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| Chompman | Mar 31 2011, 10:15 PM Post #16 |
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The Jaw-ggernaught of Justice.
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Ok...here goes nothing...... name:Aaron Kunai young age: 9 Gender: male species: human Appearance: neatly combed brown hair (which he hates)and brown eyes, has on a red T-shirt with a video game 1-up icon on it, and blue jeans Weapons: at this age, a slingshot at best, and very skilled with it. Young Aaron is a little different than the 19 year old Teen/Adult Aaron. First of all, the trademark untidy brown hair he has isn't present. In this early age, it is neatly combed back (this gave him a nerdy-like appearance back in grade school, where he would eventually mess up his hair in a cool way). Secondly, he didn't have a sword, or his fighting skills. he would try his darnedest to avoid one, or if push did come to shove, would use his self-made slingshot to tip the scales in his favor (as he got older, he would eventually learn to wield a sword in combat, and ditch the slingshot ultimately) thirdly, he still didn't know about his real father being a hedgehog warrior. His mother would always stray off the subject, and drop little tidbits here and there. Aaron would eventually piece together those tidbits when he reached his 19 years of age, and experience the hedgehog armor for the first time. Emotion-wise, Aaron had a little bit of a competitive streak when he was 9. he'll always try to outdo anyone that challenged him to anything, which would ultimately develop into his sense of justice as he got older. Also, his laid-back personality is present at this young age, showing itself in his tendency to relax after getting home from school, and not doing home work. However, the other half of this personality, alertness, kicked in when he started to fail in school. He stepped up his game, and started to do better. Strengths and weaknesses-wise, he still has all the weaknesses of a normal human being. Meaning, he can't survive falling from great heights, and so on. As I mentioned before, his strengths are finding the best way to get the jump on his bullies/enemies, or finding the best way to avoid them. *sigh* hope this works. I still don't get it. I've gotten all the necessary info. I completed the character sheet. He's just a 9-year old version of Aaron. He does not have a sword, he can't use that hedgehog armor yet. what else needs saying? He's a child after all. Edited by Chompman, Apr 11 2011, 02:14 PM.
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The Dark Jaws of Justice. My bark is as equally deadly as my bite. I'm CHOMPMAN! Everything you need to know about me....right in here!!!
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| L Dragon | Mar 31 2011, 10:46 PM Post #17 |
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It does nothing, actually. You're suppose to use the character sheet provided in the first. Yes, you made for your normal Aaron character, however you have to use the same character sheet for the rest of the lessons. This is how we compare your lesson bio with your current. Even if your making new character for each lesson, you still need to follow the character sheet provided. Please redo this.(or edit your post) |
![]() Sonic Blast Fated Kingdom Fanfic Members/Chara Data-Base Chapter 1: Otogi | Chapter 2: Claws, Rifle, and Wind Chain | Chapter 3: Crimson, Psychic, and Mage Chain | Chapter 4: Eclipse Blossom | Chapter 5: Death Chain | Chapter 6: Royal Blood | Chapter 7: Cold Chain | Chapter 8: Siege | Chapter 9: Memories of Old Kingdom | Chapter 10: Tactic, Purge, and the Fight | Chapter 11: Four Shadows | Chapter 12: Three Letters | Chapter 13: Two Sources Sonic Blast Madness Fanfic Chapter 1: Openly Close | Chapter 2: Kamelot Tol-e-maC | Chapter 3: Found Lost | Chapter 4: Reaper What You Soul | Chapter 5: Openly Reapers in Lost Tolemac | Chapter 6: Follow the Reaper | Chapter 7: Don't Follow the Reaper | Chapter 8: Fight Yourself, Die Yourself | Chapter 9: Masquerader Massacre | Chapter 10: THE Enemy | Chapter 11: Gulliver | Chapter 12: Finally, Unlimited Madness | Chapter 12: Finally, Loki's Madness(alternate ending) I'm totes a guy~ Kota: I hereby dub thee, Swolverine~ | |
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| 742 mph | Apr 2 2011, 06:26 AM Post #18 |
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This looks interesting, and it's also a great chance to develop more of a personality and backstory for my character Kilo. I would like to sign up. Name: Kilo Gender: Male Apparent Age: 15 Actual Age: 16 Species: Hedgehog Personality: Kilo's personality varies depending on the situation he is in. He is rather laid-back and relaxed when things are calm and there is no danger, but when there is, he seems to forget all notions of fun and enjoyment and focuses on the current problem completely and unfalteringly. Hobbies/Talents: Kilo often likes to Hover-Spin around about five hundred feet above the ground and look at the scenery when he's bored. He is an expert at Mario games and likes to play them when the weather isn't right for hover-spinning and when Force isn't making jokes about how he shouldn't play those games because "people will think you're a traitor to Sega." He is also a talented mathematician, although he hasn't found much of a use for that skill yet. Powers: --Hover-Spin: Kilo's signature ability. Very similar to the Spindash, except Kilo can hover and fly through the air while curled up. While curled up, he has his quills extended, so most badniks who collide with him in flight get stabbed and short out. --Charge Dash: A variation of the Hover Spin where Kilo charges himself with electricity before taking off from the ground, giving him the ability to shoot energy bolts while in flight until the charge runs out. In order to recharge, Kilo must land. And a few other variations of the Hover-Spin. Weapons: None, except those sharp quills of his Appearance: His muzzle is tanner than most other hedgehogs. He has fur covering his entire body except for his muzzle, nose, and a small patch on his back where he was burned by a laser shot. His build is that of someone who hasn't exercised recently, which he doesn't feel he needs to. His fur is bright yellow, except for his hands, feet, and streaks on his arms and legs, which are blue. His quills droop slightly, and his ears are usually perked up, as if constantly listening for something. He has dark blue-purple eyes. Strengths: His powers, can be very stealthy when he wants to Weakness: Can't Hover-Spin for more than a minute without getting tired and having to land, not very fast on his feet (Top speed without hover-spinning is only 30 mph) History: Kilo grew up with only a single parent (he never learned what happened to the other) who was very wrapped up in his high-paying but hard-to-keep job and barely paid attention to Kilo at all. As a result, Kilo had to learn most of the things he knew from school, or he had to teach himself. Kilo was born unusually underweight (only half normal mass) but a normal height and width, and his body was much less dense than normal organic matter. Kilo figured out at a young age that by extending his quills while spindashing very fast, he could generate a current of rushing air that propelled his light, easily moveable body through the sky, and by adjusting how far his quills poked out, he could change the direction of his flight. After fusing (and later de-fusing) with Force into the fusion Mio, Kilo gained Force's ability to charge his body with energy (and thus the Charge Dash was born), just as Force gained Kilo's ability to glide (though not Hover-Spin) with his now-extremely-light quills, due to a problem with the de-fusion that left both Force and Kilo with a little bit of the other still fused with them. Edited by 742 mph, Apr 4 2011, 05:21 PM.
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Reverse--Force--Blast--Circuit--Hax--Shadon--Kilo--Metal Super "98% of teens would be dead if Twilight said breathing wasn't cool. Put this in your signature if you are part of the 2% laughing." - Started by: Chrono the Demonic Crusader | |
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| Chompman | Apr 6 2011, 03:44 PM Post #19 |
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Um, I've redone it. The young Aaron character. |
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The Dark Jaws of Justice. My bark is as equally deadly as my bite. I'm CHOMPMAN! Everything you need to know about me....right in here!!!
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| `TakeCare | Apr 8 2011, 11:17 AM Post #20 |
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Submission (You may be familiar to this one, L . :P) It's currently what I have at the moment. Reality, I created her out of the blue when I entered her in the Outlaw RP. And yes, I know the Personality is missing, I'll work on that when I get time to. <P |
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| Silv™ | Apr 10 2011, 08:22 PM Post #21 |
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OK, I finally got this done. Here ya go, nothing new from the other profiles except the History, which took me ages. (BTW, feel free to critique me via PM about the history, please. Thanks, bro!) Profile bio
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Something I made long ago My Stamps Agnosticism, explained For my cousin, Akimoto Tieko: My color My Characters DeviantART Page FTW | |
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| L Dragon | Apr 11 2011, 01:31 PM Post #22 |
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To Aaron I'd like for you to redo the first lesson, only because you missed a lot of things on the character sheet provided in the first post, like personality, apparent age, powers, strengths and weaknesses, and so on. So, redo the first lesson and follow that character sheet provided please. Other then that, it was pretty good. To 742 mph, TC, and Silv Your all accepted, here is your first lesson. Lesson 1 Create a child like character, or a past version of any current character your using, that would be attending some school of some sort. Again, this character can be a child version of any current character, or a completely different character all together. Also, they DO NOT have to be a child, but a younger version of whom ever you wish them to be a younger version of. Use as much info and detail as possible. However, don't over do it, as you'll need to expand on this character once they get older. Goal = Making your child or younger version character not as strong as normal character because they are a child, and well child like, simple. (use the character sheet provided in my first post) Edited by L Dragon, Apr 11 2011, 01:31 PM.
