My Fan Characters

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My Fan Characters; They're OK...
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Xyrin	Jun 20 2009, 06:31 PM Post #1
Angel Island Act 1 Posts: 28 Group: E Rank Adventurer Member #10,076 Joined: June 20, 2009	I'm gonna put them right here! I've only drew one... But I have TONS! They might be too much like other character but... I don't care I just enjoy making these! Cyan The Hedgehog It's not very good... And it may look like it's colored but it's not! Where's it's shaded in is where the color Cyan would go! Name: Cyan The Hedgehog Nicknames: Cy, Cyan, Psi Age: 13 Species: Hedgehog Gender: Male Height: 4'3 Weight: 48 lbs IQ: 96 Marital Status: Single DOB: January, 1 Birth Place: Crisis City Residence: Metropolis City Occupation: N/A Economic Class: Average Alignment: Neutral Top Speed: 25 MPH (With Telekineses 200 MPH) Basic Stats (added numbers cannot exceed 40) Agility - 5 Speed - 5 ( With Telekineses 10) Strength - 2 Defense - 5 Evasiveness - 7 Dexterity - 3 Intelligence - 4 Skill - 7 Special Attacks: He has a shield attack that blocks and throws all items and character (only for a limited time though)! Abilities & Aptitude: He can use his ESP to go faster and to fly! He can use his ESP to block himself from his opponents vision for a limited time! He can go Super Cyan! Hobbies & Talents: He Likes to travel through time to see important events in history! He has ESP! Weaknesses: 1. He is helpless without his ESP 2. Since he's a 13 year old kid he take as much damage as most 3. He's afraid of Fire. Personal facts Friends: None he's a loner Rivals: N/A Enemies: Eggman, Known relatives: Silver The Hedgehog (Cousin) Likes/Favorite activities: Exploring his city, Looking for the chaos Emeralds! Dislikes/Least favorite activities: Racing (if it is on foot not telekinesis), Being a spy " He likes to express himself) Gourmet of choice: Pizza Beverages of choice: Dr. Pepper Favorite color(s): Cyan (DUH!) Personality: He doesn't ever give up he's strong willed! He has much faith in himself and you might call him a professional bragger! When he loses to his Rivals he will ask for a re-match ( If he can ) And keep doing so until he has won or can't battle anymore! Physical Appearance Color: Silver Skin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): Silver Eye Color: Cyan Hair/Quill Style: Sonic style (Sorry) Nose: Normal Ears: Spiky ( I forgot the ears! I'll make 'em in a minute!) Tail: Average Attire: Gear Goggles and gear... Items & Weapons: Boots that when he channels his ESP through them spikes come out! Gloves that let him stick to any surface! His shoes and gloves have got stuff in them to make them Silent when he walks around and climbs! Vehicles: None Themesong: Time Machine This vids about Silver though!Time Machine it's about Silver The Hedgehog but... The reason why he's so much like Silver is that they're cousins... I hope you like 'Em! I'm gonna change the drawing now! Edit when I'm done! Edited by Xyrin, Jun 21 2009, 08:57 AM.
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`TakeCare	Jun 20 2009, 11:06 PM Post #2
-sigh- Posts: 2,390 Group: S Rank Hero Member #9,520 Joined: November 29, 2008 Gender: Male 3DS Friend Code: ask Game Currently Playing: Smash 4	I'm not in a picky mood today, but I do feel the need to point some things out today. My positive thoughts: Some people are oblivious about IQs, but I'm glad you kept yours realistic . He's got an interesting hobby. I'd like to travel back in time and watch important events. My neutral thoughts: Link the picture. On my screen it only says "Posted Image" without blue text. "Time traveling Hedgehog" is not an occupation. Alignment is up for question, as I only know what I know about it. A character is considered to be one of three areas: Light(Hero) , Neutral, or Dark(Evil). Of course it can get more complex, but that's as basic as you can get. Loner is more of a personality trait than an alignment. Explain what ESP means, for those who don't know what it means. I'm one of them.[/u] Things to work on: Your increase of speed can be raised, but everything comes with a cost of something in return. Whether that be sacrificing some stat numbers in order to keep at 40 or simply having some of your special attacks or abilities locked in order to accomplish the raise in speed. A Super form is little odd, simply because it's not well explained. Dispite this a new form should have massive weaknesses as more alternate forms are massively overpowering. Don't put your characters too close to the originals. To say that your fan character is a relative to an official character is like saying that one's fan character is a long lost cousin of an uncles daughter in the Prower family. Concept: "Mobuis" A rival defines someone who can stand up against your character with equal fortitude and strengths. Try not to make an official character a rival of your character unless a plausible reason is presented, because all that says about your fancharacter is, "OMG, MY CHARACTER IS BETTER THAN SONIC, TAILS, KNUCKLES AND SHADOW PUT TOGETHER HAHAHAHAA LOLERZ!" Overall thoughts Your characters is very closely related to Sliver the Hedgehog, and though I don't know much about Sliver I know that that's what this character is closely related to. If this is your first fan character, then you need to rethink some things. Take some time to find a way to make him stand out from Sliver. Edited by `TakeCare, Jun 21 2009, 02:09 AM.
	Short Blogs \| Character Database \| YouTube "lurk lurk lurk lurk type type type type post post post post post" ~TakeCare


Xyrin	Jun 21 2009, 01:22 AM Post #3
Angel Island Act 1 Posts: 28 Group: E Rank Adventurer Member #10,076 Joined: June 20, 2009	Thanks! Abut the Rivals... I've never made a fan char before can i just pick?
	Sonic Legends for the best fan fiction around! My fan Characters! Cyan The Hedgehog!


`TakeCare	Jun 21 2009, 02:05 AM Post #4
-sigh- Posts: 2,390 Group: S Rank Hero Member #9,520 Joined: November 29, 2008 Gender: Male 3DS Friend Code: ask Game Currently Playing: Smash 4	Welcome. Some character don't really need a rival. If you really want a character to fill that field usually it's best to use another one of your fan characters to fill it. I noticed your edits: You grabbed a wiki source, and most likely copied and pasted the information. We don't really care about the university, and the sixth sense. Read through it and delete the unnecessary points and keep the points that you wish to keep. That was basically summed up. I'm not much in the way in in depth commenting, at the moment. Edited by `TakeCare, Jun 21 2009, 02:08 AM.
	Short Blogs \| Character Database \| YouTube "lurk lurk lurk lurk type type type type post post post post post" ~TakeCare


Gale	Jun 29 2009, 06:53 AM Post #5
<3 Posts: 1,779 Group: S Rank Hero Member #3,090 Joined: October 23, 2007 Gender: Female	Any particular reason for the vast quantities of exclamation marks? You seem rather excited. Don't stop using 'em, though - I find it hilarious. Quote: Super Cyan



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