Metroid: Life of a Minion

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Metroid: Life of a Minion; :O A Metroid comic on a Sonic forum? BLASPHEMY!
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Omega RKB	Aug 30 2010, 08:32 PM Post #1
All that was. Posts: 800 Group: D Rank Hero Member #1,767 Joined: July 29, 2007 Playstation Network ID: Reeckensall Xbox Live Gamertag: Omega RKB 3DS Friend Code: 3093-7576-7473 Steam ID: OmegaRKB Game Currently Playing: Metal Gear Solid: Peace Walker	Yeah, i got bored at about 8 PM and stayed up until 5 AM (Now) making a Metroid webcomic, before realising i had no one to show it to, then i noticed that it said in the description that i CAN put non sonic comics here so i have! (Please don't kill me xD) Anyway, its a Metroid comic, based many years after fusion since chronologically thats the last one, but its from the point of view of the Bosses and Minor enemies currently living on the Rebuilt world of Zebes. Click on this to go to the Homepage of the Comic! So yeah, i would really appreciate some Extremely Harsh Constructive critisism, every little thing that bugs you and possibly ways to fix it... Oh and slap me round the face if i start making it crap such as keep breaking the fourth wall or stray too far from accurate Metroid Lore and stuff like that, or if it plain old just starts getting Silly/Boring/Innapropriate I won't be able to stick to a release schedule as I start college next week and will be busy with stuff and might forget sometime but yeah i'll update it whenever i can (Be bothered xD) Edit: Incase you're just joining us, click here start on the first page! Edited by Omega RKB, Aug 31 2010, 05:37 PM.



Ludichaos	Aug 30 2010, 10:55 PM Post #2
[Outrealm Vagabond] Posts: 4,994 Group: C Rank Legend Member #11,272 Joined: July 25, 2010	I just go this image of Samus as the loveable oaf as a result of that last panel. Well done. I can see no real things that bug me at the moment ~~THAT'S NOT HOW METROID GOES WHAT IS THIS?!~~ so it's all clear for me. And given that Other M is coming out in a day and a bit I'm in a Metroid mood anyway. Looking foward to future installments.
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The Milkman	Aug 30 2010, 11:24 PM Post #3
I am The Milkman. Posts: 523 Group: B Rank Knight Member #11,336 Joined: August 21, 2010	I thought it was funny, but. Problems. The caption bubbles. They bother me a bit. They don't really fit the comic, I feel. Also, don't be afraid to make the sprites 2x in cases of a normal strip. Oh, yeah. Don't skip all over the place. There should not be another ELSEWHERE and then a MEANWHILE right after it. Sort of breaks the flow, I feel. I'd elaborate, but it appears I left my brain on the stove.
	My milk is fortified with what the world wants. What the world deserves.


Strawhat Luffy~NH~	Aug 31 2010, 05:43 AM Post #4
And can I get a hot tub! Posts: 702 Group: E Rank Hero Member #328 Joined: December 6, 2006	Zebes has been rebuilt it can only mean one thing...Motherbrain is up to no good! xD haha. Goood job bro the comics coming along nicely.
	The Fatal Five: Kronic, Nights, Chrono, Anemos, Cloud


Omega RKB	Aug 31 2010, 06:26 AM Post #5
All that was. Posts: 800 Group: D Rank Hero Member #1,767 Joined: July 29, 2007 Playstation Network ID: Reeckensall Xbox Live Gamertag: Omega RKB 3DS Friend Code: 3093-7576-7473 Steam ID: OmegaRKB Game Currently Playing: Metal Gear Solid: Peace Walker	Thanks everyone, thats got me in the mood to start a second issue/strip/whatever straight away! @Zed: I'm still trying to figure out how to make a good Speech bubble in photoshop at the moment as they annoy me too, frankly the biggest problem in my opinion is that there just too big for the tiny amount of text they hold, also, i think i'm going to expand my template to 8 panels long and maybe 3 panels tall so i don't have to skip around to get everything i want into one strip/comic/issue/thingie Sorry for double post but i'd prefer not to mix updates with comments, anyway: Click me or else... Omega RKB So yeah, i would really appreciate some Extremely Harsh Constructive critisism, every little thing that bugs you and possibly ways to fix it... Edit: Aha! Auto-seperator thingie! Edited by Omega RKB, Aug 31 2010, 05:34 PM.