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![]() Sonic Blast Fated Kingdom Fanfic Members/Chara Data-Base Chapter 1: Otogi | Chapter 2: Claws, Rifle, and Wind Chain | Chapter 3: Crimson, Psychic, and Mage Chain | Chapter 4: Eclipse Blossom | Chapter 5: Death Chain | Chapter 6: Royal Blood | Chapter 7: Cold Chain | Chapter 8: Siege | Chapter 9: Memories of Old Kingdom | Chapter 10: Tactic, Purge, and the Fight | Chapter 11: Four Shadows | Chapter 12: Three Letters | Chapter 13: Two Sources Sonic Blast Madness Fanfic Chapter 1: Openly Close | Chapter 2: Kamelot Tol-e-maC | Chapter 3: Found Lost | Chapter 4: Reaper What You Soul | Chapter 5: Openly Reapers in Lost Tolemac | Chapter 6: Follow the Reaper | Chapter 7: Don't Follow the Reaper | Chapter 8: Fight Yourself, Die Yourself | Chapter 9: Masquerader Massacre | Chapter 10: THE Enemy | Chapter 11: Gulliver | Chapter 12: Finally, Unlimited Madness | Chapter 12: Finally, Loki's Madness(alternate ending) I'm totes a guy~ Kota: I hereby dub thee, Swolverine~ | |
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| Chompman | Apr 11 2011, 01:48 PM Post #23 |
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The Jaw-ggernaught of Justice.
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Ok. name:Aaron Kunai young age: 9 Gender: male species: human Appearance: neatly combed brown hair (which he hates)and brown eyes, has on a red T-shirt with a video game 1-up icon on it, and blue jeans Weapons: at this age, a slingshot at best, and very skilled with it. Young Aaron is a little different than the 19 year old Teen/Adult Aaron. First of all, the trademark untidy brown hair he has isn't present. In this early age, it is neatly combed back (this gave him a nerdy-like appearance back in grade school, where he would eventually mess up his hair in a cool way). Secondly, he didn't have a sword, or his fighting skills. he would try his darnedest to avoid one, or if push did come to shove, would use his self-made slingshot to tip the scales in his favor (as he got older, he would eventually learn to wield a sword in combat, and ditch the slingshot ultimately) thirdly, he still didn't know about his real father being a hedgehog warrior. His mother would always stray off the subject, and drop little tidbits here and there. Aaron would eventually piece together those tidbits when he reached his 19 years of age, and experience the hedgehog armor for the first time. Emotion-wise, Aaron had a little bit of a competitive streak when he was 9. he'll always try to outdo anyone that challenged him to anything, which would ultimately develop into his sense of justice as he got older. Also, his laid-back personality is present at this young age, showing itself in his tendency to relax after getting home from school, and not doing home work. However, the other half of this personality, alertness, kicked in when he started to fail in school. He stepped up his game, and started to do better. Strengths and weaknesses-wise, he still has all the weaknesses of a normal human being. Meaning, he can't survive falling from great heights, and so on. As I mentioned before, his strengths are finding the best way to get the jump on his bullies/enemies, or finding the best way to avoid them. *sigh* hope this works. I still don't get it. I've gotten all the necessary info. I completed the character sheet. He's just a 9-year old version of Aaron. He does not have a sword, he can't use that hedgehog armor yet. what else needs saying? He's a child after all. I really really really hope that i got this downpat. I've added his strengths and weaknesses, which i noticed were not there before. I've double checked everything on that character sheet. I don't know what else i need to do. Other than that, I'm done. With the character thing i mean. Edited by Chompman, Apr 11 2011, 04:03 PM.
