The Water Fall of Emerald Hill / The Glitch of Emerald Hill

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The Water Fall of Emerald Hill / The Glitch of Emerald Hill
Tweet Topic Started: May 25 2009, 12:40 PM (216 Views)
ShadFort360	May 25 2009, 12:40 PM Post #1
Sky Sanctuary Zone Posts: 5,933 Group: B Rank Legend Member #182 Joined: August 15, 2006	WARNING: THIS CONTAINS BLOOD AND GORE. This is a mix of HORROR and ACTION. If you want to know what this is based off of click here but be aware of spoilers. Spoiler: click to toggle This is based off the Ashura glitch of Sonic 2. 3 Years ago. Sonic was running across Emerald Hill Zone. Being chased by Amy. He then entered a waterfall to get away from her. "Finally away from Amy. But it is even better that there is no more Eggman. Nothing to worry about" Sonic then exited the waterfall. But then a hedgehog suddenly appeared and walked out. Looking just like Sonic except for the colours being different. Amy said "Sonic. Where are you" She then saw the hedgehog and mistaken him for Sonic. Amy grabbed him and said "Sonic. I thought I lost track of you" Then suddenly a scream could be heard. Sonic ran to the scream to find Amy on the floor dead. Her head was cut off and there was blood on the floor. Sonic said "Amy..." Sonic felt really bad for not being with her. Sonic ran off to tell everyone Present Day. Sonic was running along happily well as happy as he could be. No one has found who had killed Amy. Sonic had let it all to rest. No more murders had happened. He then stopped at his house and took a rest. Then a few hour later he was woke up by a scream. He ran out. He ran to where he heard the scream. He then saw Tails dead with his two tails ripped off. Edited by ShadFort360, May 28 2009, 09:23 AM.
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Cee Jay Haych	May 25 2009, 02:31 PM Post #2
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	Unnessary voilence, no real plot and basically way too short. maybe its because I dont know what you based this on(I did read the spoiler tag), but theres just nothing here to get excitied about, if you choose to continue then you need to work on some sort of plot develpoment.



SirronFang	May 25 2009, 03:20 PM Post #3
A vampyric fan/subscriber of SirRonLionHeart Posts: 352 Group: E Rank Knight Member #9,902 Joined: April 11, 2009	The plot, if there is one, moves WAY too fast. This isn't really even a tidbit, its giving us half the story in two paragraphs. There, as mentioned, is unnecessary violence. Also, if you kill someone off, make it one of those characters that is very minor, unless it is the perfect time to kill off someone like Amy or Tails.
	http://www.youtube.com/sirronlionheart Watch him and love him. You can't beat this FANTASTIC man with his OMEGA wife! Start here! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jm1IBHlI-Og ! Sonic the Hedgehog the Porcupine is waiting! - l------------------------------------------------------------------------------l l--X--Windows has encountered a serious problem! (Error 13)--------l l------------------------------------------------------------------------------l l-- I don't know what the hell you did, but you really F*ed ---------l l--up this time! How do you even screw up that badly?-----------------l l--You must be really bad with computers!------------------------------l l-------- (Now fix this or I'll delete your ass!)-------------------------------------l l------------------------------------------------------------------------------l Depending on your computer, the ends of this bar may be off center. Deal with it or Windows will delete your ass. - aafang wrote:** Quote: Yeah, to not many stages that off bother me. Um, sometimes I don't even understand my own typing... - I follow these rules here... http://www.videojug.com/film/how-to-behave-on-an-internet-forum - Check out this cool roleplay! It is me and Ramen!


A Spades Ω	May 25 2009, 04:58 PM Post #4
Now, count up you crimes! Posts: 1,181 Group: B Rank Hero Member #9,626 Joined: January 2, 2009	Pretty much everything stated up above, but you're Grammar could stand for some improvement too. "Sonic was running across Emerald Hill Zone. Being chased by Amy." For example, the above sentence(s). The first one would be fine on it's own, But the second one is not only barely long enough to be a sentence, and it lacks most elements that a sentence consists of. "Sonic was running across Emerald Hill zone, being chased by Amy." There's way to express more than one thought in a sentence, the nifty little key right by the 'M' and the period. You could also re-arrange the sentence to give it better flow. "Sonic was being chased by Amy as he ran across Emerald Hill Zone." "Amy was chasing Sonic as he ran through Emerald Hill Zone." Trust me, using good Grammar alone can make story, narrative, or god forbid, a post 10 times better. it makes you easier to understand, and makes you sound more intellectual too. I hate my freakin' 'K' key.... Edited by A Spades Ω, May 25 2009, 05:20 PM.
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Gallant Vision	May 25 2009, 07:24 PM Post #5
Sky Sanctuary Zone Posts: 6,835 Group: B Rank Legend Member #9,330 Joined: September 4, 2008	O_O I would actually read this if you are going to continue this.
	I have an interest in spriting. If anyone has a request, don't hesitate to ask. Deep stuff below: Spoiler: click to toggle The world. Filled with millions of differences. But despite the fact, we all are brothers and sisters, Inhabiting and living under the same sky. But despite this, we war and kill our siblings over trivial things, Staining the earth on which we all walk, With the blood of our brothers, With the blood of our sisters. The sky under which we go through our lives weeps, For the clouds surely know of the atrocities we commit. We slay, maim, gouge, and destroy our siblings, In the name of things which ought not be fought for. Approach a member of the family not, With the tainted lash of hatred, But with the pure flower of love. ======================================= The sword. A weapon who's blade is stained red With the blood of its countless victims. Were it alive, what would such a being feel? Would it live only to fight, And fight only to live? Would it be controlled By those with the skill to do so? I believe that it would cry For each person it has ever brought harm to, Its tears as red as the blood it has spilled.


