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Double Crossed: Prologue-Sonic's Perspective-; Not as serious as it sounds actually
Topic Started: Jul 10 2012, 04:57 PM (146 Views)
Clementine Jul 10 2012, 04:57 PM Post #1
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Yep.
 NOTE: This fan fiction was made to serve as an introduction to my buddy called EK's upcoming sprite comic called "Double Crossed". Being assigned as the script maker, i suppose, it's my job to come up with the things people say and the actions that happen i guess. Sonic, Tails, Kirby and Meta Knight will be together in the comic however EK couldn't figure out how to make them you know, fit. What brought them together. I decided to think up a fan fiction prologue while he prepares this comic, depending if it will even come out. Like my fan fics usually are, this is extremely random so be aware. Be awaaare...

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Tails did stuff in his stuff house of doing. Stuff. Done. Sonic decided that it would be a good time to screw things up and sped into the house like he was the boss here. "Hey there Tails, long time no see!" Sonic spat with a really terrible voice acting tone." Tails smiled. "Hi, the Sonical Hedge of a Hog! Listen here, i think i might have found the solution to our life. You ready to find out?" Sonic honked. Tails nodded in agreement. "Atta boy."

Sonic suddenly noticed something beepingly red outside. "Oh god, Tails, run, there's a giant missle heading towards us!" Tails sighed. "Again."

Alright so they ran out and the fellow missile destroyed the hell out of Tails' house. Tails tried to not shed a tear. "But i had the waste of time just in front of my eyes..." Sonic patted his shoulder. "Cheer up buddy, it's not everyday your house gets blown up with such a illuminating flame."

Eggman appeared! He was behind it, who would have guessed? He laughed. Evil people do that. "I'm glad you enjoyed the show, Sonic!" Sonic blinked. "You are an real blind person, this was Tails' house. You blew it up."

Eggman froze. "Oh, uh..sorry..just you know..tried to give you epilepsy. I guess i got it confused."

Sonic thumbsed up. "Don't worry, we all make them mistakes!" Sonic walked up and punched the egg mobile that fellow fried egg sit in. It started blinking, then disappeared. Oh, an explosion happened too. Eggman fell onto the ground. "Oops."

Eggman started running. Sonic chased after him but Eggman proved way too fast. Sonic finally gave up when he lost him on his hedgehog sense sight. "..jesus..how does this person even run like that?"

Tails totally caught up with him and started explaining stuff that Sonic just almost gave a care about. "Sonic, we gotta kill him!" Sonic looked up at the sky dramatically. "EEEEGGGGMMAA

Tails spoke. "Hey dude, the sky can't hear yo" sonic punched the living hell out of tails because he definitely deserved it god i hate him so mu

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Sonic tracked through a jungle of jungles. Kind of like indiana jones. Mosqiuoieadsjklajkl swarmed the path. He grabbed a one little annoyance and grinned at it. Then he ate it. Tails followed him waving his arms. "THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU BUGS ARE NOT FOOD AND GOD THOSE TREES WERE NOT CHIPS AND HOW DID YOU FLY UP THAT MOUNTAIN WITH THE BIRDS WHAT IS

Sonic put a finger on Tails' lips. "i'm bear grylls"










Sonic and Tails reached Eggman's hidden fortress. The smell. They just could feel the smell of it. Sonic knocked gently on the door of evilness. "Hello?" There was silence. Silence however was ignorant and didn't answer the door. Sonic just opened it for himself. Tried to at least, since it was locked. Tails pushed Sonic away. "Hold up, i know how to pick locks." Tails ripped out the lock and exploded it. Okay.

They walked into a very polished torture chamber. Sonic wondered about all of the cages with all the poor trapped animals in them. Sonic looked at a bird's eyes. It stared back at him, having a shine in it's glare. It felt so innocent and trapped. It begged Sonic to rescue him with it's emotion. It had to be free because it had it's rightful to

Sonic pointed at the bird. "THAT IS THE MORON WHO POOPED ON MY BALCONY YESTERDAY SCREW HIM" Sonic walked away.

While walking.

Eggman appeared again. "Here again to just show my glory." Sonic sighed. Eggman grinned like ff "Behold my ultimatest of ultimate masterpieces, the Egg Gorilla." He opened up a giant cage, letting a fellow giant furry gorilla come out. Sonic lowered his eyes. "He's like..he's like not even roboticized." Eggman leaned forward in anger. "Hey, don't you sass me, i at least got it's ear roboticized!" The gorilla walked past Sonic. Sonic smiled and chuckled at the covering in fear Eggman. Eggman pointed behind him. "Hey look at that, it's a-" Sonic grabbed Eggman and brought him down to the floor. He punched him once. "Don't!" Twice. "You!" Thrice. "Ever!" Quadriple. "Cross my god damn line ever AGAIN I HATE YOUR FACE I HATE EVERYTHING ABOUT YOU I

Tails poked Sonic who kept mumbling threats. "Sonic?" Sonic snapped out. "Oh..um..did i kick his butt?" Tails was frustrated. "No, you thought about the opportunity to kick his butt that you started day dreaming and he got away! Come on, let's go!" Sonic quickly followed Eggman's trail."

