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| Monaco | Jul 16 2012, 05:48 PM Post #1 |
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I was sitting at the sofa with a few of my friends when my friend Tim came in with the Sonic Adventure DX video game! We thought it would be fun to play a new Sonic game after we'd just beaten Doctor Robotniks Mean Bean Machine from the Sonic Mega Collection video game! So Tim popped the game into the rusty old Game Cube, And switched it on as my other two friends Alex and Clover grabbed there controllers! The start up menu was normal and we all agreed that the music sounded really awesome! We looked around the menu screen and many other opinions to see if we could find any good two player modes, But we wanted to play the story mode together so we agreed that we would take it in turns playing each level! We went on the character selection screen and oddly all the characters were unlocked! I asked Tim were he had got the game from and he said it was a gift from one of our other friends Sally! I told them that I thought it would be even more fun to be able to play as all the characters then have to unlock them all so we agreed that we would just forget about it and play them one by one anyway, So we played as Sonic! His storyline was normal, The only thing that bothered us was the fact Sonic had his spikes higher then what was in all the lets plays and reviews that Tim had heard before buying the video game! After awhile we finally came to the last very level after playing none stop the entire night! But during the last cut screen we noticed that Sonic had turned completely white and his eyes were total black! We all thought this was part of the storyline, And since Silver was the first thing that came to mind we all thought it must have been a secret character that we'll unlock! So the next character we played as was Tails, But for some odd reason the first cut screen was nothing like the one we had seen on YouTube, But we all speechlessly watched the cut screen anyway despite how creepy it was, The cut screen started out in Tails workshop, It was night time for some reason, Tails was outside of the workshop (That is how we knew it was night time) And he was looking at us, He was not moving, No facial emotions were sighted, He was just standing there looking at us, His eyes were a bright white yet he still looked like the normal Tails, After a few minutes of him doing that we switched the T.V off and sat there speechlessly at the screen, Tim was the first to react, "What in the hell was that" He said trying to break the creepy and shocked motion everyone seemed to be in, "I'm not so sure? .." I replied, "Maybe it was a glitch!" Clover said grabbing the T.V Re-mote and switching it back on instantly, The image had switched to something else, This made us all gasp in shock and also made Clover drop the re-mote, It was an image of Tails again, Only he was screaming mentally at the screen like something you'd hear when playing the Scary Maze game, And of course we all screamed back at the screen, "TURN IT OFF TURN IT OFF!" Tim shouted as he covered his ears with his hands, Clover grabbed the re-mote to switch it off but just before she did the screen completely went blank and then changed to one of the second levels playing as Amy, The stalking robot had already appeared before we got the chance to discuss the very shocking images that we had just seen, I kept playing the level as Tim and Clover discussed the creepy image, "What the hell was that!?" Tim asked Clover, "The only thing it could have been is a glitch and nothing more!" Clover replied as she picked the T.V re-mote back up, As I quickly ran through the stage I suggested that it was a prank from Sally but we all disagreed because we all knew that Sally would be the last person on earth to make a scary game when she could hardly look at a screen that had anything scary on! Tim rushed up into his bedroom to get his phone so we could all phone Sally and see for sure if she was behind this terror! As we waited for him to return I finally finished that level, We all tried to be calm and happy about the fact we won but we were quite scared to play the game any further, Just them Tim came back in holding his phone to his ear as he rang Sally, Sally picked up the phone at last! "Sally you won't believe the stuff that has been going on with that game you bought me! It's gone mental!" Tim shouted into the phone while I froze in fear at the image that had just switched on the screen, "Tim you have to come and look at this.." I said in fear as I looked into the cold dark eyes of the figure on the screen, "What is it?.." Tim said looking to scared to turn his head towards the screen, "For gods sake just look!" I replied trying to reach for the re-mote without taking my eyes off it, Tim slowly moved his head towards the screen slowly, He gasped at the horror of the image that was going to be stuck in his brain all night long! The image was of our favourite character, Silver the hedgehog, Only his eyes were been cut out by Gamas hands, And the location seemed to be the mystic ruins at night, We all screamed loudly at the screen for a few minutes until we had a instant power cut! Silence... "What. The. Hell. Was. That!" Clover said as she tried to find a torch, "Oh god, I have no idea!" I replied, "Ah darn! I lost the connection!" Tim said putting the phone down, "Do any of you guys have