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The Dark Jaws of Justice. My bark is as equally deadly as my bite. I'm CHOMPMAN! Everything you need to know about me....right in here!!!
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| 742 mph | Apr 11 2011, 02:11 PM Post #24 |
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Here's my childlike, school-attending character. Name: Kilo Gender: Male Apparent Age: 7 Actual Age: 8 Species: Hedgehog Personality: Kilo is rather curious, and can't resist the possiblity of gaining more knowledge, even if it means taking risks. He's slightly hyper when left by himself, but when faced with a difficult school assignment is very apt at concentrating on it, so he's rather disciplined as a student. Kilo's best subject has always been mathematics, but he's rather average at most of the other classes. Powers: Kilo has the ability to hover in the air for a short time by rapidly spinning his quills, which are still rather rounded at the ends due to his young age. His physical education teacher says he'll get more control over his hovering as he gets older and his quills get more defined and sharper. Weapons: Kilo has none of his own, but he is rather skilled with a baseball bat. Appearance: Kilo is rather tall and scrawny, and seriously underweight. He doesn't look it very much, though. He is covered in dark yellow fur which has gradually been getting lighter since he was a baby (it started out brown), with blue streaks on his arms and legs. His quills are short, rounded, and drooping, and his ears are large and perked up. His torso appears somewhat spherical, with a small tuft of white hair on his chest. He has three large spines on his back, and a short, barely-visible tail. Strengths: His best subject is mathematics, as stated before, and his hover ability allows him to easily get across puddles and mud pits on the way home from school. Weakness: He's a slow runner, though with his hover ability he can slightly reduce friction, boosting his speed up to normal (or almost-normal.) History: Kilo lives with his father, Deka, who was divorced by his wife when Kilo was one. Deka is very wrapped up in a high-paying but easy-to-lose job as a data analyzer at a government-run company that collects data for the Census and is constantly replacing workers at random. Deka is obsessed with his image and wants to make an extremely good impression so he doesn't get replaced. As a result, he doesn't pay much attention to Kilo, and therefore Kilo has a lot of time to himself. Kilo is currently in third grade at Station Square Elementary, where he's of about average popularity. He often gets annoyed by Bhaskara, the class nerd who is extremely interested in architectural video games and keeps asking Kilo to come over and play SimCity 3 or Locomotion. Kilo's hobbies include exploring the nearby ruins with the white-and-red talking orbs, playing Super Mario 64, which just came out, and visiting the nearby restaurant with the great potatoes whose name he keeps forgetting. I hope it's interesting and well-designed enough. I tried to foreshadow little Kilo's future (teen Kilo's present) in his bio. |
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Reverse--Force--Blast--Circuit--Hax--Shadon--Kilo--Metal Super "98% of teens would be dead if Twilight said breathing wasn't cool. Put this in your signature if you are part of the 2% laughing." - Started by: Chrono the Demonic Crusader | |
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| L Dragon | Apr 11 2011, 02:37 PM Post #25 |
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To 742 mph Uniqueness: 80/100 Not too bad. Its simple, yet hes original. I like the changing color of his fur as he gets older, pretty cool. Profile Sync: 90/100 You seem to have everything flow nicely. His powers, age, and even is back story goes well with another, pretty cool. Character View: 90/100 I believe you explained everything nicely. Although you explained a bit more about his powers in his original bio, only cause this is his younger self so I understand. Nicely done. Adaption to Lesson: 80/100 I think you did a fairly good job. Normally people make their characters too similar to their younger selves, but you pulled some surprises on me, nice job. Overall Achievement: 85/100 Nice job... But really, was this that hard of a lesson? Anyways, here is your next lesson.Lesson 2 Create two characters that are siblings. However, have them separated at birth. The goal is to try to make two characters that can easily be noted as siblings, but have differences because they didn't grow together. You decide on what differences they will have, and how we can tell they are siblings. Goal = Create a situation and in their history part on how they were separated at birth. As well, give details on how they are obviously twins but are different from each other. |