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Sonic and Tails ran up a tower, getting higher and higher. Sonic wondered. "I know we followed his scent but i can't believe we couldn't see the tower!" They got up to the top, and seen Eggman get into a new egg mobile, and quickly started to fly away. Sonic looked at a room signed "Egg mobiles in case dumb people destroy the other ones"

Sonic grabbed a egg mobile, got into it, and chased after Eggman. Tails ran after him. "Waaait!" Tails tried to jump into the mobile but he was too far away. He hit a one part of the sky, randomly floated up then disappeared, reappearing flying back from the upper side into the egg mobile. "Best buddy ever."

So the chase went on. Eggman dropped a badnik behind him. Sonic destroyed it, a rabbit got out. "Hey, thanks for rescuing me WHOA WHAT THE" The rabbit went down, falling from the sky. "AAAAAA"

Sonic and Tails looked at each other. Tails remarked. "Just avoid those please."

Sonic and Tails caught up with the evil guy or something. Eggman sighed. "This is ironic that they can control my machines better then me."

Sonic shouted out to Tails. "TAILS GRAB THOSE BOMBS YOU GOT"
Tails: "OKAY"
Sonic: "WHY ARE WE SHOUTING AGAIN"
Tails: "NO IDEA"

Tails pulled out a bumb out of his god-knows-what and threw it at Eggman. The bomb missed. Sonic rolled his eyes. "God, i hate you"

Tails looked through the controls. "Doesn't this thing have like, a B button that can let you shoot an undescribable amount of bullets or lasers or something?"

Sonic suddenly felt powerful. "Hold up..i feel a weird aura emerging in me.."

Sonic grinned. "I know..i gotta believe!" Tails stared at him. Few seconds occured.

Sonic jumped out of the egg mobile and homing attacked E- oh god no

too violent

Eeeeeeeggman's mobile. It fell off it crashed and Eggman died

***

Shadow skated through the skatey land. "I will show myself my ultimate own power" Shadow got this random green chaos emerald out of nowhere. "God help me if it's not st.patrick's day today, i really wanted to" A random flying machine crushed Shadow and the emerald. Sonic and Tails safely land near it because who cares about long height falls.

Sonic grinned. "God, that was fun. I think. Dunno what was fun about it."

Tails pointed out the dark behinds of the mobile. "Hey Sonic, look at this."

Sonic rolled his eyes. "Yeah, it's the vehicle we I totally crapped over"

Tails nodded. "Yeah, it's pretty interesting. Hey, what's this?" Tails picked up green glass. Sonic grinned. "Hey, sweet, i love puzzle piecing."

Tails squinted his eyes at it. "Probably nothing. Let's just go." Tails tossed the glass at the ground.

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A strange portal has appeared out of reasons i don't even freaking know. Shadows appeared behind it.

And that's all i can tell.
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TrueBlue Jul 15 2012, 12:07 PM Post #2
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 lol a few typos but a good read otherwise.

I really liked the dialogue, and your descriptions of sonic & tails pounding on robotnik.

I know robotnik died but you should bring him back again so sonic and tails can kill him again
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
(MWAHAHA)
-Lord of the Rings

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Clementine Jul 15 2012, 12:14 PM Post #3
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Yep.
 All those moments when Bowser falls into Mario's hands, and more specifically, the lava, you'd think he would have died by now.

AKA, yeah he will be back. He will always be. It's the rules of this video game series.

Oh, and about the typos. If you mean "Missle", "Bumb", those are intentional in some way, but telling in what exact way they are intentional would spoil the joke. =3 In fact tons of words are misspelled on purpose for some sort of chuckle i am trying to make. But then again, a mispell that i didn't intend to make could have wandered into there. Like that scene where i am attempting to describe what happens after Tails falls to his death.

Edited by Clementine, Jul 15 2012, 12:23 PM.
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TrueBlue Jul 15 2012, 01:25 PM Post #4
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 I can't remember where I saw the typos. There weren't a lot.

And yeah, I noticed your sentence structure is a little loose (which makes it extra fun to read). Its hard to read in some spots. But you do better than most people so I guess I can't complain.

BEST PART:

Sonic put a finger on Tails' lips. "i'm bear grylls"
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
(MWAHAHA)
-Lord of the Rings

Fan Characters:
Jam the Jellyfish
Maia the Honeybee

Fan Fiction:
The Prince of Amenti
Sonic + Jam
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