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Zahri's World
Topic Started: Jun 10 2009, 12:49 PM (403 Views)
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Lind Kaito was sleeping peacefully in his bed in the middle of the night. He is sleeping in his house on the island he lives on. His nap was going peacefully when all the sudden, the craziest and most random thing happened.

A beautifully-covered box shattered through his ceiling, waking Lind up and scaring the living daylights out of him.

"What the hell....?" Lind moaned. He is half asleep and he's thinking this is probably a dream. He approached the box, wearing nothing but boxers and a t-shirt, and looked up at the ceiling, noticing a big gaping hole right above him with the full moon shining into the bedroom. His nearby closet is open with his clothes on shelves.

Lind is impressed by the size of the box. He's just only a head taller then the square box. The box has pink, blue, and white colors on it along with big colorful letters on one side of the box saying "The Toy Box." However, Lind noticed a lid.

This thing literally fell out of the sky. Who knows what's inside of it? Lind asked himself in his thoughts. He decided to open the lid with curiosity.

Big mistake.

As soon as the lid was completely off, Lind was sucked in the toy box with an incredible force. He almost had no time to react. Along with his clothes from the closet nearby, he was then completely in the box and the lid then somehow shut itself back on the toy box, stopping the box from sucking anything else.

Lind is gone and just seconds after he disappeared into the box, his cousin, Gabi Kaito, walked into the room. Gabi is a slob who doesn't really care about Lind but after Lind's parents disappeared from his life, Gabi raised him and both don't really like each other. Gabi noticed that Lind is gone but didn't really care at the moment, wanting some rest. He shut the door and went back to his bedroom. He'll probably report to the local police in the morning.

Meanwhile, Lind found himself in the most bizarre place he ever been in.

He's in a weird colorful place with giant blocks with random letters and symbols on it along with giant pieces of candy and there's even weird pink bubbles floating into the sky in the distance. He's not sure exactly how he got here but he knew the toy box sucked him in and he fell on this ground which is solid, white and pink ground. Lind feels like somebody shrunk him and then put him in a room of toys.

"Hey, you, put some clothes on," a voice said. It sounded like it came from nearby. Lind turned around and saw a weird person.

He noticed a man about his age with dark silver, neat hair that covers his gray ears and forehead. The tip of his hair look spiky and like it was gelled because the hair around his head looks the same. He is wearing a long-sleeve black shirt with weird gray and black plaidl pants. He is also wearing wooden sandels. The weirdest thing about him though is the weird black lines under his eyes. He looks a bit weird, Lind thought. But then Lind remembered he is still in his boxers and t-shirt.

"Gah...." Luckily, clothes and even a pair of shoes from his nearby closet were sucked in with him. Lind put them on as fast as he can and then turned to the strange man.

"So what's your name?" he simply asked. His voice sounds normal despite his weird appearance.

"My name is Lind Kai-" Lind didn't finish because he then realized the situation. "Wait, where the hell am I? And how did I get here? I was just in my bedroom. And who the hell are you?"

"Well, Lind Kai, you can call me Zahri. And you seem to be panicking. Why don't you chill down and tell me the entire story? Take a deep breath and then begin," the man named Zahri reacted. Lind, forgetting to tell Zahri that his name is Lind Kaito, is unsure if he wants to tell what happened to this guy of all people, especially since they both only met seconds ago, but he's the only person he knows in this weird place so he might as well. Lind took a deep breath and started to cool down.

"Okay. Zahri, I was just sleeping peacefully in my room when all the sudden, this weird box literally fell out of the sky....." Lind explained Zahri the entire story and it seemed he was listening to everything.

"Ah, Lind...." Lind is thinking he could get an explanation for everything from Zahri.

"I'm sorry but I have absolutely no idea what the toy box is and how you got here," Zahri replied. Lind almost fell. This guy is useless Lind thought.

"But I might as well explain to you where we both are!" Zahri continued. "Lind, welcome to my planet!"
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Yes, this is my very first RP on this forum. I doubt any of you know that I RP but I'm actually quite good at RPing. Anyway, here is rules.

1. Follow all rules of Sonic Blast

2. Only humans are allowed so no furries.

3. Make your character normal like a normal person(Example: Don't give him the power to control fire).

4. Please don't suddenly change the plot(Example: Suddenly, there's a loud explosion that blew up half the city). Unless I approve, don't do that.

5. Please let me know if you're going to leave the roleplay. Don't just leave without saying anything.

6. Please don't take forever to post because you may delay the entire group and if two or three days passes, I'll probably PM you.

7. Try to make your characters original and detail them. Don't say "[This Guy] is the human version of Sonic."

8. I usually will give you a couple chances to get it just right but if I reject your sign-up sheet, I will tell you why.

