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Two tales of a world; For me and Shenzi Sixaxis :3
Topic Started: Sep 22 2011, 08:38 AM (2,223 Views)
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In a strange dimension, evil was about to be unleash. That world had several points from where that evil would enter, small passage that connected the universe.

That evil was part of the early universe. A place of perfection and complete symmetry. This evil job was to turn the universe back to his perfect state, by turning all mater that they could find into energy, leaving a void behind.

Luckily, each world had it protection against the evil. Has so, it would call for two heroes who where destined to save it from evil.

But this destiny need to be earn, and was not certain.



"What do you mean, I'm not going to camp." Peter said to his mother, just has he finish breakfast.

"Sorry, I tried to put you but that place was full, they wouldn't accept no one else." She replied after she put the dirty plates in the sink.

Peter put on his shoes and walks to the door.

"I can't believe this. I'm going for a walk."

He leaves the house and starts waling down the street, mumbling about how he's vacation had just started the wrong way.

He was 16 and has black hair and brown eyes. He was 5.2 feet and thin.

"How can this day get any worse." He ask himself.

After a few minutes he felt like there was something calling him. He follows a strange path into a mansion full of trees that was getting denser and denser. In the end he finds a blue portal.

"What the hell is ..." He touch the portal and disappears.

(Now's your entry)
Edited by Pedruben, Sep 22 2011, 08:39 AM.
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(Mwahaha, I'm taller than you.)

'College? Yeah, I'm suuure that'll happen some time soon,' Shenzi thought to herself as she set a little crested gecko she called Slayer on a fallen tree. Shenzi wasn't quite seventeen years old yet, but she looked older. With almost five and a half feet in height and her slim body structure, navigating the forest terrain was a piece of cake. She'd decided to take a day to find new areas to photo the many pets she had, seeing as the neighborhood around her had too many dogs and pine trees, and this forest was working out just fine so far. Looking at the gecko, who was content to just sit there and lick his eyes, she shook her head, just watching the sun for a few minutes until it offered better light before snapping a few photos.

“Oooh la laaaa, not too shabbeh,” she said to no one inparticular, happy with the results of the photos. She coaxed the lizard onto her hand, allowing him to skitter up onto her shoulder as she walked in no particular direct to find another prop. “Should've brought the tripod, too.”

After continuing to walk for some time, not sure why she felt so compelled to continue in this direction, Shenzi noticed something glowing a ways away. “Well, this is interesting,” she muttered, maybe to the gecko, maybe to herself. As she neared the glowing blue object, she felt compelled to touch it, but kept her head on straight and didn't. Instead, she picked up a rock and tossed it into the portal, curiosity increased when it seemed to go through.

Shenzi rose a brow as she looked around and picked up a long stick, holding it firmly and pushing it through the portal. When she realized that it wasn't touching anything on the other side and wasn't sucking her in, she grinned and pulled it back out and dropped it. She approached the portal and took a step through. However, she hadn't planned on her ankle giving out on her and fell through with a yelp.

If little Slayer could talk, he probably would have screamed out something along the lines of “OH SHEEEZ!”
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"Ouch, my head."

After entering the portal, Peter falls a 1 feet fall on the other side, head first. He gets up and look around. He sees a strange village, full of rock irregular floor and wooden trees.

He ears someone behind him. He turns around to see his brother dress in some odd cloth.

"Ruben? Don't tell you're here too?"

The strange kid look strange at him and replied.
"Ruben? My name is Nike. And who are you?"

"Wait, Nike" Peter said has thing start to make sense. "Do you know a girl name Frice?"

"Sure, she's my partner." He replied happily.


"This is a strange twist. A very strange one." He said has he started looking around to see the city better.

(P.S. I made my character using my brother has a base. He slighty shorter that me, 0.6 feet shorter.)
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“Oh, dear Solaris, what the hell was that?” Shenzi muttered to herself as she sat upright, rubbing her head after having landed on the ground of this new world. She checked that the gecko was still on her shoulder, which he was, before standing up, looking around. “This looks like that-that outside café. Oh, jeeze, the one that Seifer of all people likes to go to. What the hell...”

