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| Ice Fire | Mar 6 2010, 07:28 AM Post #1 |
Twisted Fate ~when things don't go the way it should~
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CHAPTER1: SET SAIL TO 2010. ************************* Star Locating Station (SLS) spotted a Meteor headed to earth. That was the sign for Roborex's new assignment, which include traveling to the year 2010 and get a hold of a Gadget; it's an important device that is needed in order to stop the meteor. Roborex, a scientist with the rank of leiutant who invents machines for SLS agents. He was called by his commander and the leader of SLS. "Roborex, do you know why we called you here?" the leader said, crossing his arms. Roborex Stood Straight to show some respect "I don't know sir" Roborex replied. The commander walked toward Roborex with her hands behind her back "we choose Roborex to go on a special journey to the year 2010 and retrieve any kind of device that can stop or deflect a meteor from its course" She said. "Before you go, the SLS Biolab personals suggest you take with you, one of their latest creations" the Commander briefed. Roborex felt a bit of shivering running through his shoulders, since he knew that they produce crazy creatures. He was sensing some sort of strange-ominous presence, his leg was shaking and then. BAAAAM! Roborex couldn't help it but jump out of the surprise sound, Roborex looked behind his back, seeing a strange gray Skeleton, laughing psychotically. The Skeleton kept laughing without an end to it. "Ahmm...this Skeleton will be your traveling partner, his name is Joka" Commander cleared. The Leader showed Roborex and Joka the time travel passage, it was a big white gate, craved with crystals. Roborex opened the gate then started going inside. Joka was mounting Roborex, flipping a rope around Roborex's neck. He was pretending to be a cowboy on a Trex. Roborex wants to throw Joka away by moving his body forward with a powerful force. "Get down Joka!!" Roborex yelled. "No can do, hahahahaha, i'ma a cowboy yeeehaaaw" Joka said, laughing. Roborex got pissed of but he was too serious to let something stupid like this get to him "ok fine, you can ride" Roborex didn't want to waste time arguing with the crazy fella. He continued going forward to the future with Joka on his back. Chapter2: Reaching Destination *************************** Inside the gate, there was a long and straight light blue road, surrounded by sparkly walls. Roborex was observing the environment careful before proceeding on. He noticed some brown doors with numbers engraved on them, along side the passage. "Doors!? What are they doing here" Roborex closed on the left door with the number "2" crafted on it. Roborex opened the door and surprised to find that the meteor have hit the earth on the other side. He closed the door slowly. "This...can't be good" Roborex sighed. Roborex looked behind him but didn't find Joka on his back. He started searching and scanning around the room. Though he was glad that he was finely be able to get rid Joka and his happy-go-lucky attitude. Roborex continued checking the doors one by one until he find the desired one, Door number "2010". He sighed in relief before bashing the door. After 2 seconds, He entered inside but finds another 3 doors in front of him. The doors had "Army”, “Police" and "Lab" written on them. Roborex stood still for a bit and started thinking. "If i where a Gadget, where would i be" Roborex checked observed the writings before deciding where to go. "I would be in a Lab but i want a weapon, so...Army it is". He went through the "Army", He stepped in then finds out that he was in a human storage of some sort. "What is this!!" a man yelled. He approached inside the storage and saw Roborex, wondering of. It looked like a guard from Roborex's perspective. The was man pointing his Submachine gun toward Roborex. "WAIT A SECOND! DON'T SHOOT!" Roborex warned the guard. "SHUT UP! Dinosaur you’re dangerous, why should i listen to the likes of you?" The Guard confronted Roborex. "I have come here looking for any device that has the power to deflect a meteor, because there is one coming to earth" Roborex explained. The Guard doubts Roborex but still want to confirm if what Roborex said is true, "if you're telling the truth then come with me" he said. Edited by Ice Fire, Mar 6 2010, 07:35 AM.
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| Ice Fire | Mar 6 2010, 07:33 AM Post #2 |
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Twisted Fate ~when things don't go the way it should~
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Chapter 3: Prepare For War. ********************* Roborex followed the Guard without asking any question, to an isolated room with two guards in blue. Roborex sat on yellow-hard chair, Then a fourth guy came in the room wearing a white rope and holding a tooth brush with some tooth baste in his mouth. "Wha'z iz it? I’ve just got up from sleep and i get tasks immediately!!" Marco whined. "Sorry for that sir but we have found a suspicious person lurking in the storage" Guard said, putting his hand on his head. Roborex noticed the mistake that was said. "Hey! I’ma a dinosaur not a person, how much is your IQ mate!" Roborex corrected mockingly, with his cheek on his knuckle. Marco sat in front of Roborex. "Forget him and tell me, what are you doing here? WANNA DIE?" Marco said. "I’ve come here to..." Roborex explained everything to Marco in 4 hours. Marco stood up, moving around the room very nervously of what he have heard from Roborex about the Meteor, He even forgot that he wasn't dressed probably out of shock. He picked up his cell phone, calling out for 4 Soldiers to escort Roborex to the other side of the war field. "Our enemy's lab has a device like that, but you have to break through their army, that's why i order the best of our men to accompany you through this" Marco said. "Thanks for understanding my problem and helping me, i hope to return the favor someday" Roborex waved at Marco then was lead out the base with the 4 Soldiers. Outside the base, Roborex saw an area under the mounting that was extremely destructed and a lot of tanks, gunfire and explosions. "Oh my!" Roborex felt an absolute problem is facing him and his squad. Edited by Ice Fire, Mar 6 2010, 07:35 AM.
