Sonic Seven

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Sonic Seven
Tweet Topic Started: May 12 2010, 10:14 AM (295 Views)
Boota	May 12 2010, 10:14 AM Post #1
STEP BACK, ANTI-SPIRAL! Posts: 2,348 Group: S Rank Hero Member #866 Joined: April 11, 2007	Reboot Issues Issue 1 Issue 2 Episodes -none- Scenes Scene 1 Scene 2
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Phoenix-Saturn	May 12 2010, 10:41 AM Post #2
i just wwant to be beautiful for this one month Posts: 7,528 Group: A Rank Legend Member #10,191 Joined: July 27, 2009	They're too small to read. Resize please?
	i'm actually really sorry bout this unfashionably late as alwways I... Am... THE WEREHOG SUPPORTER! MUHAHAHAHA! Howl


Cee Jay Haych	May 12 2010, 11:58 AM Post #3
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	Phoenix_Saturn May 12 2010, 10:41 AM They're too small to read. Resize please? Try clicking on the picture.



Boota	May 12 2010, 12:07 PM Post #4
STEP BACK, ANTI-SPIRAL! Posts: 2,348 Group: S Rank Hero Member #866 Joined: April 11, 2007	All that aside, CRITIQUE! Be brutal.
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Phoenix-Saturn	May 12 2010, 12:27 PM Post #5
i just wwant to be beautiful for this one month Posts: 7,528 Group: A Rank Legend Member #10,191 Joined: July 27, 2009	It still doesn't work. I am unable to resize the pictures.
	i'm actually really sorry bout this unfashionably late as alwways I... Am... THE WEREHOG SUPPORTER! MUHAHAHAHA! Howl


Boota	May 12 2010, 12:39 PM Post #6
STEP BACK, ANTI-SPIRAL! Posts: 2,348 Group: S Rank Hero Member #866 Joined: April 11, 2007	There's a 'Full Image' link right below each picture. If you're not getting it you've got a problem. :/
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Zak	May 12 2010, 12:57 PM Post #7
For The Circle Posts: 4,002 Group: D Rank Legend Member #9,748 Joined: February 10, 2009 3DS Friend Code: 1118-0225-4062 Steam ID: zakth686	Try right click, copy image location, new tab/window, paste Since you insist on brutal critique, I 'll give it too you. The Plot makes no sense. I can't even tell what's going on the first comic. I assume they are sonics from a parallel universe, but once again, that's a flat out guess. The sprite's are horrid, don't mix bitages (i.e. genesis metal Sonic with Advance Sonic, With Custom Super sonic) It looks really bad. Don't do that dotted-line-eye thing. it looks bad, and if you make all the sprites face him, the context can assure the reader they are all staring at him. Make sure things actually make sense. There is no way Mecha Sonic can just go super for no reason. This isn't Super Mario Brothers Z. And How did Human Sonic hold onto the booster with out being burnt? The comic needs a lot of work. One thing I would suggest is to not restrict yourself to Paint. Try downloading Paint.NET, it's free, and can make comics look a ton better. You should also read a few tutorials on how to use it.
	"Ati Ramar, In defeat we learn."


Boota	May 12 2010, 01:59 PM Post #8
STEP BACK, ANTI-SPIRAL! Posts: 2,348 Group: S Rank Hero Member #866 Joined: April 11, 2007	ZakMan May 12 2010, 12:57 PM Try right click, copy image location, new tab/window, paste Since you insist on brutal critique, I 'll give it too you. The Plot makes no sense. I can't even tell what's going on the first comic. I assume they are sonics from a parallel universe, but once again, that's a flat out guess. The sprite's are horrid, don't mix bitages (i.e. genesis metal Sonic with Advance Sonic, With Custom Super sonic) It looks really bad. Don't do that dotted-line-eye thing. it looks bad, and if you make all the sprites face him, the context can assure the reader they are all staring at him. Make sure things actually make sense. There is no way Mecha Sonic can just go super for no reason. This isn't Super Mario Brothers Z. And How did Human Sonic hold onto the booster with out being burnt? The comic needs a lot of work. One thing I would suggest is to not restrict yourself to Paint. Try downloading Paint.NET, it's free, and can make comics look a ton better. You should also read a few tutorials on how to use it. 1st: It's not supposed to make sense. I might explain it a bit more later in the comic, but it's still going to be very shallow because it's not a plot-driven comic. 2nd: That's on purpose. Again, I'll explain it later in the comic. 3rd: Yeeeeaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh I'm never going to do that again... 4th: They're not supposed to make sense. It's geared to be a bit ridiculous, although that's not elaborated on yet. 5th: I find it a lot easier to work with sprites in a barebones program like mspaint. I use GIMP not paint.NET, but I find mspaint to be easier for simple cut-and-pasting, which is what most of a sprite comic is. There are a few places where I found the quality to be lower than my usual standards (like the dotted lines), but from now on I'll probably go into GIMP when I need to do things that involve its superior firepower.
	The Pimp


Phoenix-Saturn	May 14 2010, 08:13 AM Post #9
i just wwant to be beautiful for this one month Posts: 7,528 Group: A Rank Legend Member #10,191 Joined: July 27, 2009	I thought it was moderately funny. SHUT UP AND FALL LIKE A MAN, CRACKA!
	i'm actually really sorry bout this unfashionably late as alwways I... Am... THE WEREHOG SUPPORTER! MUHAHAHAHA! Howl


Boota	May 19 2010, 11:54 AM Post #10
STEP BACK, ANTI-SPIRAL! Posts: 2,348 Group: S Rank Hero Member #866 Joined: April 11, 2007	After thinking for a bit, I decided to reboot. Click on "Reboot" for more info. This was what I originally was going to do, then I decided to do an exposition. Now I'm backtracking and removing the exposition.
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Bagi Hedgehog	May 20 2010, 08:13 AM Post #11
Its time to kick ass and chew bubblegum, and im all out of gum. Posts: 204 Group: D Rank Guardian Member #11,003 Joined: April 27, 2010	The new issue is really nice and i look forward to seeing more comics from you. Good luck!



Boota	May 20 2010, 10:56 AM Post #12
STEP BACK, ANTI-SPIRAL! Posts: 2,348 Group: S Rank Hero Member #866 Joined: April 11, 2007	Added Issue 2 and Scene 1. Thanks for the kind words. ^-^
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Bagi Hedgehog	May 21 2010, 07:55 AM Post #13
Its time to kick ass and chew bubblegum, and im all out of gum. Posts: 204 Group: D Rank Guardian Member #11,003 Joined: April 27, 2010	No problem, i will check out the new issue right away!



Boota	May 24 2010, 09:53 AM Post #14
STEP BACK, ANTI-SPIRAL! Posts: 2,348 Group: S Rank Hero Member #866 Joined: April 11, 2007	Added Scene 2.
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