Kronic!

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Kronic!; my first ever charcter made it on sonic turbine a while sgo. Feed back please !
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Strawhat Luffy~NH~	Aug 26 2010, 12:30 PM Post #1
And can I get a hot tub! Posts: 702 Group: E Rank Hero Member #328 Joined: December 6, 2006	Name: Kronic the hedgehog Nickname:Kronic Age: 15 Species:Hedgehog Gender: male Height: 5'feet Weight:67 IQ: 115 Marital Status: Single DOB: march 5 Birthplace: Station Square Residence: Mystic Ruins Occupation:Legendary item finder Social Class:He talks to people that he likes Economic Class: Has money sometimes and sometimes he doesn't Alignment: Good Top Speed: 120mph Element: moon and space Normal Attacks: Moonlight slash-Takes out his moonlight sword, and forms the moon, then he hit's his opponents with lighting fast slashes Stardust shower-Calls upon the stars and they fall into his opponents Special moves Twin moonlight slash-Forms the moon with his two special katanas, then he dashes to his opponents and start's slashing as fast as he can Meteor blast-Jumps as high as he can then shoots a meteor that hits all of his all opponents Abilities and Aptitude: jumping and swordmanship Hobbies and Talents: swimming,hanging with friends, and finding treasure Weaknesses:Darkness and water Personal Facts: He likes cheeseburgers Friends: None right now Rivals: Nights Enemies: Eggman,anybody who try's to be evil, and robot's Known Relatives: Nights Likes/Favorites activities: Just relaxing and listening to nature.Watching his little brother Nights. Dislikes/Least favorite activities: Cleaning,Homework, and losing to evil Favorite color(s): red Catch Phrase(s): None Personality: mellow and easy going Physical Appearances Color: gray Eyes: blue Hair: mid long Nose: Normal for a hedgehog Ears: Normal for a hedgehog Tail: Normal for a hedgehog Attire: nothing right now Items & Weapon: Two katanas and the moonlight sword Physical Techniques:He knows how to cook. Vehicles: A bike Theme song:none Background story: Well it all started when Kronic was born.He was borned in Station Square.He had mom and a dad,but one day something bad happened to his parents they were killed in a car accident back when he was 11 and his brother Nights was 8.They moved away from Staton Sqaure so they could get away from the pain of what happened to there parents.They lived in Mystic Ruins and now Kronic collect's lengendary treasure to get over the pain.
	The Fatal Five: Kronic, Nights, Chrono, Anemos, Cloud


The Milkman	Aug 27 2010, 02:30 AM Post #2
I am The Milkman. Posts: 523 Group: B Rank Knight Member #11,336 Joined: August 21, 2010	Huh. This looks a lot like Yves's character sheet right here. That's not a bad thing, by any means. What is bad (Well not so much bad as it is bland is your lack of descriptions. Like, for instance, what the HELL is a "Legendary Item Finder"? Your average reader wouldn't know that. Does he have a built in item finder and wave his hand around the beach all day? Does he go "Bweeeeooowp" frequently when in the presence of metal? You see what happens when you don't describe things? WEIRD INFERRING HAPPENS. Often times at your expense. Hilariously. Another description you could use is for your colors. Okay, so the dude's eyes are blue. Are they light, or dark blue? Can you make the color resonate inside the mental recesses of those reading? Simply put, does it look like the sky, the sea, or one of those sweet cars you see going down the road at excess speeds of 200+ miles an hour? All of those hues of blue are very different, and using them in your description doesn't make you sound like any less of a man for writing it. Unless you want it to be. Do try to not go overboard on it, though. A sentence or two will suffice. We don't need to know EVERYTHING about those damn squishy ocular gumballs you creatures hold in your skulls, nor any other part of your squishy-with-a-crunch-anatomy. I'd write more, but I'm at a tragic loss of giving a damn, currently. Yes, I wrote all of this while not giving a damn. Impressive, non? Truth be told, I do that all the time, so it really shouldn't be. Edited by The Milkman, Aug 27 2010, 04:57 AM.
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Strawhat Luffy~NH~	Aug 27 2010, 06:18 AM Post #3
And can I get a hot tub! Posts: 702 Group: E Rank Hero Member #328 Joined: December 6, 2006	Zed Aug 27 2010, 02:30 AM Huh. This looks a lot like Yves's character sheet right here. That's not a bad thing, by any means. What is bad (Well not so much bad as it is bland is your lack of descriptions. Like, for instance, what the HELL is a "Legendary Item Finder"? Your average reader wouldn't know that. Does he have a built in item finder and wave his hand around the beach all day? Does he go "Bweeeeooowp" frequently when in the presence of metal? You see what happens when you don't describe things? WEIRD INFERRING HAPPENS. Often times at your expense. Hilariously. Another description you could use is for your colors. Okay, so the dude's eyes are blue. Are they light, or dark blue? Can you make the color resonate inside the mental recesses of those reading? Simply put, does it look like the sky, the sea, or one of those sweet cars you see going down the road at excess speeds of 200+ miles an hour? All of those hues of blue are very different, and using them in your description doesn't make you sound like any less of a man for writing it. Unless you want it to be. Do try to not go overboard on it, though. A sentence or two will suffice. We don't need to know EVERYTHING about those damn squishy ocular gumballs you creatures hold in your skulls, nor any other part of your squishy-with-a-crunch-anatomy. I'd write more, but I'm at a tragic loss of giving a damn, currently. Yes, I wrote all of this while not giving a damn. Impressive, non? Truth be told, I do that all the time, so it really shouldn't be. Haha Thanks Zed I like your dont give a damn attitude.
	The Fatal Five: Kronic, Nights, Chrono, Anemos, Cloud


Silv�	Sep 2 2010, 01:47 PM Post #4
Trying to go with a theme this time Posts: 3,032 Group: E Rank Legend Member #11,365 Joined: August 31, 2010	I say Kronic and Takeru could make good rivals
	Something I made long ago My Stamps Agnosticism, explained Quote: I neither advocate nor demote the successes and demonizations of man's science or divine visions. I'm just saying following books translated by mankind, capable of deviant sin isn't a source of reputable knowledge I'd plan one's own life around or ahead to. I'm without a faith in either of which not because I choose to be jaded or blind to them, but because I would rather figure things out through my own eyes, not ones of others' zeal. It would seem askew of me to correct your last statement just the same. But it is arrogant to assume my faith lies in something as paltry as technical aspiration. ~Moddex Its that simple. For my cousin, Akimoto Tieko: My ode to Akimoto "Moto-Moto" Tieko. You will forever be the Samurai you wished to be when you grew up. My color My Characters No tags -Kenji (Person)- #8b0000 -Hachiro Alakdan- -Mobius Koch Lingenfelter- #000 -Kenji Bushido (OC)- #005682 -Vriska Serket- #004F00 -Masumi Yuriko- More to come.... DeviantART Page FTW


Strawhat Luffy~NH~	Sep 2 2010, 01:50 PM Post #5
And can I get a hot tub! Posts: 702 Group: E Rank Hero Member #328 Joined: December 6, 2006	I think so too. I've been looking for a good rival.
	The Fatal Five: Kronic, Nights, Chrono, Anemos, Cloud


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