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Academy XIII Character Building
Topic Started: Mar 30 2011, 11:22 AM (3,059 Views)
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Trying to go with a theme this time
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Apr 25 2011, 07:36 PM
I'll do Silv and Animeniac tomorrow, sorry for the wait guys. ^_^;
Alright then. ;) *Half poke, half actual response*
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Lesson 3:

Name: 742

Gender: Male

Apparent Age: 14

Actual Age: ???

Species: Half-Fusion (explained in History)

Personality: 742 is slightly more intelligent than normal, with an IQ around 115, but these slight smarts are never put to good use. He can get cocky when he's defeating an opponents rather easily, but usually that just makes him easier to trick. When faced with a difficult task, he seems to go into a sort of trance, not resopnding to any external stimuli while completing the task at a steady pace.

Powers: 742 has the ability to convert kinetic energy into solid metal, and vice versa. He can do this with all metals. The kinetic energy that he can create metal out of can be obtained by coming in physical contact with or being near to something moving quickly. However, 742 isn't very strong or fast physically, and he is weak when in very cold areas, since low temperatures decease kinetic energy, meaning there's less for 742 to convert. Temperatures around 0 degrees celsius will reduce his KE absorption abilities to about half normal, and levels as low as 0 degrees farenheit will negate his abilities almost completely, leaving him basically powerless. For this reason, he is extremely weak to those with any power over ice or cold, and strong against those with power over fire or heat, which just gives him more KE to absorb.

Weapons: None

Appearance: Posted Image

Strengths: Strong to fire/heat, metallokinesis, accurate eyesight

Weakness: Weak to even small amounts of ice/cold, not strong or fast, rather stubborn, can act immature when angered

History: When the fusion Silvon attempted to de-fuse into its component parts, a disturbance in the Chaos Force, which is basically what keeps all fusions fused, caused Silvon to split up into 742 and his fellow half-fusion S-s. Neither of them were the components of the original fusion. This gave Silvon's enemies (I'm referring to them as a group because there were so many) an advantage. Since 742 and S-s disliked each other and refused to fuse back together into the super-powerful Silvon, they wouldn't have to worry about a powerful fusion stopping them, and in Silvon's case, the whole is much greater than all of its parts. 742 allied with Force, Kilo (I assume you know who he is by now?), and Bhaskara (the Mink, main page here), and the four became convinced they could stop Silvon's enemies without re-creating Silvon himself. 742, S-s, Force, and Kilo are the only ones who know who the original components were, but Force and Kilo have no reason to tell, and 742 and S-s feel that is too private to disclose. 742's metallokinesis has saved his life several times, and he and his allies have come close to defeating Silvon's enemies several times, but 742's weakness to cold has prevented him from winning time and time again. He needs to find a way to use his abilities properly without interference from cold, or else he'll never be able to stop Silvon's enemies' advance.




Edited by 742 mph, Apr 30 2011, 06:26 AM.
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Apr 21 2011, 09:33 PM
Lesson One:



Name: Kenji Bushido

Gender: Male

Apparent Age: 13

Actual Age: 11

Species: Cat

Personality: As young and naive as he was, Kenji was quite a different boy compared to what he is now. For a long time in his childhood (before his first runaway), he believed in complete and utter loyalty to his superiors. Though he had a mind of his own, he did work without complain, and when asked to do something he would do it better then it sounded, well at least his effort would. He was openly kind and respectful of others, unafraid of anything. Each new threat and each new task to him was just another one of Takeru's assessments for him. Unfortunately, his skin is thin, meaning he cant really deal with a hateful comment without finding it hard to not blow up over it and lose his emotions, becoming violent and irrational.

Weapons: His training bamboo stick. Often uses it in alternative situations to fend off bullies and playing games with Miwako.

