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| Star vs Jack; >_>'....oranges. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 20 2010, 07:53 PM (353 Views) | |
| F`ame | Feb 20 2010, 07:53 PM Post #1 |
Happy and loved -Sunnyside
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Basically, I wanted to type a story, with both Jack and Star going at it. So, let's start, shall we? ~Jack's point of View Jack was readying himself at a meadow, just outside of town. There were no sounds except the sound of Jack, who was training of course. It was a beautiful meadow, tall, large trees. There was a pond in the middle of the tree's, making a circle. It was obviously the center of the forest. A hedgehog, sweating himself to death, was punching a tree, putting dents in the center of the tree. He wore black baggy shorts, along with black-white laced shoes. He had no shirt on, or no shades. He also wore gold rings on his ankles and wrist as he practiced. Finally, the tree came down, making a large THUMP sound. He was breathing heavily, rubbing his fist that were bleeding from the impact and sturdiness the tree had. He sighed. He wasn't giving up though. He walked towards another tree, but just as he smashed his fist into it, Star passed by him. He growled, punching harder and harder, putting small holes in the large great tree. It, too, fell to the ground. He rubbed his fist, sighing and breathing heavily. "I won't let him get to me..." he muttered. ~Star's point of View The yellow Star, speeding off across the world. He was located in the forest, running of course. He jumped from tree to tree, laughing, and then began running across the land. He was a yellow blur that enjoyed his time running when the day was pleasant. He then passed Jack, who by the looks of it, hadn't fully recovered from their last fight. He ran past him though, stopping just a few feet away from him. He looked at Jack when he stopped, a bit concerned for his cousin. "Poor Jack.." he muttered, turning and running again. ~The Fight It was raining heavily in the streets of Station Square. Jack, in his usual dressing, was walking through the rain as if it was clear weather. His black jacket that he wore was wet, pushing down from all the it absorbed. Jack spotted Star, walking across the rain. He growled. You... he thought. Jack had a huge dislike for Star. In fact, he couldn't stand being near him at all. He'd rather see Star lying across the floor, dead. He passed Star, purposely bumping into Star's shoulder, causing him to fall back from the impact. Star, who was on the ground, shook his head and stood up. "Whoa, sorry," he apologized, as if it were his fault. Looking from under the hood of the jacket, he saw Jack, glaring at him. "Oh, hiya, Jack." He waved at him with a smile. "Don't speak to me," Jack ordered, walking past him again. Star frowned slightly, following behind Jack. "Man, what the hell are you doing!?" Jack questioned after a few steps, turning to Star, who'd stopped just a foot away from him. "Trying to find out what your problem is," Star said. Jack growled at him. It'd been years since they'd gotten along. Jack only hated Star for one specific reason, Star was much better then him. He was faster, and he was stronger. He was more friendly, and he had a lot more friends. But unlike Star, Jack had no friends. He was a loner. No friends cared for him because he had none. He wasn't nearly as fast as Star was either. He also wasn't as powerful as him either. He couldn't even go super. But the only thing Jack outwitted Star in was swords. He was a master at using them, ever since he were little at the age of 6. He'd been using swords for a while, but they were his fathers, who had died in a car accident. This disturbed Jack. "Jack?" Star asked, interrupted his thoughts. "Just go.." Jack said, turning back around. "Heh, you're so stubborn when it comes to friends." Jack paused, and slowly, he turned to Star, glaring at him. His eyes from under the hood focused on Star. "I'm what?" Jack asked, breathing heavily. "Stubborn, of course," Star said, smirking and folding his arms, closing his eyes as well. Jack breathed a bit heavily. "I'm not. Now go run off to hell before I end up killing you because of my attitude," Jack ordered. "No way!" Jack sighed. "You're way stubborn then me!" Star chuckled. Jack growled, shaking in anger. His anger boiled up, and he was tired of Star's cocky attitude. He ended up punching Star across the face, causing him to fly back. "Keep your mouth closed, Star," he warned. Star jumped up, frowning at Jack. He walked up towards him, punching him across the face. Jack swirled and fell to the concrete floor. He got up slowly, looking back at Star as he did. "You ass," he said. He ran at Star and punched him across the face, causing him to fall back. Then, jumping on top of Star so he couldn't escape, he began pounding his fist into Star's mouth. When he stopped, there was blood on the concrete, slowly fading away because of the heavy rain. Star didn't move, he was laid out. His mouth was bloody. Jack turned away from him, beginning to walk off, until he heard groaning. Star stood up, wiping his mouth with a smirk. But then, he turned serious. Jack turned. "Drop dead," he ordered. Star's fist balled and he glared at Jack. Jack was breathing heavily, and without thought, he ran at Star. "Think about what you do before you actually do it!" Star yelled at him, dodging and grabbing his leg. Jack tripped, busting his face into the concrete. Star letted go of his leg, backing up. Jack got up, and then ran at Star again. Star frowned intensely and then, just before Jack could land a hand on