we cross paths, we are strangers."

"Hylin!" yelled someone in the forest. "There you are!"
It was Amber who have been looking for Hylin for hours to participate in the blood ritual. "Hylin, is Tira giving you trouble?" asked Amber.

"No, I was just leaving."

Hylin proceeded into the forest, leaving Amber and Tira behind. "Why would you do this to Hylin? Why would you encourage his new behavior?" asked Tira.

"I don't know what you're talking about. He just happens to like me more than he ever liked you. Do me a favor and just leave him alone, Okay? He doesn't need anyone holding him back. He will unleash the beast within, and he will be bound to his wolf blood forever."

Amber return back into the forest to return to the campsite. Tira stomped out the fire and gather the cooked deer meat and her weapons. "Good luck with that, Amber. I know what you're trying to do to him, and you will be in for a huge disappointment. Hylin would never act like this. It's the wolf within him that makes him acts this way. It's not too late to bring him back."

Edited by Sinistar, Sep 20 2012, 05:18 PM.
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"He will kill everyone, maybe even Sapphire as well." said the man in a black robe. "He will take the child and strip him of his innocent life and turn him into.. Into.."

"Into a wolf?" asked the man while he was taking a sip of his wine.

"Into a monster.."



Part 1: Hylin the Halfbreed
Chapter 4: Manipulation.


The full moon was moments away of showing itself from behind the pith black clouds. All the female wolves prepared the feast and dragged all the weapon shelves to the male quarters to prepare for their invasion. All females are prohibited from participating in the blood ritual because they don't have a single mark of the beast. Amber and Hylin had just made it in time to witness the ritual begin. The women and children were to stay in their tents for the night. Amber and Hylin however had other plans.
Hylin had no intention of joining in the blood rituals and Amber had more 'sexual' intentions for the blood ritual.

"Of all places to be hiding, why your tent?" asked Hylin.

"I want us to be someone more relaxing. More.. romantic." said Amber as she dropped her weapons and began fixing her hair.

"But what if the women catches me over here? I can get in big trouble and-"

"Relax. No one will know. Everyone went to sleep early, and the men are too busy with their precious ritual. It's just you and me, Hylin. You and I against the world.."

A sudden burst of laughter and cheering shook the campsite. The full moon finally shown itself from behind the clouds. Everyone's mark of the beast began to glow. Their nails sharpened, their fangs grew, their muscles enlarged, and their eyes glowed in the same manner the moon did. The howls of the many wolves echoed for miles. Ironfang grabbed his spear and raised it high into the air.
"After 10 long years, we are finally at our peak! We cannot be beaten, and this time we will successfully attack the one city that keeps us from moving forward to the other lands. Tonight, we attack Giovanni City!"

All the wolves raised their weapons and cheered. They all positioned themselves outside the entrance to their campsite waiting for Ironfang's orders. Ironfang moved to the front and pointed his spear at the city afar. "That is our target. LET'S MOVE!!"
They all ran at top speed and was out sight in mere moments.

"They're gone." said Amber as she looked out of her tent. "We can begin."

"Begin what?" asked Hylin.

"Our bond ritual."

"Bond.. Ritual?"

"The bond ritual is a ritual that ties two souls together. A ritual that only works if the two soul mates are compatible."

"But how would we know if we are compatible?"

"You trust me don't you?" asked Amber as she stood in front of Hylin to get eye level.

"Of course I do, but we've only known eachother for a few days and-"

Amber took hylins arms, wrapped them around her and embraced hylin. "Don't you love me, Hylin?"

Hylin was hesitant to answer until he remembered the events that unfolded in the past 2 days. He leaned his head on Amber's and closed his eyes.

"Of course I do."

"Then let's perform the ritual."

Amber cleared a space in her tent to carve the markings in the dirt with her knife. Each marking was unique, but gave some meaning. Hylin couldn't figure it out but he seemed able to read some of the markings. "This marking represents lust, and this one over here says greed."

"You can read these symbols?" asked Amber as she finished carving the last symbol.

"Yes. I mean, I don't know how. It's familiar though."

Amber dropped took her knife to cut open the palm of her hand to drop blood on her selected markings. "Your turn." said Amber as she guided Hylin to his markings. She took her knife to cut Hylin's palm to drop his on his markings. Amber and Hylin stood in the center where the biggest marking was present. "What next?" asked Hylin as she looked around at the markings.

"I shall begin the ritual. When I finish speaking, we will kiss until it ends, and when it ends we will have become bonded."

"Sounds like a marriage."

Amber looked at the markings she spilled Hylin's blood on. "Something like that."

Amber closed her eyes and began speaking in a language unknown to Hylin. He interrupted her. "Amber wait."