an idea?" Clover asked, "Um we could try going over to Sally's house?" Tim suggested as he looked outside at the other houses that still had power, "That could work!" I replied as I sat up from the sofa, As we walked down the road towards Sally's house we all tried to think of a way to tell her that a video game had gone crazy! Sally's house was half a mile away so we had to run to get to the house in the end, As we got to the corner of the road we stopped for a rest, Clover spotted an internet cafe and she suggested that we went over there and tried to get in touch with Sally from the Sonic Blast forum! We all agreed it was a good idea and would save us from running any further, We rushed inside and Tim tried his phone again, "Okay here we go!" Tim posted a topic in the entertainment cafe section because oddly enough we WERE in a cafe and none of the other sections really fitted in with what we would post, So Tim started to post about what had happened, Just then an error screen popped up when we pressed "Post Topic" We all agreed that creepy things like this had been happening all day to much to be a coincidence so we walked out and tried to run to Sally's house again, At last we managed to get to Sally's house, The door was wide open and the windows were smashed! We ran inside and shouted Sally's name but there was no response, We ran up into her bedroom and we found her dead on her bed with the Wii re-mote in her hand and Sonic Rivals game inside her wii, The image on her screen was of Silver The Hedgehog, That oddly enough looked the same as the "Sonic" we seen when we selected him, Only the creature on Sally's screen was fully white instead of blue, So we all knew that this was not caused by Sally, But caused by some sort of curse that was put into the copy of Sonic Rivals, Clover took out the disk and suggested we attempted to beat this character and stop it from jumping from game to game and soon destroy the gaming world! The fate of video games were "inserted" into the ultimate console, The hands of these teenagers! We ran back to my house and inserted the disk into the Wii and the first thing that appeared was Silver the hedgehog clawing at the screen while screaming like Tails did, We soon came to become use to these pop ups and kept existing the game when it did it, As they played on Clover noticed something strange, "Guys I just noticed that Alex has not been around for ages yet he was playing the game with us." She said looking confused, "I'm sure he just went back home, And besides its not like he is missing out on anything, I mean who would want to see something like this?!" I replied beating the levels, "I suppose you right" Clover said as she turned her head back to the screen. Just then a loud scream came from behind them. "What the hell was that?!" Clover said looking behind her. "Are you sure it was not the T.V again?" I said while playing. "No! That sounded like it was in the room with us!" Clover said. Just then a thumb came from the corner of the room, Clover looked into the corner and seen Tim with a knife inside of his chest and his eyes completely blank while blood poured out of his mouth! "TIM! NO TIM!" Shouted clover as she ran over to him in a rush. I looked behind and spotted Tim and I gasped in great shock "Oh my god what the hell did that!?" Just then Tim floated up into the air and a demonic smile appeared on his face. "I should kill you all out sight I should kill you all out sight I should kill you all out sight!!" Said the deep and demonic voice that sounded noting at all like Tim! "It's to late we have to get out of here!!" Said clover grabbing me by the arm to take me out the house! "But clover we need to stop it! It's just a game character we can stop it!" I said trying to get her off me. Tim flew a chair into the wall just next to my had before Clover opened the door and pushed me into my bedroom. "Were going to be murdered!" Clover said hugging me tightly, "Don't say things like that, Now find a stick or something!" I said managing to get free, "What is a stick going to do!?" Clover said, "Maybe we can kill it!" I replied, "How is that going to work!? ITS ALREADY DEAD YOU IDIOT!" Clover replied handing me a small stick from under my bed, "Well what else do you suggest we can do!?" I asked as I grabbed the stick, Just then Tim smashed the door down and started to scream at us, "I SHOULD KILL YOU ALL OUT SIGHT I SHOULD KILL YOU ALL OUT SIGHT!" He said in a dramatic voice! Just then Alex broke one of the windows and shouted in, "Come on come on get out get out!" We looked at each other confused but there was no way in hell we were going to stay there any longer! We jumped through the smashed window and ran along the road with Alex ahead of us, "Long story short guys, I seen Sally get killed! After I heard you were trying to get in touch with her I thought that that demon thing would try and find Sally before us so I rushed over there alone to try and find her but it was already to late, So I came back here just in time before it got you!" Alex said running towards his house, "I have an idea on how we can destroy him but I'm sorry to say one of us is going to have to die in order for this to work!" Alex said as he unlocked his front door, "What on earth are you two talking about!?" Clover asked as Alex and I ran inside his house, "Clover I know this is hard for you to understand but there is a demon among our street!" Alex replied