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| Tweet Topic Started: May 1 2012, 04:52 AM (350 Views) | |
| sharzin shadow | May 1 2012, 04:52 AM Post #1 |
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he is my character radow the hedgehog see he        <a href="http://img4up.com/viewer.php?file=53698645893245560593.gif"><img src="http://img4up.com/up2/53698645893245560593_thumb.gif" border="0" alt="53698645893245560593.gif" /></a> he is the brother of shadow & most powerfull hedgehog in world!   he a rival for shadw-silver-omega&rouge |
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| Josh the hedgehog | May 1 2012, 05:14 AM Post #2 |
Those who do good, do...
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this character's over-powered: "He is the brother of shadow & most powerful hedgehog in world!", yep, definitly over-powered... |
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| Clementine | May 1 2012, 07:29 AM Post #3 |
Yep.
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Okay, gotta note many things that's wrong with the character. 1. For one, you did nothing but changed his quill color, that's not even trying. A character usually must have a nice look, something that makes it different from everything. 2. Radow the Hedgehog? The only thing you just decided to do is take out a couple letters and replace it with another one. There's some originality needed in this too. 3. A brother of a canon character and the rival of the canon characters you hate is just too stereotypical. Take your character away from the originals as not much appreciate that kind of thing, and fit them in the world of fan characters instead. 4. You can't say he's the most powerful hedgehog in the world because you just decided to. Make some backstory in, and don't just throw in a one single thing to make him the coolest thing in the universe. Before you will decide to explode at me in rage, please think twice and look at other fan characters. |
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| Lady BlizShadow | May 1 2012, 08:18 AM Post #4 |
I still can't use this.
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The only reason I'm leaving this topic open is because there's already discussion on what you can do to improve your character (I would say scrap it altogether and start from scratch), but beyond that, this topic is completely unacceptable. At the very least, you need to be able to fill out the basics of a biography template like this; if you can't do that, don't make a topic. |
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May 1 2012, 12:36 PM Post #5 |
Angel Island Act 2
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Um few things: 1. Radow is just unoriginal (like Wheatly said) you need to make up a good name. 2. Your character must have some kind of weaknesses. Your character can't (excuse my language) be an all-out powerful bitch 3. He needs a background. Ever notice how video game characters have a background, for example: Ezio, his parents were hanged, he became an assassin. All of your fan characters must have backgrounds to understand where they came from. Edited by videogamer4376, May 1 2012, 12:37 PM.
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| Josh the hedgehog | May 1 2012, 12:50 PM Post #6 |
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Those who do good, do...
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(pardon my language) I'm concurring with video, bliz and wheatley, this character SUCKS like it's been made by just an immature 7 year old *******! if this guy, oh I don't know, was COMPLETELY different, I might say otherwise! Edited by Josh the hedgehog, May 1 2012, 12:50 PM.
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| Lady BlizShadow | May 1 2012, 01:01 PM Post #7 |
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I still can't use this.
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Don't be a dickwad joshystar. Criticism to people is supposed to be constructive. If you want to help, offer some advice for improvement instead of a patronizing attitude. |
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| Lord Bowie | May 1 2012, 02:44 PM Post #8 |
What is the difference between a duck?
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Can't tell if troll. >.> Also yeah, start from scratch, unless of course you're a troll.. because if you are, I guess you have to enjoy that short lifespan in whatever way possible. |
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| Beowulf | May 2 2012, 06:42 PM Post #9 |
Thou Hast NO Need for Fancy Avatars
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I Can Tell That you didn't Spend any time on this at all.Scrap and remake this whole character.Use the template if you have to. No Bio No Family No Birthplace Shadow Has No Brother(Even if you did,your making yours sound like he was a Being with Omnipotence What is this guy,Some sort of Invisible Deity? |
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May 4 2012, 01:31 AM Post #10 |
For a jubilee, made out of diamonds.
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One thing I will point out: It's not a fan character, it's a recolor. |
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| KogaHarine | May 4 2012, 08:35 AM Post #11 |
The Black Swordsman
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Seems like a troll to me. I could be wrong but the signs at this point are really leaning toward the troll side of things. |
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| Lady BlizShadow | May 4 2012, 08:58 AM Post #12 |
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I still can't use this.
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Yep, I was kind of hoping the dude would've come back in time but it's been a few days now. |
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