Spikes Uknown Power

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Tweet Topic Started: Dec 18 2010, 01:49 PM (176 Views)
sunstar	Dec 18 2010, 01:49 PM Post #1
Character Select Posts: 5 Group: E Rank Adventurer Member #11,661 Joined: December 16, 2010	spike thought his life was just a normal old life like everyone elses. Spike thought he was a NORMAL 14 year old. He was very wrong.one day some bullies wanted to beat spike up.Spike didnt know what happened but when the bullie tried to punch spike he dissapeared.Spike had no idea what happened until he used his power more often.His cousin SS thought what spike was doing was wrong.... One day when spike dissapeared... he fell off a cliff. SS was so surprised she didnt know what to do. Spike was never seen again



Pedruben	Dec 18 2010, 02:19 PM Post #2
Currently attempting to return. Posts: 1,331 Group: A Rank Hero Member #11,430 Joined: September 20, 2010 Gender: Male Country: Portugal Game Currently Playing: Stronghold: Crusaders	Protip: I'm not a pro but anyway. That look more like a story and that on the library, if you want to turn Spike into a character you should use a template like this: Name- Alias- Age- Species- Gender- male Height- Weight- Birth Place- Alignment- Abilities - Weaknesses- Personality- Personal Information: Hobbies- Liked/Favorite activities: Disliked/Least activities- Physical Appearance- Weapon- Back Story- Just an example. Edited by Pedruben, Dec 18 2010, 02:20 PM.
	Tumblr The Shack Family Chart in a nutshell.


Lord Tora Unlimited Crusader	Dec 19 2010, 02:04 AM Post #3
【The Knight of Tigers 】 Posts: 5,462 Group: Former Monarchs Member #6,733 Joined: March 17, 2008 Gender: Male Country: Australia 3DS Friend Code: 0404-6433-6113 Steam ID: crusaderandtimothy	sunstar Dec 18 2010, 01:49 PM spike thought his life was just a normal old life like everyone elses. Spike thought he was a NORMAL 14 year old. He was very wrong.one day some bullies wanted to beat spike up.Spike didnt know what happened but when the bullie tried to punch spike he dissapeared.Spike had no idea what happened until he used his power more often.His cousin SS thought what spike was doing was wrong.... One day when spike dissapeared... he fell off a cliff. SS was so surprised she didnt know what to do. Spike was never seen again BAD END Load from last checkpoint Load save game Quit to main menu But seriously, this isn't much of a character concept or... well, ANYTHING really. too short, not enough information, and certainly not enough context, wow. As stated above, use a template as a starting guide and BRANCH OUT. Just keep digging into the character, flesh them out and stuff. Don't give us nonsensical stuff we don't need to hear, mind you, but at least give them some, you know, character.
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sunstar	Dec 19 2010, 05:24 AM Post #4
Character Select Posts: 5 Group: E Rank Adventurer Member #11,661 Joined: December 16, 2010	I didnt know how to make templates so i got lazy.... YA it is pretty cruddy



Zak	Dec 19 2010, 06:19 AM Post #5
For The Circle Posts: 4,002 Group: D Rank Legend Member #9,748 Joined: February 10, 2009 3DS Friend Code: 1118-0225-4062 Steam ID: zakth686	This sounded to me more like a fan-fic than a character bio, if you could make it a bit longer, I'm sure it'd fit right in with the topics in this section
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