Round 1- Kitsune_Otaku vs. Seris

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Round 1- Kitsune_Otaku vs. Seris
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Lord Tora Unlimited Crusader	Sep 3 2009, 08:19 PM Post #1
【The Knight of Tigers 】 Posts: 5,462 Group: Former Monarchs Member #6,733 Joined: March 17, 2008 Gender: Male Country: Australia 3DS Friend Code: 0404-6433-6113 Steam ID: crusaderandtimothy	This thread is dedicated to the first round match up between the competitors listed in the title. You will have 2 weeks to compete however a generous gap of 1 week is allowed for a non posting period... if either competitor takes longer than 1 week to make a reply then their characters fate is instantly handed to their opponent and/or the judges and they will be declared the loser. Begin with posts of your characters regaining consciousness and realizing that they are back in their natural bodies and retain all memories from the cafeteria.
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~~Otaku Clause~~	Sep 3 2009, 09:09 PM Post #2
Santa's Little Helper Posts: 1,469 Group: Continue? Member #4,434 Joined: December 19, 2007	Dorothy groaned, rubbing her head and sitting up as she woke up. "What happened?" she asked herself. She got up, realizing she was already in the arena. "I guess it's almost time to start...Better get ready to bring it on!" she did a few stretches to make sure her legs were nice and limber to be able to deliver powerful kicks in her fight.



Cee Jay Haych	Sep 7 2009, 01:48 AM Post #3
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	Jenna slowly got to her feet, shaking all the cobwebs out and trying to get her bearings on the situation. She felt the cold damp air around her and listen to the roaring crowd, she couldn't quite make out what they were cheering but it didn't matter all that much to her. Her eyes quickly adapted to the darken cavern that she found herself in, with nothing but flame tourches providing any light source she thought that her vision may give her an advantage in the coming fight in such a dimmily lit area. She looked around at the platforms that surronded arena, there was little advantage she could take from such a battlefield, it looked rather plain. Just then the platform she was standing on started to shake and shiver, Jenna's quick reactions just saved her as she lept of the platform mere seconds before it fell into the abyss below. Panting and regaining her footing on a new platform, Jenna suddenly spied her opponent on opposite side of the arena, She decided to wait and let her adversary make the first move.



~~Otaku Clause~~	Sep 7 2009, 07:40 AM Post #4
Santa's Little Helper Posts: 1,469 Group: Continue? Member #4,434 Joined: December 19, 2007	As Dorothy finished her stretching exercises, she noticed Jenna on the other side of the field and prepared herself. When she didn't make a move, she decided that it would be an ideal opportunity to attack her first. She jumped across the arena, moving from platform to platform to reach her platform before she leapt at her with a flying kick aimed at her head as she attacked.



Cee Jay Haych	Sep 9 2009, 01:07 AM Post #5
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	Jenna watch her opponent come at her with a flying kick, a rudementary mistake as Jenny ducked out the way and lept onto another platform, she had just found her footing when that platform too began to shake and give way, quickly Jenna lept to another platform before the one she was on crumbled beneith her. It would be impossible for her to even get a hit on such a battlefield, she would have to come up with a plan and fast.



~~Otaku Clause~~	Sep 9 2009, 11:55 AM Post #6
Santa's Little Helper Posts: 1,469 Group: Continue? Member #4,434 Joined: December 19, 2007	Dorothy paused, considering the situation. Jenna seemed pretty fast, and it would be hard to land a hit if she dodged all her approaches. "Looks like it's time to try a long-range approach," she told herself, reaching down and activating the steam jets on her boots. She looked over at Jenna, kicking towards her and sending a quick jet of steam towards with the force of her powerful kick.



Cee Jay Haych	Sep 10 2009, 12:40 AM Post #7
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	Jenna felt the fall blast of the jet steam, it knocked her back and flung her from the platform she was on to the one behind her, she only manage to stop going over the edge due to her cat like reflexes making sure that she landed more or less on her feet. Jenna let a slight smile creep onto her face, then, still crouched down after the fall, she began hopping randomly from platform to platform.



~~Otaku Clause~~	Sep 10 2009, 07:46 AM Post #8
Santa's Little Helper Posts: 1,469 Group: Continue? Member #4,434 Joined: December 19, 2007	Dorothy followed after Jenna, jumping from platform to platform and able to keep up fairly easily due to her jumping ability and the speed boost that her jets gave her as she jumped. As she caught up, she delivered a series of rapid kicks in mid-air, sending more steam jets down towards her opponent. Jenna seemed to be faster than her, but she was sure to be taken down if she could get enough kicks delivered since she didn't seem as strong as her.



Cee Jay Haych	Sep 15 2009, 12:15 AM Post #9
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	Jenna continued to jump to different platforms, her opponent in hot pursuit, Finally she found what she was looking for, if this went the way she planned it would work out very much in her favour, if not then she could lose the match at that very second. She stood on the platform and waited for her opponent to respond.



~~Otaku Clause~~	Sep 15 2009, 10:46 AM Post #10
Santa's Little Helper Posts: 1,469 Group: Continue? Member #4,434 Joined: December 19, 2007	Dorothy's eyes narrowed as she saw her opponent stop on a platform, wondering what she was up to. She had to be planning something, so she decided to do something different than simply landing on the same platform. She spread her legs slightly apart, starting to backflip with increasing speed in mid-air. If she could get her ankles around Jenna's neck, she could use this momentum to slam her into the platform with a powerful leg suplex when she got down.