She opened her eyes to see a worried Hylin looking down at his bleeding hand. "We don't have to do this, Amber."

"What do you mean?"

Hylin pulled Amber into his arms and looked into her eyes. "I mean we don't have to do this bond ritual. You said it yourself, we are soul mates. We don't need a ritual to prove that."

"What are you saying?"

"I'm saying you and me, we can develope a bond stronger than any ritual can. It hasn't been long since we known eachother, but in the short time I been here, I felt a stronger connection with you than I ever had with Tira."

Amber gave Hylin a huge grin. "She was right about you. A heart of gold and you know how to make a woman special."

She erased the markings that were carved in the dirt, feeling guilty about what she was about to do to him. "This wasn't a bond ritual, Hylin. It was a ritual that would make you almost a puppet. The markings I dropped your blood on was Lust, Greed, and Anger."

"Why would you do that to me, Amber?"

"It goes as far back as before either as us were born. My mother loved Ironfang and would do anything for him. They known eachother since they were children. They were together for years, until one day he along with his gang went on a 2 year expedition to a foreign land. When he returned, Ironfang told my mother they would never be together, that he found another. It tore her apart when she heard this and done everything she could to prove she was the better option."

"I- I never knew that." said Hylin. Amber sat on the ground and began shedding tears. She picked up her knife and looked at her dim reflection.
"In the end, she died in her sleep when I was 5. She was bit on the neck by a poisonous snake. I swore that if I couldn't get back at Ironfang for putting my mother through such heartbreak, I would wait for the day he had a child of his own to ruin.. I'm so sorry Hylin."

"There's no need to be sorry Amber, as long as you promise not to do this again. What happened between them stays between them. You can hate my father, but don't hate me for being his son. I don't know the story between my father and my mother, I heard so many stories about my mother being violated and forced to raise me because of a life threat. I recently come to the conclusion it was a lie to protect my mother and I."

Hylin wiped the tears gently off of Amber's face. Amber gave Hylin a big smile before standing up. "Come on." said Amber. "Let's head to Giovanni City."

Ironfang and his gang has slaughter everyone who tried to fight them. Their body count has reached over 200 within the first 2 hours of their hunt. Many of Ironfang's men has fallen to the superior tactics of the city's vigilantes known as the Giovanni Assassins. There were more wolves than the assassins could handle. They kept on having to fall back and launch new attacks, but each attempt failed more and more. Hylin and Amber was running to Giovanni City when they saw explosions and heard gunfire. "GET DOWN!" a mysterious man yelled out.

He tackled Hylin and Amber, pinning both of them low in the grass. "Come on!" yelled an assassin close by. "We have to warn the nearby cities now!"

"We're going as fast as we can!" yelled a tall reptilian woman. "We're carrying alot back here!"

The man waited until the assassins were gone before letting go of Amber and Hylin. "Th-thank you, stranger." said Hylin.

"Just who are you, what were you doing out here?" said Amber with a serious tone.

"I can ask you the same thing." said the mysterious man. The man is a tall echidna who sports many bandages and has a X-shaped scar over his left eye.

"We're heading to Giovanni City." said Hylin in a calm voice.

"You'd be wise not to go there."

"Why?" asked Amber.

"The city is under sudden attack from an army of beast-powered wolves. It is far too dangerous for kids like you to be wandering to that city."

"How do you know about their power?" asked Hylin.

"Don't ask. I see your girlfriend here is a wolf as well." the echidna stared at Hylin. "You're a halfbreed. I can see your past and family history. Can't say I approve of any of your family's choices, but that's not my call to make."

The man reached down into the tall grass to pick up a metal board. "Where are you going?" asked Amber.

"To evacuate the city. If I know Ironfang, he is already near the center of the city. If he gets there, no one will be able to evacuate."

The echidna hopped on the board which began to hover and pulled out his shotgun and a glowing blade. He turned away from Hylin and Amber and began traveling towards Giovanni City. "Wait!" Hylin yelled out. "We didn't get your name!"

The echidna stopped and turned around. "I am Kane. Stay true to your mixed blood, Halfbreed. You don't have be neither fox nor wolf, but the halfbreed you were meant to be. You are pure of heart, you just have the wrong solutions to the right problems. I look forward to meeting the real you, halfbreed!"

Kane sped off on his board and left Hylin and Amber in the field. Hylin did not question how Kane knew him or about his knowledge of the wolves. Amber helped Hylin up and they returned to their campsite to clean up the mess the men made when they left the campsite.
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"I doubt that." said a man as he put down his cup of wine.

"Oh? What do you know ANY of this?" asked the other man in the black robe."

