Alexis the Hedgehog

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Alexis the Hedgehog; my main char, basically me in hegdehog form
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Wolfgurl989	Jan 20 2010, 05:18 AM Post #1
Don't close your eyes, don't give into the fright Posts: 7,940 Group: A Rank Legend Member #9,781 Joined: February 21, 2009	Alright, this is my first try at a character shrine..post...thingy...ANYWAYS yah. The topic discription is basically this. My char is a bit different than me, but I can be myself through her, like I don't follow any specific personality but my own while Rping as her. One thing I did change was that I made her a ton cooler, at least I personally think so. Some of my friends disagree. Hm...ok..let's see here.... Name: Alexis Age: 14+ (changes as I grow in age, when I'm 15 she'll be 15...) Height: 5.5 (around there, same height as me) Streangth: Can be very strong or very weak. I do not know how or why it varies. Sometimes she can rip a thug to shreds, others...not so much. Basic Personality^^^^ When she first meets people, she is very aggresive. The general meeting is pinning someone to the ground, a tree, the wall etc. and growling out the question. "Who are you?". Just FYI, I do NOT do this. This is strictly somehting for Rp's only. She is usually on the run, which is why she's so aggresive. I'll give reasons later. Once she get's to know someone, she loosens up a bit and can act like a total airhead and is random as crap. One thing that stays though is her temper, she has a BIG one, and a big attitude to go with it. She never knows when to shut her mouth or why she should. Another thing is that she can be very bi-polar. One second she'll be happy, but then someone makes the wrong comment. And she tries, sometimes literally, to rip their throat out! The next second she'll eb depressed, then confused, then happuy again, then angry. etc. etc. etc. She hates this, and hates it more when people comment about it. Although one thing that people never really seem to notice, is how loyal she can be once she get's to know someone. She could get knocked down a million times, and a milion times she'd rise again and fight for her friend if she still physcially could. She'll also act like a big or younger sister eventually depending on the person. If the person figures out how to push her around she becomes a troublesome younger sibling. If the person let's her push them around, she can either be an older sister or jsut plain mean. Again..depends on the person. The last and final thing about her personality is that she is very very VERY stubborn. And when she's stuborn she is very fearless. and example would be that a hedgehog was fighting her, and then started mocking her. She'd stick out her chin (metaphorically) and start commenting back, after that nommatter how many times she got hitmor laughed at she'd get angrier and angrier. comment more and more, and try ahrder and ahrder to land a hit on them. Life Story^^^^ this is fer my char not me.. =P When Alexis was born, she was born to two parents that loved her. She had no siblings and always wanted with all her heart, an older brother. It was impossible and she knew that. Her mom became pregnant again, and she couldn;t wait for her younger brother or sister. But that wasn;t going to happen. They went on the other side of town and stayed in a hotel. While they were there, a nearby gang set fire too it. Alexis tried helping in anyway that she could, her last memory of it was her mother screaming at her from under a support beam, to run. She tried helping her out but her mom kept yelling at her, she had no idea where her dad was. She finally ran, glancing back all the way with tears in her eyes. This was when she was four years old. She had no idea which way was back home, and was too scared to go looking for help of any sort. She found a duffle bag, and decided to put her leftover clothes in it that she found lying around. She had been playing around earlier that day and threw them out the window. She had no idea that she'd need them later. When she tried to lift the duffle bag, she found it to be way to heavy to be empty. She looked in it and found two daggers, a few guns, and a few grenades along with a med-kit, the gang owned it but she dind't know that. Through her life she lived by herself and learned how to survive on her own. Being alone all thoise years turned her just p[lain mean, she never thought to go into the city and look for a job like a normal person, the part of it she lived in was so big. Not to mention so dangerous she couldn;t think of anything but running. She went into the woods a few times and lived there for a long time. By the time she was twelve she was totally alientated. There had been an instance when a demon soul that lived inside of her made her go ona rampage when she got moremad than she had ever been. She detroyed the psrt of the city that she lived in. She has a mile-long record for things she idnd;t even knwo were crimes, such as murdering people who tried to murder her, stealing, and thign slike that. She never learned what she could and couldn;t do, and remebered little of her parents. Now she;s jumpy, edgy, and is one of the best fighters known to normal hedgehogs. But that's because of how she;s had to learn to fight by herself. Special Abilities ^^^*^ When she get's mad her eyes light up neon red. This is caused by the demon harbored insdie of her. Another thing is that when she fights her teeth sharpen themselves and one of the things hse does, mainly does, is rip out the throats of her attackers. she is a very strong telepath,and can even leave her body through a mist form at any time, she usualy does this while her body is sleeping, and floats arund like a ghost. sh can teleport, and can reach itno her enemies minds and make them see nad hear things, as well as read there thoughts. She is also a very good shot with a gun and very good with daggers. She has a demon form that turns her into a white wolf with spikes jutting out form its' shoulder blades, knee's and elbows. The wolf has red eyes with a type of vortex that looks likr your staring into a place of fire. The demon never come out though, it's not a demon like you would think, it's jsut part of her. Like your ocncioiuss is part of you, the demon side is part of her as well as a conceince. Thankyou for reading this, I'ms orry it was a little long, and I'm sorry if it was ametuerish. This was my first try at it. I will add more if I thinka nymroe shoudl be added. Please comment and give me suggestions to make my char better. And anyone who's rped with me and knwo I left something out, please tell me about it. Thanks!



