Dark Hero's Characters

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Dark Hero's Characters; Copyright by me.
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Dark Hero	Apr 24 2011, 09:05 AM Post #1
Marble Garden Act 1 Posts: 129 Group: B Rank Adventurer Member #11,732 Joined: January 3, 2011 Gender: Female Country: United States of America Game Currently Playing: Diablo III: Reaper of Souls	Damien Bonfire Basic Information: Name: Damien Bonfire. Alias: Dame. Age: 22 years old. Gender: Male. Species: Hedgehog. Date of birth: 24 November (Sagittarius). Place of birth: Westopolis. Current residence: Westopolis. Occupation: Bartender. Alignment: Lawful Good. Physical Description: Image (If Available): N/A. Height: 100 cm. Weight: 35 kg. Appearance: - Soft, dark red fur. - Tan skin muzzle and ear inners. - Hazel eyes. - Long, black hair extending down to the back, tied back in a ponytail. - Two strips of bains in front of face. - Black, long nose. - Small, triangular ears. - Short, red tail. Attire: - White, T-shirt shirt. - Slight baggy, black pants. - Black socks, hidden underneath pants ends. - Black boots. - Gray chain around neck. Personal Information: Personality: Damien has a free-spirited personality, always deciding for his own fate without judgment or rules. Though he is not always cordial, he often reveals moments of empathy and will sometimes assist those that have “walked in his shoes.” In his perspective, it is a way of creating a better way around the mistakes he had previously made. Damien is also valorous, however, an obstacle that prevents him is a sense of anxiety. Damien's strongest positive trait is his natural and deep sense of loyalty to others. Whether it be through sacrifice or a lending hand, he can always be counted on to keep a secret for whomever cannot maintain theirs anymore. This is, in return, to free them from their guilt or as to share what has caused their jovial spirits to come about. Damien possesses a few negative traits. One of them being anger. Damien is rather hot-headed to the bone and can get rather annoyed easily. He will hold a grudge for even the smallest things dealt with. This, as he believes, violates his free spirit. Inferno is also very determined, and as positive as it may seem, he tends to ignore those that assist him to reach his goal. Thus, he is quite selfish in gaining the victory. Reflecting upon the past, Inferno is always quiet and seldom socializes. Ironically, he is indifferent against certain people or situations. Hobbies/Talents: - Taking walks. Likes: - Ambition. - Warmth. - Metal music. - Combat training. - Alcohol. Dislikes: - Stupidity. - General jokes. - Cigarettes. - Patience. - Judgment. Items N/A. Vehicles: N/A. Trivia: - Religion: Jewish (now very loose). - Voice: No accent; rough, slightly deep. Relationships: Family: - Jezebeth "Julien" Bonfire (father). - Adara Emberly/Bonfire (mother). Close Friends: None. Other Friends: None. Romantic Interest: None. Rivals: None. Enemies: None. Battle Information: Skills: Trained in swordsmanship and former training in archery. Techniques: None. Strengths: Quick reflexes, satisfactory reaction time. Weaknesses: Uneasy of heights. Weapons: Long sword. History: N/A. Edited by Dark Hero, Apr 24 2011, 09:16 AM.
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742 mph	Apr 24 2011, 09:42 AM Post #2
Strange, isn't it? Posts: 249 Group: C Rank Guardian Member #11,677 Joined: December 21, 2010	The character's concept is definitely original, I'll give you that. However, he seems a bit underpowered, and shouldn't be used in combat RPs for that reason. Also, the fact that he has no history makes you look lazy, so I would suggest some backstory for him. That's really all the probelms I have with him. Good work.
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Rene	Apr 25 2011, 09:28 AM Post #3
Marble Garden Act 1 Posts: 136 Group: B Rank Adventurer Member #11,562 Joined: November 14, 2010	Underpowered? Hardly. He has swords skills and good reflexes, that's sufficient enough for battle, not to mention a lot more interesting for battle roleplays, since it requires some degree of creativity. I say go for it, your character is in a good zone of power-levels, Dark Hero! His lack of credit to those who have assisted him is a "good" flaw: it is relevant for most imaginable stories, it is a real and bothersome flaw, but also makes his hero-status probable. A too fatal flaw would make one wonder if they truly were good, but this flaw rather indicates a degree of ego-centrism rather than mean spiritness. I like that! The only flaw with this profile is that sometimes you talk about Damien and sometimes you suddenly call him Inferno. But I suppose it could be a well-explained typo, like if he used to be called Inferno. Good job! Edit: He's a hedgehog. I'll give you, though, that I didn't notice this because it was a well-developed character in general, but I suggest humbly for you to consider other species before taking the obvious. You could definitely find some animal more representative for your character than a hedgehog Edited by Rene, Apr 25 2011, 09:32 AM.



KogaHarine	Apr 25 2011, 10:11 AM Post #4
The Black Swordsman Posts: 3,253 Group: E Rank Legend Member #7,594 Joined: April 19, 2008 Gender: Male Playstation Network ID: Goldth 3DS Friend Code: 047386746636 Nintendo ID: KogaHarine Game Currently Playing: Fantasy Life	Rene Apr 25 2011, 09:28 AM Underpowered? Hardly. He has swords skills and good reflexes, that's sufficient enough for battle, not to mention a lot more interesting for battle roleplays, since it requires some degree of creativity. I say go for it, your character is in a good zone of power-levels, Dark Hero! His lack of credit to those who have assisted him is a "good" flaw: it is relevant for most imaginable stories, it is a real and bothersome flaw, but also makes his hero-status probable. A too fatal flaw would make one wonder if they truly were good, but this flaw rather indicates a degree of ego-centrism rather than mean spiritness. I like that! The only flaw with this profile is that sometimes you talk about Damien and sometimes you suddenly call him Inferno. But I suppose it could be a well-explained typo, like if he used to be called Inferno. Good job! Edit: He's a hedgehog. I'll give you, though, that I didn't notice this because it was a well-developed character in general, but I suggest humbly for you to consider other species before taking the obvious. You could definitely find some animal more representative for your character than a hedgehog Well it is the most used species for a Sonic forum. But it depends on appearance of the character as well. A good appearance makes the character seem even more original. Still I'd say the rest is good.



`TakeCare	Apr 26 2011, 09:34 AM Post #5
-sigh- Posts: 2,390 Group: S Rank Hero Member #9,520 Joined: November 29, 2008 Gender: Male 3DS Friend Code: ask Game Currently Playing: Smash 4	Complaints about underpowered character? wtf? Anyways, you may want to give him a few combat oriented weaknesses. Heights isn't enough when most fights occur on the ground. This is more a personal though, but with his age he should have at least one friend. I mean no one really goes through life without having someone to connect with, even if it's minor. Also you may want to get a basic history down or just remove the field.
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