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Mar 6 2010, 08:38 AM Post #3 |
I'll never let you go
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Seems nice, Can't wait for more! ^^ |
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| Lord DragonFlame | Mar 6 2010, 12:06 PM Post #4 |
Christmas is back again
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All in all it's OK! But that's about it. First of all, the situation with a dinosaur and humans first encounter wasn't like I first expected. To easy even relying on an ancient race from the prehistoric time that is. However if I ain't dumbstruck, the small signature/picture looks like this dino isn't any ordinary one. Machine or flesh and blood. Or is it one of those armoured T-Rex characteristics involved here. Let's see. I'd say that's about it. It's just that mix didn't turn out what I hoped for when I first saw the title. He he! |
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| Ice Fire | Mar 6 2010, 07:40 PM Post #5 |
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@Kanta: writing chapters on Thursday, Friday and saturday. then post the three chapters after letting a trusted person to have a look at it first-hand. (because of school) @DragonFlame: it's an armored Dinosaur (as the title say CIVILIZED). and about the human encounter, i was trying to do something..different than usual ^^; though i wonder if Animal X Human Romance is possible?? Edited by Ice Fire, Mar 6 2010, 07:46 PM.
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Mar 7 2010, 04:18 AM Post #6 |
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I'll never let you go
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it might be possible, I think I've seen it in a few movies. Anyways okay I'll be patient and wait for the next chapters. |
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| Ice Fire | Mar 14 2010, 06:30 AM Post #7 |
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Chapter 4: What? Joka Is There !! ************************* Roborex used his zoom glasses to check on the field, He could see the dust hitting on him, though he was more concerned on jumping out down the mountain. Roborex found a route to pass around sneakingly. "Go left, behind the rocks" Roborex commanded the squad. The walked around the circled mountain, their feet got scratches all over with all the sharp rocks. they continued walking until they were facing a clear place, out of sight of the other soldiers. Roborex stood before the edge the slid down, his feet were burning with the speed slide, to secure the way for the others. As soon as he got down..safely, He started hearing a flying sound, The sound is coming closer and closer. Roborex turned around calling out to them, but saw a missile dropping, Annihilating them. "Nooooooooo!!" Roborex yelled. Desperately rushing through the war zone. "WAAAAAH!!". Roborex passed through the mid-field on the enemy's territory. fled with anger, breaking a tank with brute force. Roborex restored his calmness, sighing heavily and showing his big teethes. Without focusing on his surrounding, He got flanked from the back with foot soldiers. Roborex rolled his eyes to the left "do i have to get in these kind of situation in every war" he whined, putting his hand on his head. The soldiers aimed at Roborex. "Enemy or foe" all of them said with loud voices. Roborex plugged his ears, but the voices were still ringing inside his brain. Roborex thought he heard one of the soldiers say that they have spotted the boney guy, so he was wandering if this boney fella is in fact...Joka. As soon as they were about to let Roborex pass through their territory, they saw the same boney one, jump on Roborex's back. Roborex had an unpleasant moment when Joka mounted him..again. "OMG! what are you doing here Joka" Roborex said suppressing his hellish anger. "Nothing really, i was just messing around the battlefield" Joka answered truthfully, or so he thought. "This skelenton is with you animals...THEN DIE!" they shed tears, planning to shoot down Roborex, thought they were zooming at Joka for Messing with their forces in battle. Roborex questioned whether he can survive this outflank and the anger of the enemy. --------------------------------------------- Only 1 chapter cuz my math teacher gives as lots and lots of Home Works. @Kanta: I'll be doing an Animal X Human story, thought the chance of it being posted for public eye is 15%. what's the font you're using? it is cool 
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Mar 17 2010, 11:10 AM Post #8 |
Mushrooms.
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Nice story; i like how your using dinosaurs as pets...right...? |
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| Ice Fire | Mar 17 2010, 11:34 AM Post #9 |
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@Twinpopler: Pet huh!?...let's see....Chickens ride Dinosaurs instead of Horses. That's a strange idea to use, i guess I'll give it a shot or not.  oh, and an announcement: i have been grounded cuz THE parents, blame me for giving my sister some weird ideas about not going to school. My father got upset (and they say that grades is for our own good, but they show like it is for them to brag by getting upset ).Duo to that, my activity on the forum will drop to 10-15% =D |
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Mar 20 2010, 11:18 AM Post #10 |
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Mushrooms.
