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Omega RKB	Aug 4 2010, 03:46 PM Post #1
All that was. Posts: 800 Group: D Rank Hero Member #1,767 Joined: July 29, 2007 Playstation Network ID: Reeckensall Xbox Live Gamertag: Omega RKB 3DS Friend Code: 3093-7576-7473 Steam ID: OmegaRKB Game Currently Playing: Metal Gear Solid: Peace Walker	___ Edited by Omega RKB, Dec 23 2012, 10:41 AM.



Zak	Aug 4 2010, 06:01 PM Post #2
For The Circle Posts: 4,002 Group: D Rank Legend Member #9,748 Joined: February 10, 2009 3DS Friend Code: 1118-0225-4062 Steam ID: zakth686	hmm...he's okay. His name might need a little tweaking, after all we already have 8 robots named after greek letters, and one of them is Omega, so you might want to change his name as to avoid confusion. frankly, to me he sounds a lot like Omega, so maybe you could re-do the back story a little as to not sound so rip-offish. And a large weaponry isn't to unique, most robot characters have them.
	"Ati Ramar, In defeat we learn."


Zak	Aug 5 2010, 08:33 AM Post #3
For The Circle Posts: 4,002 Group: D Rank Legend Member #9,748 Joined: February 10, 2009 3DS Friend Code: 1118-0225-4062 Steam ID: zakth686	mostly the whole "left for dead by his creator then released and seeking revenge" thing.
	"Ati Ramar, In defeat we learn."


Zak	Aug 5 2010, 10:03 AM Post #4
For The Circle Posts: 4,002 Group: D Rank Legend Member #9,748 Joined: February 10, 2009 3DS Friend Code: 1118-0225-4062 Steam ID: zakth686	It's a lot better now. good work.
	"Ati Ramar, In defeat we learn."


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