Senna

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Senna; For more mature roleplays. (not kid friendly)
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Red Fox	Apr 22 2010, 03:47 PM Post #1
Ice Cap Act 1 Posts: 226 Group: C Rank Guardian Member #9,129 Joined: July 3, 2008	Here's Senna's bio:(before you read this be aware all the clothing was made by 4 girlfriends of mine. NOT ME! NOT ME! so....Xd keep that in mind. Oh & trueaim if you read this can you delete the history & replace it with the one you came up with. I lost it so stuck with the one I made.) Name: Senna Species: Ferret Gender: Female Age: 22 Occupation: Wherever the money takes her. Yet will only do so much for money. However is a total sucker for gold and platinum. Likes: money, gold, platinum, anything worth a pretty penny and ‘having fun’. Dislikes: poor people, being double crossed, duped out of her money and screwing up. Weapon of Choice: prefers ranged weaponry yet keeps falling back to her brawling skills due to inability to maintain a steady supply of bullets. Personality: when off the job she’s a very friendly, funny & happy go lucky girl. Is also known to have one too many drinks. With this in mind she has many incidents which never remember. Absolutely hates being hit on making her a very difficult catch. Senna is very well known for wearing minimal to absolutely no clothing in public. Catch phrase: “If guys can walk around naked why the hell can’t I?” Physical: History: Senna grew up a fairly average lifestyle. For 16 years the ferret was raised & loved by her parents. Around her 17th b-day her mom left for a business trip leaving just Senna and her dad. During this time she grew very rebellious & ran away from home. When asked why the ferret refuses to answer. For her next 3 years the ferret was homeless. During these 3 years Senna learned to use her body in ways that creeped & intrigued people. Around her 17th year the ferret decided to explore her body. At first the ferret was pretty much average unable to nothing out of the ordinary. Yet after starving for so many years Senna grew desperate. At 19 she noticed some acrobats stuffing themselves into boxes & stuff. Seeing this gave her an idea. It was painful but Senna learned to bend her body to fit small spaces. After making $500 by her 20th b-day Senna disappeared. There have been reports of Senna hanging around bars during the night & doing stuff others refuse to no matter how much is offered. She is wanted dead by many organizations yet at the same time all are looking to employ her for her skills. Weakness: Alcohol, money, gold, platinum, dulled senses when drunk, deaf in one ear and is drawn to anything shiny, extremely low endurance Strengths: high stamina (comes from constant running and nigh life), ability to turn on her fight or flight instinct any time, contortionist, 8 years of rifle & heavy weapons training, lifetimes worth of melee training (all arts(excels at boxing style)). Attributes Overall Body Strength: 4 Upper body Strength: 2 Lower body strength: 2 Reflexes: seven Physical Stamina: 10 Mental Stamina: 2 Magical Stamina: 0 Intelligence: 7 when sober 2-4 when drunk Speed: 7 Rifle skill: 9 Heavy weapons skill: 8 Melee combat (defensive): 5 Melee combat (offensive): 6 Weapon maintenance: 9 Dexterity: 9 Overall Stamina: 9.5 Overall weapons skill: 6 Overall melee skill: 3 Overall speed: 5 Vitality: surprisingly high Accuracy: 75% Reliability: 5 Attitude: depends Friends: anyone with money or anyone reliable. Side note: depending on the role-play when drunk the ferret is extremely gullible and willing to do anything when drunk. When in areas were nature overtakes human expansion Senna becomes extremely feral. Vehicles: 6 gear motorcycle, light armor (high speed) military issue hum-vee, and a C-130 airplane. Weapons (off the job): mace, police baton and taser. (Keeps losing these if gets drunk. Thus leaving vulnerable.) Weapons (dessert): M16 with 10-18 clips Weapons (forest): silenced pistol Weapons (urban): Russian heavy assault rifle (or American if can afford at time) with 4 clips, pistol with 8 clips & a M4 with 6 clips. Tech: unknown liquid in eye. Seems to increase combat effectiveness. Side effects include rapid-eye movement and falling asleep at random moments. Clothing (spring(on job)): bandanna, 2 magnetic bracelets (draws anything metallic of her choosing to her.) & a belt. Use to wear nothing else for a short while…now…she wears a bra & panties. Clothing (Spring(off the job): wears a very thin shirt with a face in the back sticking it’s tongue out along with the words ‘DON’T MESS WITH THIS ***!’ above it. Also wears red, white, green or blue panties. Clothing (fall(on job)): wife beater made out of nanites allowing the color to change according to the setting, pink bra, spiked knuckles on both hands, pink cotton panties with a fluffy teddy bear design in front, white 2 and a half inch long skirt. Clothing (fall (off the job)): brass knuckles on right hand, high heels, brace on hand, torn shirt & jeans, full-legging pantyhose. Clothing (winter(on job)): orange extremely thick wool jacket with cotton filling, white long sleeve shirt with a see-through bra underneath, thick jeans with men’s underwear & kneecap high stockings. Clothing (winter(off job)): Unknown Clothing (summer(on job)): skin colored bra & a pistol holster. Clothing (summer(off job)): absolutely nothing. “Hell it’s too hot and sweaty for ** clothes.” Skills, perks and abilities: acrobatics, accuracy of up to 200 meters, silent feet, feign death, iron lungs ,inhuman reflexes, becomes feral in areas were plants outnumber anything manmade, tail can be used as another limb if need be,
	Yay I can RP again but for now i'm sticking with one at a time until I find a good balance between my mate & this. ROFL.