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Hm well that sucks...so that means you won't be able to post the next chapter til your ungrounded, am I right? |
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| Ice Fire | Mar 21 2010, 03:53 AM Post #11 |
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So true but...i got a brilliant tactic to counter this situation, which is writing the chapters on my notebook at m aunt's house because i get superbly super duper bored when my PSP runs out of battery (putting the PSP in my mother's bag to smuggle it out). but the question is....will my math teacher STOP giving dozens of homeworks everyday? D:< |
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| Ice Fire | Mar 27 2010, 09:20 AM Post #12 |
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As time pass by, the tension begin to rise with every step taken by the blue uniformed army. Roborex's heat is increasing uncontrollably, his temperature parameter reached a critical degree. feeling this hotness, Joka looked at Roborex with a sparkly pupils. "Your overheating !..i can do that too, see" Joka said. Joka stand silent in front of Roborex, joining his fingers together in circular hold. the air around Joka is steaming up, creating a mist of hot air. it was unbearable heat for human being to stand it. "AHH! IT'S VERY HOT IN HERE..ALL UNITS GO BACK TO THE REAR SECTION!!" the unit leader said. The troops have backed off as much away as possible. Seeing the enemies retreat, Roborex's reconsider his thought of Joka as a partner for his quest to rescue the dinosaurs race. he took off his helmet and threw it on the ground, then chased out the fleeing army toward their destination, hoping that they go to their Head Quarters. Roborex and Joka riding him, were following those soldiers, but they fall in a pit trap made by them in advance. ---------------------------------------------------- well...this is a completion for the previous chapter, i have barely find the time to write this much for now. =P though, i will sure write a full chapter when i stay alone at home with no distraction from sibilings. Edited by Ice Fire, Mar 27 2010, 11:41 AM.
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| Ice Fire | Apr 2 2010, 08:35 AM Post #13 |
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Changing style>> the Caps letters will be the dialogue White Caps= Roborex's dialogue. Gold Cabs= Rockstar Dude's dialogue. ------------------------------------------------ *Chapter 5: RockStar Dude* ------------------------------------------- Falling in the hole where the walls were light-blue, Roborex, who is still dropping upside down, swung his head rapidly in surprise IS THIS SUPPOSE TO BE HEAVEN, I'VE ALWAYS THOUGHT THAT PEOPLE SHOULD FLY NOT FALL..BUT... he looked up THAT MEANS I'M NOT DEAD YET !? "Joka !! Joka !!" Roborex yelled. Joka faced down, sticking both of his arm on his side, fell with a strong, ramming Roborex's head. OUCH THAT DOESN'T HURT A BIT he stick his tongue out at Joka, then he rolled side way and smashed Joka to the blue wall. HOW LONG DID THOSE GUY'S AT THE ARMY DUG THIS PIT TRAP ?? "We have reached down boss" Joka informed Roborex who was whining. After hearing this, Roborex sighed in relieve as he saw some yellow stars, shooting from the base toward him SHOOTING STAR he was enjoying their sparkle but one of those crashed on Roborex's leg, causing him to lose balance as they both fall on a big bed. The bed reduced their impact a little though it couldn't handle Roborex's weight, with all the metal and technical equipments. HEY WHAT ARE YOU DOING, BREAKING MY BED~KASHA! Joka jumped on top of Roborex, bringing out a sub-machine gun that he took back on the battlefield and aiming it on a dark figure. Seeing a gun pointed at him, the dark figure started waving his hands so he doesn't get a bullet in his body "DON'T SHOOT~KASHA!" Roborex threw Joka from his back and stepped away from the bed, facing the guy with the dark figure, raising his hand in an inviting gesture. The stranger understood what Roborex meant by that pose, so he marched the pair. The shadow started fading little by little, showing his brown afro, pink jacket and his tight-white jeans. Holding to his metallic guitar, he brought it in front of his chest, passing his thump through the guitar strings WHAT'S UP GUYS?...IT'S ME...THE ROCKDUDE~KASHA! Roborex's eye widened, his jaws opened in amazement of this encounter. |
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Apr 2 2010, 06:16 PM Post #14 |
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Okay. Well this seems like a very nice story and I am excited for more! |
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| Ice Fire | Apr 9 2010, 05:38 AM Post #15 |
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the next chapter might take longer than excepted since i have a limited time to write, not to mention that i've been on a quest to improve my writing style.  *Chapter 6: Roborex and his past with Rockdude* (part1) =================== Rockdude put his guitar on the wall and offered a handshake. The pleasure filled Roborex as he held Rockdude's soft hand, his mind went blank all of a sudden, and his memories began to take shape. Everything started to become vivid and a gray TV box started to take form. Excitment took over 10 years old Roborex as he watched Rockdude singing on Television, his hand were always up and jumpy whenever this show is on "Mom, Dad..it's on YAY!" Roborex called out to his parents. Mamasaur and Dadysaur came inside the living room from the kitchen. seeing his parents, Roborex stared at them with big-inoccent eyes "come see!" he said happily. Dadysaur smashed the TV by his feet in anger. filled with saddness, he shed louds of tears and ran away to his room, laying on the bed "WHY I CAN'T HAVE WHAT I WANT? WHY MY HAPPINESS IS LESS VALUABLE THEN HIS?" he complained. ------------------- sorry, i didn't have alot of time 2 write cuz of my dad >_> Edited by Ice Fire, Apr 9 2010, 10:18 AM.
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