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| Blaze's Flame | Jul 30 2009, 01:35 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Crystal the Fox Nickname: Cryst Age: 13 Species: Fox Gender: Female Height: 3'5 Weight: Unknown IQ: 75-80 Martial Status: Single DOB: 7/12 Birthplace: Ice Cap Zone Residence: Ice Cap Zone Occupation: None Social Class: Normal Economic Class: Middle Class Aligment: Unknown Top Speed: 70-90 Basic Stats: Speed: 7 Agility: 9 Strength: 5 Defense: 6 Evasiness: 8 Dexterity: 7 Intelligence: 9 Skill: 9 Special Attacks: Crystal Throw: To throw crystals at an enemy to make them paralyze. Time Break: To stop time for 20 seconds. Gem Healer: To heal a friend for 20% of health. Abilities: Crystal Freeze: To freeze an enemy for 30 seconds. Crystal Tornado: To spin around and make a tornado tp sweep enemies off their feet. Gem Swipe: To throw gems and make them dizzy and confused. Skating: Be able to skate well on ice or land to go faster. Hobbies/Talents: Dancing, Skating, Singing (off-key) collecting gems. Weakness: Falling, memories about her sister and parents, seeing Starlight getting hurt, losing a battle, and being hot-tempered. Personality: Crystal is a fun, free-spirited, and sometimes annoying girl who loves her friends and family. she's also a hot-tempered girl when somebody messes with her. She has a best friend named Starlight the Hedgehog. She also lost her parents when she was young. Friends: Starlight the Hedgehog, Dark the Hedgehog, Seiya the Echidna, and Aquamarine the Fox. Rivals: None Enemies: Eggman Known Relatives: Jenny the Fox (mother) James the Fox (father) Likes/Favorite: Dance, Sing, Draw, Makeing friends, her sister Aquamarine, and light colored things. Dislikes/Hates: Being yelled at, mean people, falling down while skating, being separated from her sister, and flashbacks of her parents. Favorite Food and Drinks: 7up, pizza, sushi, fruit punch, chinese food, and sprite. Favorite Color: Light blue, Pink, Yellow, and Blue. Physical Apperence: Fur Color: light blue Skin Color: White Hair/quill Color: light blue Eye Color: Gray Nose: Normal Ears: Normal Tail: Just like Tails but only one. Clothes: Has a light blue fur jacket with some jeans, blue shoes, and white gloves. Items: Crystals: Be able to throw at enemies to make them, freeze, paralyze, or dizzy. Skates: Crystal has skates that she can go faster on ice, or land. Theme Song: On The Ride~ Aly & A.J Flashback Story: Crystal had a good life with her mother, Jenny the Fox, her father, James the Fox, and her sister, Aquamarine the Fox. 4 years later, Jenny and James was gone for a very long time and never returned. No one knows why they've been gone for a long time, but Crystal and Aquamarine started to look for them. 2 years later, they started to battle with Eggman. After the battle, Crystal was separated from Aquamarine. Then when she landed in Mercia Neverlake she continued to look for her parents, but now her sister. There, she met a purple hedgehog named Starlight the Hedgehog and they became best friends. Crystal hopes to find her sister and her parents fast or they will be lost forever. Picture: http://i28.tinypic.com/e0kdjs.jpg Edited by Blaze's Flame, Sep 17 2009, 07:14 PM.
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| Laguz King | Aug 3 2009, 07:22 PM Post #2 |
Soulweaver
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I like it personally |
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Cee Jay Haych
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Aug 4 2009, 04:41 AM Post #3 |
"I didn't use the whole thing ...."
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Hmm, this reminds me of an old fan character of mine, except she was a dog not a fox . . . But anyway good start, could do with alittle more padding in the background area. |
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| Riley | Aug 17 2009, 09:46 PM Post #4 |
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Cool fan character |
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stare deep into my eyes, let the darkness consume you...*i belive in a thing called love starts playing* not that darkness..... we feel awesome people | |
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Aug 18 2009, 10:05 AM Post #5 |
Cute silver FTW ♥
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Nice. i like her, and good description. |
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| Ice Fire | Sep 5 2009, 03:27 AM Post #6 |
Twisted Fate ~when things don't go the way it should~
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thats excellent , her abilities are the best (Fan of Ice & Freezing people) |
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| Mezzo | Sep 5 2009, 06:05 AM Post #7 |
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This seems really god-modded personally. Since this looks like Comcept:Mobius's Bio, I'll go by their standpoints on it. The absic Stats should not go above 40, Crystal's is 71. Her attacks are powerful, ranged, and can stop time for more than enough time to kill anyone you're fighting, freezing people, dis-orienting people, sweeping them away, and a speed boost. And the weaknesses don;t balance out at all. Everyone hates seeing friends get hurt, remembering lost family, and losing. Falling and a temper don;t make able weaknesses for her strengths. So to summarize: -Balance out the Stats -Tone down her strengths or increase her weaknesses -A more detailed Backstory would be nice, but not needed Everything else looks good. |
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| Blaze's Flame | Sep 6 2009, 08:08 PM Post #8 |
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Okay. I guess I made a small mistake there...thanks for poining that there. 
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| Gameboy121 | Sep 8 2009, 01:35 PM Post #9 |
Character Select
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That's awesome! 
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| Blaze's Flame | Sep 10 2009, 07:42 PM Post #10 |
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Thank you gameboy!
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| Blargen | Sep 11 2009, 11:35 PM Post #11 |
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She looks like someone tails would hook up with... |
| The root of all evil... Is me.... | |
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| Blaze's Flame | Sep 16 2009, 06:39 PM Post #12 |
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*laughs* Really? I guess so! 
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| Blargen | Sep 16 2009, 08:54 PM Post #13 |
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well.. look at her. They almost look the same. |
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| DDRshadow | Sep 16 2009, 08:59 PM Post #14 |
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Neat-o, I'm impressed. Although it is a little godmodded, or whatever its called. other than that i luv it :3 |
"That's one flashy dancer" 
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| Blaze's Flame | Sep 17 2009, 05:55 PM Post #15 |
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@ Blargen: yeah, you're right. They do look alike. *laughs* @ DDR: Aww, thanks DDR! I don't know if that was godmodding. ...is it? Well anyway, thank you again! |
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