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totalchaos; my Sonic fanfiction
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deadsoul	Mar 17 2012, 10:25 PM Post #16
Marble Garden Act 2 Posts: 163 Group: A Rank Adventurer Member #12,715 Joined: January 20, 2012 Xbox Live Gamertag: darkhanyuu 3DS Friend Code: 0044-3292-9634	preview: Spoiler: click to toggle Silver: These bastards followed all the way to Mobius! And now they want revenge for what the echidnas did to them. But the thing is, I'm not gonna let em get away with that.



Lord Tora Unlimited Crusader	Mar 18 2012, 04:20 PM Post #17
【The Knight of Tigers 】 Posts: 5,462 Group: Former Monarchs Member #6,733 Joined: March 17, 2008 Gender: Male Country: Australia 3DS Friend Code: 0404-6433-6113 Steam ID: crusaderandtimothy	deadsoul Mar 13 2012, 01:56 PM Got bored of using quotes, so I changed the dialogue style. If I have time I'll go back and do the same for previous chapters. And you call yourself a writer? NO. You do not get 'bored' of using quotation marks. You do not fall back on half-assed script-writing style. And you definitely do not use smilies in prose. deep breath Okay, look. If you're going to write stories, put some damn effort into it. Don't be lazy. Hell, primary school kids write better than this. Use punctuation properly.
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deadsoul	Mar 18 2012, 07:29 PM Post #18
Marble Garden Act 2 Posts: 163 Group: A Rank Adventurer Member #12,715 Joined: January 20, 2012 Xbox Live Gamertag: darkhanyuu 3DS Friend Code: 0044-3292-9634	Tora Unlimited Crusader Mar 18 2012, 04:20 PM deadsoul Mar 13 2012, 01:56 PM Got bored of using quotes, so I changed the dialogue style. If I have time I'll go back and do the same for previous chapters. And you call yourself a writer? NO. You do not get 'bored' of using quotation marks. You do not fall back on half-assed script-writing style. And you definitely do not use smilies in prose. deep breath Okay, look. If you're going to write stories, put some damn effort into it. Don't be lazy. Hell, primary school kids write better than this. Use punctuation properly. Alright fine, I'll go back to quotes; I was just experimenting.



deadsoul	Mar 23 2012, 11:32 PM Post #19
Marble Garden Act 2 Posts: 163 Group: A Rank Adventurer Member #12,715 Joined: January 20, 2012 Xbox Live Gamertag: darkhanyuu 3DS Friend Code: 0044-3292-9634	preview Spoiler: click to toggle Acids are attacking, Shadow's down, I not strong enough, were in the middle of the desert and I really hate my life right now.sighWhat would father do in a situation like this?



deadsoul	Mar 30 2012, 08:13 PM Post #20
Marble Garden Act 2 Posts: 163 Group: A Rank Adventurer Member #12,715 Joined: January 20, 2012 Xbox Live Gamertag: darkhanyuu 3DS Friend Code: 0044-3292-9634	preview: Spoiler: click to toggle Shadow vs Ciad, how should this turn out. Has the Ultimate life truly met his maker? The true battle finally Kicks off.



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