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| Blaze's Flame | Feb 1 2010, 01:10 AM Post #1 |
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Name: Ashley the Hedgehog Nickname: Ash Age: 15 Species: Hedgehog Gender: Female Height: 90cm Weight: Unknown IQ: 75-80 Martial Status: Single DOB: 4/12 Birthplace: Southern part of Japan Residence: Mystic Ruins Occupation: None Social Class: Normal Economic Class: Middle Class Aligment: Unknown Top Speed: 70-84 Basic Stats: Speed: 7 Agility: 9 Strength: 5 Defense: 8 Evasiness: 8 Dexterity: 7 Intelligence: 9 Skill: 9 Special Attacks: Psychokinesis: Causes to float objects up in the air. Psycho smash: To foat things and smash them to the ground numerously Abilities: Time Freeze: To freeze time for a limited time. Quiet Storm: Spins her Katana fast to create a large tornado and sweep enemies off their feet. Running: She can be able to run very fast. ((Not exactly at Sonic's speed. ^^; )) Hobbies/Talents: Singing, creating clothes, writing poems. Weakness: Losing a battle, having flashbacks of her village destroyed, flying. Personality: Ashley is quite a calm, peaceful and kind person. She can handle things on her own at times and keeps her agenda on-task. She's always with her brother, Edward who goes everywhere together. They are like a brotherly-sister type. Friends: Edward the Hedgehog, the people from her village (before they were deceased. ) Rivals: Ember the Cat Enemies: The Dark Hearts army Known Relatives: Emi the Hedgehog (Mother) Kouji the Hedgehog (Father) Reni Obaa-chan (Grandmother) Edward the Hedgehog (Brother) Likes/Favorite: Sing, write poems, hanging out with Edward, playing with the village children, creating her own clothes, swimming in the lake. Dislikes/Hates: Being yelled at, mean people, being separated from Edward, and flashbacks of her village being attacked. Favorite Food and Drinks: Sushi, Curry, water, fruit punch, chicken, pork, rice. Favorite Color: Yellow, brown, white, and black. Picture: http://i49.tinypic.com/14qhx2.jpg Items: A Katana, some Healing Potions Theme Song: My Heart Will Go On Flashback Story: Ashley lived in a distant land in the southern part of Japan. There is a small village there that she was born in. Her grandmother told her so much about their culture, she began to follow in her mother's footsteps. She was so facinated about their culture. She also learned about their enemy army, 'The Dark Hearts'. A few years later, the Dark Hearts arrived to the village and began their assult. They've attacked every single villager there. Except for Ashley. After the war, many of the villagers were gone. Even her mother, father, and her grandmother were gone too. But except one male hedgehog. His name was Edward the Hedgehog and he is her brother. They've quickly became a team and went everywhere together. They've also promiced to protect each other no matter what like a family again. ((Sorry that there's not much of her. ^^; I was kind of running out of ideas sadly.... )) |
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Cee Jay Haych
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Feb 1 2010, 02:52 AM Post #2 |
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"I didn't use the whole thing ...."
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How is losing a battle a weakness? |
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| F`ame | Feb 1 2010, 03:43 AM Post #3 |
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Happy and loved -Sunnyside
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Yeh, I also don't get that, really. But other then that, it's not too bad. *5 Stars* Good job, Star.
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| Poison Ivy (Dee) | Feb 1 2010, 12:33 PM Post #4 |
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Just what I had in mind. Everything dead on earth, except us.
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Maybe she means that losing does some psychological damage to the character, such as lower self-esteem, or it could be that Ash would take more damage as she's losing so the weakness would be being exposed to large amounts of damage during a battle, rather. I could be wrong though. Anyway, I don't normally read about fan characters but considering that you think you are running out of ideas, I actually think this is a nicely done bio with some good ideas. I also like how you also crafted the appearance of the character. You've put a lot into this. *thumbs up* Edited by Poison Ivy (Dee), Feb 1 2010, 12:34 PM.
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| Zak | Feb 1 2010, 04:26 PM Post #5 |
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For The Circle
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Her backstory is a bit cliche, the whole, "village was destroyed, sad flashback, sob" thing has been overused. And dosen't the ability to freeze time seem a bit...much? One more thing:
Pshychokenisis is a broad term for the ability to manipulate kinetic force with one's mind, but can be separated into many sub-powers. What you've described is telekenisis, name change plz. |
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