A Lesson Learned (RP plan that needs work))

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A Lesson Learned (RP plan that needs work)); A role play that I would like some help on. (Max: 2 people) Similar to Chronicle
Tweet Topic Started: Feb 5 2012, 07:46 AM (410 Views)
Devy The Mutt	Feb 5 2012, 07:46 AM Post #1
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	[Okay, I'm not good at making plots so I'm going to ask if I can have some help on the plot of this role play. But lemme' give some info first. The plot is similar and I mean, similar to the movie Chronicle that came out. Even though I didn't watch Chronicle...yet...] PLOT: Three very close friends are walking to one friends house (my character's) and they go through an alley way of the Emerald city. They were about to pass this old man, but was stopped by him. He gives the three kids these amazing God-like powers (One gets telekinesis, one gets time shift, and the other gets the power of creation. hint: your character has to start out with either no powers, or weak powers). They end up being like what teenagers are these days and do funny pranks on people that don't hurt anyone, but gives them a laugh. But one of the characters (we'll decide who) becomes stronger than the other two and begins to abuse his power by doing devious things such as robbery, destruction/vandalism, and hurting others. As the story moves on, he/she turns against his/her friends and does even more hurtful things to the city. The police and even citizens of Emerald city try to stop him/her, but failed. It's up to the two friends to find his/her weakness and stop the crisis. The strongest one still can be hurt, but is very hard to take down. CHARACTER SHEET: Name: Age: Sex: Species: Likes: Dislikes: Personality: Appearance: Abilities before their power (optional): Weakness: Bio: [I think it needs to be worked on, and I hope that people can help me out and want to join as well and we can plan more so on and start this role play. I'm not the best at making plots, but I'm trying to be better. Please help ] EDIT: Only people who are on a lot are allowed to join. Edited by Devy The Mutt, Feb 5 2012, 08:00 AM.
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~~Broly~~	Feb 5 2012, 11:34 AM Post #2
...Kakarot!! Posts: 4,952 Group: Game Over :( Member #12,413 Joined: September 20, 2011	WOW. I haven't seen the movie yet either. But, you're right, the RP IS very similar to the movie. I say, you change the powers they get. Try not to make it so much like the movie. The plot is fine. I see no flaw. I will sign up too.
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Whiteshadow	Feb 5 2012, 11:36 AM Post #3
The other side's reflection hidden under the light Posts: 619 Group: S Rank Knight Member #12,597 Joined: December 6, 2011	Uh why does this man give em Godlike powers? I mean unless he wants to spread discord and destruction. Also is this only for Anthros or are humans also accepted? Mostly curious cuz others might wanna play as humans. Also I probably will join. Edited by Whiteshadow, Feb 5 2012, 11:40 AM.



~~Broly~~	Feb 5 2012, 11:38 AM Post #4
...Kakarot!! Posts: 4,952 Group: Game Over :( Member #12,413 Joined: September 20, 2011	That is a good point, WS. Why does the man give them powers?
	My close friends: Princess Ail the Rabbit Connor Mike shadow Astarotte Finitezero Kintu the fox Cheekaloco My =SB= family: Shallow Bay (Brother)


Devy The Mutt	Feb 5 2012, 03:45 PM Post #5
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	Hmm...never thought of that. Lemme' explain the plot in a little more detail. The man that gives them the powers is a poor man, but then, again, magical man. He has a selection of 36 cards spread upon a large box. The kids were lucky enough to pick the three out of the thirty-two cards that held powers...but the three cards are powers stronger than all the rest. One of the kids were dumb enough to say, "I wish we had these powers for real..." and they leave. The poor man smiled as they left and whispered, "Be careful what you wish for..." he says snapping and disappearing. Help me out here. Give me ideas for the plot to fix it as well. It'd be great oh and... EDIT: How about we each choose one of the god-like powers. Also, the man is teaching them a lesson, not trying to cause destruction. And yes, a human can join WS. I don't know the movie that much so I know that I can't make it too much like the movie. I just want to make the plot the same. Nothing else. I even twisted the plot as well so it's not exactly like the movie. Anyway, glad to see you guys want to join. We just need more ideas and corrections to make this Role play better.
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~~Broly~~	Feb 5 2012, 04:28 PM Post #6
...Kakarot!! Posts: 4,952 Group: Game Over :( Member #12,413 Joined: September 20, 2011	That's good. And plus, the whole thing is more understandable. But, if one of us gets drunk with power, why don't the rest of us? I mean, what do we all get this crazy ass idea to be super heroes or something? I think it should be that we all go mad with power. And later on in the RP, we start to see what we have done. That we've gone insane. The old man visits us again, sees that we've learned our lesson and we get some sort of punishment.
	My close friends: Princess Ail the Rabbit Connor Mike shadow Astarotte Finitezero Kintu the fox Cheekaloco My =SB= family: Shallow Bay (Brother)


