Fancharacters of Greatness V2

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Fancharacters of Greatness V2
Tweet Topic Started: May 11 2008, 05:37 AM (4,621 Views)
Lord Bowie	Jun 8 2008, 03:30 PM Post #151
What is the difference between a duck? Posts: 4,799 Group: Former Monarchs Member #7,312 Joined: April 10, 2008 Playstation Network ID: Allbowdown Xbox Live Gamertag: allbowdown	Chaos Shadow Jun 8 2008, 08:00 AM OK just to finish someone quickly as possible I am going to talk about Sonic Andre which was created by Sonic_Andre himslef. 0/10 Yeah that was all I have to talk about, what BlizShadow said is almost the same, this character has no creatively, his character isn't orngnal, and also his history is just not cool... My suggestion is to remake him and I don't mean change his history and stuff, I mean EVERY single thing, you really need help on how to make a character so please send a PM to me or anyone here that is good at making profiles. Now since that is over I will move on to the next one which will be Mistletoe by Bowie. Basic Information: Meh there is no problem here, I see all the information that I needed to know about him. Appearance: Like the clothes, they are a bit basic but I still like it, makes me wonder if this cat enjoys going inside bars since he has some cool shoes and such, me like him. The jacket matches the pants and shoes matches with his skin, good combination with the white shirt and his mouth also, pretty good so far. He also has marking which makes me wonder how he got it and such, once again you got yourself a good looking character xD Personality: Where is it? xD Abilities: Same type of fighting style that Escudo does in battle, always allowing one to attack first, and waits till they can't battle anymore. Escudo sometimes does that because he is smart like that, your character in the other may do the same but he does it with different types of style. Special Attacks seems to be good, I like the finisher, please don't do that to me one day, Okay? xD History: It's creative, I really don't see a problem with it, I wanted to see you add more in his history but this seem enough for me to understand he went trough which is good enough for me. Overall: The character is good enough to be looked at, indeed there were stuff that I liked about your character, I would like to see what will happen in a battle between Escudo and him xD But I do Ned you to write up his personality that is the only problem, people will want to know how he reacts to others, so please add that in when you have the time OK? 7/10 - Yeah it's abit to much because he doesn't have a personality but this is what I will normally give him if he had one the real score is this 6/10 U critiqued the wrong Character, Chaos...
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Lady Leafeon	Jun 16 2008, 06:16 AM Post #152
Sandopolis Act 2 Posts: 2,055 Group: S Rank Hero Member #1,946 Joined: August 15, 2007	Keep the judging coming theres more characters to do guys.



Dominican Stats	Jun 16 2008, 08:47 PM Post #153
All Hail Orange! Posts: 651 Group: S Rank Knight Member #1,573 Joined: July 2, 2007	Bowie what are you talking about? isn't that your character? Please send me a PM about it because you got me confused there @_@ Anyway here is another random character that goes by the name of Karin Shoko created by Serenity. Basic Information: It's to simple by the way I see it, what is her date of birth? Sign? What is her Weight? be creative and add more stuff in there a bit. but other than that there is no problems since you gave in the information that is needed about age, name, etc. Appearance: Furry doll marker is a good way to show your character but you cannot just let that go without having a reason of each clothing that you have. Give some detail about her, does she has a tattoo, a design, is the clothes a bit different than what we see here? just tell us so that we can see if it's good, in other words put some words there instead of leaving a picture. Personality: Not detailed enough, why is she wild, and happy? How come it is easy to make her cry, scared, and angered, is it because she cares for her friends, because she dislikes something? Add some stuff, personality is one of the big things when making a character,what I do is give a paragraph on each way he acts so that members can see how he is if he encounters him in a RP, get the point? Abilities: Most of these skills are similar to the characters of Naruto, you may have changed the element but that won't fool me. Ice breath? Almost the same as the grand fireball jutsu that was seen in episode 3 of Naruto, the time when Sasuke had to fight his sensei. You just basically changed the element and the effect, which is alright since I don't see the real thing, but Water Dragon, and Water Prison? You know damn right that you got that from that large ninja with that huge sword in season 1. Try to be more creative than that, make that Water dragon into something different like lets say, she is able to create a large amount of water from her right hand and lanuches it right toward her foe, you know add ideas, and also please be more detailed, just writing a simple line will not make me see that this technique is a good one, give a detailed description of how she uses this technique, does she run, takes assistance for the attack? you know add those stuff. History: looks a bit child at the start, I have read it and there were some good, and bad parts. Overall: The Character is not poor, but needs more improvement, unlike many others she has a detailed history, showing us how her life was at the start till now, another thing is her personality, if you fix it more I would have liked it, but just one line is not going to help you make people take a look at your profile. Techniques needs to be creative, and also the appearance could use some change, but that is optional. 3.8/10 PM me because I feel like helping this character ^^ Edited by Dominican Stats, Jun 19 2008, 06:10 AM.
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Haro	Jun 16 2008, 09:00 PM Post #154
"Hmph."-In slow motion Posts: 1,774 Group: S Rank Hero Member #7,401 Joined: April 13, 2008	Jacob May 29 2008, 05:03 PM Well you reminded me of a few things I have to add in. But as far as chaos drain goes it stays. Mostly because I deal with alot of godmodding and so this is my protection against it, It's not really godmodding but as a anti godmodding kinda. however I've left out alot of details about that might make it more godmoddish. It only lasts for a hour. I can only use it once a day. It only takes awaypowers, it doesnt make them weaker any other way. It evens out the fight. and Jacob rarely ever uses it. Only on crazy people. So Yea I need to edit that a little. as far racial abilties I forgot about those. I'll have to add those on. and forms. HELL NO! And @ Tal. I realized that forms aren't needed about 2 weeks ago XD. Sorry for the random, I just realized that that wasnt the most recent post.



