Beginner's Lyrics...

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Beginner's Lyrics...; Not the best...
Tweet Topic Started: Jun 19 2012, 12:34 PM (794 Views)
Devy The Mutt	Jun 19 2012, 12:34 PM Post #1
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	[Yeah, I'm not the greatest at writing lyrics, but I try. My lyrics do not have any sort of meaning to me. It matters of what it means to you. But, I still try to make some sense. I'm just saying, if I had a band, it would definitely be named Project IV (I got the name idea from Plan 9 [Early Breaking Benjamin].) So far, I've got three songs. I might write a little more later for I always have ideas.] Project IV "Nothing Remains" Song Projects [Verse 1] I'm free and I am home... I'm wrong and you are right... You will reap what you sow... And I will win the fight! [Pre-Chorus] Soon we all will remain Held down and restrained... [Chorus] Leave me behind 'Cause nothing remains Slowly I will break Right through all these chains I will see your face And you will defend But I'll keep on trying Until the end [Verse 2] I am vain and mortified You are dark and you are blind Slowly I will try to find All that's left behind! [Pre-Chorus] Soon we all will remain Held down and restrained... [Chorus] Leave me behind 'Cause nothing remains Slowly I will break Right through all these chains I will see your face And you will defend But I'll keep on trying Until the end [Bridge] I will not give in... [Chorus] Leave me behind 'Cause nothing remains Slowly I will break Right through all these chains I will see your face And you will defend But I'll keep on trying Until the end [Cota] End! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ============================================================= Project IV "On My Own" Song Projects [Verse 1] Come as you are You will not make it this far You have been told You're the one that is so cold... [Chorus 1] You went too far Now I'm starting to fall apart I've lost my mind How can darkness be so divine?! I am leaving!!! I will not stay!!! [Verse 2] Too hard to say But I will be leaving this day I will be gone Don't worry, you still have your God [Pre-Chorus 1] Who would you blame If you lost your own twisted game?! [Chorus 2] You went too far Now I'm starting to fall apart I've lost my mind How can darkness be so divine?! I hope you know I will never come back home Leave me alone I want to fight this on my own... [Bridge] Oooohh... [Mold me into what I used to be... Forget the words that I could say... Hold me in between! I will find our way...] To better days... [Pre-Chorus 2] Come as you are You will not make it this far... [Chorus 3] You went too far Now I'm starting to fall apart I've lost my mind How can darkness be so divine?! I hope you know I will never come back home Leave me alone I want to fight this on my own... ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ============================================================ Edited by Devy The Mutt, Dec 7 2012, 05:18 PM.
	*"The life I live will never be the same without you here..."*


Devy The Mutt	Jul 3 2012, 07:14 AM Post #2
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	Okay, like I said, I'm not good at writing lyrics, but what I do to write them is write a simple stanza that would either make sense, be inspiring, or lets out emotion. Here's a couple that I did. Some are only two lines... "Succeed an attempt to find what's wrong! A failed attempt to find what's right!" <=====Would be a part of a verse. "One mark, hypocrite One more mark, piece of shit! Who could we blame? Giving us a bad name I fking hate this place!" <=====Would be the bridge of a song. "I thought I've already told you I thought I've already shown One more wish to solving crisis Wasted that wish for a fking home!" <=======This would be a chorus. "You should be proud You should give your own self glory! You were once dead But now you're reliving your own life story!" <=======This would be a chorus. "No more integration No more shit Take it down! No more repitition No more fights No more Hell!"<=======This would be a first verse. "You thought I was Going to make it! I'm not going in! You are the one Who's Forsaken! You're irrelevant! I'll find my way To better days! You can stay here!!" <====This would be an ending to a song.
	*"The life I live will never be the same without you here..."*


Nekochii	Aug 5 2012, 08:06 PM Post #3
KiLLER LADY Posts: 375 Group: E Rank Knight Member #13,123 Joined: July 13, 2012 Gender: Female Country: United States of America Xbox Live Gamertag: ShadAmyFTW 3DS Friend Code: 5172-1426-7143 Steam ID: crystallineGodslayer Nintendo ID: CRY5T4LL1N3 Game Currently Playing: Tomodachi Life	I love these! I think you're really good at writing lyrics! My favorite was the on titled "On My Own". It relates to me a lot.
	"Shall I Attach A Collar To You? I Wonder If Leashing You Makes You A Little Tamer." Nekochii