L Dragon	Jan 20 2010, 12:08 PM Post #2
Chaos Emerald Posts: 691 Group: S Rank Knight Member #746 Joined: March 19, 2007	Hmmm... She could use a bit of work. As well, how did she get that demon soul in her? On to details!!! Height: I'm taking it that she isn't a mobian wolf. She would be too tall for a mobain, as mobians are normally four foot something, barely. Then again, Big and Victor are tall for mobians, but their also adults so.shrugs Strength: This actually confuses me a little. Are you putting this as a 'power,' or putting it in terms of strength and weakness? Life Story: Again, you might want to add how that demon soul was introduced into her life. Special Abilities: I'm not going to say teleaporting is god-moding, cause for me teleaporting without some form of device or logical reason why you can teleaport is god-moding, but thats just me. I only say this cause people abuse the crud out of teleporting and think their Goku. However, going into people's minds(or other character's minds) and making them see things is considered controlling a character. Even though its similar to casting illusions, its also very different. For one, people can realize when an illusion is cast upon them after several minuets if their smart enough. As well, they can react and defend themselves against casting illusions. But actually going into their mind and making them see and hear things that aren't there is different then simply casting an illusion. For one, you'd have to post statements like 'She MADE Tydo see a spinning saw zooming towards him.' One, your making that character that isn't yours do something without the rper's say. As well, that can also fall under saying your attack hit the person. Now, I've rped with your character a few times, and this is actually the first time I've heard her be able to do this. I recommend taking it out, or saying she can cast illusions rather then saying she MAKES people see and hear things. Besides, she can read people's thoughts, why would she need to make them see things when she could just read what their thinking? I hope I've helped out some. Also, you might to add a description or picture of what she looks like.
	Sonic Blast Fated Kingdom Fanfic Members/Chara Data-Base Chapter 1: Otogi \| Chapter 2: Claws, Rifle, and Wind Chain \| Chapter 3: Crimson, Psychic, and Mage Chain \| Chapter 4: Eclipse Blossom \| Chapter 5: Death Chain \| Chapter 6: Royal Blood \| Chapter 7: Cold Chain \| Chapter 8: Siege \| Chapter 9: Memories of Old Kingdom \| Chapter 10: Tactic, Purge, and the Fight \| Chapter 11: Four Shadows \| Chapter 12: Three Letters \| Chapter 13: Two Sources Sonic Blast Madness Fanfic Chapter 1: Openly Close \| Chapter 2: Kamelot Tol-e-maC \| Chapter 3: Found Lost \| Chapter 4: Reaper What You Soul \| Chapter 5: Openly Reapers in Lost Tolemac \| Chapter 6: Follow the Reaper \| Chapter 7: Don't Follow the Reaper \| Chapter 8: Fight Yourself, Die Yourself \| Chapter 9: Masquerader Massacre \| Chapter 10: THE Enemy \| Chapter 11: Gulliver \| Chapter 12: Finally, Unlimited Madness \| Chapter 12: Finally, Loki's Madness(alternate ending) I'm totes a guy~ Kota: I hereby dub thee, Swolverine~