9. Try to post with good grammar.

10. Please have common sense.

11. Have fun.
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Name:

Gender:

Age:

Appearance:

Personality:

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Don't worry, a plot for the RP will begin soon enough. Anyway, here is one of the two ways your character can enter the RP

1. You can be a resident on Lind's island where you'll also get a Toy Box to Zahri's mysterious world(I'll take care of you getting the Toy Box. I plan for you to get it in some wacky way. :3 Just introduce your character on the island and then I'll post with you getting sucked into the Toy Box).

2. You can be a resident of Zahri's world but I suggest waiting a bit before actually meeting Lind and Zahri like after I hopefully make my second post. Remember, Zahri's world is full of weird, wacky toys like it's a giant toy playground. The buildings and houses are oddly colored but other then that, those are normal houses for your characters to live in.

If you want more details on how to join the RP, PM me.
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Now here is my sign-up sheet.

Name: Lind Kaito

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Appearance: Lind has black hair that almost covers his blue ears and almost his eyes. The front of his hair though on his forehead looks like it's pointing to one spot in the center of his face. He has some blond highlights on his hair and it looks real neat. He wears an open, black zipper hoodie with a black and gray striped T-shirt under with dark, blue jeans. Finally, he also wears normal black sneakers with white laces. (NOTE: These are the clothes he puts on after he arrives at Zahri's world).

Personality: Lind is a smart, calm person. He tries to not panic most of the time in bad situations and when he struggles with something, he tries to think of a smart way out of it. He's also a very nice and friendly person. Overall, he's a nice, calm, friendly guy.
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Let me know if they are any problems with anything so far.
Edited by Fenroar, Jun 11 2009, 10:53 AM.
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Ah, nice to me you, Lawliet. Anywho, here is my sign-up sheet.

Name: Nate
NickName: Ness
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance:Posted Image
Personality: Young talented kid that has the highest IQ out of his city. He's logical, verbal, and intrapersonal. Shows lack of emotions.
Tastes: Sweets
Skills: Stronger then he looks and faster then he looks.


If we can do two characters then here is my second. If we cannot, then I'll remove the second. Please, let me do two characters.

Name: Ashley
Nickname: Shara
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Posted Image
Personality: In love with Nate knowing he dosen't love her. Naturalist and Interpersonal. Ranks to be the 4th smartest person at her school. Mother and Father own a huge house and she is spoiled. Is very paranoid but strong.

(I'm going to cry if Nate's picture needs to be changed again >_>)
Edited by F`ame, Jun 11 2009, 11:54 AM.
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Nice to meet you too but um, this RP is unrelated to Death Note whatsoever so.....

sorry but Near isn't allowed.

But I'll gladly accept your other character if you edit the part about Near.

Also, give me more details about personality. Like three or four sentences at least.
Edited by Fenroar, Jun 10 2009, 03:10 PM.
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Name: Evan Gonzalez

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Appearance: Olive-skinned, with short, brown, curly hair; and a medium build. Wears a denim jacket over a white t-shirt, jeans, and white Velcro-fastened sneakers.

Personality: What most people know about Evan can be summed up in one word: "Quiet." Not that he seems apathetic in his silence. His demeanor and expressions seem to say more about him, how he feels and thinks, and much like that, more effectively than if he spoke as often as everyone else. He prefers to save words for something important.
Indeed, there is nothing more repulsive than these monsters that defy nature and are known by the name of witcher, as they are the offspring of foul sorcery and witchcraft. They are unscrupulous scoundrels without conscience and virtue, veritable creatures from hell capable only of taking lives. They have no place amongst decent and honest folk.
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I believe SuperSonicStar* was alluding that his character looks like Near, not that his character is Near, Lawliet.
THE HOFFMAN STILL LIVES

(MAINLY BECAUSE HE'S DONE UNIVERSITY AND HAS NOTHING ELSE TO DO DURING THE SUMMER)
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@Hoffman: The person, judging from the small sheet, acts completely like Near though and they obviously both look alike. Just add a couple differences and I'll accept him though.

But Wayward is accepted.
Edited by Fenroar, Jun 11 2009, 03:07 AM.
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Ok, I fixed it so now it should be more different.
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Jun 11 2009, 07:39 AM
Ok, I fixed it so now it should be more different.
Um.....

what did you change? O-O

Just change Nate's appearance a bit. Sorry if I'm sounding too harsh but I don't want a character looking exactly like Near for the entire RP. Once you do that, you'll be accepted.

EDIT: I noticed you changed the picture. But sadly, that is not what I meant. ): Just change his clothes a bit or something to tell him and the character, Near, apart and you'll be accepted immediately. K?

