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| Belazure Kroy; (25YL) An artistic echidna with a shocking chaos power. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 19 2011, 02:49 PM (367 Views) | |
| FiniteZero | Apr 19 2011, 02:49 PM Post #1 |
Good vibes.
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NOTE: This is a "Future" Character. She is of the future, 25 years later to be precise. Basic Information: Name: Belazure Kroy Alias: Belazure, Bela Age: 17 Gender: Female Species: Echidna Date of birth: October 29th Place of birth: Station Square Current residence: Station Square Occupation: Non (Still in school) Orientation: Straight Alignment: Neutral Physical Description: Image (If Available):  Height: 3'5" Weight: Average (Don't ask a woman about her weight!) Appearance: She strongly resembles her Mutter*, as she has the same reddish-pink color of fur and blue eyes. She also has a lean build. She has long spines that curl at the end. She also has a somewhat long tail. Attire: She usually wears a blue Sweater with blue jeans, white gloves, and violet sneakers. She also wears glasses. Personal Information: Personality: Belazure is very mellow, never one to start a fight. She is actually quite shy, and almost never starts a conversation with others unless she knows them. Unfortunately, bullies tend to make fun of her because of her lesbian parents, which causes her to retaliate, which gets her in trouble. Fortunately, she has never hit someone, and is a pacifist like her mother. Hobbies/Talents: She has an amazing drawing ability, and loves to sketch. Her Mutter, Sarah-Ra, taught her to speak German, and she also taught herself to speak backwards perfectly, which is what she does when she talks to herself. Likes: Literature, art, peace and quiet. Dislikes: Rudeness, homophobia, loud noises. Items: She often carries a sketch pad and a pencil with her, in case she ever feels like drawing something. Vehicles: None. Trivia: *She refers to Sarah-Ra as her "Mutter" ("Mother" in German), because Sarah taught Belazure how to speak German, and also because it makes things simpler for everyone. Normal Theme: (Spark Man's theme. Mega Man: Wily Wars.) Battle Theme: (Final Boss Remix by Gencoil. Mega Man 10 E-Tank Remix.) Relationships: Family: Sarah-Ra (Mother), Tiamat Kroy (Mother), Vestra Harine (Aunt), Koga Harine (Uncle), Sebek Harine (Cousin), Karina Harine (Cousin) Close Friends: None. Other Friends: None. Romantic Interest: None. Rivals: None. Enemies: None. Battle Information: Skills: Belazure has little to no combat skills, as she's a pacifist. However, she is able and willing to defend herself using inherited Chaos Manipulation abilities, as well as a strange electrical attack. Abilities: Chaos Time Slow: Allows Belazure to slow down time for a short period. She is able to use it for a maximum of 12 seconds before she overheats and faints. Chaos Spark Shock: When using this ability, Belazure can shock a foe with strong electrical energy, roughly equal to using a taser on them. She can also absorb and deflect electrical energy, overload or power down electronics, or store charges on batteries. Strengths: Intellectually Versatile, Foresight Weaknesses: Can only use chaos energy in combat, loses control of powers when under extreme emotion, Not so versatile combat-wise. Weapons: None. History: Belazure Kroy's life is fairly normal. Edited by FiniteZero, Oct 6 2011, 04:13 PM.
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| KogaHarine | Apr 19 2011, 09:20 PM Post #2 |
The Black Swordsman
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Not too useful in a more combat oriented RP. But she's definitely good for more relaxation oriented ones. |
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| FiniteZero | Apr 19 2011, 09:29 PM Post #3 |
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Good vibes.
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FiniteZero: Well, she CAN control electricity. And besides, this is without training. She'll get more powerful over time. Well, actually, it's mostly that I am not really a combat-RP kind of guy. Funny how that is. Oh, and thanks. Edited by FiniteZero, Apr 19 2011, 09:30 PM.
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| KogaHarine | Apr 19 2011, 10:19 PM Post #4 |
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The Black Swordsman
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I tend to make characters that are typically for combat RPs. |
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| Lord Tora Unlimited Crusader | Apr 20 2011, 01:42 AM Post #5 |
【The Knight of Tigers 】
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Strengths and Weaknesses seem a little empty and ill-defined. In what way is she versatile? What exactly do you mean by 'foresight' (which you spelled wrong by the way :3 )? Plus, you should always have at least as many weaknesses as strengths for a well-balanced character. Besides, being only able to use chaos powers in combat doesn't seem like much of a weakness to me (considering I had characters who fight solely with superhuman powers before I did my big reboot, not to mention other RPers as well), and furthermore, it kinda contradicts the whole 'versatile' aspect. I'd also like to ask a question; does her electrical-manipulation ability have to have an origin in Chaos Control? From what little I understand of Chaos Energy, it doesn't manifest as other forms of energy (heat, electricity, radiation, etc), since it's a type of energy all of its own. Have you considered having it manifest as a completely separate ability? Just a suggestion, mind you; I'm just being critical for the sake of stirring up ideas. Aside from those two points, seems like this character has some damn good potential. *thumbs up* Great job! |
 Check out my tumblr, Aggravated Anime-Adoring Australian, where I post all sorts of dumb screencaps and MS Paint edits and generally bitch and moan about stupid otaku shit. ~One third of =SB='s Legendary Australian Trio. The man who surpassed anime fandom and became the Patron Saint of GAR and Moe.~ | |
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| FiniteZero | Apr 20 2011, 05:57 AM Post #6 |
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Good vibes.
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Thanks for the input! I'll be sure to fix those two points right away. Also, I thought energy could be transformed. After all, electricity can be turned into heat, why can't chaos energy be transformed into electricity? Finally, please also check out my other three bios. I put a lot of work into them, and would like to know if they need to be improved. Edited by FiniteZero, Apr 20 2011, 06:04 AM.
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| Aleks | Apr 20 2011, 08:19 AM Post #7 |
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^lol Not a bad character an odd one compared to the ones I usually come across here. Its not a bad thing I actually like how your character is average  I'm not too sure what to think of the powers though there a little odd. Maybe its the way I'm picturing them 
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| Lord Tora Unlimited Crusader | Apr 20 2011, 04:53 PM Post #8 |
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Energy can be transformed, but ike I said, I haven't seen any evidence of Chaos Energy going through that conversion process. Again, my knowledge on the subject is limited, so take it with a grain of salt. As for the other two bios, I'll take a gander today probably. 
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Check out my tumblr, Aggravated Anime-Adoring Australian, where I post all sorts of dumb screencaps and MS Paint edits and generally bitch and moan about stupid otaku shit. ~One third of =SB='s Legendary Australian Trio. The man who surpassed anime fandom and became the Patron Saint of GAR and Moe.~ | |
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| DarkOverord | Apr 20 2011, 05:30 PM Post #9 |
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Being an imaginary energy type I see no problem with it being converted :V |
         
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| Aleks | Apr 20 2011, 09:02 PM Post #10 |
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^ Thats pretty funny logic=1 Sonic universe=0 |
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