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Nadir (OOC and Registry)
Topic Started: Sep 8 2010, 06:07 PM (995 Views)
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This game is rated using the CERA (Computer Entertainment Rating Organization) System; C, 15 and older for strong violence, blood, mature language, mild adult theme references, and mild drug and alcohol references.

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Nadir
Objection Without Reason And Obligatory Menace

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Blinding, brilliant light, engulfing fleeting view. There, beheld above thee - roaring, twisting, gnashing, fury - the colors, light, explosion, myriad. Chaotic is he, the one who mances this machine of thrashing light and demolir. Sentences and swears, scratch and twist in your ears, intangible language. Rocking. The mental decay and rebirth before you repeatedly. What is this figure? This creature? Other being, vaguely, rough. And it's name decree no words bore in memory or ear. What is this circle? Light and darkness, a maddened twixt fixation above you, raining tears. These golden tears of lux and nox. Never before beheld by your mortal and innocent eyes! It's screaming into your heart, you feel it's claws bind, caress, and bedraggle through your veins.

And then.

You awaken.

You find yourself where you started. The world somehow far more vivid. Your mind racing, pulsing, ebbing with a losing memory of something vast, great, and strangely frightening. You try to remember, but a burning sensation of the mind bereaves your senses. Something hot, blood? Its touch pasting to your fingertips. What was this? And... Why?

Awakening from a nightmare of some kind, you find yourself trying to regain cognitive control from whatever dulling feel of sleep beset you from alertness. Your head is pounding from a terrible headache, your vision's still blurry, and you find your nose had began to bleed recently. Your heart's still racing too. What was that dream about anyway?

You are one of the many who has recently been touched by some strange sort of vision. What this vision is - there's no telling. It was so chaotic and confusing, there was no way to tell what it may have been, what it meant. What you are certain of, even at the depth of the subconcious, that it was important. As your heart eases, your nose bleed comes to a halt, your mind seems to have all but forgotten this psychological encounter.


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The year is 4421 CE somewhere in northern Lebanon, roughly 200 years after a cataclysmic disaster took society, heavily altering the world as we know it. Humanity as a whole was nearly destroyed in the wake of this disaster as mankind struggled to live off of what remained. New societies have risen, fell, or taken to greater power. A struggle to retake the land and make anew this world constantly jeopardizes humanity as civilization begins its rebuild.

Though you may be one, there are others out there whom you will either fight with or against. Soon enough, you'll learn what must be done however, as your purpose unfolds in this chapter of time.

Technology is heavily hampered. Society resembles something of the renaissance mixed with influences of the future as fragments of technology from the past have been recovered and put to use in some ways. There are still some ruins remaining of the "Golden Kingdom" as it's known, where those adventurous will go to find the treasures of the Golden Kingdom, reaping whatever rewards it holds.

Even major cities are relatively small. There's no absolute sovereign rule anywhere aside from self-proclaimed established city states. The law of the land is very simple, but functional as it is mantained by those willing to keep the peace. Bandits roam the lands in search of riches to plunder and survive from, so it's not all uncommon for cities and villages to be attacked.

With the progression of time and the devastation of the world after the calamity it endured, plants, animals, and insects have subsequently mutated into much more hostile creatures, making self defense all but paramount and the world that much more hostile, so it's not uncommon for people to rise up and become hunters to thin the numbers of these monsters.

Who you wish to be in this world is left in your hands.

Foreword And Instructions
 
Nicknames should at least reflect the individual in some way, not just there to sound "cool", but again, I leave this up to you. If you have no nickname, then you're welcome to leave it blank too or even just make it a contraction of the character's name, use a middlename, or so on.

Titles is more of the appropriate place for badass names and such, but if you plan to go running around with a title, your character better be up to snuff to suit the name. Any mamby-pamby character running around with some epic title is just gonna look ass.

Race / Ethnicity simply means you may choose to be human or of an anthropomorphic creature variety, then you can choose the nationality of the character. NOTICE, there aren't Mobians in this. You use one and your character will not be approved. I repeat, no Mobians. You use one and you're not getting in. Dragons also clearly don't exist in this setting, so anthropomorphic dragons will not be applicable either.

When determining the height, bear in mind how this affects weight AND your effectiveness in combat. If your character's 7 feet tall for whatever mad reason, you'll be very vulnerable to attack. You also will not be nearly as agile. If you're tall as all get out, but for whatever reason, you only weigh 140 pounds, you will be automatically anorexically skinny and sickly. Pounds add up when you add another foot of being there on him, so adjust appropriately for your character's sake.