him, his smashed his fist into Jack's mouth. Jack swirled around past Star, falling to the ground shortly after wards. He stood up though, taking his jacket off. "You just don't know where to end, do you?" Star asked, getting in his fighting position. Jack got into his battle position as well, some sort of jujitsu form. He then ran at Star, throwing a ball of punches at him. Star easily dodged every incoming fist. Jack growled and then, in an instant, smashed his fist into Star's stomach. Star coughed up blood, covering his stomach, and then bended down. Jack kicked Star's face like a soccer ball, sending him flying into the air. Star fell onto the ground. Jack ran at him, but Star countered him. He rolled under Jack, grabbing both his legs, and then tripped him. He jumped back. "Stop retreating!" Jack yelled, standing up. He ran at Star, tackling him to the ground. He began punching him in the mouth, Star spitting out blood. Star grabbed his fist, stopping his endless barrage of punches. He placed his right foot between him and Jack, and then kicked Jack off. Jack jumped to his feet, Star rolled backwards to his feet. Star rubbed his mouth again, and Jack ran at him. He smashed his fist into Jack's mouth, causing him to fall back. He backed up, and then Jack jumped up. "You!" he yelled at the top of his lungs, tackling Star. He punched him across the face and then smashed his fist into Star's eyes. Star yelled out in pain, pushing Jack off. He growled in anger. Star had enough of this, he was going at it now. He closed his damaged left eye, his hands balled into fist. He gloves were a bit torn. His rings had many scratches and blood across them as well. Both Jack and Star ran at each other. They punched each other across the face, Jack falling back. Star fell on his knee, stopping himself by his left hand smashing against the ground. He breathed a bit heavily and then he slowly stood to his feet. So did Jack. He stood up, tired. He punched Star across the face, and Star punched him across the face. They both fell on their knee again. But they soon stood up. Star yelled out Jack's name loudly, as Jack yelled out Star's name. Jack ran at Star, stopping in front of him, kicking at him. Star blocked the kicks, and then he ducked, pouncing at Jack. He smashed Jack's head into the ground and then flipped off. Then, he turned and tried to punch Jack. Jack grabbed Star's fist, twisted it, and then smashed his hand into Star's wrist, breaking it. "Ugh!" Star yelled loudly, grabbing hold of his wrist. Jack went for a punch, but Star grabbed his fist. He punched Jack's middle finger, binding it back so far. Jack groaned, snapping it back into place. Star rubbed his wrist and then glared at Jack. Star balled his fist and then punched at Jack's stomach, giving him a barrage of punches. Then, he ended it with an uppercut, Jack flying into the air. Jack flipped in mid-air, landing on the ground, and then punched at Star. Star fell back, but jumped back up. He punched Jack in the face, Jack fell back. It was over. Jack couldn't stand anymore. His cloths were torn, and his mouth was bloody. He was laid out across the ground. Star breathed a bit heavily, falling on his knee. He couldn't stand. He fell over. There was no clear winner at all. Both of them had fallen, and both of them had stopped. Later that day, when the rain stopped, Star woke up, seeing many people around him, whispering and staring. He struggled to his feet, not spotting Jack anywhere. He backed up a bit, and then took off as fast as he could, trying to avoiding embarrassment. Once he reached a safe place where no one was, he fell to the ground. He was still tired. He closed his eyes. It was over. After hours, he woken up, the rain begging to poor down once again. He rubbed his heal eye and sat down. He curled up, staring forward. ((What do you think?)) |
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Feb 21 2010, 11:11 AM Post #2 |
I'll never let you go
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^^ Seems well written. But why, next to the title, does it say oranges? xD |
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| F`ame | Feb 21 2010, 01:44 PM Post #3 |
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Happy and loved -Sunnyside
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I dunno, I just couldn't think of anything. 
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Feb 22 2010, 12:29 PM Post #4 |
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I'll never let you go
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xD When will you add more? This is a long story, right? |
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| F`ame | Feb 22 2010, 04:09 PM Post #5 |
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Happy and loved -Sunnyside
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Well, this could be a lot longer. But my laziness is what actually stops me from writing longer and more specific paragraphs. I may create another topic, although it'll be longer and more specific. But at the time of typing this post, not now. |
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Feb 23 2010, 12:23 PM Post #6 |
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I'll never let you go
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Ok. I will wait. |
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| Blaze's Flame | Mar 6 2010, 01:41 AM Post #7 |
Death Egg Act 1
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I really like it. And I agree this is well written too. ^^ Awesome job as always, my Star!~ ^.^ *hugs* |
   
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