~~Venoma3d~~	Jun 18 2008, 07:56 AM Post #155
Lava Reef Act 2 Posts: 4,447 Group: Game Over :( Member #2,895 Joined: October 13, 2007	Mind rating Venom for me ? ^__^; Link to his bio http://sonicblast.org/topic/7007297/1/?x=0#post8008274



~~Brennen the Vampire~~	Jun 18 2008, 07:59 AM Post #156
Banned Posts: 3,071 Group: Continue? Member #1,722 Joined: July 19, 2007	Hey, can I be an artist?



Dominican Stats	Jun 19 2008, 06:22 AM Post #157
All Hail Orange! Posts: 651 Group: S Rank Knight Member #1,573 Joined: July 2, 2007	Basic Information: Not the best, you forgot to add in how tall he is, how much pounds he has, there are some stuff that are needed to be added in this profile. Appearance: Body part is almost the same as knuckles, the gloves are the same, the face, almost everything but not the hair style. I would suggest you put some clothes on, and also give him a item like a watch, or a tattoo, something that no Sonic character has. Personality: Not detailed enough,just what I said before, please add some stuff, personality is one of the big things when making a character,what I do is give a paragraph on each way he acts so that members can see how he is if he encounters him in a RP, get the point? Abilities: You are not giving me information about them at all, you are just telling me a small thing about it and thats it, can you explain how he does the attack step by steps, can you explain how he doe sit, does he make some strange hand movement, does he say a few words? Add some detail in them so that people can see that it's creative or something. History: There are some good stuff and bad here, I do not see the problem, just add more detail on each paragraph, and do not jump over many years, it will just lose my interest to figure out this character. Overall: The Character is not poor, but needs more improvement, I may understand that this might be the first time making a profile, but hey let me tell you something you done it better than me when I first made a character, but as I grow so did my profile, so yeah take time on trying to come up with ideas of attacks, personally, etc. 4.4/10 around there I guess, please don't hurt me >.<
	Jeremiah Gottwald Stats: 50% Human 50% Machine 200% Loyalty Sig and avi is made by CAPTAIN FAB-U-LOUS


~~Venoma3d~~	Jun 19 2008, 08:19 AM Post #158
Lava Reef Act 2 Posts: 4,447 Group: Game Over :( Member #2,895 Joined: October 13, 2007	slaps CS Mff....Fair enough I guess.



Kitm	Jun 24 2008, 11:25 AM Post #159
Lava Reef Act 1 Posts: 2,977 Group: =SB= Governors Member #1,073 Joined: May 18, 2007 Gender: Male Country: Canada Game Currently Playing: Destiny	C'mon guys, hurry up and finish these!



Lord Bowie	Jun 24 2008, 06:08 PM Post #160
What is the difference between a duck? Posts: 4,799 Group: Former Monarchs Member #7,312 Joined: April 10, 2008 Playstation Network ID: Allbowdown Xbox Live Gamertag: allbowdown	Quote: 10.) Mistletoe - by Bowie Eprahim: Miles the Cy-Fox: LilAvii: DragonFlame: BlitzShadow: 7.9/10 Chaos Shadow: 5/10 Based on what he said, Chaos critiqued My first character (The Cat) and not Mistletoe. Quote: Abilities: Same type of fighting style that Escudo does in battle, always allowing one to attack first, and waits till they can't battle anymore. Escudo sometimes does that because he is smart like that, your character in the other may do the same but he does it with different types of style. Special Attacks seems to be good, I like the finisher, please don't do that to me one day, Okay? xD That's the dead give away since that's Brads fighting style, not Mistletoe's. also he mentioned clothes, and Mistletoe wears none usually. Edited by Bowie, Jun 24 2008, 06:10 PM.
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Lord Tora Unlimited Crusader	Jun 26 2008, 01:29 AM Post #161
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Kitm	Jul 29 2008, 11:52 PM Post #162
Lava Reef Act 1 Posts: 2,977 Group: =SB= Governors Member #1,073 Joined: May 18, 2007 Gender: Male Country: Canada Game Currently Playing: Destiny	Right, then! Let's get this wallaby a bouncin', mate!



Gallant Vision	Sep 8 2008, 02:02 PM Post #163
Sky Sanctuary Zone Posts: 6,835 Group: B Rank Legend Member #9,330 Joined: September 4, 2008	Could I possibly enter the ones I have up to be judged? Mine are on deviantART.com, that's one of the reasons I'm asking.
	I have an interest in spriting. If anyone has a request, don't hesitate to ask. Deep stuff below: Spoiler: click to toggle The world. Filled with millions of differences. But despite the fact, we all are brothers and sisters, Inhabiting and living under the same sky. But despite this, we war and kill our siblings over trivial things, Staining the earth on which we all walk, With the blood of our brothers, With the blood of our sisters. The sky under which we go through our lives weeps, For the clouds surely know of the atrocities we commit. We slay, maim, gouge, and destroy our siblings, In the name of things which ought not be fought for. Approach a member of the family not, With the tainted lash of hatred, But with the pure flower of love. ======================================= The sword. A weapon who's blade is stained red With the blood of its countless victims. Were it alive, what would such a being feel? Would it live only to fight, And fight only to live? Would it be controlled By those with the skill to do so? I believe that it would cry For each person it has ever brought harm to, Its tears as red as the blood it has spilled.


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