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Sonic Legends, Legend: EE-3 Series; My stories from Sonic Legends
Topic Started: Jun 20 2009, 07:50 AM (75 Views)
Xyrin
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I made a wordpress site called Sonic legends where I post fan fiction! I'll post it here to!

Chapter 1!

“HAND OVER CHAOS EMERALD” Said EE-1. EE-1 is chasing Silver the hedgehog for going into Metro city and taking a chaos emerald.It is EE-1 And EE-2’s job to find them… And not let intruders into the city… But it’s hard when people are getting ESP.

” Catch me!” Said Silver the hedgehog! ” But Robots are slow… I forgot!”

” CHAOS CANNON” Said EE-1 as he charged his Chaos emerald Beam. EE-2 is catching up.

” Uh-oh… CHAOS CONTROL!” Said Silver as a potal appeared in front of him as he jumped it!

Silver emerged through the portal in a different time period. The time period of Sonic the hedgehog! Silver look around and saw somebody else jumped through the portal with him!

” AHHH!!!! Who are you?” Said silver as he got into a fighting position! ” Tell me who you are and why you jumped here with me!

” I’m Inferno… The cat! The brother of Blaze the cat!” Said Inferno.

” Blaze never told me about any siblings… I have ESP!” Said Silver while watching Inferno. Inferno eased as he was about to talk,

” Ahh… Blaze sacraficed herself… She never existed… So I was the one born with the powers…It ok…” Said Inferno as Silver eased ” I wanna help you…”

” Ohh… Team?” Said Silver as he reached out a hand

” Team!” Said Inferno cofidently that they’d be quick friends! They shook hands…


Is it any ood?
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It could be longer, and you could've spellchecked it before posting it. But it's a great storyline! I'd like to see more! :)
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Soo... Nobody likes it... I'm writing another!

Chapter 2

The new friends Silver and Inferno were walking down a path. All of a sudden… A Blue hedgehog ran past them at the speed of sound!

” SONIC! There’s a lake behind those bushes!” Said Silver wih a worried look on his face as his friend plummeted into the water!

” Uh-Oh…. SONIC CAN’T SWIM!!!” Yelled Silver, ” CHAOS CONTROL!!!!!!” Silver teleported into the lake as he look around despertly for Sonic the hedgehog! The worlds fastest runner! He saw bubbles come from below him… He saw sonic! He bubbled out ” CHAOS CONTROL!” Then appeared at the serface to get a breath! He teleported even farther under! He saw sonic and grabbed him!

” blubryblub” Sonic Bubbled out. Silver grabbed Sonic.

” CHAOS CONTROL!” Yelled out Silver! They appeared at the serface!

” Silver! Am I happy to see you!” Said Sonic happily!

” Ugh…” Silve said anoyed… ” At least I’m not seeing you carcass like lat time!

Sonic and Silver cracked up! Inferno didn’t get it…


You like it? Yeah I wish I was at my real computer I'll be on mine all night! This doesn't have Spell check! I'm glad you like it! If you know anything about wordpress sites it's Sonic legends! I need an editor and an skin maker!
Edited by Xyrin, Jun 20 2009, 08:08 AM.
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I like where the story thus far! I would like to see who made those EE-series robots. :)
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Try to guess! You'll find out in the next chapter... I'll just write it now!

Chapter 3


” So why are you here anyways?” Asked Sonic “why aren’t you in the future?”

” The EE-3 Robots…” Said Silver… “There’s on 2 though… I don’t know what happened to the other one!”

” Wait… Me and Tails where in Metro city… We heard something about in the future some EE-3 Robts would destro the future of Metro city… Eggman does have 4 of the chaos emeralds…” Said Sonic

” Wait… EGGMAN MADE THEM??? When I was using Chaos Control… It used Chaos Cannon… HE’S POWERING THEM WITH THE CHAOS EMERALDS!!!” Silver yelled!

” Sooo…. It’s Eggman Emerald robots… But there’s only two! Said Inferno!

” Eggman isn’t stupid… There’s gotta be a reaon…” Said Sonic ” Anyways we gotta call everyone in to H.Q.!

” H.Q.???” Asked Silver and Inferno!

” After you Silve left we made a H.Q… I’m callin’ in!” Said Sonic then he pushed on a ring on his wrist and said ” Tails come in Tails! The EE-3 Robots aren’t just a rumor Silve came back from the future! Theyre destroying Metro City!”

” Give him a ring! I’m callin’ everyone in!” Said the ring but Tails must’ve been speaking into it. They went to Angle island and met Shadow, Rouge, Omega-123, Tails, Knuckles, Amy, And Jet the Hawk…

The meeting has started…


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I do like it! But I feel that there's only a beginning and an end to each chapter. You have the characters move into the next scene too fast, not taking too much time to fully emulate their personality. And the paragraphs seem a bit too short. I think it'd help if you made it longer.
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It sounds more like an RP.
Like Sonikku mentioned, there is no emotions and that's what makes em different from a normal fan fiction and RP.

It's short and a few mistakes with spelling here and there. The story isn't bad, but it could be more interesting if it was put more work on it.
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