Neo Fire Sonic

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Neo Fire Sonic; ONE of my fanmde chars
Tweet Topic Started: Nov 21 2009, 12:39 PM (3,073 Views)
Neo_Fire_Sonic	Nov 21 2009, 12:39 PM Post #1
Angel Island Act 2 Posts: 63 Group: D Rank Adventurer Member #10,517 Joined: November 21, 2009	My very first fanmade character Name: Neo Fire Sonic gender : Male age : 14 1/2 personality : (alright I took out "cool") I still think he is though. likes: beating bad guys likes being called : Neo favorite food : pizza,(you sit a pizza in front of him and its gone!) I have other chars but this is what i'm gonna put for now. please don't insult him. Edited by Neo_Fire_Sonic, Nov 24 2009, 01:11 PM.
	I am Neo_Fire_Sonic. The blue flame Oh yeah, I'm back.... fer stuff. HEH HEH heh. Whatever jeez


Cee Jay Haych	Nov 21 2009, 12:41 PM Post #2
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	Alot more detail needed for me to give this a good raing, please and in a bio and history.



Dregan	Nov 21 2009, 01:19 PM Post #3
The True Awsomifier Posts: 587 Group: A Rank Knight Member #4,223 Joined: December 11, 2007	Yeah I'd suggest a little more in the way of development... I mean, 'cool' personality kind of isn't much of an insight into him... it's also up to the readers interpretation of 'cool'. Whether one would judge him as cool or uncool would depend on his personality, as opposed to just having a generally 'cool' personality. Also, the name... Neo Fire Sonic... what, does that make him another form of Sonic or did he just conveniently share the name with the worlds great hero? He might've been named after him if not for the fact the guy would've been three at the time... His name makes him sound more like Sonic if he had fire rather than an individual character...
	Dregan has SPRITES! Dregan has COMICS! Dregan has BRAAAAARGH!!!


Neo_Fire_Sonic	Nov 21 2009, 02:02 PM Post #4
Angel Island Act 2 Posts: 63 Group: D Rank Adventurer Member #10,517 Joined: November 21, 2009	Dregan Nov 21 2009, 01:19 PM Yeah I'd suggest a little more in the way of development... I mean, 'cool' personality kind of isn't much of an insight into him... it's also up to the readers interpretation of 'cool'. Whether one would judge him as cool or uncool would depend on his personality, as opposed to just having a generally 'cool' personality. Also, the name... Neo Fire Sonic... what, does that make him another form of Sonic or did he just conveniently share the name with the worlds great hero? He might've been named after him if not for the fact the guy would've been three at the time... His name makes him sound more like Sonic if he had fire rather than an individual character... no not a nother form of sonic, he's sonic's counterpart, and where he's from everyone has a special power. their power is their middle name.
	I am Neo_Fire_Sonic. The blue flame Oh yeah, I'm back.... fer stuff. HEH HEH heh. Whatever jeez


Rhapsody~	Nov 21 2009, 03:19 PM Post #5
Get lost in the... wait do I HAVE to change it?! D: Posts: 651 Group: S Rank Knight Member #10,242 Joined: August 13, 2009	... How old are you, exactly? Out of curiosity, of course.
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Neo_Fire_Sonic	Nov 21 2009, 08:06 PM Post #6
Angel Island Act 2 Posts: 63 Group: D Rank Adventurer Member #10,517 Joined: November 21, 2009	Rhapsody~ Nov 21 2009, 03:19 PM ... How old are you, exactly? Out of curiosity, of course. well if you really need to know look at my profile, I guess. unless is if that is an insult.
	I am Neo_Fire_Sonic. The blue flame Oh yeah, I'm back.... fer stuff. HEH HEH heh. Whatever jeez


Gale	Nov 22 2009, 04:15 AM Post #7
<3 Posts: 1,779 Group: S Rank Hero Member #3,090 Joined: October 23, 2007 Gender: Female	Neo_Fire_Sonic Nov 21 2009, 08:06 PM Rhapsody~ Nov 21 2009, 03:19 PM ... How old are you, exactly? Out of curiosity, of course. well if you really need to know look at my profile, I guess. unless is if that is an insult. Click here and select "Show full birthday" if you want people to be able to see your age. Back on topic, what exactly is the point of creating a fan character who is essentially Sonic with a couple of minor tweaks? Why not just use Sonic himself for your roleplaying/comic-making/writing if they have the same sort of personality, fill the same sort of role and even share other similarities such as name, species and appearance? It's not really a testament to your originality.



