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Sonic Labyrinth; snuck into his room to change shoes
Topic Started: Apr 21 2012, 01:29 PM (401 Views)
Clementine
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Yep.
Sonic woken up from his everloved bed NOT present in an alleyway and walked outside, hoping there are some newspapers cluttered in trash cans...then, Eggman appeared! "O ho ho ho! Well hello, Sonic!"

Sonic gasped. "Dr.Robotnik!"

Eggman made a sigh of relief. "Whew, thought you forgot my name for a sec there. Anyway, i got a new plan that i really need to blatantly announce so you'll easily find me!"

Sonic crossed his arms bored. "Right, so in what way do i need to kick your ass now?"

Eggman growled but stopped himself from exploding. "So in short i have snuck into your room and replaced your shoes with a pair of "Your-A-Slow-Ass" style brand new shoes. So in basic, your a slow ass. Since your speed is so sucky now, i can take over the world and you won't stop me! O ho ho ho!" Eggman flew away.

Sonic grunted. "That Eggman! I've gotta go fast!" Sonic lifted his foot about to run but then pondered. "..snuck into my room? Dude, creepy. Anyway, gotta go fcatch him!" Sonic tripped, quickly got back up, tried to run but he instead walked at an unnaturally human pace. Sonic lowered his head. "Ah shit..."

***

Unamused, Sonic walked throught the city. "Man, i've gotta locate Eggman's base and show him where crabs rest! And then kill him too, i guess." Sonic hummed and eyed a nearby person walking by. "Maybe he knows something.." Sonic grabbed the person. "Excuse me mister, i'm looking for some information.." Sonic said in a deep tone. The person paniced. "Wh-what?! What are you talking about?!" Sonic groaned and threw the guy into the ground. "Man i save this god damn world every day and no one can still help me!"

Sonic flicked his finger. "I know..my bestest buddy can help me, you know, the one with the technological and the extremely smart IQ, he can surely track down Eggman!" He pulled out a rock. Sonic smiled. "Hey Zen, my bestest buddy in the world, do you know how to track down Eggman's base?" Sonic listened close to his rock buddy. Sonic grinned. "Alright, thanks." He hid the rock in his um pockets. Sonic sighed. "That wasn't helpful..."

Sonic flicked his finger. "I know who can surely help me! My rival, the bloodline i hate and always race and fight with..i hate talking with him but it's the only choice as he did participate cooperation with Eggman once..."

***

Sonic knocked on a door. "Hey Tails, you there?" Sonic kicked down the door. He held his foot. "Ow oh god that hurt."

Tails heard the noise. Sonic entered his house. The excited Tails walked away from his workshop room and saw Sonic in front of his doorstep. "Oh, hi Sonic! You can come in!"

Sonic walked inside. "Should i take my shoes off?"

Tails nodded. "Yeah, i don't want to clean the whole house again."

Sonic started to take his shoes off, a horrible smell starting up too. Tails was scared. "On second thought, keep them on, i like cleaning!"

Sonic walked into the workshop, Tails muttering probably death threats. Sonic lamented. "So Eggman seriously screwed my speed up and well, do you have any Eggman tracker?"

Tails thought about that, then got an idea. "Got something better then that!" Tails lead Sonic to a swirly portal. Sonic was entranced by how crappy it looked. Tails explained it's usability. "This is the Emergency Teleporter For Kicking Eggman's Ass. It's a teleporter for kicking Eggman's ass. You basically teleport to his location."

Sonic nodded. "Oh, okay. But are you sure it's sa-"

"Look, it's Sonic! Punt!" Tails shouted and kicked Sonic into the portal. Tails laughed. "Ah god, i'm not evil."

***

Sonic faceplanted into a world full of ..hmm...checkery ground..platforming aaand badniks. Sonic looked and found the same. "Well, that's an interesting place to make a base."

Sonic looked around. "Wait..there's no Eggman himself! Why are those transporters are always made to teleport you miles away from the main guy himself?! Sheesh!" Sonic grumbled. "Well, can i run here?" Sonic tried to but failed. "Still nothing. Ah well. Let's kill some badniks then."

A badnik noticed the fellow. "Beep Boop Borp. Enemy #50219 Spotted. Prepare to attack.

Sonic jumped back. "Whoa! I never seen a badnik spot someone before! Eggman must have made those things into true brutal beasts! Here we go!" Sonic prepared to counter-attack. The badnik moved back and forward. Sonic stood still. The badnik didn't made any new moves. Sonic shook his head.

***

Sonic put his hands on his hips. "Right, time to finish the stage and kick Eggman's ass. Got only 10 minutes so need to hurry u-" Sonic fell from the stage.

TIME OVER

lol no it's not the end

i'm not lazy

surprisingly

Sonic respawned. "That was rather..quick..." Sonic looked up. There was only a one-minute time limit. Sonic threw his arms up the air, then he put them back into his body. "You've gotta be kidding me, i've got only a one minute? This is an outrage!"

***

Sonic looked down at a steep hill. "Well, this surely looks like my speed! Jump!" Sonic tried to jump down the steep hill to look cool. "Oh right, i can't jump..ugh..." Sonic walked down the hill, slowly gained up speed and curled up into a ball, going in immense speeds down the hill. "Whoooooo- oof!" Sonic smashed into a machine, coutesy of Eggman. Eggman was inside it, asleep but as soon as Sonic smashed into it, he woke up. "Huh?! Wha! Oh, it's you, you spiky little fiend! Don't you know how to damn run?!"

Sonic lowered his eyes.

Eggman. "Right, well, prepare to face the wrath of this Egg...Double Entrende! Made that name up just now, isn't that amazing?"

Sonic smiled. "Your right, it isn't!"

Eggman frowned. "Enough!" Eggman tried to start up the machine, but something wasn't working. "Huh?" A Windows 7 error happened. Eggman pounded the machine..with his fist. "No! No! This can't be happening! Gaah!" The machine exploded and it sent Eggman flying whatever else.

Sonic grinned and jumped into the air. "Ya- Yeah! Just um.." Total silence ensued. "Where are my shoes? And where the hell is the exit?" Sonic called out. "Hello!? Anybody?!" Sonic went silent again.

***

Tails went like "Hm..i smell the fat of Eggman being ass-kicked. About time i need to bring Sonic back." Tails made another transporter in seconds since you know. tails. He walked through it, and was sent to the world of labyrinths. "Sonic?! You there?!" Tails walked closer, and fell into a pit.

Lol the end



















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Good story!
I liked the storyline very very much and thought it was very creative :D
But I do think you could have done a little better on the ending since I was getting "Grabbed" into the story!
But overall it was a very good story,

~Aly
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Almanzo,you do know that Max got half of the story from Sonic Labyrinth the Game(TERRIBLE GAME).




Is It bad that the story was better?
Edited by Beowulf, Jun 11 2012, 06:20 AM.
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Still better than the game.
My favorite quote was:
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Sonic smiled. "Your right, it isn't!"


because I read it as "Your right, isn't it?"
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