Appearance:
Fur Color: Black
Skin Color: Tan
Hair Color: Lighter black
Hair Style: Short, low ponytail in back, all hair swept back
Eye Color: Light Amber
Ears: Acute and defined, sharp at end, white on inside
Nose: Small and short
Muzzle: Tan
Chest: Underbelly color is white, with moderate fur on chest
Tail: Long, white tip on end
Other Bodily Features: Smaller then most boys his age, has a scrawny appearance with 3" indent at lower torso area, ribs visible through his fur
Clothes: Heavily worn and torn beige baggy cargo pants with ends tied at ankles

Strengths:
+ Moderate karate fighter
+ Has a strong self faith/Extremely loyal
+ Highly agile and versicle for his age

Weakness:
- Weak physically
- Because his skills are still developing, he is currently a poor fighter
- Is easily offended, often resorts to unnecessary violence

History:

History so far (As of his age)
Uniqueness: 70/100. Background isn't too bad. It flows into his current background, and would explain his devotion even more I suppose. It reminded me of the movie Karate Kid. As well, your back story was a bit long, not that much detail needed to be put in.

Profile Sync ~ 70/100. Not bad really. I think you did a good job here. His personality isn't all that different from his current one, which in real life not everyone becomes the complete opposite of themselves while growing up. I took off points because I was expecting for you to explain more/focus more on the respect of authority figures, since he clearly has less respect for authority then he use to.

Character View ~ 75/100. Again, I was expecting for you to explain more on the things we don't know about him verses the things we already know. We know he is skilled at fighting and was trained how to fight. What we don't know is when he lost that respect for authority. You did explain how he got to know his love interest, but a bit more on that would of been nice too.

Adaption to Lesson ~ 65/100. I think you have a lot to work with here, yet you chose to focus on the things we already know about Kenji. The point of this lesson to to fill in the gaps, as well, develop your character's background and life a bit more. I think you did okay on this, but I think you could do better.

Overall Achievement: 70/100. You passed my friend, on to lesson three.

Lesson 3
Everyone wants to make powerful characters. Not everyone knows how to make one balanced. Create a character with a powerful skill-set, but include weaknesses that prevent him/her from being a dominant force in any setting. Give him three strengths and at least three weaknesses.
Goal = Make their powers or skill-sets be a plus and minus at the same time. In short, make them balance. Having how your powers came about in your story part might help.

(I'll do Animeniac and 742mph soon. Hang tight guys)
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Name: Drake the Hedgebat

Gender: Male

Apparent Age: 17

Actual Age: 16

Species: Hedgebat

Personality: nice, short tempered, quick to judge, quick to start fights, socialish

Powers: ability to control and create fire, telekinesis, ability to reach Mach 0.8 speed

Weapons: occasionally carries an AK-47 an/or a flamethrower, however, this is rare

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Strengths: very agile, quick(Mach 0.8 speed quick), tough, does well against ice elementals, unlike other hedgebats Drake will not gain his bat wings until he turns 18 years old.

Weakness: he does not have total control over his powers, water can kill him if too much hits him at once, he cannot go into bodies of water(regardless of the size, kiddy pool sized to the ocean, he cannot go into them as he could put himself in a hospital or die)

History: Drake was born in Denver, Colorado on May 6, 1996. When he was 1 1/2 years old he was given the gift of controlling fire. He could not use this ability of fire until he was 13 however. During his middle school days, he was normally teased for being part hedgehog and part bat. When he was 13, his parents died of a freak accident that happened while Drake was sleeping. His parents had walked into his bedroom to check on him, and all of a sudden, a funnel of flames erupted out of the area where his heart is. This ferocious flame, went out of control and killed his parents and burned the bodies into nothingness. When Drake woke up he tried to look for his parents but they were nowhere to be found. He raised himself using the knowledge he had already gained from his parents and lived alone in the same house. During his school days at this time, he was teased more for sometimes breathing flames from his mouth and little flames sometimes coming out of his fingers. Drake tried as hard as he could to not let the fire go out of control like that one night. He was successful in this.

When Drake was 14, he was visited by Blaze who offered to train him. Drake accepted and went with Blaze to a secret cave. Before his training started, he was given Inhibitor Rings to keep his fire from becoming powerful enough to kill someone. This was because Drake had no control over his fire at that time. He trained for 2 years and is still training to this very day, still wearing the Inhibitor Rings as he still has little control over his fire powers.
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Haha, added the back story, I guess its good enough. Lets roll.

