Mario&Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story

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Mario&Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story; I drew it!
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.:Ultravoilent:.	Jan 8 2010, 09:13 AM Post #1
strike a violent pose Posts: 1,227 Group: B Rank Hero Member #9,577 Joined: December 21, 2008	Spoiler: click to toggle Not my best. It was around...2 in the morning the day after Christmas...? I had to take it with my camera cause my scanner doesn't want to be nice to me.
	What you lookin at kemosabe?


Zak	Jan 8 2010, 09:41 AM Post #2
For The Circle Posts: 4,002 Group: D Rank Legend Member #9,748 Joined: February 10, 2009 3DS Friend Code: 1118-0225-4062 Steam ID: zakth686	pointy mario is pointy. nice work, though you made starlow look a little weird.
	"Ati Ramar, In defeat we learn."


.:Ultravoilent:.	Jan 8 2010, 10:03 AM Post #3
strike a violent pose Posts: 1,227 Group: B Rank Hero Member #9,577 Joined: December 21, 2008	I did, didn't I? Like I said, not my best work.
	What you lookin at kemosabe?


Gale	Jan 10 2010, 07:10 AM Post #4
<3 Posts: 1,779 Group: S Rank Hero Member #3,090 Joined: October 23, 2007 Gender: Female	Time for a little bit of critique! I hope it helps. My intuition tells me that the piece is lacking a bit in terms of composition - it appears that you've thrown together seperate elements, rather than making any effort to fit them together in a balanced way. Composition isn't something I can offer you any expert advice on, but try checking out some of the tutorials on deviantART. Your background is completely blank - I think this looks out of place for Mario box art. Blank backgrounds are usually associated with a slightly more minimalistic art style, which isn't suitable for this kind of game and requires a certain kind of composition. It appears that your artwork could benefit from some better art supplies (high quality supplies also tend to be easier to use), I would suggest that you pick up some high-quality colouring pencils at your local art store. Your lines are looking very light - if this is the darkest you can manage with that pencil, I would again suggest that you obtain a pencil capable of sharper, darker lines. I think that you have done well drawing the characters themselves. Luigi's hand isn't perfect (hands are tricky - you should look up some tutorials on hand anatomy on the internet, and also try drawing from photographs of real hands) and somebody already pointed out that Mario's looking a bit "pointy" in places, but I suspect that it was only a temporary mistake that you do not normally make. In future, I would recommend checking your lineart for errors (and then correct them, of course) before colouring.



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