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my main charecter
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spirit the cat	Jun 15 2012, 08:35 PM Post #1
Character Select Posts: 7 Group: E Rank Adventurer Member #13,059 Joined: June 15, 2012 Xbox Live Gamertag: SpiritTheCat	Name:Spirit Alias:Prince Species:Cat Gender:Male Bio:Nobility from a coleney on one of mobiuses moons until it was invaded by Eggman, giving him a deep seated hatred of the Eggman empire. Now he works as a mercinary, waiting for his revenge. Friends:Thunder, Pheonix, Banshee Family:Angelic(sister) Relationships:Hellion Powers:Can walk through objects Hobbys:reading, hunting, playing guitar Weapons:Dual Kitanas and a custom made compound bow Rivals:Hellion Habits:Being overprotective Personality:Hotheaded but caring Likes:Honesty, justness, Vengence Dislikes:Oppisites of above A good ally but watch your back if you cross him



Josh the hedgehog	Jun 15 2012, 09:38 PM Post #2
Those who do good, do... Posts: 2,450 Group: S Rank Hero Member #12,907 Joined: April 24, 2012 Playstation Network ID: joshyboist Xbox Live Gamertag: starlighter XX	this sort of sounds like my character, spirit the shadow...
	Betrayal is a dangerous thing... "In my world...It's kill or be killed..." -Josh "Better run, coward..."-Sinistar


Beowulf	Jun 15 2012, 09:40 PM Post #3
Thou Hast NO Need for Fancy Avatars Posts: 622 Group: S Rank Knight Member #12,804 Joined: March 4, 2012 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Xbox Live Gamertag: allbritton baby Game Currently Playing: Tenchu: Wrath of Heaven	there are a few things bad about this 1.The bio seems like it wasn't even thought out,put some more effort into it.i could read the bio in seconds and not know what was even going on.remember your bio doesn't have to be long,it just has to be descriptive,and this was barely descriptive at all. 2.You really need to work on your english,now i know this makes me sound like a jerk,but we can't have members running around,using big words in a sentence when they probably don't even know what it means or how to spell it. 3.Spirit can't be born from nothingness,at least put his mother and father on there(don't be embarrassed,a lot of new people make this mistake). I suggest remaking this whole character from scratch with everything i just said added onto it.i suggest taking a look at this beginners template,it'll help new members a lot. Now use this template
	True Beauty Lies in something that lives forever,never rotting or fading~Sasori Father...I don't have a father, I just don't like you thats all~Dante WELCOME TO DIE~Magneto I Just beat Mag-freakin-Neto...where yo curleh mustache at?-Deadpool Your fear,how it shines like a beacon~Nightmare(or was beacon,bacon?) My FCs: Lozo,Alina,Kokoton,Seizan,Orina,Zavier,Raiku,Stazino,Konzu,Aquatos,Tapio,Lisa, Colt,Kane Erebus


Clementine	Jun 16 2012, 03:47 AM Post #4
Yep. Posts: 1,397 Group: A Rank Hero Member #12,099 Joined: May 26, 2011 Steam ID: Maximus123458 Game Currently Playing: Megaman X6	Allow me to demonstrate the bio in the silliest way there is. Spirit: Doot da doo da doo. Eggman: Bwa ha ha! I am Dr.Eggman and i'm invading the moon for no reason! Spirit: Oh noooo! D: Eggman: Well, that was exciting. Ta ta! Spirit: That Eggman..i gotta kill him! Serious version: The bio just doesn't make any sense. 'Mobiuses moons? There's only one moon and that's the moon that occurs when night happens. But not sure, maybe you meant something entirely else then what i'm thinking. "Can walk through objects"? Why? How did he managed that? What oddly goddly powers granted him that kind of ability? You don't say your character is jesus just because, you give an explanation on that. And well honestly, i don't really care for your english like the people above me. At least we can understand you, and that is what matters. Sorta.



Josh the hedgehog	Jun 16 2012, 06:25 AM Post #5
Those who do good, do... Posts: 2,450 Group: S Rank Hero Member #12,907 Joined: April 24, 2012 Playstation Network ID: joshyboist Xbox Live Gamertag: starlighter XX	now I know, this guy ripped part of my fan character (spirit the shadow) off! My character spirit has somewhat the same abilities except he can go through shadows and some objects, but not all of them... also my spirit has claws and has no limbs which enables him to attack from afar, this spirit has katanas and a compound bow. so basically, this guy ripped my spirit off...
	Betrayal is a dangerous thing... "In my world...It's kill or be killed..." -Josh "Better run, coward..."-Sinistar


spirit the cat	Jun 16 2012, 08:51 AM Post #6
Character Select Posts: 7 Group: E Rank Adventurer Member #13,059 Joined: June 15, 2012 Xbox Live Gamertag: SpiritTheCat	I did not rip your charecter off I created Spirit before i even knew about this site Edited by spirit the cat, Jun 16 2012, 08:52 AM.



