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Topic Started: Aug 4 2010, 03:46 PM (361 Views)
Omega RKB
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All that was.
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Edited by Omega RKB, Dec 23 2012, 10:41 AM.
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Zak
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hmm...he's okay. His name might need a little tweaking, after all we already have 8 robots named after greek letters, and one of them is Omega, so you might want to change his name as to avoid confusion.

frankly, to me he sounds a lot like Omega, so maybe you could re-do the back story a little as to not sound so rip-offish.

And a large weaponry isn't to unique, most robot characters have them.
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Zak
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mostly the whole "left for dead by his creator then released and seeking revenge" thing.
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It's a lot better now. good work.
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