Shenzi looked around some more and indeed confirm this was the corner-café that her role play partner's character liked to go to. “Now why didn't I ever name it?” She scratched her head, then could have facepalm as she saw a sign at the entrance that read Mesolian Café. “Okay. I think I just did.”

Shenzi stayed where she stood and watched a couple customers buy drinks and food at the window, shaking her head when she confirmed that they were paying with rings. “Oh, god, I don't remember eating any mysterious mushrooms or eating brownies with pot baked into them. This better be a dream.”

After watching for a few more minutes, Shenzi shuddered and walked down the street, trying to keep her composure. As she walked, she decided that the portal indeed took her here, but why and how? “If I find out this is because of a space time rift that Refies caused, or that Sonic and Sonic* caused, I'm gonna frikking shat myself. That's all supposed to be comic relief, not screw me over with a chain saw.”

(* I joke around in my head that both Sonics in Sonic Generations are jumping into portal after portal (which is each really a tear in time) going to whatever time period/dimension they like while they track down the time eater and also cause chaos unknowingly by doing so. XD )
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"Hey, look at that girl" Nike said to Peter.

"What about her?"

"She look like you." He said has the two of them where getting near a coffee house.

"What? No she doesn't. Not even a little."

"Look at her cloth. No weapon, no bag, and a strange creature on her shoulder." He said has he points to Shenzi.

"Hey your right. This may be nuts but you did reacted very well." He said to Nike.

"Please, I've seen crazier, and you did know Frice."

Peter rush to Shenzi and ask her if she's from Earth.

(Here an idea of what I want this town to look like.)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FAEKjYroiME
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(Similar to what I was thinking, though I'm seeing some more colors in there.

Anyway, I'mma take a nap for a few hours. Be back in a while.)

Shenzi shook her head as she walked, ignoring any looks she might have been getting. “Alright, I've you got-” she looked to the gecko as she said that “-my camera, a notebook--” She blinked as she looked up to see another human rushing towards her.

“Heh. How much you wanna bet he's going to ask what the heck you are?” Shenzi said sarcastically to Slayer, the gecko only responding with a slight tilt of his head. Oh, hell, maybe he did understand. If a portal could show up and take someone to a world like this, what wasn't impossible anymore?
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(OK)

"Hey, your human right? By human I mean normal Earth girl, right?"

He ask the girl with the gecko on her shoulder.

"Who's that?" A girl ask Nike.

"Ha, your here Frice."

Frice was a catgirl, with her skin full of pink fur, two cat ears and a long tail.

Nike was an average human slight shorter that Peter. He was dress with simple cloth, a book on one hand and a staff on the other.

"I don't know you he's but he seem to know you."

"Never seen him in my life."

"Well, I've the feeling that thing are just going to keep weird from here on."
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Shenzi crossed her arms as she was approached. “Yeahh. I managed to go on a mind trip without remembering eating anything, don't remember having my head bashed in with a pipe, or that portal was real. I'm leaning towards the last two,” she said, scratching her arm.

“Huh, look at that,” commented an albino hedgehog from the café, watching the scene across the street.

“Eh? Oh, that. What about it?”

Eclipse shook his head and moved his shirt a bit so it wasn't choking him. “Those two humans. They look like they're from out of town. Like, waaaay out of town or somethin'.”

The black hedgehog tilted his head, then rose a brow as he watched the two converse. “Perhaps. Who cares? How does this concern us?”

Eclipse practically facepalmed at that. “Remember that giant park in the sky with the frikkin' planets all chained together that collapsed on itself a few years ago? And you said it was nothing to worry about?”

Shrazor grinned as he remembered that. “Oh yeahhh, and then Sonic actually had to release a press statement explaining what happened. Didn't they even make him help clean up all the metal parts that fell to the ground?”