TrueBlue	Jun 16 2012, 08:59 AM Post #7
Hydrocity Act 2 Posts: 114 Group: B Rank Adventurer Member #12,971 Joined: May 18, 2012	Anime Freak 4got his manners at home today. Try drawing a pic of Spirit. Also, on the forum>Fan Character Shrine, There is a topic called: "An advanced FC Template" Go to this and basically copy it. As a member, you can edit your posts, so you can just adjust your first post if you want to add or change your character.
	One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them, One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them (MWAHAHA) -Lord of the Rings Fan Characters: Jam the Jellyfish Maia the Honeybee Fan Fiction: The Prince of Amenti Sonic + Jam


Kintu The Fox	Jun 16 2012, 09:09 AM Post #8
Will be very inactive until January 2nd Posts: 223 Group: D Rank Guardian Member #12,797 Joined: March 1, 2012	I agree with trueblue about the template, though for not as much work you could use a template in 'Blaire's Fan Character Template' in the pinned topics so you won't have AS MUCH work to type than in the advanced one And come on cut him some slack, hes new, and can't it just be a quiescence about spirit the cat and spirit the shadow...
	Kintu's Characters: Kintu Kiyo Will be very unactive until January 2nd


Cee Jay Haych	Jun 16 2012, 11:48 AM Post #9
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	joshystar Jun 16 2012, 06:25 AM now I know, this guy ripped part of my fan character (spirit the shadow) off! My character spirit has somewhat the same abilities except he can go through shadows and some objects, but not all of them... also my spirit has claws and has no limbs which enables him to attack from afar, this spirit has katanas and a compound bow. so basically, this guy ripped my spirit off... Firstly a character called Spirit that can move though solid objects is pretty much the definition of cliche, its been done to death so many times that to try and call it your own idea is absurd. Secondly how is having a Bow and a set of Katanas the same as limbless claws?



Beowulf	Jun 16 2012, 12:48 PM Post #10
Thou Hast NO Need for Fancy Avatars Posts: 622 Group: S Rank Knight Member #12,804 Joined: March 4, 2012 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Xbox Live Gamertag: allbritton baby Game Currently Playing: Tenchu: Wrath of Heaven	trueblue52 Jun 16 2012, 08:59 AM Anime Freak 4got his manners at home today. Dude,what is that even supposed to mean. joshystar:stop lying,i've looked threw the fan character shrine until i got to my first character,you really need to stop trying to get people in trouble,or you'll be the one who gets in trouble in the end. Forever Eevee:I Agree,i don't see how Bows and claws are the same Edited by Beowulf, Jun 16 2012, 03:47 PM.
	True Beauty Lies in something that lives forever,never rotting or fading~Sasori Father...I don't have a father, I just don't like you thats all~Dante WELCOME TO DIE~Magneto I Just beat Mag-freakin-Neto...where yo curleh mustache at?-Deadpool Your fear,how it shines like a beacon~Nightmare(or was beacon,bacon?) My FCs: Lozo,Alina,Kokoton,Seizan,Orina,Zavier,Raiku,Stazino,Konzu,Aquatos,Tapio,Lisa, Colt,Kane Erebus


Josh the hedgehog	Jun 17 2012, 09:31 AM Post #11
Those who do good, do... Posts: 2,450 Group: S Rank Hero Member #12,907 Joined: April 24, 2012 Playstation Network ID: joshyboist Xbox Live Gamertag: starlighter XX	sorry 'bout yelling, I just didn't think straight and thought you ripped my character off... @animefreak: someone hasn't had a look at josh's bio... @forevereevee: I forgot to mention that his body is like rayman's body, so that is why he can go through some objects I just realised something: if this spirit is able to pass through ALL objects, shouldn't he be a ghost? Edited by Josh the hedgehog, Jun 17 2012, 09:56 AM.
	Betrayal is a dangerous thing... "In my world...It's kill or be killed..." -Josh "Better run, coward..."-Sinistar


Cee Jay Haych	Jun 17 2012, 10:02 AM Post #12
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	joshystar Jun 17 2012, 09:31 AM I just realised something: if this spirit is able to pass through ALL objects, shouldn't he be a ghost? The ability is called Phasing and is not limited to spirits, they are however the most common type to use it.



Josh the hedgehog	Jun 17 2012, 10:19 AM Post #13
Those who do good, do... Posts: 2,450 Group: S Rank Hero Member #12,907 Joined: April 24, 2012 Playstation Network ID: joshyboist Xbox Live Gamertag: starlighter XX	I know it's phasing, but what I mean is that it's not possible for someone to phase unless they have some sort of technology to go through something, and if they can phase through something without a gadget, they could be a ghost
	Betrayal is a dangerous thing... "In my world...It's kill or be killed..." -Josh "Better run, coward..."-Sinistar


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