plugging in the GameCube, "So what is your plan Alex?" I asked as I sat on the sofa, "Its simple, I know that the demon will be trying to find us again so you two need to come to it!" Alex said turning on the T.V, "Are you mental?!" Said clover in shock, "That thing will rip us apart!" I said, "But there is more then that! As we speak it is coming to this house and that is why you guys have to go back to that house and delete the data off Sonic Rivals, I will give you my copy of the game, And you guys go to that house and get on the memory screen, I will get him inside the game so you guys can delete it!" Alex said, Me and Clover looked at each other, "Hey that might just work!" Said clover who was the first to react, "Well then lets do this!" Alex said running up the stairs, "What are you going to do in there?" Asked clover, "I'm going to wait for the demon of course!" Alex said before running out without any last words, "We can't do anything else, We only have one chance doing this," I said pulling clover up from the sofa, "Okay then.." Clover replied walking out of the house, Meanwhile the demon had just reached the house, Me and clover quickly had to run away before it spotted us, The demon seemed to be able to fly because it managed to fly up to the bedroom floor and rip apart the windows and wall paint in one huge slash of its claws! Inside Alex was getting Sonic Rivals up and began to play all cut screens, The cut screens had changed to Tails ripping out the guts of Doctor Robotnik before putting them inside his mouth and ripping them apart in his teeth and laughing! Alex was use to this so he kept playing and waiting for the game to shut off, Meanwhile Clover and I were getting on the way to delete the Sonic Rivals data, Once we got on we were just about to press the delete button but behind us the tapping of a persons shoes were beating up and down, We both turned around and seen Sonic The Hedgehog standing right in front of us with the body of Silver in his arms, "YOU DID THIS TO HIM AND I WILL END IT!" Sonic said in a demonic voice, "That's not Sonic Clover! Ignore him and delete the data!!" Clover deleted the data and the WII blew up along with the GameCube that Alex was playing, Me and Clover jumped in glory as the Sonic standing in front of us screamed in pain and started to disappear in smoke, Alex grinned in happiness at the fact the creature had been destroyed, But just then the sound of a person hanging seemed to be coming from the roof, Alex looked up and a smiling demonic Tails jumped down and ripped Alex's face apart and then his crotch area, Meanwhile Clover and I kept playing Sonic Rivals knowing that the creature would never return, But just behind them was a demonic Tails that was just about to touch the back of Clovers neck with his sharp finger nail... ~A few months later Sally was found dead by the police and her parents were taken to jail for the crime of murder but they kept declining that they had killed there very young daughter~ ~Also the body of Clover and the young boy known as "Aly" was found dead on the floor with the markings of a claw on his chest and his face was pouring with blood~ ~Alex's body was never recovered because of the mysterious smoke that made him disappear when the police attempted to touch Alex~ The end .~~ This was a fanfiction created by Aly Black<3 Edited by Monaco, Jul 17 2012, 12:49 PM.
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| TrueBlue | Jul 16 2012, 06:41 PM Post #2 |
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lol what was that mannnn haven't you heard of paragraph form? I'm not exactly sure I understood what was going on because the way I read it, it sounded like some kind of "Paranormal Activity" movie. only not as boring |
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| Clementine | Jul 17 2012, 02:37 AM Post #3 |
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I thought what you told was actually serious. I then thrown my laptop across the walls after the mentally screaming Tails thing, scrolled up and sighed in relief when it was a fan fiction. You should give a warning if what your writing is an attempt at a video game genred creepypasta. Some people don't like anything like that. By the way i'm expecting an ending where everyone die. :3 There is no way you can win with a curse in a creepypasta. It's a fact. |
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| Josh the hedgehog | Jul 17 2012, 06:05 AM Post #4 |
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I think I just *beep* myself from this story... |
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| ChAoSBounD | Jul 17 2012, 07:55 AM Post #5 |
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*headdesk* What the heck that was about? Okay, okay. Hold on a second. First off, haven't you heard of, I dunno, separating your paragraphs? I do so in my fanstory (that I'm currently rewriting after I was gone for awhile) and by looking at this, I'm literally looking at a wall of text. That's saying something right there. Audiences hate, and I repeat, HATE walls of text because it not only confuses them; they can EASILY get lost of where they are in a story, even if it's good. (That's why I separate my fanstory into parts.) Second, why does it sound like something out of creepypasta? I'm sorry, but seriously, I want to know why. What are you trying to base it off of? Edited by ChAoSBounD, Jul 17 2012, 08:07 AM.