![]() Sonic Blast Fated Kingdom Fanfic Members/Chara Data-Base Chapter 1: Otogi | Chapter 2: Claws, Rifle, and Wind Chain | Chapter 3: Crimson, Psychic, and Mage Chain | Chapter 4: Eclipse Blossom | Chapter 5: Death Chain | Chapter 6: Royal Blood | Chapter 7: Cold Chain | Chapter 8: Siege | Chapter 9: Memories of Old Kingdom | Chapter 10: Tactic, Purge, and the Fight | Chapter 11: Four Shadows | Chapter 12: Three Letters | Chapter 13: Two Sources Sonic Blast Madness Fanfic Chapter 1: Openly Close | Chapter 2: Kamelot Tol-e-maC | Chapter 3: Found Lost | Chapter 4: Reaper What You Soul | Chapter 5: Openly Reapers in Lost Tolemac | Chapter 6: Follow the Reaper | Chapter 7: Don't Follow the Reaper | Chapter 8: Fight Yourself, Die Yourself | Chapter 9: Masquerader Massacre | Chapter 10: THE Enemy | Chapter 11: Gulliver | Chapter 12: Finally, Unlimited Madness | Chapter 12: Finally, Loki's Madness(alternate ending) I'm totes a guy~ Kota: I hereby dub thee, Swolverine~ | |
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| 742 mph | Apr 11 2011, 05:30 PM Post #26 |
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Lesson 2 Name: Kilo Gender: Male Apparent Age: 15 Actual Age: 16 Species: Hedgehog Personality: Kilo's personality varies depending on the situation he is in. He is rather laid-back and relaxed when things are calm and there is no danger, but when there is, he seems to forget all notions of fun and enjoyment and focuses on the current problem completely and unfalteringly. Powers: --Hover-Spin: Kilo's signature ability. Very similar to the Spindash, except Kilo can hover and fly through the air while curled up. While curled up, he has his quills extended, so most badniks who collide with him in flight get stabbed and short out. --Charge Dash: A variation of the Hover Spin where Kilo charges himself with electricity before taking off from the ground, giving him the ability to shoot energy bolts while in flight until the charge runs out. In order to recharge, Kilo must land. And a few other variations of the Hover-Spin. Also, Kilo is a talented mathematician, though that skill has been rather useless so far. Weapons: None, except those sharp quills of his Appearance: His muzzle is tanner than most other hedgehogs. He has fur covering his entire body except for his muzzle, nose, and a small patch on his back where he was burned by a laser shot. His build is that of someone who hasn't exercised recently, which he doesn't feel he needs to. His fur is bright yellow, except for his hands, feet, and streaks on his arms and legs, which are blue. His quills droop slightly, and his ears are usually perked up, as if constantly listening for something. He has dark blue-purple eyes. Strengths: His powers, can be very stealthy when he wants to Weakness: Can't Hover-Spin for more than a minute without getting tired and having to land, not very fast on his feet (Top speed without hover-spinning is only 30 mph) History: Kilo grew up with only a single parent (he never learned what happened to the other) who was very wrapped up in his high-paying but hard-to-keep job and barely paid attention to Kilo at all. As a result, Kilo had to learn most of the things he knew from school, or he had to teach himself. Kilo was born unusually underweight (only half normal mass) but a normal height and width, and his body was much less dense than normal organic matter. Kilo figured out at a young age that by extending his quills while spindashing very fast, he could generate a current of rushing air that propelled his light, easily moveable body through the sky, and by adjusting how far his quills poked out, he could change the direction of his flight. After fusing (and later de-fusing) with Force into the