Devy The Mutt	Aug 5 2012, 08:49 PM Post #4
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	Thanks, I actually wrote a song that relates to somebody. SUCCESS!!! I'm writing another one at the moment. I'm trying to write a happier song. Don't want to look too emotional.
	*"The life I live will never be the same without you here..."*


[Mika] Gumi	Aug 5 2012, 09:28 PM Post #5
Sandopolis Act 2 Posts: 2,338 Group: S Rank Hero Member #13,165 Joined: July 28, 2012 Gender: Female Game Currently Playing: Assassin's Creed IV: Black Flag	I really liked "On My Own" and "Let's Begin". I've felt like that at times. ^^; And I think you're very good at this! ^o^
	"I never felt truly alive unless I was staring death in the face." -Solid Snake _{~All Art Belongs to the VG Cats Comic by Scott Ramsoomair~}


Josh the hedgehog	Aug 5 2012, 11:52 PM Post #6
Those who do good, do... Posts: 2,450 Group: S Rank Hero Member #12,907 Joined: April 24, 2012 Playstation Network ID: joshyboist Xbox Live Gamertag: starlighter XX	I'm not one for looking at lyrics, mainly because my mind is able to understand lyrics in a song even before I read the music itself, but I admit, the lyrics are good, are these songs rock anyway?
	Betrayal is a dangerous thing... "In my world...It's kill or be killed..." -Josh "Better run, coward..."-Sinistar


Devy The Mutt	Aug 6 2012, 03:02 AM Post #7
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	Electra Aug 5 2012, 09:28 PM I really liked "On My Own" and "Let's Begin". I've felt like that at times. ^^; And I think you're very good at this! ^o^ Thanks, I appreciate this a lot! I kind of liked Let's Begin the most. Josh the hedgehog Aug 5 2012, 11:52 PM I'm not one for looking at lyrics, mainly because my mind is able to understand lyrics in a song even before I read the music itself, but I admit, the lyrics are good, are these songs rock anyway? Yeah, I'm aiming for any type of rock as long as it makes it to Post-Grunge. If I compared my style of writing, and the sound of my voice when I sing, I have to say I have a very Sully Erna (Godsmack) / Maynard James Keenan (Tool / A Perfect Circle) style. I'm in between. I can go high and low.
	*"The life I live will never be the same without you here..."*


Devy The Mutt	Aug 9 2012, 12:29 PM Post #8
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	[My fifth song written. It has a different emotion I can't really describe. It isn't a "fk everybody" emotion so thank God I did it.] Project IV "Mach 1" Song Projects [Verse 1] You think you caught me slow, It's something you don't know, You are the one who tries, You're wasting all of your time!! [Pre-Chorus] You tried your best to bring me down, Instead you made it worse! I'm the one who helps you out, And lets you make it first! [Chorus] You can cut me out, Of your time and your space! You can look around! You will never find your place! You can shut me down! I will find my way AROUND!!! [Verse 2] You think you made it first No need to say this verse... I'll have to say it twice... You're wasting all of your time! [Pre-Chorus] You tried your best to bring me down, Instead you made it worse! I'm the one who helps you out, And lets you make it first! [Chorus] You can cut me out, Of your time and your space! You can look around! You will never find your place! Can't outrun me now! I'm travelin' at the speed of SOUND!!! [Bridge 1] I'LL TAKE YOU DOWN!!! [Pre-Chorus] You tried your best to bring me down, Instead you made it worse! I'm the one who helps you out, And lets you make it first! [Chorus] You can cut me out, Of your time and your space! You can look around! You will never find your place! You think you caught me slow! It's something you will never KNOW!!! Edited by Devy The Mutt**, Oct 8 2012, 05:50 AM.
	*"The life I live will never be the same without you here..."*


Josh the hedgehog	Aug 9 2012, 01:15 PM Post #9
Those who do good, do... Posts: 2,450 Group: S Rank Hero Member #12,907 Joined: April 24, 2012 Playstation Network ID: joshyboist Xbox Live Gamertag: starlighter XX	6 awesome songs and counting, you should start making music videos with that kind of music
	Betrayal is a dangerous thing... "In my world...It's kill or be killed..." -Josh "Better run, coward..."-Sinistar


