doc the 3 tailed fox

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doc the 3 tailed fox
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doc the fox	Apr 28 2010, 12:37 PM Post #1
Angel Island Act 1 Posts: 29 Group: E Rank Adventurer Member #11,006 Joined: April 27, 2010	name:doc age: 13 Species: fox gender:male height: 5'7 powers: eletricity and teleportation likes: guns! and video games dislikes:eggman, shadow, fangirls and people who say there better wepons: ak47 rpg and a desert egle born:in a forest in africa orgin: when he was 4 his parents where killed and after 5 days without his parents a cybernetic hedgefox named andrew founded him and took him under his own at 11 he found the dark shard which holds untold powers his love:while at age 8 he found the potplant cosmo and ask tails what it was since tails was making a reviving ray he decided to bring back cosmo and since tails was with cream tails decided to give cosmo to doc now and they became bf/gf friends:sonic tails knukles amy blaze silver cosmo and cream rivles:shadow scorge anti tails and eggman likes to do: likes to play 360 and go on his labtop weakness: cold water
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Zak	Apr 28 2010, 01:34 PM Post #2
For The Circle Posts: 4,002 Group: D Rank Legend Member #9,748 Joined: February 10, 2009 3DS Friend Code: 1118-0225-4062 Steam ID: zakth686	'k lets start then, shall we? Quote: height: 5'7 Really tall for a sonic character. try around the 3 ft range. Quote: powers: eletricity and teleportation teleportation is considered godmodding. Quote: orgin: when he was 4 his parents where killed and after 5 days without his parents a cybernetic hedgefox named andrew founded him and took him under his own at 11 he found the dark shard which holds untold powers not the most original backstory ever... Quote: his love:while at age 8 he found the potplant cosmo and ask tails what it was since tails was making a reviving ray he decided to bring back cosmo and since tails was with cream tails decided to give cosmo to doc now and they became bf/gf I'm not sure he should even have a girlfriend at 13, plus not cosmo. Fancharacters should have light relationships with canon characters at best. this is taking it a little too far. Quote: friends:sonic tails knukles amy blaze silver cosmo and cream rivles:shadow scorge anti tails and eggman Rivals ≠ Enemies. again see the post above about cannon characters, and you need to get your universe strait. Your mixing Sonic X with the games with Archie here. Quote: likes to do: likes to play 360 and go on his labtop But he lives in a forest in Africa? Quote: weakness: cold water meaning battle weaknesses, and you should have more than one. this needs a lot of work, I'd take another look at it and re-haul the whole thing. Plus, you didn't include it in the back story, but a multiple tailed fox is a big no-no. Especially since I'm assuming he can fly with them.
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`TakeCare	Apr 29 2010, 09:12 AM Post #3
-sigh- Posts: 2,390 Group: S Rank Hero Member #9,520 Joined: November 29, 2008 Gender: Male 3DS Friend Code: ask Game Currently Playing: Smash 4	Zak doc height: 5'7 Really tall for a sonic character. try around the 3 ft range. Some people have problems trying to size down their FCs/furries to Sonic height. To be fair there's a simple way to do so. Just cut the height in half and you should have a Sonic-based height. (I guess...) Everything else that I would say has been said by Zak.
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~~Emily the fox~~	Apr 29 2010, 11:53 AM Post #4
Marble Garden Act 1 Posts: 141 Group: Continue? Member #10,940 Joined: April 18, 2010	Agreed, this is a pretty good character, just fix the errors.
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