Starly the Squirrel

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Starly the Squirrel; A character from my series:Water Gush
Tweet Topic Started: Sep 16 2011, 02:34 PM (482 Views)
~~Suckles the Echinhog~~	Sep 16 2011, 02:34 PM Post #1
Angel Island Act 1 Posts: 38 Group: Continue? Member #12,111 Joined: June 3, 2011	Name:Starly the Squirrel Nicknames:Squirlley-Rurlley Age:16 Species:Squirrel Gender:M Alignment:Hero Orientation:Straight Fur Color:Yello Attire:Either just pants or jumpsuit and black shoes Features: Theme:Puyo What? Water Gush is a video game puzzle franchise I'm making! Friends/Family:Shila,Skitz,Seilivva,Dark Dolem, Urinate Enemies:Dark Golem, Master Olivia, Dowrs Abilities/Powers:Thunderbolt, Water Strike, Block Personality:a friendly boy who always stay on adventures Background: Likes:He dosen't talk about his past Dislikes:Grapfruit,nuts Weakness:Dark and Speed moves Pet Peeve: Though he is a squirrel, he eats acorns but not nuts Kink:



Phoenix-Saturn	Sep 16 2011, 03:31 PM Post #2
i just wwant to be beautiful for this one month Posts: 7,528 Group: A Rank Legend Member #10,191 Joined: July 27, 2009	I warned you about creating spam topics; the mere fact that you added a "kinks" field, the inclusion of a character named Urinate and the amount of typos tells me this is another spam topic. Locked. EDIT: Upon review, I'll keep this open for now. Edited by Phoenix-Saturn, Sep 16 2011, 03:52 PM.
	i'm actually really sorry bout this unfashionably late as alwways I... Am... THE WEREHOG SUPPORTER! MUHAHAHAHA! Howl


Clementine	Sep 21 2011, 03:24 PM Post #3
Yep. Posts: 1,397 Group: A Rank Hero Member #12,099 Joined: May 26, 2011 Steam ID: Maximus123458 Game Currently Playing: Megaman X6	I'll be kind to do that, friend. Slightly girlish name, age, gender, species, no complains...may i ask why do you keep mentioning the sex orientation of a character? I'm sure no one is interested in that kind of detail Suckles, thank you very much. And why do you keep the 'features' thing in when it's empty? It's kinda wasting space to place stuff in which aren't even filled out. "What? Water Gush is a video game puzzle franchise I'm making!" ...wait, what? I'm sure you will have such talents when older, but it's impossible for a one young kid to code, make music, script, draw sprites tiles and various other graphics, not to mention an hero-like knowledge of math, collision detection fixes and various other stuff on game-making...all that is impossible to do for a one kid. Dear god. "Friends/Family:Shila,Skitz,Seilivva,Dark Dolem, *"Urinate"* Y-yeah that--... Personality. Friendly. Adventure. Just like every of your character's personalities. As for the "Likes" section, you've got it all wrong. The fact how his easily-to-think-of past isn't speakable, is supposed to be in "Dislikes". Likes is a word that describes what is nice in your opinion. Oh my dear god, this has so much improvement to do. I'm not sure if your attempting to troll us (Because it caught me off what you responded in the "My video game characters" thread), but just please improve. Take everyone's words into your heart and release them trough next characters. In fact, you've got so many damn characters it's unthinkable. I suggest to implement our words in the characters, you didn't actually described yet. I rate this 1/10 Ugh..i'm going to take a shower. All this reviewing is making me woozy. Edited by Clementine, Sep 21 2011, 03:36 PM.



~~Suckles the Echinhog~~	Oct 10 2011, 03:40 PM Post #4
Angel Island Act 1 Posts: 38 Group: Continue? Member #12,111 Joined: June 3, 2011	Lagomorph Sep 21 2011, 03:24 PM I'll be kind to do that, friend. Slightly girlish name, age, gender, species, no complains...may i ask why do you keep mentioning the sex orientation of a character? I'm sure no one is interested in that kind of detail Suckles, thank you very much. And why do you keep the 'features' thing in when it's empty? It's kinda wasting space to place stuff in which aren't even filled out. "What? Water Gush is a video game puzzle franchise I'm making!" ...wait, what? I'm sure you will have such talents when older, but it's impossible for a one young kid to code, make music, script, draw sprites tiles and various other graphics, not to mention an hero-like knowledge of math, collision detection fixes and various other stuff on game-making...all that is impossible to do for a one kid. Dear god. "Friends/Family:Shila,Skitz,Seilivva,Dark Dolem, *"Urinate"* Y-yeah that--... Personality. Friendly. Adventure. Just like every of your character's personalities. As for the "Likes" section, you've got it all wrong. The fact how his easily-to-think-of past isn't speakable, is supposed to be in "Dislikes". Likes is a word that describes what is nice in your opinion. Oh my dear god, this has so much improvement to do. I'm not sure if your attempting to troll us (Because it caught me off what you responded in the "My video game characters" thread), but just please improve. Take everyone's words into your heart and release them trough next characters. In fact, you've got so many damn characters it's unthinkable. I suggest to implement our words in the characters, you didn't actually described yet. I rate this 1/10 Ugh..i'm going to take a shower. All this reviewing is making me woozy. SHUT UP! UGH! Stop iy now! I hate dummies who keeps trying to fix me!