Eclipse chuckled and nodded. “Yeaa', that was pretty funny,” he said with a grin. He shook his head and motioned to the two humen. “Let's, uh, keep an eye on them.”
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"I would bet on the portal." Peter said.

"Are you going introduce to your friend." Nike said has he walk with Frice to near the two.

"Hey, its you. You totally look hotter that I imagined." Peter said when he first saw Frice.

"Calm down." Nike said has hes tries to stop Frice, who was about to hit Peter with her Axe."

Peter sigh relief that he was still alive and turns back again to Shenzi.

"So, my name is Peter. What yours?"
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“So would I at this point,” Shenzi said, shaking her head. She raised an eyebrow at the other two approaching them, then wondered if it would just be a good idea to run and see if she could beat some sense into her own head.

She decided to ignore the axe and try to act normal. Or as close to it as she could, and nodded in greeting. “Shenzi's the, uh, name.”
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"Funny, I once knew a girl with a username like that in a Sonic Forum. Where are my manners. This is Nike, a fire Mage." He said looking to Nike.

"Actually, I can..."

"I know, you just like fire ones better." Peter said interrupting him.

Nike stop talking after Peter corrected his statement.

"And this Beast girl with the deadly axe and the sweet but "Don't mess with me" attitude is Frice."

"Well, now is my time, who the hell are you two?" Frice said perplex to the knowledge Peter seem to have.
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“You know, I don't think you'd believe us, Not that I have any idea where to even start trying to explain. I'm not even sure what I'm guessing is right yet,” Shenzi said, scratching her chin as the gecko on her shoulder moved across her chest and perched on the other, sunning himself. “It seeeeeems that we're unlucky bystanders who got caught up in something, I think. I, I don't see anyone I recognize so far.”

“Eh, what do you think so far?” Shrazor asked, ears twitching as he tried to listen in on the conversation across the street.

“I think dey're nucking futs,” his brother replied, having the better hearing of the two and hearing everything perfectly. “I'm 'earing all sorts of crap about portals.”

“What, like the game?”

Eclipse would have reached over and slapped his younger brother if Shrazor hadn't sipped at his coffee right after saying that, a stupid grin across his face.
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"Its not hard to explain." Peter start saying.

"We two are from an alternative dimension, where there we had imaginary character that for a matter of luck are you two. That why I thought you where my brother." Peter says looking to Nike.

"I'm killing them." Frice said with her face passing from confuse to angry.

"Good idea, you don't what any one to find out you committed the worst crime possible among your specie, do you?" Peter said with a small smile on his face.

Frice eyes when from threatening to threatened.

"What..."

"That axe doesn't belong to you, does he."

Frice fall to her knees. Nike was preplex again. No one had ever made Frice act like that.

"How... do... you..." Frice slowly said has she start remembering things from her younger years. (She's 17 years, not the best years of her life.)

"Now you believe me."

"I..." Frice wasn't able to say anything, she was just looking to the ground.

"Maybe I over did it." Peter reflected.

"Frice. Lets take them to the Oracle. He might know more." Nike said has he tries to help her up and launching a mean eye to Peter.

I definitely over did it.
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Shenzi frowned a bit as she followed the group, also thinking that Peter shouldn't have done that, or at least not something as harsh as that.

“So, uh, what now?” Shrazor asked as he watched the odd group leave.

“There was something about an oracle, and from what I can guess, some sort of realizations,” Eclipse replied, ears twitching.

“Is it worth wasting our time with?”

“Probably. I'll get the tip,” Eclipse said, putting a tip down on the table as they both stood up to follow the group.
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The Oracle house was a big Temple, with his wall covered in white with gold around the edges of doors and windows.

Has they enter they meet the oracle, a 10 years old boy with glasses.

"Wait, seriously? The Oracle is always an old person, he's younger then me." Peter reflected.

"The last Oracle pass away recently and leave me has his successor." The Oracle replied.

"Now, I know you two have question, so ask."
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