fusion Mio, Kilo gained Force's ability to charge his body with energy (and thus the Charge Dash was born), just as Force gained Kilo's ability to glide (though not Hover-Spin) with his now-extremely-light quills, due to a problem with the de-fusion that left both Force and Kilo with a little bit of the other still fused with them. Name: Crimson Gender: Male Apparent Age: 17 Actual Age: 16 Species: Hedgehog Personality: Crimson is rather quick to anger, and he has a volatile temper overall. He isn't easily distracted from the task at hand. When someone challenges him, he doesn't hold himself back, and he's the first to try to prove he's better than someone else. Simply put, he's arrogant and very determined most of the time, and like his brother, he gets straight to the point. He also has some sense of honor, prefering to beat someone else fair and square as opposed to cheating them out of a victory. After all, he doesn't need to cheat in order to prove he's the best. Powers: Crimson's quills have an unusually low density, and a mutation in the muscles that connect them to his body allow him to rapidly spin them (think Tails' tails + Spindash), allowing him to hover at one altitude for a very long time, unlike his brother Kilo who has lower quill stamina but can move vertically as well as horizontally in flight. Also, like his brother, he has the ability to fuse with other hedgehogs, but unkile Kilo, he frequently abuses this ability to gain control of another's powers. Since his will is so strong, he as almost complete control over the fusion's body when his mind merges with his target's. However, he can't stay fused for long. In the meantime, however, he gains access to the other hedgehog's powers in their entirety. He also has some slight mathematical skills, preventing him from flunking EVERY subject in school. Weapons: Crimson has a long steel sword with a hilt decorated with a red stone revealed to be a fragment of the red Chaos Emerald. He has great skill with this sword, as he has been using it since he was around eight. When the rest of the red Emerald (it needs to be the red one) is placed into the sword, it grants the bearer Chaos Control abilities, such as Chaos Spear, that can be fired out of the sword like Excalibur-Sonic's sword blasts. Appearance: Crimson is rather tall and has scrawny legs, but his arms are beefed up from several years of exersicing. His chest has a tuft of orange fur on it. His fur is bright red, as his name suggests, except for streaks on his arms and legs which are the same orange as his chest hair. His eyes are an orangish yellow, with small pupils compared to his irises. His ears are perked up, as if constantly listening for the next fool to challenge him, and his inner ears are a darker tan than his already tannish muzzle. Strengths: Sword skills, hover ability, confident Weakness: Confident to the point of arrogance, not a very fast runner History: Crimson was adopted by a poor woman who raised him (a more accurate term would be 'forced him to raise himself') in a ghetto-like environment on the outskirts of Dark City Zone. There, Crimson learned that the world was hard to live in, that the only way not to be bullied was to be a bully yourself, and that the best way to overcome challenges was to kick them in the groin and then throw them aside with a beefy arm. He set out early in life to prove that he was more powerful than anyone else who dared challenge him. One day, he got a challenge from Eggman that involved finding the rest of the red Emerald for his sword, but Eggman tricked him into getting captured, after which he was forced to fuse with an echidna named Hax. After several years sharing a body with Hax (unfortunately for Crimson, Hax was the one in control 99% of the time), a seven-Emerald Chaos Control de-fused him with Hax, after which he promptly tried to kill Hax. However, Hax used the seven Emeralds to go super, and... you can guess what happened next. Now Crimson vows revenge against Hax for not trying to de-fuse the two beings, even though Hax could if he wanted to. He is joined in this endeavor by a more honorable version of himself from an alternate dimension, who wants revenge against Hax for so horribly wronging a counterpart of alternate Crimson. Edited by 742 mph, Apr 19 2011, 05:24 AM.