Weight should make sense the same way as height. I will stress this though, don't sit there and make a career deciding these things. It should come simply and naturally. Yes, you are welcome to make skinny or fat characters, it matters not truthfully. Just be sure to adjust in combat for what you make as any extreme of either direction will affect your performance.

Build will determine the physical structure of the character. Need examples? Skinny, average, athletic (that's toned basically), muscular, hulkish. Then there's pudgy, fat, and obese. You can also choose slender or effeminate too. Be imaginative, you can put together builds to some degree too, so you don't have to use a cookie cutter structure.

Eye color shouldn't be something horrendously elaborate. If you're human, you shouldn't have Sharingan eyes from Naruto or some bull crap. Be a little real. You are welcome to an unorthodox color like purple or red or something like that within the spectrum, but try not to abuse the hell out of the flexibility offered.

Hairstyle and color should comply with the same mentality as the eye color. Something at least remotely realistic.Hair streaks of purple and ice blue isn't gonna be happening because you don't have hair dye and it's not going to happen naturally. Bear in mind, this RP has anime influences, so unique colors are sort of believable.

Markings can include scars, tattoos, and piercings too. If you make some kind of weirdly patterned scar, have a good, explainable reason for it. Once again, enjoy the creativity here.

Apparel determines the clothing, armor, and accessories worn by the character. Don't just hurl at me "jeans and a tee shirt". That craps unimaginative and won't speak very well for your ability to come up with a descriptive post if that's your idea of a character to run around as.

Weapons shouldn't be too elaborate in the start. Try to make it simple, like a short sword or a cross bow. You're welcome to a very large variety of weaponry, even at the start. But don't expect to find an M249 in the 45th century after a massive distaster destroyed the world's surface some 200 years ago. It's not happening. Super weaponry such as unique blades or firearms will be found when I make the situation appropriate.

Talents and skills are listed at each bullet point. Add another line if you want, but don't become the god of arts and abilities with it. Your talents shouldn't be super powerful and unrealistic, nor useless and uncreative. Magic does not play a direct role in talents, so don't go putting down such abilities.

Personality's a pretty big point. Don't go making yourself some brooding, hot-headed prick that is "inherently evil" or whatever it is people slap down these days. Be imaginative. Why would this person be the way he is? Does it help him be like this or does it make him seem like a stick is up his / her ass 167 hours a week? You can be a hardened character, but don't be such to an extreme fault that cooperation becomes extremely undesirable and unbearable. The future's bad, but if you're 2nd, 3rd generation child into it, it's not going to make you a social cripple.

Biography should make sense to your character and help determine some parts of the above. It's up to you to write this part, but be sure it's not conflicting with the story. Your character shouldn't be from a time before the disaster hit the world. Otherwise, you can have fun psychically reading my mind and figuring out the background story behind the setting. Only I; the GM should know how that worked out for now.

If you have any questions, please ask. Criticism? Keep it completely to yourself. I have shit planned ahead that I shouldn't even begin hinting at with dramatic explanation. This is supposed to leave you started out, slightly bewildered and confused as your character. Asking ME how you should start off is halfway answered already. If you lack the creativity to finish the thought impromptu, you'll find this RP quite a mind bender and may not be suited to it. An RP is story telling between multiple people, so don't expect the GM to bail you out every step of the way.

Now that the ground rules are effectively and bluntly established for you to take notice to, by all means, join at your own interest. And as always, follow the forum's basic RP function rules. Violation of the primary rules will of course, get you dropped from the RP, and believe me, none of us want that.

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So. Who are you anyway?

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i just wwant to be beautiful for this one month
I'll consider this. I've only had time for a brief skim, so I'll wait to know more before committing.
i'm actually really sorry bout this
unfashionably late as alwways
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I... Am... THE WEREHOG SUPPORTER! MUHAHAHAHA! *Howl*

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Sep 8 2010, 07:40 PM
I'll consider this. I've only had time for a brief skim, so I'll wait to know more before committing.
That's perfectly fine. I suggest taking the time to contemplate how you want your character to be if you do consider joining.
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I am The Milkman.
Full Name: Leon Skarteef
Aliases / Nicknames: Skully
Title(s): The Bone Devil
Age / DOB: Somewhere around twenty-four.
Gender: Male
Race / Ethnicity: Human, Caucasian
Height: Five feet, Ten inches.
Weight: 140 pounds, give or take a few.
Build: Wirey and well toned, sans six-pack (Or twelve pack, thirty-two pack, etc).

Eye Color: "Azurite"
Hair Style / Color: Short-cut, straight white helmet hair.
Skin Tone: Farmer's tan
Markings: A long scar across the bridge of his nose from cheekbone to cheekbone, a tattoo on his left arm of a cross, and inked wings on his back.

