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| dusk the wolf | Jun 28 2012, 02:54 PM Post #1 |
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I know i shouldve done this a long time ago but the just popped into my head soooo.... Basic Information: Name: E-115 accelerator(nickname X-L) Alias: (working on it) Age: 93(from the time he was made) Gender:generless(but people on mobius classify him as a male) Species:robot(people on mobius classify him as an echidna) Date of birth: 30 years before shadow was made/created(since i dont now mobiun years) Place of birth: Space Colony ARK a space station built by Dr.eggmans grandfather Current residence:a small house around the Mystic Ruins Occupation: owns a reapair shop in staion square Alignment: Neutral Physical Description: Image (If Available):N.A until i figure out how to post him in topics Height: 3'ft 5'in Weight: 368 pounds(due to being metal) Appearance: color:black fur/metal hair:red hair in a very messy way his quils are slanted down but the tips curve eyecolor:red Attire: black gloves with two straps on the front gray pants with red strips on the side and a hoddie that matches. He wears white shoes with a red stripe going down the middle. his quils are slightly curved upwards. Personal Information: Personality: being made as a robot E-115 tries to adjust living along side with humans and tries to understand basic human emotions such as happyness, sadness,and anger until then he contenues to observe them in every day life from a window in his shop he struggles trying to decipher the difrencess between wrong and right Hobbies/Talents:E-115 enjoys building/repairing machines Likes: machines and technology Dislikes:virusus, Dr.gerald robotnic, and Dr.ivo robotnic(eggman) Items:built in lock on systems metal detecting device's and varius radars Vehicles: a jet black motorcycle with red stripes on the side Trivia:E-123 omega and shadow are E-115 accelerators rivals for being creations of Dr.eggman and Dr gerald robotnic E-115's memory served as a diary for gerald and eggman Although E-115's rivals are shadow and omega he never bothered to fight them instead he tried to pass them up in knowledge Relationships: Family:Dr.Gerald Robotnic(creator) Close Friends:none Other Friends: none Romantic Interest:none Rivals: E-123 omega,Shadow the hedgehog Enemies:Dr.eggman Battle Information: Skills: due to the modifications eggman made on him can speed up the healing of minor injuries like broken bone and but instantly cure's sickness such as a cold or a fever(Eggman made these modifications as plans just incase E-123 Omega malfunctioned and hurt him in any kind of way] Techniques: pinpoint acurate shooting thanks to his built in lock on feature Strengths: as mentioned in the techniques he pinpoint most of his targets locations he can also scan objects(like samus did in the metroid prime series) to give a short description of his enemy's he can also transform his arms into death machine type weapons and fire burst's of electricity Weaknesses:if he tries to scan to many objects at once it can lead to a defect in his system that causes him to go into reboot mode for 20 secounds the death machine weapon uses large amounts of his energy supply so he has to be careful with every use Weapons:homing missles,death machine,and an energy whip History: E-115 original name was "project axis" he was created before he even thought of creating the biolizard(shadow the hedgehogs prototype) or shadow he created a special type of technolgy that used solar panels built in the ARK as the robot's power source (The ARK is in space so of course the solar panel idea was a great one at the time) had failed many test's Gerald had put him through he decided to deactivate E-115,put him in a containment capsule, and mark him as a failed creation many years later(about an hour after sonic adventure 2 ending)Dr.Eggman found him and decided to bring him down to earth with him Eggman. Shortly after E-115's reactivation Eggman went through the same trials his grandfather went through but instead of deactivating him. He made modifications to his systems, and added the many new functions to him such as the lock on system,built in radar, and changing his power supply to solar powered to electrical he also changed his name from project axis to E-115 Excellerator. He was sent to destroy sonic but E-115 decided to rebel against eggman becouse of what his grandfather did deactivated him and left him in the ARK for so long he built a small house and built two generators one so he could recharge and a generator to power the house's elelectricty he found out that he had the strange ability to heal when he found a bird with broken wing outside his house when he picked the bird up and like magic her wing was healed somewhere after that time he found that he was interested in building machinery such as bikes, cars, motorcycles, etc. shortly afterwards he invested in building a shop that said X-L's on the front. he built his motorcycly the red torpedo his primary way of transportation Edited by dusk the wolf, Jun 29 2012, 09:31 AM.
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| Jenna Jay | Jun 28 2012, 03:10 PM Post #2 |
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Um, In the Shadow the Hedgehog game it is revealed that the Eclipse Cannon was not created until after the creation of Shadow, It's primary function was to counter the threat of Black Doom. Also, It would help if you used better grammar in your write up because as it currently stands it's really difficult to read. |
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| TrueBlue | Jun 28 2012, 06:17 PM Post #3 |
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I like your character alot but your presentation needs work so your client(or audience) can be more engaged. 1. Sonic is only 3'3" so ur guy is like way tall. 2. I never played the game in which shadow was introduced so i don't know most of the items you are referring to. 3. There's "an advanced FC template" on the Fan Character topics list (1st page, halfway down) that bolds all of the headings. Name,Age,Species,etc 4. The profile is very wordy and a little dry. I would use simpler sentences and add a dash of wet humor. Edited by TrueBlue, Jun 28 2012, 06:19 PM.
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| dusk the wolf | Jun 28 2012, 07:29 PM Post #4 |
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I'll be sure to change and improve that now
in number 2 but can i ask exactly what you dont understand but as far as number 4 goes im bad at adding humor to things especialy things like this |
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| TrueBlue | Jun 28 2012, 07:49 PM Post #5 |
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2. I don't rlly know what the eclipse cannon is, and i have no idea how Shadow was created. 4. Just be witty. Use lots of puns. this is the best example: Tails is a "Butterfly" because his butt can fly. |
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One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them, One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them (MWAHAHA) -Lord of the Rings Fan Characters: Jam the Jellyfish Maia the Honeybee Fan Fiction: The Prince of Amenti Sonic + Jam | |
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| dusk the wolf | Jun 28 2012, 08:00 PM Post #6 |
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I really didnt want to go into too much detail on how shadow was created that would spoil parts of STH(shadow the hedgehog the game) but to simplify it shadow was
i will try to work on humor Edited by dusk the wolf, Jun 28 2012, 08:00 PM.
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| Josh the hedgehog | Jun 28 2012, 09:07 PM Post #7 |
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although it's a bit badly made (the bio, not the character itself), I have to admit, I feel sort of sad for X-L when he was deactivated |
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| Clementine | Jun 29 2012, 05:37 AM Post #8 |
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Hold up... *Brings out calculator* Shadow was made fifty years ago, that was first announced on 2001.. *2001 - 50 = 1951* Excellerator was made as one of the E series..Eggman didn't come up with the E series yet because he wasn't alive back then... Excellerator was made 30 years ago before Shadow. That means... *1951 - 30 = 1921* Okay, so he was born in 1921. Solved the birth date. However one thing stands. *1921 + 93 = 2014* It isn't even year 2014 yet. It's 2012. Math, bitches. Edited by Clementine, Jun 29 2012, 05:41 AM.
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| TrueBlue | Jun 29 2012, 08:59 AM Post #9 |
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@Max: TIME DOESN'T FLOW THE SAME IN FICTION AS IT DOES IN REAL LIFE! @Classic: That layout looks a lot better! Now if we could only get some pictures! |
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