GMoney	Apr 25 2010, 08:20 AM Post #2
everyone's favorite Irish fox Posts: 3,135 Group: E Rank Legend Member #10,747 Joined: February 7, 2010 Gender: Male Country: United States of America Xbox Live Gamertag: DAMIAN OBRIEN Game Currently Playing: Mineraft	Hey, Shen, did you put up a bio for Faunna on TTFF?
	Buachaill ón Eirne mé's bhréagfainn féin cailín deas óg Né iarfainn bó spré léithe tá mé saibhir go leor 'S liom Corcaigh a mhéid e , dhá thaobh a ghleanna's Tír Eoghain 'S mur n-athraí mé béasaí 's mé n' t-oibhr ar Chontae Mhaigh Eo Translation of the Irish: I am a boy from Ireland and I'd coax a nice young girl, I wouldn't ask for a dowry with her, I'm rich enough myself, I own Cork, big as it is both sides of the glen and Tyrone, And if I don't change my ways I'll be the heir for County Mayo. Friends List: Kanata, A Star's Heart, SuperSonicStar, Wolfie989, Happy, Radar, Phoenix_Saturn, The Lone Wolf PM me if you want to be friends. 98% of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature Cyber bros:Dr.Prower, Shen Cyber sis:Wolfie


Red Fox	Apr 25 2010, 09:42 AM Post #3
Ice Cap Act 1 Posts: 226 Group: C Rank Guardian Member #9,129 Joined: July 3, 2008	Yes....But...i'm actually hoping someone here can help me improve her.... being a guy making agirl.....XDXD hard!!!!
	Yay I can RP again but for now i'm sticking with one at a time until I find a good balance between my mate & this. ROFL.


Jenna Jay	Apr 25 2010, 09:54 AM Post #4
Stealing Talents! Posts: 1,123 Group: A Rank Hero Member #10,323 Joined: September 5, 2009 Gender: Female Game Currently Playing: Shovel Knight	Oh look, A guy that created a drunken girl that likes to wander around naked with lots of guns. $=\$ But anyway my personal feelings aside you need to expand the background alot more to explain how she seems to be able to aquire military vehicles and weapons, also explaining where this 8 years of rifle & heavy weapons training and lifetimes worth of melee training came from.



Zak	Apr 25 2010, 10:20 AM Post #5
For The Circle Posts: 4,002 Group: D Rank Legend Member #9,748 Joined: February 10, 2009 3DS Friend Code: 1118-0225-4062 Steam ID: zakth686	True, the training is a problem. Plus she has waaaaaaaaaay to many guns. If she's always on the run, she shouldn't have anywhere to put these. I'd stick with three guns tops. another thing you should probably expand on is exactly why many organizations want her dead, when the history says she does odd jobs for anyone who can pay. Having a naked character isn't too bad. I've seen a lot of naked female character, i think it's starting to become acceptable. Just don't show us any pictures and it'll probably be fine.
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The Storyteller	Apr 25 2010, 10:30 AM Post #6
No U Posts: 6,820 Group: B Rank Legend Member #9,331 Joined: September 4, 2008 Playstation Network ID: Noblehardt Xbox Live Gamertag: Pharaoh Knight	Zak Apr 25 2010, 10:20 AM True, the training is a problem. Plus she has waaaaaaaaaay to many guns. If she's always on the run, she shouldn't have anywhere to put these. Not to mention that she really doesn't HAVE anywhere to put them. It'd be rediculous to run around, naked no less, with so many guns at a time. I agree with Zak.
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`TakeCare	Apr 25 2010, 10:59 PM Post #7
-sigh- Posts: 2,390 Group: S Rank Hero Member #9,520 Joined: November 29, 2008 Gender: Male 3DS Friend Code: ask Game Currently Playing: Smash 4	Overall. Much of what I mentioned has been pointed out by the three members above me. I just find it hard to add it all together with so much clashing information. I guess I'll break down your profiles field by field. (click to expand) First Paragraph. Note that you shouldn't add that you used something in real life until the end of your bio, or at all for that matter. It's really something vague and minor so the statement doesn't have to be detailed. Something like "The clothing in the bio is based off of some people's clothing." Species. I give an extra score on species as its not an overly "common" one that I see. Occupation. It means a Job. You could put "floater", which means continually changing from one occupation to another. Likes. The last two should be omitted. Dislikes. I don't understand why she doesn't like poor people when she's poor herself. The rest are quite common, but it does add a bit of personality to your character. Weapon of Choice. You might want to narrow down the type of weapon. Are we talking firearms or bows and arrows? Personality. I don't know what to say. Since she's a drinker maybe you should have two different paragraphs; one for sober and the other for drunk. History. Now this is what shakes the rest of the bio. It isn't detailed enough to grant the reasons why she has so many firearms (when she's JUST getting by). There's also no reason behind why "she's wanted dead by many organizations". Weakness. Money, gold and platinum can be cut out and she's already "drawn to anything shiny" [maybe you should add "and worth a heavy profit" at the end of that]. "Dulled senses when drunk" happens to almost everyone who has a bit more to drink than usual. I know and I've seen. Strengths. How does she acquire "8 years of rifle heavy weapons training and a lifetimes worth of melee training" when she lived with an "average lifestyle" until age 17 (history) yet being only age 22? Attributes. No comment because I have no idea what's going on here. Friends. "Any reliable person willing to pay her money" would be quite accurate, right? Vehicles. An airplane!? Are you serious? You character is pretty much living paycheck after paycheck, spending most of her money on booze. Weaponry. Without any military history in the profile I've bascially have to say "no". A silencer sidearm and taser is enough. If she's always on the go, she won't be able to bring much of these weapons with her anyways. Tech. Skipped. Clothing. Skipped. Skills, perks, and abilities. The first and last ability ("acrobatics" and "tail can be used as another limb if need be") and silent feet are good and interesting. The rest are unknown to me. Edited by `TakeCare, Apr 25 2010, 11:00 PM.
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Red Fox	Apr 26 2010, 01:46 PM Post #8
Ice Cap Act 1 Posts: 226 Group: C Rank Guardian Member #9,129 Joined: July 3, 2008	Hmm....Thanks for all the critiquing......Umm....sorry.....I have a hard time making a cheracter.....yet...I was hoping people wouldn't be that affected by her choice of clothes...admittedly.....i'm quite surprised they (Sorry no names other then i'll say 2 of them were tomboys & Umm....what do you call those type of people that refuse to wear clothes in public?) Yet....i'll work one part at a time....so....i'll start with the first part I messed up on. from what i'm getting here is the history part needs to be fleshed out more along with explaining the training part? is this right?
	Yay I can RP again but for now i'm sticking with one at a time until I find a good balance between my mate & this. ROFL.