Apparel: A bull's sun-bleached skull reconstituted as a hat, shoulder armor made from some sort of metal (in the shape of a leaf on his left shoulder that is attached there via a strap on his arm), a clawed metal gauntlet for his right arm, and a pair of reconstituted jeans made into a sort of armor, once again using bone, and a pair of aged combat boots with bone toeguards. He has a belt around his waist that holds a few vials of liquid, two sickles, and two ice picks. His massive Waraxe is strapped to his back.
Weapons: Two Sickles, two ice picks, and a massive waraxe.
Talents / Skills:
- Skilled with his waraxe.
- Quick-Witted.
- Somewhat charasmatic.
- Iron will
- Agile, Nimble.
Personality: A relatively nice guy, if not slightly dumb-looking. Don't let his slightly tilted head and glazed eyes fool you, Leon is as smart as he is fast, though really only strong enough to wield his axe properly. He's not very quick to anger, and would really rather just rather hang out and talk than pick fights with people. He hasn't been known to be particularly nice to people he doesn't like, though he'll often only say "I don't like you much" and leave it at that. In other words, for a guy with some pretty raw luck, he's pretty happy-go-lucky, if not somewhat of a snark at times.

Biography: Leon got a raw deal, having only his Grandfather as a guardian due to his mother dieing of bloodloss (doing what, he'll never know) and his father disappearing shortly afterwards, about a week after he was born. To make matters worse, he was born a bastard. Hailing from a long like of hunters, Leon is one of the rare cases of ones that didn't quite make the cut due to being too short and with the near-complete lack of muscle tone. Leon, not one to be put off by the words of others, decided it best to bring back the head of a bull. For months, he traveled the lands in search of one, surviving off of the beasts he had felled. None of them being bulls, he continued his search.

One day, when rations were running low, and Leon's energy was running low, he bumped into one. A big, hulking bull. Armed with only a massive waraxe and the will to return home, Leon charged. Leon won. Leon returned to find his village half-devastated. It wasn't his half, granted, but it was a half, ravaged by bandits staved off for the day. His elder grandfather was still alive and well, and when Leon returned with the head of the bull, he turned out to be well received, since his village needed all the help they could get, even if it was some wirey, half-asleep looking, bastard-punk.

That night, Leon fought bravely. Leon fought valiantly. Leon lost. When he came to, he noticed that he had survived the night pretty well, only save for the scar on his face which was bleeding profusely. Taking the shirt-cloth off of one of his fallen comrades, he made a makeshift bandaid and checked his immediate surroundings. The only house that still stood was the house next to his grandfather's, and when Leon went to see who was inside, he found that there was no one. Leon was alone, and thought to be dead.

Leon walked away.
Edited by The Milkman, Sep 9 2010, 03:12 PM.
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Your fate is mine to decide.
I actually have a couple of questions...

1. How many people will you accept before you start?
2. Would it be possible for you to reserve a spot for me? I'm stuck on my mobile and I'll need a computer for such a large bio.
3. Would you accept purple eyes as a genetic mutation?
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Just what I had in mind. Everything dead on earth, except us.
That was wonderfully written. I'm writing a bio up now, will try to get it to you by tomorrow afternoon at the latest because of school.
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Sep 9 2010, 04:24 AM
I actually have a couple of questions...

1. How many people will you accept before you start?
2. Would it be possible for you to reserve a spot for me? I'm stuck on my mobile and I'll need a computer for such a large bio.
3. Would you accept purple eyes as a genetic mutation?
As of present, there's no set limit of players, but if such a thing should apply before you can complete a character, I will wait for you to catch up before really starting the game. And purple's fine if you wish. I'll accept it without the necessitation of mutation in fact.
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Sep 9 2010, 06:04 AM
That was wonderfully written. I'm writing a bio up now, will try to get it to you by tomorrow afternoon at the latest because of school.
Fantastic, I look forward to it...!
Edited by Ark Rotarl, Sep 9 2010, 06:52 AM.
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Plan B character, hope this one fits.

Full Name: Ramzin Kellsholava
Aliases / Nicknames: Kellsho
Title(s): Snake Eyes
Age / DOB: 24
Gender: Male
Race / Ethnicity: Anthro / Part Hare, Part Snake
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 150
Build: Skinny/Athletic

Eye Color: Green
Hair Style / Color: Dark Tan
Skin Tone: Tan
Markings: None

Apparel: See here
Weapons:
- Cross Bow named Viper. This cross bow is a three in one. It shoots bullets, for one, but it also has a shotgun feature to it. There is a switch on the gun that activates the shotgun. Three shots can be fired, cocking the gun after each fire, and once all three shots are fired the gun switches back to its normal single shot bullets to prevent overheating or damage.
- Viper's Teeth. The gun has two curved blades on it, which gives the gun the crossbow look. The blades can be pulled out and used for hand to hand combat, making the gun look like a crossbow with out the bow part. The two blades are tucked in when carried on his back, but when he takes it out and aims, the blades fling out to the side, giving it the crossbow look.