"I know alot more than you when it comes to these wolves. I know because my ancestors made them into what they are today. They weren't always linked with the beast within them."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean all the male wolves were just test subjects to create the perfect being fused with the blood of our greatest enemy for their own rituals."

"You don't say.."

"Don't believe me?" asked the man as he took another sip from his cup of wine. "Take a look at the female wolves. They don't have the mark of the beast unless they were born on a full moon."

"What does the full moon have anything to do with their mark?" asked the man in the black robe.

"The phase of the moon when they fused the beasts and male wolves together... The wolves were deadlier during the night. The beasts were stronger during the full moon. As a result, since we originally only fused males with the beast, newborn males would always have a mark. The only way for one's offspring to have a mark, if their blood is connected to the original prototypes. The only way a female to obtain mark is if they were born on the night of a full moon, when their beast blood is active."

"But there's no way to prove that since no female was born on the night of the full moon!"

The man turned around from his cup of wine to face the man in the black robe. "Amber was.."



Part 1: Hylin the Halfbreed
Chapter 5: Lost


Hylin and Amber spent hours traveling back to their campsite after almost making it to Giovanni City. They listened to what their new echidna aquaintance said and decided not to go. They may get in the way of successful attack on the city. They climbed up the very steep hill that hides their campsite from sight of Giovanni City. Before they made it to the top, they noticed two red flares flying in the sky. "Flares?" asked Hylin with a confused tone. "A signal for help." said Amber. They ran down the other side of the steep hill to the campsite. All the women and children were searching high and low for someone. A young wolf who looked no older than 5 was about to wander out of the campsite.
Hylin ran after the boy and grabbed him. "Careful kid, you don't want to leave the campsite all alone, do you?" asked Hylin.

"Tira's in trouble! We have to find her!" said the boy.

"Tira is missing?"

"We thought she was in her tent all day, but she's really been gone all this time!" said a woman who approached the Hylin and the child.

Hylin looked at the woman then back at the child with a worried look on his face. "What's your name, kid?"

"Tova!" the boy yelled out. "Tova the mountain wolf!"

"Mountain wolf?" asked Amber.

"Yeah!" yelled Tova. "We have to find my sister before she gets eaten by snakes!"

Hylin and Amber looked at eachother before looking back at the boy. "Tira's your sister!?" asked Hylin with a surprised tone. "Hop on my back Tova. We're going to find your sister."

Tova hopped on Hylin's back. Hylin and Amber went to their tents to grab their weapons and searched all the locations they last saw Tira. They searched every inch of the forest, every inch of the plains and every inch of the training site. Hylin and Amber decided to walk along the long steep hill to see if they missed anything. It all seemed hopeless. "Why can't I smell her?" asked Hylin.

"She would always coat her scent with berries to prevent other animals from knowing she's around. When was the last time you saw her?" asked Amber.

"It was before you found us outside the forest. I told her if we ever saw eachother again, we would be strangers. She said she was trying to change for me, to accept the fact that I have changed. I was way too insensitive towards her feelings. Maybe it's my fault she's gone."

"LOOK!" yelled Tova. "A blade!"

Amber and Hylin ran to the tree that had the blade stuck in it's bark. Amber pulled the blade out and examined it. "Doesn't look like one of ours. What do you think Hylin?"

Hylin stared at it for a moment. "I saw this blade when we were heading to Giovanni City. One of the assassins was holding it! I can tell by the shape of it!"

"Tira was here!" yelled Tova. "I can smell her! She was here Hylin, she was! She was!"

"Those assassins we saw before.." said Hylin. "They were traveling East, we are currently West. When that one assassin said that were carrying alot, they must have meant Tira!"

"Tira!! Tira!!" shouted Tova.

"How can we be sure?" asked Amber.

Hylin squated and picked something off the ground. "This was the necklace I gave to her. She was attacked!"

"Come on! We have to do something!" shouted Tova.

"I know Tova, I know. We head East, stay low to the tall grass and take out any traveling assassins."

"Alright." said Amber.

"Tova." said Hylin as took Tova off his back and held him up at head level. "You're young I know, but surely you seen your father use a bow and arrow, right?"

"I don't have a father." said Tova. "My sister is all I have!"

Hylin tilted his head with a long frown. "Can you use a bow and arrow?"

"I watched the adults use them before! They look fun to use!" shouted Tova as he jumped around with excitement.

"You sure are an energetic one." said Hylin. He took off his quiver and bow and handed them to Tova. "These were given to me by my mother. Do you promise to take good care of them for me?"

Tova raised his right fist as high as he could. "I'll take really good of it! Like my collection of insects I will!"

"Amber." Hylin called out. "Tova and I will go on ahead. I need you to tell my father what happened to Tira."

