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| Saga the fox!; My new fan character! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 18 2012, 09:50 PM (210 Views) | |
| Monaco | Jun 18 2012, 09:50 PM Post #1 |
 
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As a child Saga was just a normal villager of Mobius, But when he turned five years old, his parents were robotized by doctor robotnik, He managed to escape but there was no where he could hide because of the fact there were robotized villagers all over the village, He was captured by one of the robots and was taken to be robotized, He managed to break free be for he was fully robotized, But it was already to late, His arm was completely made of metal, But since it had a laser shooter he put it into good use by destroying the factory that was turning people into robots! He fought off all through the night until he reached the only unrobotized person on the planet, Espio the chameleon, Espio helped him out of the village and kept him safe at his home where espios parents looked after him while espio went back to the village to fight off the rest of the robotized villagers, Saga grew up in espios village until his 17th birthday, He packed up and said goodbye to espio and espios parents who had been looking after him for so long, As he adventured round the planet mobius all alone he met so many wonderful people, Like metal sonic who had helped Saga when he was in need of finding amy rose who was kidnapped by doctor robotnik, And tails doll who he soon fell in love with when Tails doll was in need of a home after doctor robotnik sent him out into the wild for been a failure at destroying sonic the hedgehog, And Sagas adventures go on, And hopefully for many years to come! If you would like to read stories I've written about Sagas adventures please inbox me and I will send you the stories as soon as possible! Age: 13 Gender: Male Species: Fox Place of birth: The egg carrier Current residence: Angel island Appearance: Dark blue body and head with dark red eyes and purple and white shoes and half robot arm including laser shooter! Also fluffy black ears! Personality: Keeps to himself mostly, Not very social. Hobbies/Talents: Walking on walls and sticking to walls that he jumps on! Likes: Family and children with happiness in there life. Dislikes: Killer robots and guns. Items: Mission guide and a map to the location he is in at all times! Vehicles: Bikes. Family: Turned into robots by robotnik. Close Friends: Shadow the hedgehog and Tails doll and Espio. Other Friends: Amy rose and Metal sonic and Metal knuckles. Romantic Interest: Tails doll. Rivals: Doctor robotnik and Rogue the bat. Enemies: Silver the hedgehog Skills: Power to warp in time and space and blow up machines instantly Techniques: Very very good aim when throwing spears! Strengths: Very dangerous when carrying any weapons! Weaknesses: Been hit in the arm makes it unable to move for 20 minutes! Weapons: Spears and swords! P:S I know Tails doll is a male, Saga is gay! DEAL WITH IT :3 |
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| Cube | Jun 19 2012, 04:21 AM Post #2 |
Robots can't be corrupted by demons... right?
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When I first saw this part, only two words popped into my head: OI. VEY. Now, I'm not saying the intire FC is bad because of this, but having an FC that somehow knows the canon characters, usually leads to the FC not being a very good one. I mean, look at this. In this intire part of the bio, it all includes canon characters somehow. Now, family turned into robots by Egghead, I understand, but from close friends to enemies, IT'S ALL CANON CHARACTERS! Now, if you only keep the canon character knowing to a small extent (Example: not having TD as a love interest), it might work. Or, you could just get rid of canon characters in his bio completely. If you want to get rid of the canon characters, but don't want to start all over with Saga, then just change his friends, love interest, and rivals & enemies to FCs that you made, or, if someone's willing to have their FC(s) meet your FC, then you could change it to that/those FC(s). So, yeah. That's my advice, please remember that I am only trying to help, and try out my suggestions, and see if they lead to a better FC. Good luck in the FC world, Michael the HedgeFox/The Blue PikHog. |
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"But that doesn't make any-" "SHUT UP! I'M ANGRY, THEREFORE I'M RIGHT!" Link to my first FC's bio: http://sonicblast.org/topic/7344165/1/#new Link to my YT channel: sonicrulz5252 | |
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| Josh the hedgehog | Jun 19 2012, 08:17 AM Post #3 |
Those who do good, do...
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pretty original, for a character that had his bio put first before his info, and a robot arm with a laser's cool, but what I don't like is that he's gay, also, tails doll is genderless, if you're wondering what his gender is... |
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Betrayal is a dangerous thing... "In my world...It's kill or be killed..." -Josh "Better run, coward..."-Sinistar | |
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Cee Jay Haych
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Jun 19 2012, 10:08 AM Post #4 |
"I didn't use the whole thing ...."
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Yeah, so like what what has already been stated using official characters in a fan characters story/history is normally a bad idea, It's like taking a story that has already been told and injecting yourself in it just to give your character more credibility. Also the gay thing would never have been an issue (and should never be an issue) if you hadn't made a big deal of it at the end. |
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| Clementine | Jun 19 2012, 11:18 AM Post #5 |
Yep.
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And what's wrong with being gay? :> |
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| Josh the hedgehog | Jun 19 2012, 11:25 AM Post #6 |
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Those who do good, do...
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nothing, it's just that I sometimes overreact to some gay people, mainly because they flirt with me...(not being rude about saga, or any gay people, both on my past comment and this comment) |
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Betrayal is a dangerous thing... "In my world...It's kill or be killed..." -Josh "Better run, coward..."-Sinistar | |
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| KogaHarine | Jun 19 2012, 11:54 AM Post #7 |
The Black Swordsman
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I've been hit on by a gay guy before. Take it as a compliment. Because regardless of gender it still is a compliment to you if you're being hit on. As for the character: Im just gonna agree with the consensus of not using canon characters. Not much else to say. |
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| Monaco | Jun 19 2012, 12:27 PM Post #8 |
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Well I don't see what the problem is with my character been gay, I'm gay myself and I choose to make my character the same as I feel, I find that very rude if you don't mind. I must point out that there are many gay mangas that exist, So Its not as if there are not any gay issues of comics of any type, So If you don't mind, Don't disrespect someone because they happen to like men. Edited by Monaco, Jun 19 2012, 12:29 PM.
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| TrueBlue | Jun 23 2012, 06:21 PM Post #9 |
Hydrocity Act 2
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Grade: C- Pro's - I love foxes - I love Angel Island - The character has been written completely with care - I love tails doll... and the gay thing is fine with me, in fact I was under the impression by the way sonic treats amy that he and tails were married in a polygamous relationship with knuckles. But Tails doll having a romantic relationship is totally like yaoi fanfaction Con's (subject to change) - The character does not fit the model for a sonic Hero. Can he give sonic a run for his money? - The character seems rather flat as far as humor goes. Humor is important in heroes - it is what sets them apart from the villains. Try working on dumb jokes, word play and riddles. Not only is it fun, but you will probably end up with a better character that way. Sorry to score so low, I will reevaluate you as you make more progress |
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