Devy The Mutt	Aug 9 2012, 01:29 PM Post #10
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	I've only made five, but yeah, I don't have a guitar, nor do I know how to play. Actually, I do have a guitar, but I need to get a professional to fix it up and make it left-handed (yes, I'm a lefty guitarist). Then, I can teach myself how to play. You really don't need a book, you just got to figure it out yourself and bam, you're good. Thanks, I appreciate it. :3
	*"The life I live will never be the same without you here..."*


Nekochii	Sep 19 2012, 12:50 PM Post #11
KiLLER LADY Posts: 375 Group: E Rank Knight Member #13,123 Joined: July 13, 2012 Gender: Female Country: United States of America Xbox Live Gamertag: ShadAmyFTW 3DS Friend Code: 5172-1426-7143 Steam ID: crystallineGodslayer Nintendo ID: CRY5T4LL1N3 Game Currently Playing: Tomodachi Life	Malachi, question: What do you draw inspiration from to come up with these awesome songs?
	"Shall I Attach A Collar To You? I Wonder If Leashing You Makes You A Little Tamer." Nekochii


Devy The Mutt	Sep 27 2012, 05:17 PM Post #12
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	Anger comes from Maynard James Keenan. I have a lot to relate with him and he inspires me from his music. Breaking Benjamin gives me that feeling that my lyrics don't have to make sense. Instead, I let you guys make something out of them. I'm planning on giving my lyrics more of an adrenaline sound and I know who's going to give me that influence. Rage Against the Machine. Oh, and I have some lyrics I just made that look much better. I'm editing the song I recently posted... "You think you caught me slow, It's something you don't know, You are the one who tries, You're wasting all of your time!! You tried your best to bring me down, instead you made it worse! I'm the one who helps you out, and lets you make it first! You can cut me out, Of your time and your space! You can look around! You will never find your place! You have seen the end! I won't let you go again!!!"
	*"The life I live will never be the same without you here..."*


Devy The Mutt	Oct 8 2012, 05:44 AM Post #13
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	So I edited the song I've recently posted before. I changed almost everything.
	*"The life I live will never be the same without you here..."*


Devy The Mutt	Oct 20 2012, 07:52 PM Post #14
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	I don't know. A short burst of inspiration from a mixture of System of a Down and Tool. Project IV "Temper" Song Projects [Verse 1] God knows how I've felt... But you can't recall... I fell down, ashamed... I've lost it all... Can you hear me... Calling out? Can you see me... Reaching out? [Pre-Chorus] I am condemned... You won't see me again! I will forget... Your voice inside my head! [Chorus] You said it once! I thought about it twice! I said I'm done! Don't end this with a fight! [Verse 2] I've lost my whole life... Nothing left to lose... Indecisive... Nothing left to choose... [Pre-Chorus] Enlighten me! I am still confused... Turn back on me! No more trust in you! [Chorus] You said it once! I thought about it twice! I said I'm done! Don't end this with a fight! [Bridge] There's no forgiveness... We both did the worst... Embrace the sickness... I've dealt with it first... [Cota] There is no reason To be here, There is no reason To stay here, There is no reason To stay calm, There is no reason I'M DONE!!! It can be worse! I know it! It will stay worse! I feel it! Feel the anger! I felt it! Unstable temper! CONCEAL IT!!! CONCEAL IT!!! [3X] Conceal it... Edited by Devy The Mutt, Nov 18 2012, 05:07 PM.
	*"The life I live will never be the same without you here..."*


Nekochii	Oct 20 2012, 11:19 PM Post #15
KiLLER LADY Posts: 375 Group: E Rank Knight Member #13,123 Joined: July 13, 2012 Gender: Female Country: United States of America Xbox Live Gamertag: ShadAmyFTW 3DS Friend Code: 5172-1426-7143 Steam ID: crystallineGodslayer Nintendo ID: CRY5T4LL1N3 Game Currently Playing: Tomodachi Life	^^^^^^^ I love it. God, I should be good at this kinda thing, beings my brother is the main writer and vocalist in two bands. And his songs are Kick-Ass.
	"Shall I Attach A Collar To You? I Wonder If Leashing You Makes You A Little Tamer." Nekochii


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