"Alright. You two be careful. I don't know what will happen if Tova got hurt."

Hylin took Tova and climbed up the steep hill. They finally made it to the spot Hylin and Amber last found the assassins. The sky was slowly beginning to brighten. Smoke and fire brightened all of Giovanni City. "Wow!" Tova said with a tone of excitement. "That's cool!"

"I guess you can say that." said Hylin. "You're a boy, why didn't you become like the rest of the wolves?"

"What do you mean?" asked Tova. "All cool looking and stronger?"

"Yes. I thought all the male children were to go to bed early to prevent being exposed to the moon."

"Well me and my sister are just special is all!" Tova said with a huge smile on his face as he was playing with Hylin's ears. "We came from the frozen lands farther than even you can see!"

"So you're not like them? Cool with me! Ready to save your sister, Tova?"

Tova raised Hylin's bow in the air. "You kidding? I was born ready! I will become a warrior like my father was!"

"I'm sure he'd be proud to hear that. Well, we have a long way to go judging by their faint scent."

Hylin and Tova spent countless days traveling across the land. From swimming across dangerous currents to escaping soldiers and enemies of the wolves, Hylin would not let Tova down. He taught Tova to hunt and make weapons and Tova taught Hylin how to make drinks using various berries, plants and herbs. They passed many towns, villages, and cities that showed them where the assassins traveled. Wherever they went, Hylin and Tova was never far behind.
When Hylin began to give up hope, Tova's high spirits would get him the strength to carry on. When Tova was in doubt of his hunting abilities, Hylin would cheer him on.
They eventually became like brothers, and would look out for eachother no matter what.

3 Months past since they left the home. Hylin and Tova finally came across the city where the assassins took Tira. "Look Tova." said Hylin. "That's the city where they took Tira."

"Tira's there!?" shouted Tova. "We finally made it! WOO HOO!!"

Hylin patted Tova on the head. "Climb on my back and keep your bow ready. We don't know what we might find there."

Hylin and Tova found themselves entering the city. All the civilians they walked passed stopped in their tracks and stared at the two fellow wolves. They were muttering, whispering, and talking about them. Any police officer they passed followed them. "Hylin." Tova whispered. "I'm scared!"

"Don't be." said Hylin. "They're more afraid of us then they are of them."

Hylin turned around to look at the people behind him. They all took a step back, gasping and shaking in fear. The policemen slowly reached for their stunguns. "Well well, what have we here?" said a man who was hidden behind the crowd. He made his way to the very front of the crowd and examined the two young wolves. He was dressed like a profession business man, hat, suit, tie, dress pants, and suit case. "Two wolves? We don't get many of your kind around here."

Tova hopped off Hylins back to approach the man but Hylin immediately blocked him. "Why aren't you scared of us like everyone else?"

"Well, I give people a chance before judging them, so why shouldn't I give you a chance? I am Henry Bluejay, Mayor of the finest city around! Femrick City, known for it's products and tour sites!"

"I'm Hylin, and this here is Tova. We're looking for someone your city is holding hostage."

"Well I'm sure if we were holding someone 'hostage' I would know about it right? Who are we holding? A killer? thief? burglar?"

"My sister!" yelled Tova. "Where is my sister!?"

"Your sister?" asked Henry.

"Yes." said Hylin as he picked up Tova. "A few assassins stopped at this city with a female wolf named Tira. We're here to bring her back."

Henry watched as all the policemen looked at eachother and disappeared into the crowd. "I think I know who has your sister. Come with me to my office.."
Edited by Sinistar, Sep 22 2012, 07:29 PM.
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"Amber was a special case. She was suppose to have been born the night before the full moon, but being too focused revenge brought a great deal of stress to her mother's body.." said the man as he stood up and grabbed his hat.

Part 1: Hylin the Halfbreed
Chapter 6: Recovery



Hylin with Tova on his back napping followed Henry Bluejay to his office. When they got to his office, Henry closed every window, curtain and blinds. He sat down at his desk, taking a long sip from his cup of mineral water. He placed the cup down and sat back in his chair. "Those policemen aren't just any ol' law enforcers." said Henry in a worried tone. "They are the assassins in disguise. They patrol every inch of the city, making sure everything stays in order."

"What do you mean by that?" asked Hylin.

"It means I have to do what they tell me, otherwise they will kill me."

Hylin was suspicious about why Henry wasn't afraid of him or Tova. He pointed his pointer finger at Henry. "Yet you trust me with this information why?"

Henry looked at Hylin and examined him. "You're from the Ironfang gang are you not? Surely you know this city and the Ironfang gang has been allies for over 50 years!"

