Vertex Omega the Hedgehog

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Vertex Omega the Hedgehog; Mai first bio.
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Kingdaro	Aug 9 2009, 11:41 PM Post #1
The ball of Epicness Posts: 1,369 Group: A Rank Hero Member #9,216 Joined: July 20, 2008	Now you know why my User name is Vertex Omega I've had this profile in the works for a while, and I finally got around to finishing it. This is my very first full bio. Name: Vertex Omega Age: 17 Sex: Male Species: Hedgehog Physical Appearance: He's a bright blue hedgehog. The ends of his spines point up, and are striped purple. His ears are tall, allowing for excellent hearing. His eyes are bright violet in the day, and glow during night. His gloves are gray with a red pattern atop. His shoes are gray with white stripes. Personality: Vertex works alone, as in he can't trust anybody. He's an intelligent and curious person, and is cautious of his surroundings. He hates those who insult him, and those who are cocky. In battle, he's fierce and merciless. He'll beat the snot outta you if you don't move every half second. Abilities: Gravity Control. He fires a beam from his hands, and anything he hits is de-gravitized. If the object is shot again, the gravity returns. He cannot attack against mirrors, since they will reflect his power. History: Vertex Omega was born in a forest, like most other creatures. He was raised in that same forest. Though, his life wasn't all that great. In that forest, it was mostly populated with foxes, echidnas, chameleons, pretty much almost anything you could think of. Everything but Hedgehogs. During his childhood, he was pretty much an outcast for being almost the only hedgehog in school. Kids called him names, teased him, and did retarded imitations of him, in Vertex's opinion. The other reason was because he about beat up whoever teased him, and went to the principal's office countless times. This is why he can never trust most others. After a long 5 years in elementary, he went to high school. Where he came from, there is no middle. Just beginning and end. Anyway, there he was still an outcast. Others knew what he would do to them if he was made fun of, so they backed away. Far away. It was hopeless trying to make any friends, Vertex thought. He was wrong, however. He soon met a good friend, Alpha the Hedgehog, midway through the year. It was a strange meeting. Over cheese. But they met, and became best friends instantly. Vertex always counted on Alpha for help, advice, and someone to play Sonic Adventure with him when he was bored. After the year was over, graduation had come. Alpha and Vertex had to go their separate ways. Almost forever, until they would meet someday in the future. To this day, Vertex Omega traveled the world alone in his own fly typed extreme gear he called the Twin Core 12, because it appeared to be split in two. Edited by Kingdaro, Aug 10 2009, 02:04 AM.
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`TakeCare	Aug 10 2009, 01:35 AM Post #2
-sigh- Posts: 2,390 Group: S Rank Hero Member #9,520 Joined: November 29, 2008 Gender: Male 3DS Friend Code: ask Game Currently Playing: Smash 4	Short and simple. I LIKE IT! Comments/Concerns/Criticisms Your character's ability is quite interesting. However I suggest you add more to it. One target may become lighter/heavier, depending on which your character wants to use, but in turn make another target heavier/lighter. One's gravity is taken, but it's got to go somewhere. IMO that can save your character and place him apart from others (like characters who summon fire out of nothing) because it's got "logic". You take one's gravity, then give it to someone else; balance [in nature] is achieved. What is this "silver emerald"? Toss it out if it's: a Chaos Emerald or is a jewel that gives off energy (which is basically a Chaos Emerald). Power Rings can be your nice alternative, since this "great power" is such short lived. Use invincible instead of immortal. Last sentence in your ability, cut it. Destruction of everything/anything is quite overpowering, plus he kills himself because he's in the middle of the fricken blast You can keep it, but place a duration of charging and a distance. [TC's Example: After 30 seconds of charging, massive waves of de-gravitation and gravitational pull spreads quickly in a... half mile radius. Much of his energy is wasted and his powers of locked for a full 2 minutes.] Wow, I came up with THAT? Anyway you get my point, right? Your history sounds like he has a normal life, quite doesn't seem to be common these days. I can see how Vertex became friends with Alpha, easily. The only thing the history doesn't explain is how he has his ability of controlling gravity (which, I bet, will be hard to explain. More so in training that was involved). The lack of fighting in the history leaves me to guess that he's a below average fist-to-fist fighter. (self-taught or simply watched videos and learned from looking?) Your character holds high interest to me. I don't know why, but I like him. The only thing I think really needs to be enhanced is the a bit of editing in the ability and a more explaining in obtaining the ability in the history. TC's scoring 8.5/10 -.5 A balance is needed for what we do. [Ability] -.5 Knowledge knows no bounds [no ability mention in History] -.5 Bright colors hurts the eyes. [I've always envisioned this. Well you're character will stand out in the dark places.]
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Kingdaro	Aug 10 2009, 02:05 AM Post #3
The ball of Epicness Posts: 1,369 Group: A Rank Hero Member #9,216 Joined: July 20, 2008	Thanks for the rate I made some minor edits.
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Cignen	Aug 11 2009, 01:38 AM Post #4
Angel Island Act 1 Posts: 49 Group: E Rank Adventurer Member #10,100 Joined: June 27, 2009	When I first saw this, I thought it would be bad, and I nearly packed up after seeing he was a blue hedgehog. However, I kept reading and I like it. I still miss the happy family in the backstories... so much tradgedy is the world of Sonic built upon... PS Why Vertex Omega? You do know Vertexes are corners, don't you?



Kingdaro	Aug 11 2009, 10:19 AM Post #5
The ball of Epicness Posts: 1,369 Group: A Rank Hero Member #9,216 Joined: July 20, 2008	I wanted to come up with a name that was unique. Vertex just happened to come to me, and I thought it was epic. I don't see any other name that would suit him. Edited by Kingdaro, Aug 11 2009, 10:20 AM.
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