Lesson one:

Create a child like character, or a past version of any current character your using, that would be attending some school of some sort. Again, this character can be a child version of any current character, or a completely different character all together. Also, they DO NOT have to be a child, but a younger version of whom ever you wish them to be a younger version of. Use as much info and detail as possible. However, don't over do it, as you'll need to expand on this character once they get older.
Goal = Making your child or younger version character not as strong as normal character because they are a child, and well child like, simple.
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quick question before i start the lesson do i use the profile sheet to make the younger version character?
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Use the same bio sheet provide in the first post of this topic, and simply make your character young. Its harder then it sounds, but there isn't much to explain. Just... Do it...
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Chapter 1: Openly Close | Chapter 2: Kamelot Tol-e-maC | Chapter 3: Found Lost | Chapter 4: Reaper What You Soul | Chapter 5: Openly Reapers in Lost Tolemac | Chapter 6: Follow the Reaper | Chapter 7: Don't Follow the Reaper | Chapter 8: Fight Yourself, Die Yourself | Chapter 9: Masquerader Massacre | Chapter 10: THE Enemy | Chapter 11: Gulliver | Chapter 12: Finally, Unlimited Madness | Chapter 12: Finally, Loki's Madness(alternate ending)

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alright here goes nothing.

Young Drake Bio

In the picture ignore the platform i just wanted to make him look younger and sprites do that perfectly. but i didn't want it to be a boring picture of a sprite i wanted him to be standing on something and have a background. SO just look at the sprite and not the background and the platform, OK. ^_^
Edited by Wenthehedgehog, Sep 3 2011, 04:26 PM.
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ok im gonna have a go at this.

Name: Sho

Gender:Male

Apearant Age: 13

Accuall Age: 16

Speices:Hedgehog/Fox (explained in history)

Personallity: He is very light hearted and treats most things like a joke, even in battles. This can make him annoying to most people. This personallity can also get him caught up in some sticky situations but because of hes clever mind he can usually handel himself fine

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Powers:Sho dosent have many special skills but he is good at what he knows.
-Katana Wave. He is still not very good with his katana but he can produce small amounts of electric waves through the blade.
-Lightning Spear. His lightning powers are still developing. he can use it but it sevearly hurts his hands when he does.
-Spining Uper. Sho's mothers shoes have a special feature built in. When spinning he can vilantly kick upwards sending
opponets flying!

Wepones: His fathers Katana to defend himself and his mothers custom shoes to keep up with other hedgehogs (hes abit sluggish)

Streangths: his power of course. if lighting comes at him hes almost compleatky resistant!

Weakness: the forces of darkness are not only one of his weaknesses but one of his fears. Others include his weakness to sneaky attacks.

History:Sho has an unusually long tail for hedgehogs. Thats because hes mother was a fox and his father was a hedgehog! Hes abit of hybrid because of this. Also because of this he was abandoned in the desert. But his parents left him with a fighting chance! His father gave him his katana of magic properteis in which lighting can easily pass thruogh. His mother left him her custom shoes made so he can keep up with hedgehogs (hes abit sluggish) beacause of this hes a little faster then normal hedgehogs. Beacause of his abandenment he had to grow up pretty quickly. dispite this hes still very light hearted. After making it to a futuristic city he found a home (his parent left him with 500k) and trained there. Through his training he found that if he spin dashed hard enough he could nock anything villantly up into the air with his special shoes. not only that but he realised that he had a rare abillity. to control lightning! spareingly of corse. Despite his training he could not master hes powers. but that dosent mean hes stop trying! (hes been to the hospital 2 times its kinda imbarrising)-_-


hope Sho passes! im new here so hes my only characterbut illbe working on more soon! hope you like it!
Edited by SuperCyclone, Jul 24 2012, 11:41 PM.
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Mind if do this? I have a character who I have ideas for, but it's not the best of characters and he needs a LARGE makeover so I would like to go through this. :D
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