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Metal Beach; Nikita ~ Kaiser O' Donnel
Topic Started: May 10 2012, 02:34 PM (911 Views)
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The Jaw-ggernaught of Justice.
Nikita fired a couple of repulsor blasts back at Kaiser, some of the electrical blasts missed her barely, some grazed her three-pronged horn, and some even hit her arms directly, causing them to be galvanized.
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Mexican hot-wings.
Kaiser rolled to the left avoid the incoming repulsor blasts while sending a few large blasts of energy racing towards Nikita. "You've made this fight fairly memorable, machine. But it has to end eventually" ,Kaiser informed Nikita while he began firing dozens of smaller electrical blasts towards Nikita while he approached her at an angle.
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The Jaw-ggernaught of Justice.
RUNNING INSULT GENERATOR.....
RESULT: "yes, let's make a grave for you first!!!"
Nikita then activated her jet heels, and raced towards Kaiser, at the last moment, dodging one electric blast, and flipping out of his way, and firing two pairs of repulsor blasts while she was airborne, right at kaiser.
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Kaiser had no time to move out of the way of the repulsors, one pair hit near the top of the shell while the other hit just below it. The blasts had succeeded in again, making Kaiser lose his focus and slightly tipping his shell. Kaiser aimed his arms directly at Nikita and began firing several large blasts of electricity at her and around her general area. The large blasts of energy now covered a twenty foot radius and were racing directly at Nikita. "No, I don't think that's going to happen." Kaiser focused as much as he possibly could at the moment, aimed directly at Nikita and fired a blast of energy substantially larger than the blasts surrounding it.
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SCANNING ONCOMING ONSLAUGHT...
SCAN COMPLETE.
GENERATING ENERGY FOR SHINING SHIELD...
At once Nikita's horn began emitting sparks. Those sparks were starting to encase her body. The blasts hit, but only adding to it.
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"Well....Shit." Kaiser mumbled as he observed his trump card being absorbed by Nikita. "The hell am I supposed to do now..." Kaiser whispered to himself as grabbed his jammer and began charging it while slowly approaching Nikita. As soon as Kaiser had the jammer completely charged his thumb slowly approached the button. And as soon as Kaiser was exactly beneath Nikita he clicked it on in hope that it would disable the shield surrounding Nikita.
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However, Nikita's shield then exploded outward with some force. It exploded all around her, enveloping everything within a few feet of her location.
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Note, I ain't as strict when it comes to grammar as perhaps the rest of our judges.

Results revealed

Nikita

Grammar: 5/10
- Short, and without much depth.
- A few errors in words here, but nothing I'm turning down, but almost a one liner. That's a boner.

Entertainment Value 3/10
- There's small action value here for now.
- Shown that she packs a punch at more then one way.

Fair Play 5/10
- I don't know whether the blast are meant to compel that electrical surge, nevertheless such ain't mentioned, so I believe that's fair enough.
- Shows that she's not overly invincible.
- Interesting move, but did she move out of the way, seems to me she only mentions the electrical surge but doesn't do anything about it, apart from accomplishing a counter move.
- How? I'm simply asking as this doesn't show much fairplay. How did she avoid it, whereas she keep on firing her fists.
- Avoiding one out of a dozen, where's the rest?

Adaptation to Environment 2/10
- Mentions the condition by entering, somethings amiss though.


Kaiser O' Donnel

Grammar 7/10
- Nothing overly to complaint about, except wouldn't mind more depth.

Entertainment Value 4/10
- Background is fine, as long it doesn't drag on for to long.
- So the lack of concentration could backfire, given the allotted time. Interesting, unfortunate your opponent didn't seize the opportunity.
- Do I sense something more then the same overused tactics.

Fair Play 7/10
- Seems solid enough considering the situation.
- Taken a hit in the shell, but I don't know the impact, sort of getting back quick enough to continue another assault.
- Continues to take hits, able to stand on his feet from the look of things.

Adaptation to Environment 2/10
- Barely mentioning the environment so far.
- Alas, there's the metal sand. What else?

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Final Score

Nikita 15/40
Kaiser O' Donnel 20/40

Note this ain't the final score.
Edited by DragonFlame, Jun 24 2012, 02:23 AM.
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@The score: ...whoa. I'll admit though, This is a new character, and not one that i'm used to using, such as Aaron Kunai. Also, this is my first tournament, so I'm getting my feet wet with this new character and all.


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Not bad I spose.
Could be a lot better, though.
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@fish: Yes, I suppose so.
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