Neo_Fire_Sonic	Nov 22 2009, 12:43 PM Post #8
Angel Island Act 2 Posts: 63 Group: D Rank Adventurer Member #10,517 Joined: November 21, 2009	Gale Nov 22 2009, 04:15 AM Neo_Fire_Sonic Nov 21 2009, 08:06 PM Rhapsody~ Nov 21 2009, 03:19 PM ... How old are you, exactly? Out of curiosity, of course. well if you really need to know look at my profile, I guess. unless is if that is an insult. Click here and select "Show full birthday" if you want people to be able to see your age. Back on topic, what exactly is the point of creating a fan character who is essentially Sonic with a couple of minor tweaks? Why not just use Sonic himself for your roleplaying/comic-making/writing if they have the same sort of personality, fill the same sort of role and even share other similarities such as name, species and appearance? It's not really a testament to your originality. no I would not use the sonic himself, he doesn't have the same persinality either. And Sonic happens to be his last name... the rest of whatever you said, I don't know what any of that else means. $:\$
	I am Neo_Fire_Sonic. The blue flame Oh yeah, I'm back.... fer stuff. HEH HEH heh. Whatever jeez


Cee Jay Haych	Nov 22 2009, 01:02 PM Post #9
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	Well, since you haven't posted anything about his personality apart from the word 'cool', then we have no idea what his personality is. The best advice I could give you would be to look at other peoples characters on this forum to see how you can improve your own.



Gale	Nov 22 2009, 01:10 PM Post #10
<3 Posts: 1,779 Group: S Rank Hero Member #3,090 Joined: October 23, 2007 Gender: Female	Neo_Fire_Sonic Nov 22 2009, 12:43 PM Gale Nov 22 2009, 04:15 AM Neo_Fire_Sonic Nov 21 2009, 08:06 PM Rhapsody~ Nov 21 2009, 03:19 PM ... How old are you, exactly? Out of curiosity, of course. well if you really need to know look at my profile, I guess. unless is if that is an insult. Click here and select "Show full birthday" if you want people to be able to see your age. Back on topic, what exactly is the point of creating a fan character who is essentially Sonic with a couple of minor tweaks? Why not just use Sonic himself for your roleplaying/comic-making/writing if they have the same sort of personality, fill the same sort of role and even share other similarities such as name, species and appearance? It's not really a testament to your originality. no I would not use the sonic himself, he doesn't have the same persinality either. And Sonic happens to be his last name... the rest of whatever you said, I don't know what any of that else means. $:\$ Sorry for the misunderstanding, I assumed that as you described him as "sonic's counterpart", he'd be very similar to Sonic with regards to personality. By the way, I'd recommend taking the universal Mary Sue litmus test for this character.



Neo_Fire_Sonic	Nov 22 2009, 02:03 PM Post #11
Angel Island Act 2 Posts: 63 Group: D Rank Adventurer Member #10,517 Joined: November 21, 2009	The Original Eevee Nov 22 2009, 01:02 PM improve your own. Improve????!!??! ya see when ever I look at other peoples chars they don't really make sense. No, he is alrady good enough to me. no this is not a tantrum. Edited by Neo_Fire_Sonic, Nov 22 2009, 02:03 PM.
	I am Neo_Fire_Sonic. The blue flame Oh yeah, I'm back.... fer stuff. HEH HEH heh. Whatever jeez


Derp the Defective Irken	Nov 22 2009, 02:27 PM Post #12
WE ARE SX BOB-BOMB! ONE TWO THREE FOUR! Posts: 467 Group: C Rank Knight Member #10,453 Joined: November 1, 2009	Look buddy, I don't wanna be rude but you're telling us anything really, tell us your characters attacks, abilities, and family and friends. We're not insulting, just giving you constructive criticism.
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Zak	Nov 22 2009, 02:30 PM Post #13
For The Circle Posts: 4,002 Group: D Rank Legend Member #9,748 Joined: February 10, 2009 3DS Friend Code: 1118-0225-4062 Steam ID: zakth686	Neo_Fire_Sonic Nov 22 2009, 02:03 PM The Original Eevee Nov 22 2009, 01:02 PM improve your own. Improve????!!??! ya see when ever I look at other peoples chars they don't really make sense. No, he is alrady good enough to me. no this is not a tantrum. There's always room for improvement. No matter how good a character is, it can always improve. I would take that Mary Sue test.
	"Ati Ramar, In defeat we learn."


Lord Talancir D'Landior	Nov 22 2009, 02:45 PM Post #14
~ RP Knight ~ Posts: 2,394 Group: Former Monarchs Member #2,592 Joined: September 26, 2007 Gender: Male Game Currently Playing: All the games. All of it.	Neo_Fire_Sonic Nov 22 2009, 02:03 PM The Original Eevee Nov 22 2009, 01:02 PM improve your own. Improve????!!??! ya see when ever I look at other peoples chars they don't really make sense. No, he is alrady good enough to me. no this is not a tantrum. in comparison to your character and 'everyone else,' I can see why everyone else is hard to understand. Yours is so easy to explain, so cut and paste that no one can doubt what your character is. I have only one question at the moment, though. Define 'cool.'
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Neo_Fire_Sonic	Nov 22 2009, 02:45 PM Post #15
Angel Island Act 2 Posts: 63 Group: D Rank Adventurer Member #10,517 Joined: November 21, 2009	I already said his abilties.2 of his friends are in the photo in my signature. his family, no unsure about that. $:\$
	I am Neo_Fire_Sonic. The blue flame Oh yeah, I'm back.... fer stuff. HEH HEH heh. Whatever jeez


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