Talents / Skills:
- Binocular Eye, his eyes are extremely sharp, and they can even 'zoom in' should he want to get a better look. He rarely uses this, since he likes up close fights. After all, hes a rabbit, and rabbits have good eye sight.
- Snake Strikes, also known as speed striking. His hand to hand striking speed is greater then a snake when it bites. But like a snake, this snake strike can only be done once within a combo.

Personality: Kellsho is your average out cast, a bit of a longer, and to be honest slightly shy. He is a bit odd once he starts to open up, and a bit of a dare devil as well. He doesn't like the fact that he is seen as a threat to others or that he looks mean. He likes attention, and likes to be talked to and befriended. However, what crazy person would approach someone like him looking for friendship? So, he naturally treats others as he has been treated. He actually doesn't like killing, but will if needed. According to how he was raised, killing should be his first option in everything.

Biography: My name is Ramzin, Ramzin Kellsholava. My family and friends know me as Kell or Kellsho. I guess I have no friends, so just my family really. Everyone else knows me as Snake Eyes. I'm an outlaw, been one after my fight with an old enemy. Eventually I got to that age where I would go on my own into this newly formed world and make a name for myself. Its been so many years since I last saw my birth place. I've been traveling forever it seems, going to place to place, picking up roamers here and there on what exactly happened 200 years ago. I don't pick up much, only cause I choose to not stay in one area too long. The fact that I followed into my father's footsteps for a while is one reason. It doesn't help that I look like him, only my fur is a bit lighter then his. As for my eyes, well, I was bit by one of my old rivals. He was a snake, a very mild tempered snake that had issues with my family since before I was born.

It wasn't surprising that we'd end up facing each other, me and old Tim Rattle. Of course, his family were part of some rumored mafia that started up after the 'big bang.' During our fight, the dirty punk bit me as too kill me once I finished him off. He knew he wasn't winning, so his last attempt was to kill me with his venom. I nearly died that day, as well, almost lost my sight. I was told that they did everything they could to stop the venom from spreading. As to what exactly they did I'm not sure. All I know is that I woke up with sight, better then normal, actually. I was hospitalized for a few months. Once I looked into the mirror, I noticed that my eyes were green instead of brown. As well, they were starting to take the shape of snake-like eyes. Technology could only do so much since we lost most of it 200 years ago. However, I did some digging around about my families history, and found out why my family and Tim's family didn't get along. A classic Romeo and Juliet story unfolded in front of me. Someone from our side of the family had affairs with someone on Tim's side of the family. They had three children, two boys and a girl. My dad was one of those boys, hence his ill tempted manner and his quick-draw shooting.

Turns out that when Tim bit me, the venom that was already in my blood thanks to my father, had awakened, resulting in my eyes changing as I grew older. In order to dig up the secretes of my past, I had some killing to do, as Tim's family weren't just going to invite me to do some digging around in their backyard, so to speak. I soon earned a title of a killer and murder, seeing as how I went on a rampage, going from place to place and killing those who got in my way. I was in need of answers at the time, and I was going to get them regardless of who I killed. Soon, Tim's so called mafia family put a bounty on my head. They were scared that I had dug up some other skeletons that they didn't want to be publicized. I might have, but they weren't important to me at the time, nor are they important to me now.

Time went on and I soon found the answers that I wanted, resulting in that said Rome and Juliet story I had mentioned before. At this time, my eyes had already taken the shape of that of a snake. This is when I was given the name Snake Eyes. Many bounty hunters tried to kill me or capture me. But by some miracle, and a lot of skill, I escaped. Those that survived my encounter, or should I say when I escaped their encounter, would swear and utter things like 'damn Snake Eyes!' and so on. I actually hated that I was refereed to as Snake Eyes. Now, I simply just roam around. Trying to not get identified by others and bounty hunters. However, I have a weakness for those in need of help. I strive to not be like my father, and actually help people. At least, to me, doing this will balance out all those lives I took in order to understand my past.
Edited by L Dragon, Sep 9 2010, 04:00 PM.
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@ Zed

To begin with, you didn't really specify how or why he has horns. The races that are applicable in this RP are humans and anthropomorphic beings (humanoids). Demons, vampires, werewolves, and so on don't really exist in this setting.