Hylin lowered his hand and took a deep breathe. "Then you wouldn't mind making this short and just tell us where the assassins took my friend?"

"It's not safe to show you right now. You'll have to wait until midnight."

"So be it." said Hylin as he scratched the back of his head.

"Wait outside until I am ready."

Tova finally woke up as Hylin stood by the steps outside the Mayor's office. "What did I miss?" asked Tova. "Did you finally save my sister?!"

"Not yet." said Hylin.

Tova's head fell. Hylin patted his head gently. Tova looked up at Hylin who had a smile on his face. "Everything we be okay. We will save your sister. The Mayor is on our side."

Many people began collecting in front of the Mayor's office to observe the young wolves. "What are wolves doing here!?" cried a woman.

"Are they scouts for some wolf gang!?"

"Are they holding the Mayor hostage?"

Civilians were asking questions left and right. "Hylin!" Tova called out. "Who are these people? They're scaring me."

"They're no one." said Hylin as he gently pushed Tova behind him.

"I bet if we kill them, we'll get a reward!" shouted a man.

"They're only children, what threat are they to us!?"

"Let's make rugs out of them!"

"Yeah! and especially the small one!"

"Let's get them!"

Everyone moved in on Hylin and Tova. Hylin pulled out his knife and pointed it at the crowd surrounding them. They stopped in tracks and took a slight step back. "Isn't this surprising." said Hylin as he moved closer to the crowd. "Why are you all backing away from me? What threat am I too you?"

Hylin bucked at the the crowd. They all backed away, gasping in fear of the armed halfbreed. "You're not laying a finger on my brother."

Everyone was mumbling to themselves quietly. "Got it!?" asked Hylin as he dashed at the surrounding crowd. Everyone backed away again and nodded. "Don't move!" yelled an officer behind Hylin. He turned around to the officer who was choking Tova. "We'd hate to kill a wolf cub, but we'd be doing the city a favor!"

"H-help me, Hylin!" cried Tova as he was trying to break free.

"Let him go NOW!" demanded Hylin.

"Drop your weapon and surrender then!" said the officer.

"And if I don't?"

"We'll snap the wolf cub's neck!"

Hylin was ready to charge at the officer. He knew he'd be able to take him down but at what cost? Hylin dropped his knife was quickly apprehended. "By the order of the Mayor, you are to be executed in 5 days." said one of the officers.

They handcuffed Hylin and Tova by the wrists and ankles. As the officers moved them through the crowd, the people threw things at them and would punch and kick them. everyone cheered when the two young wolves were being moved towards the prison. Hylin looked back at the Mayor's office window, looking at Henry who gave them a thumbs up before closing the blinds and curtains.

"Don't worry.." said one of the officers. "We don't take wolves to prison. No, we take them to an experiment table, where we will cut you both open and learn about that hidden power of you all have."

"Hidden power?" asked Tova.

"Don't play dumb!" said another officer. "We seen it at Giovanni City, you wolves possess some hidden power that our master is interested in!"

"Hylin, what does he mean?"

Hylin remained silent before stuggling to break free. His arms and ankles were handcuffed. The officers around him backed off and pulled out their guns. "You cowards, why don't you fight me man to man!? Tova doesn't have that gift, let him go and just take me!"

"Why?" asked one of the officers. "How can we believe a wolf of all people?"

"Why?" repeated Hylin. "He isn't like the others, he came from the frozen regions! I am the one you want, I possess greater abilities than the others! I was born on a full moon, I am always at my limit!"

All the officers looked at eachother and laughed. "So be it filthy mutt, we'll take the cub to where we keep all pathetic wolves we find lurking around."

"Isn't that where we just took the female wolf?" asked one of the other officers.

"Indeed we did. Now shut up and escort this mutt to the lab."

"My sister's there!?" asked Tova with excitement.

"Sounds like it." said Hylin.

The officers freed Tova from the cuffs. "I can handle this one my self." said one of the officers. "The 2 of you should be able to handle the order one."

"Wait!" yelled Tova. "What about Hylin! What about my older brother!"

"Shut it, you!" yelled the officer that was taking Tova.

"Relax." said Hylin. "I'll be fine. You're a real hunter now, find your sister and follow your instincts."

Tova gave Hylin the first serious expression he's seen since he met him. "I'll be brave for you and my sister!"

The two young wolves were seperated as they went seperate ways. Hylin knew unless he were to somehow trigger his untrained powers, he will die slowly and painfully. Hylin and the officers finally arrived at the prison. When they went inside, they went to the nearest elevator, stuck their key in counter clockwise, and the elevator begin decending at an incredible speeds. When the elevator came to a stop, the doors opened, revealing a huge lab.
They shoved Hylin out of the elevator, guiding him to the table surrounded by eager scientists. As Hylin looked around, he saw severed, beatened, and disected wolves. His heart nearly dropped.