`TakeCare	Apr 26 2010, 02:20 PM Post #9
-sigh- Posts: 2,390 Group: S Rank Hero Member #9,520 Joined: November 29, 2008 Gender: Male 3DS Friend Code: ask Game Currently Playing: Smash 4	Quote: what do you call those type of people that refuse to wear clothes in public? Nudist Quote: from what i'm getting here is the history part needs to be fleshed out more along with explaining the training part? is this right? Yes. The history contradicts much of the profile. There's no mention of training nor how she's able to get her hands on so many pieces of military weaponry.
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Red Fox	Apr 26 2010, 02:29 PM Post #10
Ice Cap Act 1 Posts: 226 Group: C Rank Guardian Member #9,129 Joined: July 3, 2008	Eck.....I see....sorry about that....I'm nust sure hw much I can do with explaining but i'll try....I'm just most at a loss of how to explain her melee skills....I don't think mentioning having a bad habit of getting in brawls when drunk would explain her childhood.....Give me a while I'll add to it. once I do...I would appreciate more help. if I need to fix it more i'll gladly do that. Eghh.....talk about blanks at bad times..... Edited by Red Fox, Apr 26 2010, 03:43 PM.
	Yay I can RP again but for now i'm sticking with one at a time until I find a good balance between my mate & this. ROFL.


Whisp	Apr 26 2010, 02:45 PM Post #11
ahem...FALCON PUNCH!!! Posts: 1,565 Group: S Rank Hero Member #1,516 Joined: June 27, 2007	I actually like this bio. Very informative, and gives you a good picture of your character. Pretty good.



Red Fox	Apr 29 2010, 12:39 PM Post #12
Ice Cap Act 1 Posts: 226 Group: C Rank Guardian Member #9,129 Joined: July 3, 2008	History: Senna grew up a fairly average lifestyle. For 16 years the ferret was raised & loved by her parents. Around her 17th b-day her mom left for a business trip leaving just Senna and her dad. During this time she grew very rebellious & ran away from home. When asked why the ferret refuses to answer. For her next 3 years the ferret was homeless. During these 3 years Senna learned to use her body in ways that creeped & intrigued people. Around her 17th year the ferret decided to explore her body. At first the ferret was pretty much average unable to do nothing out of the ordinary. Yet after starving for so many years Senna grew desperate. At 19 she noticed some acrobats stuffing themselves into boxes & stuff. Seeing this gave her an idea. It was painful but Senna learned to bend her body to fit small spaces. After making $500 by her 20th b-day Senna disappeared. There have been reports of Senna hanging around bars during the night & doing stuff others refuse to no matter how much is offered. She is wanted dead by many organizations yet at the same time all are looking to employ her for her skills. Brawling experiance: Umm....basically she had an attitude.....dominant attitude....Eck....man....I need help!!! I...can't explain this....
	Yay I can RP again but for now i'm sticking with one at a time until I find a good balance between my mate & this. ROFL.


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