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| Radar | Sep 4 2009, 11:25 AM Post #1 |
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Okay, this is basically my story of Burno and... Others, I guess. For now, enjoy the first chapter. Also, please note, the title may not be permanent. Chapter 1: Origins As far as anyone knew, there was not a lot of room for humans on Mobius. But the few humans who were permitted to at least visit Mobius wished for a better day. Where humans and these evolved animals could live in peace, together. If there were too many humans, they would be shot. There were only five hundred humans permitted on Mobius. The remainder would be shot down before they had a chance to speak for themselves. For this reason, the planet Rapugnus waged war against Mobius. However, there is a side to the story the world doesn't know... A little while ago, Professor Gerald Robotnik of planet Earth had a lot of projects. Project Shadow, the revival of the Giziod... But there was one project only select people knew of. And that project was titled: Project E.R.S.A.B, and sometimes referred to as the new ERA. Gerald refused to explain to anyone what the letters stood for. He just requested what he needed for it. Then, Gerald boarded the Space Colony ARK. So he left his work unattended. Until he allowed his most trusted colleague to continue work. What relevance is this to anything? All will be revealed soon... A small and slightly tubby man paced up and down the two walls of the room, frantically. He was a pale skinned man, with very little, if any facial hair. But he had little tufts here and there on his head, blonde and black lines. He had quite a handsome face, although his nose was a bump in his face. His brown eyes glimmered with both excitement and impatience. He was wearing a green lab coat, because he refuses to wear white, for "personal reasons". His shoes hit the ground hard, pounding once more with impatience. He was going back and forth in front of this huge machine. It contained two robots, floating in some sort of paralyzing chemical. The room was made for the machine. The man's impatience ended when the door was burst open. The figure that came through the door was a small, dark skinned man with a hunch, a very stereotypical scientist assistant. He was holding a tube of chemical in his hand. "Finally." said the man in the green coat. "I'm sorry I took so long. It was difficult to find. You really should tidy that storage." replied the hunch backed man. "You mean YOU should tidy it up. Now give me that." He snatched the chemical from the assistant. "As you wish, master." He scowled at him then stormed out of the room. "Let the door hit you on the way out." Said the man in the lab coat angrily. He proceeded to doing his work. He inserted the liquid into the small hole that it should be put in to. Then, all of a sudden, the robots, in an impossible way, started growing skin. The man threw his hands up in the air. "Yes!!" he cried out in joy. "I've finished what was started!" The robots were now barely recognisable. They were almost... Human? No. That wasn't quite the word. They still had the skeleton of a robot... Both 'robots' appeared to be male. One was dark brown haired, with cream like skin color. The other... Was dark haired, and almost completely pale. The two floated around in the machine as the man danced around, clearly happy about something. So, thoughts, comments and (most importantly) criticisms? Edited by Radar, Sep 5 2009, 01:58 AM.
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