Also, guys, the name of this RP is going to be changed to "Zahri's World" and I'll be editing the first post.
Edited by Fenroar, Jun 11 2009, 10:45 AM.
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Jun 10 2009, 01:55 PM
Ah, nice to me you, Lawliet. Anywho, here is my sign-up sheet.

Name: Nate
NickName: Ness
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance:Posted Image
Personality: Young talented kid that has the highest IQ out of his city. He's logical, verbal, and intrapersonal. Shows lack of emotions.
Tastes: Sweets
Skills: Stronger then he looks and faster then he looks.


If we can do two characters then here is my second. If we cannot, then I'll remove the second. Please, let me do two characters.

Name: Ashley
Nickname: Shara
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Posted Image
Personality: In love with Nate knowing he dosen't love her. Naturalist and Interpersonal. Ranks to be the 4th smartest person at her school. Mother and Father own a huge house and she is spoiled. Is very paranoid but strong.

(I'm going to cry if Nate's picture needs to be changed again >_>)
*noticed you edited your post*

Well, I guess it's good. Accepted. Anyway, both of you introduce your characters either on Lind's island or Zahri's world to begin.
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Nate woke up from the crash next door and recieved a phone call. He picked his phone up and looked at the I.D. It was Shara and he sighed. "Hello?" he said. "Heeeyyy, Nate!" she yelled. "Uh, hello. Listen, did you hear that crash?" She thought a moment and responded, "Yes, I heard a crash." He blew his hair and then thought a moment for what had happened.
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Suddenly, another Toy Box shattered through the ceiling and hit the phone Nate was holding out of his hand. It's the same looking box that Lind got earlier. What will Nate do?

Meanwhile, Lind is still with Zahri.

"What do you mean your world?" Lind asked. "This place belongs to you?"

"Follow me. We'll both go to my house and I'll explain everything along the way," Zahri replied. He been calm the entire time he was here, even when he heard Lind's story that he came from another world. Zahri began walking away with his hands in his pockets and Lind, having no choice, followed him on the decorated, colorful sidewalk with pink and light blue buildings everywhere. Before Zahri began explaining however, he stopped at what appeared to be a small Yogurt bar that looks like a lemonade stand that little kids usually make. In fact, a little kid probably did make it, seeing the bar is made out of wood and there's only two seats, both for the people serving yogurt with a lousy "Yogurt Shop" sign.

"Yes, I'll have a Strawberry-Banana yogurt, please," Zahri asked. He turned to Lind. "Want some?"

Lind shook his head, not really in the mood for yogurt. Zahri sighed and then gave the clerk what appeared to be a five-dollar bill with pink and blue colors on it and it has Zahri's face on it.

"Thank you." Zahri then grabbed a plastic spoon and ripped open the lid of the yogurt. He immediately began opening it and began taking bits of yogurt as he then continued walking with Lind walking with him.

"Zahri, anytime now?" Lind asked, getting annoyed.

"Ah, yes. I almost forgot. Sorry, yogurt is so delicious."

"..."

"Anyway, this is my world that I created which I call 'The Playground.'"

"So wait, does that make you the god of this world?" Lind asked.

"Um.... I guess you can say that," Zahri answered. "Do you know what a Guardian is, Lind?"

"No....."

"Oh dear, you really must be somewhere far from here then," Zahri reacted. "I might as well explain. A Guardian is someone who gets to own and make a world."

"So wait, you're a Guardian?!?"

"Um, actually... my father was a Guardian but then he died so I then became a Guardian of this world."

"So you are a Guardian," Lind said.

"Yep."

"..."

"Might as well go on. Anyway, a Guardian is someone who gets to own and make the world as I just said. After my father died, I became a Guardian of his world and now I manage the world. I then changed the world into something that suits me so I chose a playground, kiddy kind of place," Zahri continued.

"Wait, how is that possible?"

"I guess you can say I asked the Guardian God to approve my theme of this world and he obviously approved," Zahri answered. "The Guardian God can make stuff appear and disappear and if he doesn't like the progress or state of your world, you'll lose your Guardian status and it will go to someone else who can do anything the person wants with your former world. Nobody ever seen the Guardian God or where he is."

"Can anybody become a Guardian?" Lind asked, curious how many other Guardians and their worlds are there.

"It will be very hard. Only a special person can be one and only the Guardian God chooses. Plus, they are not much worlds out there in this part of the galaxy so even if you can be a Guardian, it may take a while for you to actually be a Guardian due to the lack of worlds open."

"Are there Guardians with planets all over the universe or just around where?"