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| Lord Tora Unlimited Crusader | Apr 19 2011, 04:28 AM Post #27 |
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I'm gonna do this too, methinks. I don't think the spark of creativity has quite settled fully in my head, and something stimulating like this might help. Lesson 1: Child/Past character Name: Alexi Sable Gender: Female Apparent Age: 16 Actual Age: 16 Species: Human Personality: A studious child who doesn't have many friends. It's not that she's anti-social, mind you; on the contrary, Alexi has a pleasant personality. Too pleasant. Seemingly nothing gets on her nerves, but anyone who annoys her invariably hesitates when she displays the slightest smile. Inexplicable horror factor aside, Alexi is effortlessly intelligent and takes great enjoyment in showing it off. This also does not help her social life. Powers: Battlesuit Psychic Skill Install - Athena A Battlesuit PSI is a suit of psychoplasmic armour (think similar to this) generated by those with psychic ability. As well as granting each individual user a specific 'manifestation' of their psychic ability, all Battlesuits are capable of boosting the user's speed and strength beyond normal human capacity and often carry a variety of built-in weapon systems (which can, in some cases, be summoned and banished at will). Alexi's Battlesuit PSI, 'Athena', gives her the ability Technopath. Technopath allows her to connect with machines at a psychic level in order to 'communicate' with machines remotely, but as yet, she is unable to elicit complete domination over a machine without going through the proper channels (essentially, she can't hack passwords, bypass firewalls, make machines do things that aren't programmed in, etc). This ability also gives her an innate understanding of how a machine works simply by 'connecting' with it. Weapons: None, even when her Battlesuit is active. Appearance: Brown hair tied into a ponytail (FFFFUUUUUUU PONIES), brown eyes, average build and height. A fairly generic appearance in this regard, but she makes the most of what she has; she insists on looking neat and tidy, even if she's just lazing around at home. Her expressions are quite muted compared to most people (a slight smirk when others would show teeth, narrowed eyes when others would have RAGE FACES, et cetera). Has a TERRIBLE, TERRIBLE fashion sense, but is completely oblivious to it. For example, juxtaposing 'formal' and casual wear in everyday dress, wearing clashing colours or patterns (or both) and/or wearing completely impractical clothes for the environment (a tank top in winter, for instance). Strengths: - Academically Talented: Alexi excels at science-based subjects such as physics, chemistry and programming, as well as technical subjects such as mechanics and electronics. - Crazy Scientist: You know those kinds of inventors who take a concept that should be impossible - like, say, laser cannons powered by bits of meteorites and the souls of orphan children - and make it real? That's what Alexi can do. Minus the meteories. At this age, however, she's limited to MacGuyvering simple things like radios, television sets and desktop PCs, and isn't really at the 'souls of orphans' stage... yet. - The Stare: If you are on the receiving end of Alexi's 'look', you will step the hell back, son. No-one knows why. Probably because no-one wants to test it. Weakness: - Socially Inept: The combination of Alexi's casual sense of superiority, eccentricities, barely-there facial expressions and uncanny 'Look of Doom' means she really can't keep people on her side in a social setting. Attempts at persuasion and leadership will always come off more creepy or intimidating than actually effetive. - Lover, Not a Fighter: Alexi has zero combat training (and it can be expected that she will never get any). While THOSE EVIL EYES typically mean she never really has to fight, you can assume anything immune to fear will immediately curb-stomp her in a fight. - Vulnerable Mind: When projecting her thoughts into computer systems, viruses and other hostile programs can and will invade her mind. Her 'psychic firewall' can destroy these foreign influences, but speed is the problem; the firewalls can't attack them until they make themselves known (like a normal immune system and conventional viruses), which typically manifests as actual physiological damage. History: I haven't actually got the world concept set in stone yet, so every attempt to write this history thing out (I'm at four tries so far) makes absolutely no linear sense whatsoever. I give up on this bit quite frankly. Edited by Tora Unlimited Crusader, Apr 20 2011, 01:51 AM.
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| Silv™ | Apr 21 2011, 09:33 PM Post #28 |
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Trying to go with a theme this time
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Lesson One: Name: Kenji Bushido Gender: Male Apparent Age: 13 Actual Age: 11 Species: Cat Personality: As young and naive as he was, Kenji was quite a different boy compared to what he is now. For a long time in his childhood (before his first runaway), he believed in complete and utter loyalty to his superiors. Though he had a mind of his own, he did work without complain, and when asked to do something he would do it better then it sounded, well at least his effort would. He was openly kind and respectful of others, unafraid of anything. Each new threat and each new task to him was just another one of Takeru's assessments for him. Unfortunately, his skin is thin, meaning he cant really deal with a hateful comment without finding it hard to not blow up over it and lose his emotions, becoming violent and irrational. Weapons: His training bamboo stick. Often uses it