F`ame	Jan 20 2010, 02:02 PM Post #3
Happy and loved -Sunnyside Posts: 7,781 Group: A Rank Legend Member #9,839 Joined: March 16, 2009	lilfate Jan 20 2010, 12:08 PM Hmmm... She could use a bit of work. As well, how did she get that demon soul in her? On to details!!! Height: I'm taking it that she isn't a mobian wolf. She would be too tall for a mobain, as mobians are normally four foot something, barely. Then again, Big and Victor are tall for mobians, but their also adults so.shrugs Strength: This actually confuses me a little. Are you putting this as a 'power,' or putting it in terms of strength and weakness? Life Story: Again, you might want to add how that demon soul was introduced into her life. Special Abilities: I'm not going to say teleaporting is god-moding, cause for me teleaporting without some form of device or logical reason why you can teleaport is god-moding, but thats just me. I only say this cause people abuse the crud out of teleporting and think their Goku. However, going into people's minds(or other character's minds) and making them see things is considered controlling a character. Even though its similar to casting illusions, its also very different. For one, people can realize when an illusion is cast upon them after several minuets if their smart enough. As well, they can react and defend themselves against casting illusions. But actually going into their mind and making them see and hear things that aren't there is different then simply casting an illusion. For one, you'd have to post statements like 'She MADE Tydo see a spinning saw zooming towards him.' One, your making that character that isn't yours do something without the rper's say. As well, that can also fall under saying your attack hit the person. Now, I've rped with your character a few times, and this is actually the first time I've heard her be able to do this. I recommend taking it out, or saying she can cast illusions rather then saying she MAKES people see and hear things. Besides, she can read people's thoughts, why would she need to make them see things when she could just read what their thinking? I hope I've helped out some. Also, you might to add a description or picture of what she looks like. Basically, L has said almost everything I was going to say. You'd have to be a bit more specific on how that "demon" got inside of her. But, yeah, this is interesting. Sorry I don't have much to say, since lilfate, again, has informed you of all the mistakes and such.



Wolfgurl989	Jan 20 2010, 02:17 PM Post #4
Don't close your eyes, don't give into the fright Posts: 7,940 Group: A Rank Legend Member #9,781 Joined: February 21, 2009	Yep..I make a lot of mistakes... that's noted. I knew I had some holes in it but some of them, I beleive, are a bit off in understanding. I have had some Rp's with you Lilfate but it is just castin an illusion. When my character does this ...ex. "I looked over to the evil mobian and sighed, I'd have to get past somehow, I made up a hologram in my mind and made it run past, only he could see it, noone else could." kinda, I'm not really controlling the character, just, as you said, casting an ilusion...now I'm gonna stop typing because I;'m confusing myself. I don';t god-mod, at least when I post I try my hardest not too. But thanks for the help, really... it's appreciated. And again I understand that I have some huge holes and I'm sorry, I tried peicing together my charcters story..because really..I made it up as I typed. I had the basic storyline about how her parents died, where she lived, and when she went into her demon form...but that's all I had. I tried to think f the rest so that there were no holes but obviously I missed a bunch.



L Dragon	Jan 20 2010, 02:50 PM Post #5
Chaos Emerald Posts: 691 Group: S Rank Knight Member #746 Joined: March 19, 2007	Ahh its alright, Wolfgurl. I kinda figured you were shooting for illusions. I just wanted to make sure is all. As for your back story, take your time with it. I sometimes leave out back stories of my characters, or make them up as I rp. So no worries there.
	Sonic Blast Fated Kingdom Fanfic Members/Chara Data-Base Chapter 1: Otogi \| Chapter 2: Claws, Rifle, and Wind Chain \| Chapter 3: Crimson, Psychic, and Mage Chain \| Chapter 4: Eclipse Blossom \| Chapter 5: Death Chain \| Chapter 6: Royal Blood \| Chapter 7: Cold Chain \| Chapter 8: Siege \| Chapter 9: Memories of Old Kingdom \| Chapter 10: Tactic, Purge, and the Fight \| Chapter 11: Four Shadows \| Chapter 12: Three Letters \| Chapter 13: Two Sources Sonic Blast Madness Fanfic Chapter 1: Openly Close \| Chapter 2: Kamelot Tol-e-maC \| Chapter 3: Found Lost \| Chapter 4: Reaper What You Soul \| Chapter 5: Openly Reapers in Lost Tolemac \| Chapter 6: Follow the Reaper \| Chapter 7: Don't Follow the Reaper \| Chapter 8: Fight Yourself, Die Yourself \| Chapter 9: Masquerader Massacre \| Chapter 10: THE Enemy \| Chapter 11: Gulliver \| Chapter 12: Finally, Unlimited Madness \| Chapter 12: Finally, Loki's Madness(alternate ending) I'm totes a guy~ Kota: I hereby dub thee, Swolverine~


Wolfgurl989	Jan 20 2010, 02:55 PM Post #6
Don't close your eyes, don't give into the fright Posts: 7,940 Group: A Rank Legend Member #9,781 Joined: February 21, 2009	Lol's...thakns lilman! Yah..first time..I expected there to be a ton of holes, anywyas thanks for the constructive criticism. I'll work on it!



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