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| Sonic NES - A comic Sprite.; My first comic sprite. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 27 2012, 03:37 PM (408 Views) | |
| Pedruben | Jan 27 2012, 03:37 PM Post #1 |
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After an unknown number of ideas I didn't finish I decided to start a sprite comic.  To sum it up, I'm attempting a serious sonic story with maybe some silly thing in the middle. I'll try and add small animations from time to time, but because of Smackgeeves size limit my hands are tied. So far I already have 5 pages, just to make sure I would give up from the start. Page 1 |
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| Lord Master of Darkness™ | Jan 27 2012, 05:50 PM Post #2 |
 
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You just won an internet. Keep this up and you'll win a place in my sig! |
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| Clementine | Jan 28 2012, 05:41 AM Post #3 |
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Nice comic. =3 Liked the "SWEET COMBO!" thing. Although sometimes the characters feel kinda emotionless. Good job, anyway. ^^ |
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| Pedruben | Feb 2 2012, 11:19 AM Post #4 |
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Page 6 I would really like to keep my 2 comics a week schedule, but with school its becoming a bit hard. Max @ I'm still working the plot and that's one of the reasons I've never made a comic before, but I'm trying. Also thank for pointing that out. MOD @ Thanks a lot, that gives me a goal to achieve with this project. |
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| Pedruben | Feb 3 2012, 06:22 PM Post #5 |
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Page 7 ... I should start moving the story before stuff start blocking each other. Can't believe I haven't still explain what NES means. |
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| Lord Master of Darkness™ | Feb 27 2012, 06:58 PM Post #6 |
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Page 6 confused the hell out of me. Don't try to squeeze too much action in, it ruins the flow. At the same time, don't skip out important parts of the action either - you vary from fast to skip to slow quite quickly. Enjoying the mini-rivalry between hedgehog and echidna however 
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| Pedruben | Feb 28 2012, 10:58 AM Post #7 |
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Story has been a trouble to me. Mostly now that school has been taking a lot of my time, plus I keep working against myself. I wanted to show how strong the robots where by putting the "30 minutes" in the top of the first page. But I should restart this in the next week, probably since this week is when I have to make my last test for school. |
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| Beowulf | Mar 7 2012, 11:33 PM Post #8 |
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Too me theres a little bit more action in the scenes like on page 6 Try to balance action and emotions and your comics could be treasured forever IF you finish it |
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| Vex The Hedgehog | Mar 11 2012, 07:08 PM Post #9 |
Character Select
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I like this sprite comic, but like the others said, work on the emotions and everything. By the way, if you have a sonic fan character sprited, i'd really like you to join SSC! xP You seem like a good comic artist, if you're interested, click on the thumbnail in my sig. |
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