Thirteen "XIII"

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Thirteen "XIII"; Still a Work in Progress...
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Deranged Crusader	Feb 8 2011, 08:58 AM Post #1
*This is a delicate proced -- Oops* Posts: 318 Group: A Rank Guardian Member #11,789 Joined: January 20, 2011	"You’re reaching out to a dog that’s tasted and turned Why? Why waste your time when I’ve found my strength in another? Can you see more in me? Can you really see more than just a beast? ....I’ve found I can run faster, faster than guilt could ever" == I. Basic Information == Full Name: Xenic Idorov II (Named after his grandfather) Alias: "Thirteen", "XIII" Gender: Male Species: Reed Wolf (no, that's not a typo. The Reed wolf is a canid native to Europe) Alignment: Lawful Evil, "Dominator" Universe of Origin: My personal version of the Sonic/Mobius Universe; it has been expanded upon a great deal with my own Ideas and inventions. Place of Origin: The Borrikyan Steppes; an area of mixed grasslands and desert in Western Mobius Place of Residence: Semi-nomadic, but his Home Camp is in the Borrikyan Steppes Occupation: Raider Organization/Group/Team: Spiral Moon Tribe: the nomads of The Steppes. A society of Raiders, they greatly value strength and ruthlessness. Xenic's Band consists of himself, his brother Vladyk, and three others named Lev, Kirill, and Danil. Socioeconomic Status: Variable-income Reputations: Known as a ruthless and cold warrior. Thought by most of the Spiral Moon Tribe to be second in command to his brother, Vladyk. Only his band knows that it is the other way around -- it's Xenic who's really running the show. Otherwise known by the tribe for his absolutely EPIC bad luck. == II. Physical Information== Height: 3' 6" Weight: 66 lbs Current Age: 22 Birth Date: October 29th Physical Appearance: Fur Color: Sandy-gold fur, with dark brown below his elbows and knees. Brown chest fur and a pallid white muzzle. He has a slim brown stripe running along his spine from the base of his neck down to the base of his tail. Eye Color: Vibrant orange left eye. His right eye has a stark white iris, with a thin black ring that marks the border between the iris and sclera. The white eye has an unsettling flickering quality about it. Hair Style: Mostly formed into a few long bangs in the center of his forehead. At the top and back of his skull, his hair becomes loose and shaggy, with a small bit of hair tied in a braid at the base of his skull. Nose: Typical dark brown canine nose Ears: Perked triangular ears, sandy gold with pale white fur inside. His right ear have several notches in it. Tail: Ragged, furry tail, sandy gold with a dark brown stripe on the underside from base to tip. The Rest: Xenic's fur is definitely ragged and worn, scratch marks are sometimes visible as well just from the wear and tear of his exercise routines. He also has several assorted scars from previous fights, the most promenent of which are a couple of fading thin scars in the vicinity of his right eye. Body Structure: Scrawny looking but the flesh that is there under his fur is mostly muscle. His hands have rather strong dark grey claws on each finger. His right eye is not natural, being a transplant he ripped from a wraith to make up for the one he lost. Attire: Usually is seen wearing a dark brown cape, with a large collar that obcures the lower part of his face. On his hands he wears loose red gloves with large cuffs and gold bands on the wrists; the gloves have no fingers. His boots are well-worn, black and gold with red accents. Gear and Accessories: Two brown leather belts, one worn aroud his waist, the other across his chest from right shoulder to left hip. On the waist-belt he wears his knives, Arknual and Irael. Vehicles: None == III. Mental Information == Intelligence: --- Personality: Thirteen is a keen and mentally agile warrior. He constantly insists he cares for nothing but his own power -- he doesn't care that he has a reputation as a savage, in fact he activly cultivates one. In practice, however, this does not quite add up with reality. Being 'evil' means having control and respect, to him, and so he's proud of his status, and works to maintain it. But in spite of this image, he doesn't have the stomach for genuine depravity. When faced with a moral problem he will always opt for the lesser of two evils. He may rob and pillage but he shys from indiscrimanate murder and savagery, justifiying his choices as being "pragmatic," not kindness. He does have a strong sense of pride and loyalty to his family and tribe, but consistanly ignores orders from his father or other chiefs when it suits him. He manages to rationalize this to himself, and manages to avoid close scrutiny by using his better-liked brother as an accomplace. He can quickly summed up as a 'villian who does good in spite of himself.' Hobbies and Interests: Research, especially with the paranormal and science; extreme or dangerous sports, training Likes: Hunting, research, puzzles or anything that catches his intellectual interest, hunting, meat, respect and control Dislikes: being compliant or having to trust a stranger, being analyzed, being put in a position where he's not in control, being complemented == IV. Combat Ability == Physical Advantages: -- Fit and well trained -- His spectral form can take people off guard Mental Advantages (in combat): -- Experienced fighter -- Has good predatory instincts; good for fighting and tracking his foes -- Focused; it's hard to shock him out of his concentration Physical Disadvantages: -- Extremely unlucky; whatever he's standing on has a tendency to crumble, things over him weaken and fall, even if he dodges something random chance may deflect it right back at him. -- Drives himself farther than is healthy; may end up doing himself even more physical harm than the foe does. Mental Disadvantages (in combat): -- Interest can easily turn into and unhealthy obsession, neglects his own well being when overly focused on something -- Let's himself get sidetracked by his feelings too easily Weaponry: Fights with two knives: +Arknual:: This knife has a black blade with a red glyph etched into it. The guard is made of red metal and is formed to resemble a pair of bat wings. +Irael:: This knife has a blade with a silver hue to it and a pale blue glyph etched into it; the guard is blue metal and vaguely resembles angel wings. Abilities: Combat Abilities ++ Distant Epitath [Signature Attack, Mystical] - Causes the target discomfort and terror in the form of a condition of the underworld that s/he fears most. Some victims of this ability have reported to feel as if they are burning alive, others are chilled to the bone, some are raked with knives. Lasts only for a moment and only effects the living; undead and robots are immune. Used as a distraction and may make the target appear crazed to bystanders (running about screaming about being on fire is hardly normal behavior, after all). The severity of this attack depends on the victims willpower. ++Spectral Fang [Physical] - The strange ability causes a bluish glow to appear and surround Thirteen, he briefly growls before dashing forward at incredible speed. The glow surrounding Thirtee becomes a bluish will-o-wisp type flame that fades away behind him while he's running. (This operates much like Thirteen's version of a spindash attack) ++Reaper Flame [Mystical] - Thirteen deals a sharp slice with his hand or foot, powered up by a cold blue will-o-wisp flame Non-Combat or "Passive" Abilities:: War Cry - a call with the capacity to sonically negate higher brain function and induce primal urges toward violence and ruthless survival:: Typically used on his Raider Band, this is a common ability to the Spiral Moon Tribe. Dark Precognition - [Active only in Spectral Form] The psychic ability to see what everyone around will look dead, decayed or decomposing. A natural side effect of existing in a Spectral Form. Predator Instinct - A variety of Intuition in which the user possesses instincts innate to a predatory creature. One with this abiltiy can discern numerous factors of a situation that make him a master of pursuit and capture, including:: what move a foe will likely make, where he is headed (if the user is in the foes proximity, or knows the foe fairly well) as well as how to effectively play the foe into the user's hands in combat/pursuit. Deathspeak [Active only in Spectral Form]- the ability to communicate with undead and the spirits of the dead. This can be used for normal conversation, to ward off malevolent spirits/undead or simply to communicate with the ghost/undead. Jinx - an innate psychic compulsion to walk out of accordance to the patterns of stochastic fields (fields of probability), thus causing events to happen against the user's favor. In other words, Thirteen naturally has VERY bad luck. Energy Sources: His body runs on food and water just like anyone else; His spectral flames consist of burning ectoplasm and are fueled by the spiritual energy present in any given place, and so are more powerful in areas where more people have died, like cities population centers, sites of natural disasters or battlefields. Transformations: ++ Spectral Wolf: Thirteen's Spectral Form;; in essence, Thirteen shifts into a wraith-like being by converting his body to ectoplasm, intangible but usually still visible. While in this form he shifts to a ghostly greenish-teal color, while the scleras of his eyes become a bright red, and his irises turn maroon. In this form he gains the Deathspeak and Dark Precognition abilities, as well as intangiblility, but becomes vulnerable to sunlight and fire. He also cannot eat or drink while in this form, limiting the amount of time he can remain this way. == V. History== Family: Vladyk Idorov, younger brother, Sandr Idorov, Father. Friends: He has a few allies, mostly Lev, Kirill and Danil, though he is not overly friendly with them. Enemies: --- Rivals: --- Background Story: --- == VI. Concept Information== Intended Role: A semi-sympathetic antagonist. Significant Meanings: --- Incorporated Concepts: Ghosts/Wraiths, Bad Luck Inspirations: Nothing really, I have a tendency of thinking up fan characters in my head, or at least nothing I can really place. Still WIP, though Trivia/Miscellaneous Information: +If Thirteen had a theme song, it'd be In All Honesty by Oh, Sleeper. The lines at the beginning of the profile are lyrics from this song. +Spectral Wolf's theme song would be O Fortuna, notably the cover version done by Gregorian..



742 mph	Feb 8 2011, 04:04 PM Post #2
Strange, isn't it? Posts: 249 Group: C Rank Guardian Member #11,677 Joined: December 21, 2010	XIII is a very innovative character. I've never seen anything quite like him before. Good job!
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