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Sonamy Fanfiction Part 2
Topic Started: Apr 6 2011, 04:19 PM (1,663 Views)
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Part 2! Enjoy!

Brandon: Well?

Sonic: (in his thoughts: Should I admit it? you know what, I'm sick of holding it back. I'm gonna admit it!) Fine, I'll tell you truth.

Brandon: Sweet!

Sonic: Well, ever since I met Amy, I started to feel something I had never felt before. and when she chased me, I ran away because I was too nervous to admit my feelings for her. But now I know what I've got to do. I'm gonna admit my feelings for her!

Brandon: Yeah! That's the spirit!

Sonic: Thanks! I'm probably going to give her Roses, And i'm gonna ask her to marry me.

Brandon: That's Amazing, Sonic! So uh, When are you asking her anyways?

Sonic: I'm probably gonna ask her Tommorrow night. Well, Wish me luck!

Brandon: Okay!

The Night After...

it was 8:00 PM, and Sonic was walking up to Amy's house with a Bouquet of Roses and a Beuatiful Diamond ring. Sonic finally got up to her door.

Sonic: Okay Sonic, You can do this.

Sonic then knocks on Amy's door.

Amy: *from inside* Who is it?

Sonic: It's Me, Sonic!

Amy then opens the door.

Amy: Oh, Hi Sonic!

Sonic: I Uh... Have a surprise for you!

Amy: R-really? for me?

Sonic: Yes, Amy.

Sonic then shows Amy the Roses.

Amy: Oh, Sonic! They're beautiful! Oh Sonic! I Love you so much!!!

Amy then hugs Sonic tightly.

Sonic: I thought you'd like them. Hey Amy?

Amy: Yeah, Sonic?

Sonic: One more thing.

Sonic then kneels down and shows her the ring.

Sonic: Amy Rose, Will you marry me?

Amy: Oh, Sonic!!! Of course I'll marry you!!!

Amy starts crying tears of joy.

Sonic: Hey Amy, what's wrong?

Amy: I-I'm just so happy!

Amy then let go of Sonic.

Sonic: Amy, I love you and I have for a very long time and-

Sonic was cut off when Amy pulled Sonic in and kissed him. Sonic and Amy had shared they're very first kiss. it was a very romantic kiss. then they stopped kissing.

Sonic: I Love You Amy...

Amy: I Love you too Sonic...

Sonic: Hey Amy?

Amy: Yeah Sonic?

Sonic: *blushes* Uh... I was just wondering maybe if you would like to... Stay the night at my place?

Amy: Sure Sonic! I'd love to!

Amy then kisses Sonic on the cheek.

Amy: By the way, when do you want to do the wedding?

Sonic: How about tomorrow evening at 5:00?

Amy: Okay! I'll call Rouge and ask her if she'll help me pick out a wedding dress.

Sonic: I guess Tails can be the Best man. I'll call him and tell him the news. Come on Amy. we've got a big day tomorrow.

The Next Morning...

Sonic wakes up and remembers to call Tails.

Sonic: Ugh... wait a minute! I gotta call Tails! first I'll call Brandon. he gave me his Cell phone number.

Amy wakes up.

Amy: Huh? Oh, good morning Sonic!

Sonic: Hey, Amy! I gotta call Tails but first I'm gonna call Brandon.

Amy: Who's Brandon?

Sonic: He's a friend I made. he kinda looks like Shadow but he's red and he has blue stripes. I gotta call him.

Amy: Okay Sonic!

Sonic then dials Brandon's number and it rings 3 times.

Brandon: Hello?

Sonic: Hey Brandon! it's me! Sonic!

Brandon: Oh Hi Sonic! did you tell Amy that you love her?

Sonic: Yeah! and I asked her to marry me! wanna come to our wedding?

Brandon: Sure! when is it?

Sonic: Tonight. 5:00.

Brandon: I'll be there. Alright, Bye.

Sonic: Bye.

Sonic then dials Tails' Number and it rings 2 times.

Tails: Hello?

Sonic: Hey Tails! It's me! Sonic!

Tails: Oh Hi Sonic!

Sonic: Hey Tails, I'm getting married to Amy.

Tails: What? Really? That's Great!

Sonic: So I want you to be my Best Man.

Tails: Wow, Thanks Sonic! I'll be your Best Man!

Sonic: Thanks, Buddy.

Tails: No Problem!

Sonic: Come to the wedding at 5:00 this evening, okay?

Tails: Will do, Sonic!

Sonic: Alright that's all I needed, buddy.

Tails: Okay, bye.

Sonic: Bye.

Sonic then hangs up and turns to Amy.

Sonic: So Amy, how about Cream can be the Maid of honor?

Amy: Okay, that's fine.

Sonic: And Knuckles and Shadow can be the 2 witnesses I guess.

Amy: Well I'm gonna call Rouge and ask her if she can meet me at the Wedding dress shop.

Sonic: okay.

Meanwhile at the wedding...

Amy was walking down the Isle with the beautiful white wedding dress that Rouge helped pick out for Amy. While Sonic was wearing a black jacket with a white shirt underneath and a tuxedo and black pants.

Justice of the peace: Amy Rose, Do you take Sonic The Hedgehog to be your Husband?

Amy: I do.

Justice of the peace: And Do you, Sonic The Hedgehog take Amy Rose to be your beloved wife?

Sonic: I Do.

Justice of the peace: then you may kiss the bride.

Sonic and Amy then share a deep, romantic kiss. This was the best day of Amy's life. Everyone clapped.

Brandon: Yeah! Woohoo!

THE END






Edited by SonAmyFan123, May 2 2011, 06:40 AM.
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Afternoon there. I was reading through this short story of yours and must say, I like the concept of the story of Sonic sharing his true feelings to Amy. Though there is one thing that bothers me about this story.

This feels forced, like I don't feel that the characters aren't saying these lines.

This whole story, however, makes for a great draft that you can use to improve this nice story in the future, if you wish to do so.
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did you like it?
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It's alright to me.
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Thanks! I kinda like it myself.
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