Strawhat Luffy~NH~	Sep 2 2010, 08:35 AM Post #6
And can I get a hot tub! Posts: 702 Group: E Rank Hero Member #328 Joined: December 6, 2006	Keep them coming bro!
	The Fatal Five: Kronic, Nights, Chrono, Anemos, Cloud


Omega RKB	Sep 7 2010, 10:07 AM Post #7
All that was. Posts: 800 Group: D Rank Hero Member #1,767 Joined: July 29, 2007 Playstation Network ID: Reeckensall Xbox Live Gamertag: Omega RKB 3DS Friend Code: 3093-7576-7473 Steam ID: OmegaRKB Game Currently Playing: Metal Gear Solid: Peace Walker	Updated (Two Three)



Strawhat Luffy~NH~	Sep 7 2010, 08:21 PM Post #8
And can I get a hot tub! Posts: 702 Group: E Rank Hero Member #328 Joined: December 6, 2006	Sweet! I noticed that you said you having writing block, don't worry bro the ides will come again!
	The Fatal Five: Kronic, Nights, Chrono, Anemos, Cloud


Omega RKB	Sep 8 2010, 03:47 AM Post #9
All that was. Posts: 800 Group: D Rank Hero Member #1,767 Joined: July 29, 2007 Playstation Network ID: Reeckensall Xbox Live Gamertag: Omega RKB 3DS Friend Code: 3093-7576-7473 Steam ID: OmegaRKB Game Currently Playing: Metal Gear Solid: Peace Walker	Yeah, you're probably right, i mean i've managed atleast one a week so far so it's not really that bad, and if i have a couple of bland episodes, meh.



The Milkman	Sep 8 2010, 04:24 AM Post #10
I am The Milkman. Posts: 523 Group: B Rank Knight Member #11,336 Joined: August 21, 2010	Thing is, it's probably one of the better sprite comics on SmackJeeves. Being that Smackjeeves is essentially a pisstank of sprite comics, this is a compliment. I still don't exactly LIKE it, though, and I'm having an odd time trying to explain to you JUST WHY I DETEST IT, which is funny because that's what I like to do. Hopefully I'll have more to say as the series progresses and I get my rageface back.
	My milk is fortified with what the world wants. What the world deserves.


Ludichaos	Sep 8 2010, 05:43 AM Post #11
[Outrealm Vagabond] Posts: 4,994 Group: C Rank Legend Member #11,272 Joined: July 25, 2010	Heh, the second one got a bit of a laugh out of me, mainly due the "I blasted your dad but it must have been Mother Brain" bit. Anyways, take your time with the idea process, it can happen with plots and whatnot. It'll come to you eventually. \|P
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Katsuko	Oct 12 2010, 02:00 PM Post #12
Sandopolis Act 1 Posts: 1,687 Group: S Rank Hero Member #1,933 Joined: August 14, 2007 Gender: Male	xDD Poor Nova <3 But yes. Hmm... Idea...block. I suggest a free-write ^^ Just sit down and write out the dialogue to every ridiculous idea for a comic that pops into your head. Continue to do this for maybe fifteen minutes every day until A) you start having fun (in which case you should go longer than 15 minutes \|3) or B) You produce a good idea <3
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Lady Miracle	Oct 13 2010, 01:44 PM Post #13
[insert something cheerful here] Posts: 8,037 Group: Former Monarchs Member #9,289 Joined: August 20, 2008	That got a quick chuckle out of me.
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Phoenix-Saturn	Oct 14 2010, 11:03 AM Post #14
i just wwant to be beautiful for this one month Posts: 7,528 Group: A Rank Legend Member #10,191 Joined: July 27, 2009	Same here, though I'm not super familiar with Metroid.
	i'm actually really sorry bout this unfashionably late as alwways I... Am... THE WEREHOG SUPPORTER! MUHAHAHAHA! Howl


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