"Restrain him and set him on the table!" yelled one of the spectators.

The officers injected Hylin with a chemical that immediately made his body extremely numb. They placed him on the table and placed the shackles around his arms and legs.

"He isn't like the other wolves, he shares traits with that of a Fox. He's the first hybrid I've ever seen." said one of the scientists.

"I heard about this one from one of the female wolf cubs when she was threatening the guards. He must be the son of the highly known Ironfang and is therefore a threat and worth alot more than we can imagine."

"What does this mean?"

"We can hold this one hostage and when his father shows up, we'll make demands to find out how to harness their power and stop wasting thousands of dollars on all of this!"

"He won't come." said Hylin. "He doesn't know I even came here."

The scientist and the spectator looked at eachother and back at Hylin. "Then why would you come all this way to be purposely captured?" asked the spectator.

"To save a friend!"

"The female wolf who wouldn't shut up about you? Last I recall, she said you had more important matters to tend to over her. The way I see it, you're a bigger fool than I thought."

A tall man in a rich, red uniform entered the room with a wide smile.

"Mason!" yelled man yelled. "Get the Mayor to send a message to the Ironfang Gang. Not only do we have someone he will want back, but we will also get the answers we need after all these years..."

"What should we do with him in the mean time?" asked the spectator.

"Throw him in with the other wolves. I have other matters to attend to.."

The officers pulled Hylin off the table and dragged him back into the elevator. The elevator fell a few more floors before coming to a stop. When the doors opened, Hylin looked at the huge room below him. There were wolves in every direction. Instead of taking the stairs, the officers pushed the weakened Hylin off the platform and into the huge room below. They laughed and moved back into the elevator. The impact of the fall returned some feeling in Hylin's body, allowing himself to stand up. He looked around again to examine everything clearly. There were wolves from nearly every part of the world.

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Part 1: Hylin the Halfbreed
Chapter 7: The Conflict

Hylin wandered around the room that was the size of two football fields. He was stopped in his tracks by merchants, beggars and children wanting to play. He was so amazed about finding so many wolves of every part of the world to remember why he went there in the first place. He began exploring the place. Alot of the wolves would look at him, examining his halfbreed appearance.
He found all sorts of shops but weapon shops. After hours of walking about, Hylin decided to find a dark spot to relax. He dozed off for about an hour before he suddenly thrown into a food stall that fell on top of him. Hylin was lifting all the smashed fruit and broken wood from atop of him until a tall, bulk wolf lifted him up by the neck. "You have some nerve coming to my part of town, kid. I can tell by your scent that you're not associated with the Longhowlers. In fact, I never even seen your face before."

"I just arrived today." said Hylin ask he grabbed the wolf's wrist. "I didn't know people like you would stoop so low as too claim parts of a giant cage."

The wolf tossed Hylin into one of the other nearby stalls. He gave Hylin a brutal beating before dropping him on the ground. "My name is Bonecrusher. I am leader of the Longhowlers. My face will be the last thing you'll ever see."

Bonecrusher pulled out his axe and lifted it in the air, preparing to kill Hylin. As Bonecrusher swung his axe as Hylin, Hylin's eyes began to glow. He lunged at Bonecrusher at what seemed like light speed. Bonecruasher looked up at his Axe which was missing the top half of the handle. He began coughing up blood before noticing Hylin's hand impaled through his abdomen. He looked down at Hylin who's eyes were giving off a fierce red glow. "Wha-what the hell!? I just beat you to a pulp! You were barely moving! What the hell are you?!"

Hylin yanked his arm out of Bonecrusher's body. "Son of Ironfang the Remorseless of the Ironfang gang."

Bonecrusher could not stop the bleeding and soon passed out. The glow in Hylin's eyes faded and he stumbled to his knees before passing out as well.

Hylin woke up hours later. He opened his eyes and saw a shadowy figure looking down on him. When his vision full returned, the figure was Tova. "Hylin!" shouted Tova. "You're alive!"

Hylin sat up from the bed and patted Tova on the head. "Of course I'm alive. I won't die without keeping my promise. Are you alright?"

"Yeah!" yelled Tova. "I was looking for my sister when some bad guys showed up!"

"You managed to escape them?"

"No, I was saved by the lady in the back!"

"Lady?"

Hylin turned around when he heard the sound of a creaking floor tile. Someone came into the room and closed the curtain behind them. When it turned around, Hylin knew by the outfit that it was one of the Giovanni Assassins, but something seemed off, the colors of the uniform was very different.
The weak Hylin jumped out of the bed and stood in front of Tova and raised his fist, preparing to defend himself and Tova. "Relax!" said the assassin with a feminine voice. "I'm not your enemy!"