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| Monaco | Jul 17 2012, 12:05 PM Post #6 |
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Listen, This was just a small fanfiction that I found on my Fan fiction folder I found on my computer. But you need to know that not all scary stories have to be a creepypasta o-o |
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| ChAoSBounD | Jul 17 2012, 06:13 PM Post #7 |
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Well, sorry if I sounded a bit harsh back there, but it is truth. |
Hello dear Sonic Fans! I'm ChAoSBounD (aka pkxchaos on deviantArt, secretmelody07M5A on Youtube, earth16melody on Skype, formally M5_Annie on the Starmen.net forums and secretmelody07 on deviantArt). It's a pleasure to meet you! ![]() [Outside of SonicBlast Forums] Spoiler: click to toggle [My Fanstory!] Spoiler: click to toggle [Other Things!] Spoiler: click to toggle Warning: POST-A-HOLIC ON THE LOOSE! Who's Ghost? Visit the wonderful channel of DarkRazorZ for daily laughs from the famous internet radio segment of TCR, Radio Graffiti! | |
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| Monaco | Jul 17 2012, 07:52 PM Post #8 |
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No I don't mind at all in fact I like how you spoke your mind about it! :3 Its just I'm use to writing "walls" of text instead because I think it gives an effect that makes the viewers think its more like a book then a "topic" |
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| ChAoSBounD | Jul 17 2012, 08:12 PM Post #9 |
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Hmm, seems to me that you are somewhat an intermediate advanced writer in the writing world. You know your paragraph structures, but you have some issues to iron out and I know how it feels. But make sure to try to ask questions and learn new stuff from higher up writers (such as the advanced/expert/master writers) along the way to apply, so you can make your story a success. I'm a high advanced writer, but I'm not afraid to learn new things. In fact, I find it extremely helpful in my opinion. Edited by ChAoSBounD, Jul 17 2012, 08:16 PM.
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Hello dear Sonic Fans! I'm ChAoSBounD (aka pkxchaos on deviantArt, secretmelody07M5A on Youtube, earth16melody on Skype, formally M5_Annie on the Starmen.net forums and secretmelody07 on deviantArt). It's a pleasure to meet you! ![]() [Outside of SonicBlast Forums] Spoiler: click to toggle [My Fanstory!] Spoiler: click to toggle [Other Things!] Spoiler: click to toggle Warning: POST-A-HOLIC ON THE LOOSE! Who's Ghost? Visit the wonderful channel of DarkRazorZ for daily laughs from the famous internet radio segment of TCR, Radio Graffiti! | |
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| Clementine | Jul 18 2012, 03:30 AM Post #10 |
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So, the story is updated. No really, that guy was right, paragraphs. I literally can't find the point where i last left off reading this with that giant wall of text. But, if this is a creepypasta or not (Because it sure as hell looks like one), you made a good approach. There's never hope in those, if you'll try to associate yourself with anything demonic, you will die and so will your close ones. If you won't, you will die either way because you are one of the characters in the story. That's how usually those stories go. And that's how they should be. So, great job. It's not bad. Just you know..seperate sentences for the next time, please. |
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| Monaco | Jul 18 2012, 09:58 AM Post #11 |
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Well I think I'm going to look at some other stories people have made and see how they are doing it. I still have a few stories from my Fan fiction folder on my computer so I think I'll be able to do it again but this time make it so people can understand and are able to read it better, Thanks for your advice guys<3 I also have to say that I'm thinking of rewriting the story now, Because I somewhat get the feeling that I would like Clover and Alex in future horror fan fictions! Edited by Monaco, Jul 18 2012, 10:37 AM.
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| Clementine | Jul 18 2012, 11:14 AM Post #12 |
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Didn't they die? :3 |
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| Monaco | Jul 18 2012, 12:11 PM Post #13 |
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Well yes they did but I get the feeling that there is a way for them to come back. In fact I've just made a second story that follows on from it, But since it hardly has anything to do with this story I have made a new topic for it, But if I ever plan to make more after the second one I'll request that an admin puts them together to avoid flooding |
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| Nekochii | Sep 19 2012, 01:18 PM Post #14 |
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This is a good story, but try to use less exclaimation points. It gets really annoying. |
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