"So far, we only know they are Guardians and their planets in a quarter of the galaxy we're currently in, the Guardian Galaxy, but it's possible they could be other Guardians somewhere in the universe. However, since you never heard of Guardians, I doubt they are any on your planet at least," Zahri answered. He then finished the last of his yogurt and then threw the spoon and cup in a nearby trash can.

"How big are the planets with Guardians? And how big is this one?" Lind asked, asking more questions.

"The planet can be smaller then a normal moon or a quarter of the size of a star which we all know just a quarter is pretty big. Sadly, though, the Playground is only slightly bigger then the size of a normal moon," said Zahri. Zahri and Lind then arrived at what appears to be a tall iron fence with spiky tops. Near the entrance of the fence is what appears to be an oversized silver calculator but Lind doubt it's actually a calculator.

"Now to disarm the security system," said Zahri. Lind noticed Zahri press a couple buttons on the security system and suddenly, a message saying "System deactivated. You are free to enter." The iron fence then opened itself wide open for Zahri and Lind and Zahri walked inside.

"Hurry before the thing shuts and the security system reactivates," he told Lind. Lind quickly rushed in as the iron fence shut behind them with the security system probably reactivating itself. Red lasers quickly scanned their bodies as they approached the larger-then-usual doors of the house. The lasers appear to be coming from holes above the door.

Tight security but then again, Zahri says he is this Guardian, Lind thought. The lasers on Zahri turned green and the lasers on Lind stayed red.

"Stay here a sec," Zahri told him. "The system thinks you could be an intruder because it never seen you before so once I go in, the doors will shut and if you try to break in or something, my security system will.... well.... let's just not talk about it."

Lind, scared, stood still. Zahri told him he can walk around the yard as long as he doesn't tackle into the doors or windows or anything but Lind is scared what the security system can do to him so he stood absolutely still. Lind looked at the house. It is huge. It's a mansion, Lind thought. The mansion probably has three or even four floors with the outer walls and roof white and gray. The lasers on Lind then turned green and Zahri opened the door.

"Lind, since I'm guessing you don't have a home, I guess you'll be staying with me so welcome to my house," Zahri announced.

((Also, don't worry, guys. This is my longest post in the RP right here so hopefully, it will get shorter from here)).
Edited by Fenroar, Jun 11 2009, 04:22 PM.
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Nate dropped the phone and looked at the box. "Ow," he said. He got up and looked at it. He knocked on it and then slightly opened the case. He stopped and thought a moment of what could happen. "Argh," he thought. He sighed and just thought of the worst. He opened the box, fully, and then waiting a few seconds. Nothing happened and he got back in his bed. "That was worthless," he thought.
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Evan had returned from a late-night run of paintball. Smirking contentedly, he pulled off the vest he had on over his clothes and his face mask, tossing them onto an overstuffed beanbag chair along with the gun. He'd done well that night, and he replayed in his mind a few spectacular shots as he sat down on his bed and leaned back.
Indeed, there is nothing more repulsive than these monsters that defy nature and are known by the name of witcher, as they are the offspring of foul sorcery and witchcraft. They are unscrupulous scoundrels without conscience and virtue, veritable creatures from hell capable only of taking lives. They have no place amongst decent and honest folk.
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The real Toy Box then busted through Nate's window, rolling a bit next to Nate. If Nate opens this one, he'll get sucked in and possibly end up like Lind.

At Evan's house, the door bell rang. At the door is a man dressed in all black, wearing a black suit with black dress pants. He has sunglasses on covering his eyes. He is carrying a rather large box. A toy box. However, the man isn't very patient because he then put the toy box in front of Evan's door and quickly left.

"So, wait, I'll be living with you?" Lind asked. Zahri nodded.

"Until we can find you someway back to your world," he said.

"How long will that take?" Lind asked as both of them walked inside.

"Days, months, or even years," Zahri answered. The doors then shut behind them. Lind groaned. He's not sure if he wants to stay here for years.
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(I like this plot.)

Nate sighed and then groaned. He had a hole in his roof and now, a broken window. He got up and gazed upon the box. Still thinking of the worst, Nate walks towards the box. "No, I shouldn't open this," he said. Shara comes busting through his door and yells, "There it is!" Nate looked at her and said, "What, the box?" She grabbed it andthen looked around. She opened the lid slightly and Shara looked at Nate.

"Wait, don't-" Nate said with his hand out.

She opened the box, fully, and then grabbed onto the handle. She screamed and Nate hanged onto the bed. "Agh," he thought. The wind was too powerful for Shara to handle. She letted go and was going to get sucked into the box. "Wait, nooo!!" Nate yelled. He jumped and grabbed her but then flew into the box as well.
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