"You really think I'm stupid!? You're one of this assassins!"

"No Hylin!" yelled Tova as he got in Hylin's way. "This lady carried you here! She's our friend!"

Hylin lowered his fists and held his chest. "What happened to me? I was napping in an alley, then the next thing I know I'm here."

The assassin removed her hood and masked and assisted Hylin in getting back on the bed. She is a female raccoon with glistening emerald eyes and beautiful silver fur. "You're safe here, Hylin." said the woman in a calm voice. "Tova told me why you're here. I think that's pretty brave of you."

"You're not a wolf. Who are you?" asked Hylin.

"I am Katrina Tumbleweed Raccoon. When I heard from the Mayor that I would be assisting someone in a rescue mission, I didn't think that someone would be a child."

"You're no older yourself, and I don't need help from you."

"What do you mean by "from you'?" asked Katrina. "You mean an agent?"

"I mean a Raccoon. You're all nothing but thieves."

"Thieves!? At least I don't kill people for the hell of it, murderer!" yelled Katrina as she slammed her fists down on Hylin's bed.

"Thief."

"Idiot."

"Trash picker."

"Blood bather."

"Assassin!"

"Gang member!"

"At least I not some wanna-be hero hiding under some ASSASSIN GET-UP!"

"What do you know!? At least I'm not some pathetic Halfbreed PRETENDING TO BE A WOLF!"

Hylin instantly fell silent. He turned his head with a look of extreme sadness. "I-I didn't mean to insult you, Hylin." said Katrina.

"Don't worry about it. You sound just like her."

"Who's her?" asked Katrina.

"My sister!" yelled Tova. "He means my older sister who we're trying to save!"

"You put your life at risk to safe this child's sister? Do you have feelings for this girl?"

"It's not like that." said Hylin as he looked down at Tova. "I made Tova a promise that I would rescue his sister. It's a promise I intend to keep."

Hylin stood off the bed and collected his gear. "If I'm not back tomorrow, don't bother looking for me."

Tova tried to follow Hylin but Katrina stopped him and lifted him up. "Are you sure you can handle this yourself?" asked Katrina.

"No, but I have to do this myself. I will find Tira, and then we will find a way to escape."

Hylin walked out of the hut and looked around to see where he should begin. "I know you're there, stranger. No use hiding." said Hylin as he looked west of where he was standing. A short wolf revealed himself from behind one of the huts. He didn't say a word. He dropped a few letters and a weapon before running off. Hylin took the letters and weapons and read them. They torn pages from a research book.

Hylin skimmed through the pages and spotted some information he found disturbing.


Page 49
-nally found out what these symbols some of the wolves were carving in the ground. They seem to be linked with their hidden powers that we been trying to harness for years. Every circle they made had 50 symbols. Their meanings are unknown to us.

Page 81
This is the first time we ever had the honor of using experimenting on a female wolf cub. After performing blood tests, we discovered her blood has special properties like the many male wolves we found that had special powers. We believe some of these unique wolves may have a connection to the markings they make, and may not be gang symbols or messages.

Page 158
After weeks of deciphering their symbols, they are in fact the 50 different markings we have found on the unique male wolves. We've also discovered that each symbol represents a specific feeling. There are 25 positive feelings and 50 negative. We may be closer to discovering the secrets of their powers now.

Page 162
The surviving fighters were more than happy to bring dead and wounded wolves to our lab after their first successful attack on Giovanni City. Instead of killing the surviving wolves, we made made sure to painfully strip the answers out of them. After recording and carefully examining their chants, we were ready to test their 'bonding ritual'.

Dropping the young female wolf cub's blood on the symbols of Lust, Anger, and Jealousy, we performed used their chants and obtained amazing results.



Page 189
The young female cub has been tame ever since we tested the ritual on her. When we tried it on one of our scientists, he went insane and kill himself. The girl was more than happy to give us the answers we needed to find more wolves like her and continue out research. She keeps repeating the word Hylin. We are unsure of who or what that is, but we will soon find out.
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Part 1: Hylin the Halfbreed
Chapter 8: Lessons

Stunned by the reports he read, Hylin crumbled the papers in his hand and tossed them aside. He climbed on top of one of the nearby huts to find the tallest one if he was to get a better view of the underground city. He looked around and found one that stood like a tower. He jumped from hut to hut as fast as he could to get to the tower.

When he arrived, Hylin saw a bright light coming from the entrance of the tower. He climbed down from the hut next to it to peek inside. He noticed a few wolves sitting around a table with a map on top of it. Identifying the wolves, he saw that one of them had 5 markings running down his left arm.

