May I have Opinions Please?

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May I have Opinions Please?
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Dubbmatic	Feb 28 2011, 11:44 PM Post #1
Carnival Night Act 1 Posts: 189 Group: E Rank Guardian Member #10,598 Joined: December 17, 2009 Gender: Male	Alright, I don't want to get into too much detail and bore you all, but for a few years now I've been making music, working on a number of different songs and such. I started out rapping, and now I do more rock and indie style music, with a little bit of rapping here and there. I have a couple songs I've either myself been working on, or been a part of, and I'd like maybe a bit of review from anyone on them. It would be appreciated! UNCERTAINTY DEMO: (This is a song for a band called "That I Know", But so far we've mostly just done some of the music and my vocals in the opening.) UNTITLED GUITAR DEMO: (This is just a guitar bit I wrote one night, eventually it'll become a more or less sad song) MR. JONES VERSE 1 DEMO: (Unfinished, as is most of my newest material. It uses the same vocal style from the Uncertainty Demo, but this demo came first lol) Please let me know what you think! And more will be posted soon, I have two other demos I've made in recent that I just don't have on Youtube yet lol.
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Fwiss	Mar 1 2011, 03:59 AM Post #2
Sandopolis Act 1 Posts: 1,567 Group: S Rank Hero Member #9,080 Joined: June 18, 2008 Gender: Male Steam ID: fwiss1174	The first one sounds unprofessional, not like I've heard in music before. The actual tune of it was good, and the drum is a winner for a song of that style. Mainly the problem is the vocals sounding... unedited, too human? As for the second, sounds like it would go with rap twice as fast as it, with a trippy style. Either that or screamo, but that's not what you're going for. So the 2nd is good or bad depending on what you make of it, but good so far. Now for the third one, same vocals, but better. The lyrics are kind of strange, but I can't critique those, except for one part: the lyrics refer to earlier parts of the song, and that sounds weird, like I've never heard before. Also, I don't think you're supposed to have embedded video or audio in your signature. Later in some of these songs, it would be cool if you could try out using a piano. I dunno, it seems like it would help at climactic parts. Anyhoo, I enjoyed listening, so keep on making those songs!
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