Cee Jay Haych	Sep 15 2009, 11:42 PM Post #11
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	Jenna spied her chance, at the last possible moment she darted out the way seconds before the platform she was standing on crumbled benieth her, she lunged and grabbed on to another platform, quickly clambering onto it, trying to catch her breath. Edited by Cee Jay Haych, Sep 15 2009, 11:42 PM.



~~Otaku Clause~~	Sep 16 2009, 09:04 AM Post #12
Santa's Little Helper Posts: 1,469 Group: Continue? Member #4,434 Joined: December 19, 2007	Dorothy saw the platform crumble, quickly changing tactics. She stopped spinning and released a large jet of steam from her boots, propelling her back so she could land safely on another platform. Her eyes narrowed, seeing her opponent catching her breath. Jenna seemed to be tricky, but it would take more than petty tricks like that to beat her.



Lord Bowie	Sep 17 2009, 09:08 PM Post #13
What is the difference between a duck? Posts: 4,799 Group: Former Monarchs Member #7,312 Joined: April 10, 2008 Playstation Network ID: Allbowdown Xbox Live Gamertag: allbowdown	MATCH PERIOD OVER, JUDICIAL REVIEW UNDERWAY
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Lord Tora Unlimited Crusader	Sep 23 2009, 12:41 AM Post #14
【The Knight of Tigers 】 Posts: 5,462 Group: Former Monarchs Member #6,733 Joined: March 17, 2008 Gender: Male Country: Australia 3DS Friend Code: 0404-6433-6113 Steam ID: crusaderandtimothy	ZEEBO THE CLOWN -Fair Play: 9/10 Didn't force any hits and stayed within character constrictions. Good job. -Grammar: 7/10 Ehhhhh, nothing spectacular here. Spelling seems fine, but there's a fair bit of punctuation error. -Adaptation to Environment: 5/10 The platforms caused an attack abortion, but that was about it. However, you DID show recognition of the hazard every so often, so it's not all bad. -Entertainment: 7/10 Nice characterisation. It was good to see your tactics change to reflect growing frustration with such a tricksy ~~hobbitses~~ opponent. THE ORIGINAL EEVEE -Fair Play: 7/10 Took a hit, but didn't seem to be any worse for the wear after having STEAM emitted in your character's face. Dodged a fair bit, but you've an evasive character, so it's pretty well within reason. -Grammar: 6/10 Spelling seems to be alright, but there's a lot of punctuation errors and run-on sentences. -Adaptation to Environment: 6/10 You almost fell off maybe twice and kept the platforms in mind through all your posts. Nothing SPECIAL, mind you, but it's still good. -Entertainment: 5/10 You described what you were doing, but thought processes and characterisation were very limited. This was a veritable game of cat-and-mouse, really. While there were some hairy moments for Jenna, it was still pretty much an episode of Road Runner and Wile E. Coyote. Good luck to whoever moves on to the next round and hopefully we'll see some more action in the next match. The score thus far stands at: Zeebo - 28 Eevee - 24
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Lord Bowie	Sep 24 2009, 03:34 PM Post #15
What is the difference between a duck? Posts: 4,799 Group: Former Monarchs Member #7,312 Joined: April 10, 2008 Playstation Network ID: Allbowdown Xbox Live Gamertag: allbowdown	Zeebo (Dorothy) Fair Play 9/10 You abided by your profile and stayed away from any sorts of "red tape" action to really be penalized. So I say you're good here. Grammar 7/10 Nothing glaringly bad but there are instances of missing periods, commas, e.t.c. lie TUC mentioned and it was persistent enough to dock you some points. Adaptation to Setting 7/10 I'm gunna be a little generous when considering the arena did affect your attack plan and you did take account of it at times though it was a little inconsistent. Solid output with some shaky moments. Entertainment Value 6/10 You made some nice descriptions and I liked the use of personality in your posts. Evaluating your opponent was also helpful in keeping me from bombing on your score here. I just could never get into a great entertainment flow since my enjoyment grows as I read and I kept getting roadblocked as I got interested due to size. ^^; So if you ever get the chance to describe and do what you did here but give it just a little more meat, I will be satisfied and your score will improve over it. 29/40 Original Eevee (Jenna) Fair Play 7/10 You shook off quite a bit though it is your character's nature to do so, but there were a couple iffy points to dunk your score a tad. Grammar 6/10 You shared many of the same issues regarding punctuation. Fragment some of your sentences a tad to prevent them from running on as well. Adaptation to Setting 7/10 Solid use of the arena in your posts along with a couple close calls but for the majority of your work there wasn't much to really catch my attention outside of a "it was there" sort of noticing. Entertainment Value 5/10 Your posts consisted of a lot of "she did this, this, and this and then this happened" but not a lot of anything outside of that. The size prevented me of getting into any real reading rhytym and a little more description, character personality would have vastly helped you out. 25/40 These scores along with TUCs result in Zeebo - 57/80 Eevee - 49/80 Zeebo wins based off of the final scoring though there is potential to be seen in the both of you. ^^
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