"You don't have to hide, child." said the tallest, oldest wolf of the 4 with a deep, scratchy voice. "Please come in and take a seat."

Hylin walked into the tower, pulled up a chair and sat down. He looked around the room and noticed markings on every inch of the walls. The oldest wolf turned to face Hylin. He had a long white beard and was blind in his right eye. "I thought I detected our kind wandering about. If I didn't know any better, I'd say you're from the Ironfang, am I right?"

Hylin nodded his head. "You heard of us?"

"Heard of you?" asked the old wolf. He let out some horrible sounding coughs after he chuckled. "More than that child. I am the former leader of the Ironfang gang, Hrolleif Cyclone Ironfang. The gang was formally known as the Greytail Raiders before I took my father's place as leader. From there, I changed everything."

Hrolleif passed Cyclone a large cup of raspberry tea. "So the current leader of the gang is your son?" asked Hylin.

"Sure is. When I tried to reason with him about the mis-use of the blood ritual, he demanded I be killed or exile myself from the gang. Damn fool never listened. I hope his son will one day set him straight."

"Mis-use?" Hylin asked. "I thought it was used to help them control the beast within."

"More than that." said the youngest wolf of the 4 sitting furthest from Hylin. "The blood ritual will give them control sure, but it also allows the beast to share minds with whoever uses it. If Ironfang continues to hold these blood rituals, they will soon become beasts in a wolf's body. They will be free after centuries of captivity."

"The only exception to this are those born on a full moon." said Hrolleif. "They are born without the beast, but their powers will still reside in the body until the wolf learns to harness it. We call these wolves Hunters of the Lunar Spirits. Unlike those born with the mark of the beast, their powers are restricted by the mark."

"Are you telling me that's why they don't possess any special abilities other than muscle mass growth and regeneration?"

"Indeed so. One mark is all it takes to seal away more than half of their powers. Those born on a full moon has no marks at all, leaving their powers unstable and unmastered."

Hylin raised his fist in front of the men and tightened his grip as hard as he could. Blood began dripping from the palm of his hand. All four of the men had their undivided attention on him. "What are you doing, kid!?" shouted Hrolleif.

"Showing you my power."

Hylin's eyes and hands began giving off a blue glow. Hyrolleif stood up and approached Hylin. "I was only 8 when I last saw this. I knew you were special when I saw you, Halfbreed. You can return Ironfang to it's former glory."

"First, I need to save my friend." said Hylin with a serious tone in his voice. "Next I am going to face my father in battle and become the next leader."

"How do you suppose you can face your father?" asked the youngest wolf of the 4. "You have yet to master your powers."

"Joseph is right." said Hrolleif. "You have a long way to go."

Hylin calmed down, reverting back to normal. He stumbled a bit, trying to hold himself up. "My father is getting slow for his age. I can definately defeat him."

"Follow me outside, let's have a test." demanded Hroleif.

Hylin followed Hylin outside of the tower. Hroleif jumped high into the air and landed on top of one of the huts. Hrolleif in a battle stance. "Try and hit me then."

Hylin backed away. "What!? I would never attack the elderly!"

Hrolleif punched Hylin twice in the jaw faster than he could react. "Afraid because I'm an old man? Or scared because I'm an old man?"

Hylin fell for his taunt and charged at Hrolleif. Hylin put all his strength into his kicks and throws, but missed every hit. Hylin got angry at the fact that Hroleif was teasing him about how slow he was, even though his attacks were more than fast enough to take anyone else down.

"You fight like an old man!" Hroleif yelled as he slapped in butt in a mocking manner. "Why you try using your beast powers?"

"If you insist, old man!" shouted Hylin. Hylin once again tensed up his body. His hands and eyes gave off a red glow this time. Hylin looked up at Hroleif with a cynical smile. "Here I come!" yelled Hylin with a twisted voice. "WORTHLESS SCUM!"

Hylin dashed at Hrolleif at a speed so fast he vanished out of sight. Hrolleif looked around, trying to detect Hylin's presence. Hylin appeared behind Hrolleif, nearly taking his head off with a fierce swipe of his power-extended claws. Hrolleif fell off the hut and tried to recover but the impact from his landing messed up his back. Hylin launched at Hrolleif like a drill, laughing maniacally.

Joseph and the other 3 wolves stood in front of Hrolleif with their weapons ready. 3 feet away from a fresh kill and Hylin was tackled out of the sky by a woman in blue. When they landed, Hylin immediately fell unconscious and was taken back to the tower for recovery.
Edited by Sinistar, Oct 3 2012, 03:15 PM.
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This will be renamed to Halfbreed Inflictions when I get the ability to do so.

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