Devy The Mutt	Feb 5 2012, 04:33 PM Post #7
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	Hmm...let's think about the plot. Not the climax and falling action. We want to think about the Rising action and Exposition. I'd like it better if they all go insane with power though.
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~~Broly~~	Feb 5 2012, 04:38 PM Post #8
...Kakarot!! Posts: 4,952 Group: Game Over :( Member #12,413 Joined: September 20, 2011	Well, for rising action, they all end up passing out for some reason while they're at one of their houses. Then the next day, they wake up and they're at home. And during the day weird things start happening with them. Their powers start to emerge. Later on they all regroup and tell about their powers. They get exited or whatever and start to fool around with them.
	My close friends: Princess Ail the Rabbit Connor Mike shadow Astarotte Finitezero Kintu the fox Cheekaloco My =SB= family: Shallow Bay (Brother)


Devy The Mutt	Feb 5 2012, 04:42 PM Post #9
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	Like test out their powers in funny ways, then, funny turns into too far, then, it turns out to full blown insane. Either one of them or all of them start to abuse their powers. People try to stop them, but they move them out of their way. We gotta make a hero in this role play though. Like someone who calms them down and makes them realize what they are doing.
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~~Broly~~	Feb 5 2012, 04:45 PM Post #10
...Kakarot!! Posts: 4,952 Group: Game Over :( Member #12,413 Joined: September 20, 2011	Yeah. Like a family member or someone sees what they have become and tries to stop them.
	My close friends: Princess Ail the Rabbit Connor Mike shadow Astarotte Finitezero Kintu the fox Cheekaloco My =SB= family: Shallow Bay (Brother)


Devy The Mutt	Feb 5 2012, 04:53 PM Post #11
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	Let's have WS's opinion before we get any more Ideas.
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Whiteshadow	Feb 5 2012, 05:09 PM Post #12
The other side's reflection hidden under the light Posts: 619 Group: S Rank Knight Member #12,597 Joined: December 6, 2011	Actually I love where this is going. Just for a second play on powers, why can't one TAKE away the powers? Like a negative reaction pulling at only little bits to help show what the blazes is happening but the others can rebuild the powers while the negative just absorbs never relesing thus insanity for that one :D!



~~Broly~~	Feb 5 2012, 05:11 PM Post #13
...Kakarot!! Posts: 4,952 Group: Game Over :( Member #12,413 Joined: September 20, 2011	.....Huh...I guess that could work.
	My close friends: Princess Ail the Rabbit Connor Mike shadow Astarotte Finitezero Kintu the fox Cheekaloco My =SB= family: Shallow Bay (Brother)


Devy The Mutt	Feb 5 2012, 05:15 PM Post #14
'Ello, lad! Posts: 2,631 Group: E Rank Legend Member #12,660 Joined: December 29, 2011 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Steam ID: mxnneurosis Game Currently Playing: Oddworld: Abe's Oddysey	True. So lemme' clarify. One has the power to get rid of one's powers and then again, absorb it? And that's the one that becomes insane?
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~~Broly~~	Feb 5 2012, 05:28 PM Post #15
...Kakarot!! Posts: 4,952 Group: Game Over :( Member #12,413 Joined: September 20, 2011	Wait, then that would change the whole plot. If one takes powers, the other two would have to dropped and couldn't fight him/her. I say, one can be like Rough from X-men. They can use anyone's abilities that they touch. Like they touch a bodybuilder. Even though they are weak and brittle, they have that bodybuilder's strength.
	My close friends: Princess Ail the Rabbit Connor Mike shadow Astarotte Finitezero Kintu the fox Cheekaloco My =SB= family: Shallow Bay (Brother)


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