Clementine	Oct 10 2011, 03:41 PM Post #5
Yep. Posts: 1,397 Group: A Rank Hero Member #12,099 Joined: May 26, 2011 Steam ID: Maximus123458 Game Currently Playing: Megaman X6	oh lol have it your way then



KogaHarine	Oct 10 2011, 03:48 PM Post #6
The Black Swordsman Posts: 3,253 Group: E Rank Legend Member #7,594 Joined: April 19, 2008 Gender: Male Playstation Network ID: Goldth 3DS Friend Code: 047386746636 Nintendo ID: KogaHarine Game Currently Playing: Fantasy Life	Lagomorph Oct 10 2011, 03:41 PM oh lol have it your way then Don't feed. @Suckles: First I would like to say hello. And second I'd like to say that your character is decent for a starter but it can be a lot better. There are a few things to look into but you don't have to if you don't want to. If someone critiques your character you should try and see if you can expand on it and see if there is something you might be able to fix. It's called constructive criticism and usually it's relatively helpful. Now I will say this looks like a beginner character and that is all fine and dandy unless you want to do Advanced work. Then you may want to try and expand and add more detail. Just a suggestion but it's up to you to decide what you want to do.



Clementine	Oct 10 2011, 03:50 PM Post #7
Yep. Posts: 1,397 Group: A Rank Hero Member #12,099 Joined: May 26, 2011 Steam ID: Maximus123458 Game Currently Playing: Megaman X6	Y-yeah..listening is a lot better then screaming "shut up" at a guy who just wants to help. ^^; okay yeah i admit that im harsh sure. I can't help it though. =( Edited by Clementine, Oct 10 2011, 03:52 PM.



KogaHarine	Oct 10 2011, 03:53 PM Post #8
The Black Swordsman Posts: 3,253 Group: E Rank Legend Member #7,594 Joined: April 19, 2008 Gender: Male Playstation Network ID: Goldth 3DS Friend Code: 047386746636 Nintendo ID: KogaHarine Game Currently Playing: Fantasy Life	Lagomorph Oct 10 2011, 03:50 PM Y-yeah..listening is a lot better then screaming "shut up" at a guy who just wants to help. ^^; But feeding doesn't help either. But I'm getting off track here. Basically Suckles you can either leave it how it is or change it but it's up to you. It is your character but it's also very base so it would benefit you to maybe expand on it. Trust me when I say that you are never truly finished with a character. They are always changing and usually the change is for the better.



Juice	Oct 10 2011, 03:54 PM Post #9
Mexican hot-wings. Posts: 986 Group: C Rank Hero Member #10,266 Joined: August 19, 2009 Gender: Male Xbox Live Gamertag: JuicyFruities Game Currently Playing: Dark Souls 2	I'm going to say what everyone's thinking, how the heck did he post?
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Clementine	Oct 10 2011, 03:55 PM Post #10
Yep. Posts: 1,397 Group: A Rank Hero Member #12,099 Joined: May 26, 2011 Steam ID: Maximus123458 Game Currently Playing: Megaman X6	A. Glitch B. Hack but i doubt that one. Most likely glitch. He may improve but i still doubt the 'water gush' thing. It's plain impossible to do a game as an child. I used to do that, sending a rom of Super Mario 64 and claiming it as my own game lol Edited by Clementine, Oct 10 2011, 03:56 PM.



KogaHarine	Oct 10 2011, 03:56 PM Post #11
The Black Swordsman Posts: 3,253 Group: E Rank Legend Member #7,594 Joined: April 19, 2008 Gender: Male Playstation Network ID: Goldth 3DS Friend Code: 047386746636 Nintendo ID: KogaHarine Game Currently Playing: Fantasy Life	Doctor Fish Oct 10 2011, 03:54 PM I'm going to say what everyone's thinking, how the heck did he post? It's a mystery to me. A mod would have to explain it. Although kinda reminds me of the situation with Venny a long time ago. Quote: He may improve but i still doubt the 'water gush' thing. It's plain impossible to do a game. I used to do that, sending a rom of Super Mario 64 and claiming it as my own game lol Not impossible but it does take a lot of skill and time and effort to actually make a decent game. I've seen several games that were made by one person. And they are usually very well made.



Clementine	Oct 10 2011, 04:00 PM Post #12
Yep. Posts: 1,397 Group: A Rank Hero Member #12,099 Joined: May 26, 2011 Steam ID: Maximus123458 Game Currently Playing: Megaman X6	But that comes off very rarely to be honest. To create all i presented in my rant, takes a damn long time of dedication. Something people at Suckles age don't have yet. Unless the guy is a miracle child.



Phoenix-Saturn	Oct 10 2011, 07:52 PM Post #13
i just wwant to be beautiful for this one month Posts: 7,528 Group: A Rank Legend Member #10,191 Joined: July 27, 2009	He's been banned, what else is there to say? Locked.
	i'm actually really sorry bout this unfashionably late as alwways I... Am... THE WEREHOG SUPPORTER! MUHAHAHAHA! Howl


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