in alternative situations to fend off bullies and playing games with Miwako. Appearance: Fur Color: Black Skin Color: Tan Hair Color: Lighter black Hair Style: Short, low ponytail in back, all hair swept back Eye Color: Light Amber Ears: Acute and defined, sharp at end, white on inside Nose: Small and short Muzzle: Tan Chest: Underbelly color is white, with moderate fur on chest Tail: Long, white tip on end Other Bodily Features: Smaller then most boys his age, has a scrawny appearance with 3" indent at lower torso area, ribs visible through his fur Clothes: Heavily worn and torn beige baggy cargo pants with ends tied at ankles Strengths: + Moderate karate fighter + Has a strong self faith/Extremely loyal + Highly agile and versicle for his age Weakness: - Weak physically - Because his skills are still developing, he is currently a poor fighter - Is easily offended, often resorts to unnecessary violence History: History so far (As of his age)
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| Animeniac | Apr 25 2011, 02:52 AM Post #29 |
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Hydrocity Act 2
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I have recieved permission from Lilfate to join in. I know I kinda missed the start of the training, but I'll catch up quick. As proof of my word and his, here is the L Team badge =3 Lesson #1 Spoiler: click to toggle Character Sheet #1 Spoiler: click to toggle
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| L Dragon | Apr 25 2011, 07:36 PM Post #30 |
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Chaos Emerald
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To 742 MPH Uniqueness: 55/100 I gave you such a low score because your character's twin had a good portion of Sonic related stuff, where as Kilo shows no signs of any Sonic related back ground at all. Not sure if it simply wasn't put or not, or he simply has nothing to do with Egghead and the emeralds at all. Profile Sync ~ 70/100 Since I'm grading the two characters as one, they kind of fall out of sync. Again, Crimson has Sonic related stuff while Kilo has very VERY little Sonic related stuff to none at all. As well, its still a bit fuzzy how Crimson goes from raising himself to fighting for the emeralds, not much it explained about the large gap there. Character View ~ 75/100 You explained where the piece of the emerald came from, but you never explained how he got it in the first place. It seemed kind of random, like he had it from birth maybe? Either way, both characters were pretty much okay besides the minor holes in both of their back stories and how they obtained some of there stuff, as well as how Crimson learned how to use his sword. Anyone can pick up a sword, however, one must learn how to use it if one wants to be the best. Adaption to Lesson: 80/100 I think you did fairly well, excluding the minor set backs, you managed to have twins that viewed the world different because of the way they were raised(or rather how one had to raise himself.) Overall Achievement: 70/100 Not bad really. Took a hard blow with uniqueness but, trial and error. Also, I don't mind people using Sonic stuff. However, its not your own ideas, ya know? Anyways, you passed, move on to lesson three! ![]() Lesson Three: Everyone wants to make powerful characters. Not everyone knows how to make one balanced. Create a character with a powerful skill-set, but include weaknesses that prevent him/her from being a dominant force in any setting. Give him three strengths and at least three weaknesses. Goal = Make their powers or skill-sets be a plus and minus at the same time. In short, make them balance. Having how your powers came about in your story part might help. ============================= To TUC Uniqueness: 80/100 Oh wow... Um, pretty cool stuff man. I can't really say for sure that you gained all your stuff from your own brain, which I can totallt believe, however, I think a very super small portion of the stuff you laid down was from other sources(Which I can only point to the picture you provided, which simply was just a inference XD) Anyways, enough on this, awesome job. Profile Sync ~ 85/100 I'd say shes pretty much in sync, for her kind of character I suppose. Also, smart people normally tend to act older or something like that, so yeah, it fits nicely. Character View ~ 40/100 All though this should be a zero, I'm not going to slash you up because of a back story that I know would be long and drawn out(cause I know your very deep with your characters) However, can't just slap a A on and let ya walk on by buddy, tis would be fair ya know? Adaption to Lesson: 85/100 I'm guessing you're starting from scratch with her? Or maybe you're just trying to work an already made character from the ground up? Either way, you didn't submit your entry character sheet before starting this lesson. However, since you started it I wasn't gonna tell ya to throw in another one. But yeah, you adapted well. ![]() Overall Achievement: 72.5/100 You passed my friend! Heh, even without a back story.(next time add one though, or else I can't grade it. ) Next lesson!! ![]() Lesson Two: Create two characters that are siblings. However, have them separated at birth. The goal is to try to make two characters that can easily be noted as siblings, but have differences because they didn't grow together. You decide on what differences they will have, and how we can tell they are siblings. Goal = Create a situation and in their history part on how they were separated at birth. As well, give details on how they are obviously twins but are different from each other. ============================================== I'll do Silv and Animeniac tomorrow, sorry for the wait guys. ^_^; |
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