Please review your character and make adjustments appropriately. If you feel I should include the aforementioned limitation, let me know and I'll add it to the foreword for others to observe.

@ lilfate

As great of a biography as this, it's still not compliant with one of my previously stated rules.

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Your character shouldn't be from a time before the disaster hit the world.
Also, I'm not so sure I was specific about races, but I stated humans and anthros are applicable. Vampires don't technically apply.

It would also not be possible to have your character being experimented on as there hasn't been such use of a technical science in over 200 years. Please review the setting of this RP and your character to ensure he applies to the RP settings correctly.
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Ah, forgive me for skimming, For one, I'm kinda sick and my vision isn't too well. So, I edited my post and threw in my plan B character. Hope he fits in and that his bio story is okay.
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Chapter 1: Openly Close | Chapter 2: Kamelot Tol-e-maC | Chapter 3: Found Lost | Chapter 4: Reaper What You Soul | Chapter 5: Openly Reapers in Lost Tolemac | Chapter 6: Follow the Reaper | Chapter 7: Don't Follow the Reaper | Chapter 8: Fight Yourself, Die Yourself | Chapter 9: Masquerader Massacre | Chapter 10: THE Enemy | Chapter 11: Gulliver | Chapter 12: Finally, Unlimited Madness | Chapter 12: Finally, Loki's Madness(alternate ending)

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"Beast men"...

Thing is that the idea is that they aren't primeval beings that recently evolved to sentience. They've been around since before the incident and have been apart of society for over a thousand years now. And your character still does not comply with the rule I mentioned that you cannot be from before the disaster. You fail to explain how being bitten by a snake just makes your character an outlaw that much more. More to the point, people aren't born outlaws. You become one through a string of major criminal acts. Please review your character.
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Last attempt as fixing this while I'm sick. If it still doesn't muscle up to what you want, then I'll try again once I'm all better and not feeling like poop. Sorry for making being so... ugh, I can't even think right now. Anyways, hope this will do.
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Chapter 1: Openly Close | Chapter 2: Kamelot Tol-e-maC | Chapter 3: Found Lost | Chapter 4: Reaper What You Soul | Chapter 5: Openly Reapers in Lost Tolemac | Chapter 6: Follow the Reaper | Chapter 7: Don't Follow the Reaper | Chapter 8: Fight Yourself, Die Yourself | Chapter 9: Masquerader Massacre | Chapter 10: THE Enemy | Chapter 11: Gulliver | Chapter 12: Finally, Unlimited Madness | Chapter 12: Finally, Loki's Madness(alternate ending)

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Horns ain't part of any sort of demon-ish presence or what-have-you, but yeah. Okay. I'll cut that bit (like I did the part about Methemoglobinemia, since blue skin prolly wouldn't fit quite right, now would it).


Edit: Fix'd. Quick'n easy. Like fryin' eggs.
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@ lilfate

You're getting close, but you need to tone down his ability to jump. That is absurdly too powerful and he could just jump out of every combat situation, making him somewhat of a god modder in a fight. Tone down on the superhuman abilities and he might work.

@ Zed

Spiffy work. This will do. You're in.
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*tick, tick* Deleted![/Lair Lair reference]

Once again, sorry for wasting like, a whole telling you I edited my character several times. As well, thank you for helping me realize where I need to work on when creating my new characters. :D Ugh, lil sick is lil sick. :/
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Chapter 1: Otogi | Chapter 2: Claws, Rifle, and Wind Chain | Chapter 3: Crimson, Psychic, and Mage Chain | Chapter 4: Eclipse Blossom | Chapter 5: Death Chain | Chapter 6: Royal Blood | Chapter 7: Cold Chain | Chapter 8: Siege | Chapter 9: Memories of Old Kingdom | Chapter 10: Tactic, Purge, and the Fight | Chapter 11: Four Shadows | Chapter 12: Three Letters | Chapter 13: Two Sources
Sonic Blast Madness Fanfic
Chapter 1: Openly Close | Chapter 2: Kamelot Tol-e-maC | Chapter 3: Found Lost | Chapter 4: Reaper What You Soul | Chapter 5: Openly Reapers in Lost Tolemac | Chapter 6: Follow the Reaper | Chapter 7: Don't Follow the Reaper | Chapter 8: Fight Yourself, Die Yourself | Chapter 9: Masquerader Massacre | Chapter 10: THE Enemy | Chapter 11: Gulliver | Chapter 12: Finally, Unlimited Madness | Chapter 12: Finally, Loki's Madness(alternate ending)

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