ShadFort360	May 26 2009, 08:41 AM Post #6
Sky Sanctuary Zone Posts: 5,933 Group: B Rank Legend Member #182 Joined: August 15, 2006	Sonic couldn't believe this. It had been 3 years since Amy was murdered and now his best freind is dead. He slowly walked away from the scene without thinking about it. As he walked away he saw someone up ahead. Sonic saw Knuckles, Knuckles said "Sonic, what's wrong? Don't tell me you are still upset about Amy." Sonic said "Knuckles it's not her.. It's Tails, he was dead not far away" Knuckles then said ".. Do you think it was the same person that killed Amy" Sonic thought about it. Sonic said "It can't be, both murder's are far too different." Knuckles said "Look it should be fi.." Knuckles heard some noises. He then said "I hear something" Knuckles ran off in the direction of the sound. Sonic hoped Knuckles would be okay. It had been a few minutes and then he heard some shouting. Knuckles shouted "SONIC HELP!!!!!!!" Sonic then ran to the sound. All he saw was Knuckles. Knuckles was knocked out and bleeding but he was still alive. Sonic grabbed Knuckles and headed for the hospital. Edited by ShadFort360, May 26 2009, 08:42 AM.
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Gallant Vision	May 26 2009, 05:02 PM Post #7
Sky Sanctuary Zone Posts: 6,835 Group: B Rank Legend Member #9,330 Joined: September 4, 2008	You could stand to lengthen it a bit more, but I really like how this is coming along.
	I have an interest in spriting. If anyone has a request, don't hesitate to ask. Deep stuff below: Spoiler: click to toggle The world. Filled with millions of differences. But despite the fact, we all are brothers and sisters, Inhabiting and living under the same sky. But despite this, we war and kill our siblings over trivial things, Staining the earth on which we all walk, With the blood of our brothers, With the blood of our sisters. The sky under which we go through our lives weeps, For the clouds surely know of the atrocities we commit. We slay, maim, gouge, and destroy our siblings, In the name of things which ought not be fought for. Approach a member of the family not, With the tainted lash of hatred, But with the pure flower of love. ======================================= The sword. A weapon who's blade is stained red With the blood of its countless victims. Were it alive, what would such a being feel? Would it live only to fight, And fight only to live? Would it be controlled By those with the skill to do so? I believe that it would cry For each person it has ever brought harm to, Its tears as red as the blood it has spilled.


SirronFang	May 27 2009, 01:51 PM Post #8
A vampyric fan/subscriber of SirRonLionHeart Posts: 352 Group: E Rank Knight Member #9,902 Joined: April 11, 2009	As I said, there is unneccessary violence and the plot moves along too quickly.
	http://www.youtube.com/sirronlionheart Watch him and love him. You can't beat this FANTASTIC man with his OMEGA wife! Start here! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jm1IBHlI-Og ! Sonic the Hedgehog the Porcupine is waiting! - l------------------------------------------------------------------------------l l--X--Windows has encountered a serious problem! (Error 13)--------l l------------------------------------------------------------------------------l l-- I don't know what the hell you did, but you really F*ed ---------l l--up this time! How do you even screw up that badly?-----------------l l--You must be really bad with computers!------------------------------l l-------- (Now fix this or I'll delete your ass!)-------------------------------------l l------------------------------------------------------------------------------l Depending on your computer, the ends of this bar may be off center. Deal with it or Windows will delete your ass. - aafang wrote:** Quote: Yeah, to not many stages that off bother me. Um, sometimes I don't even understand my own typing... - I follow these rules here... http://www.videojug.com/film/how-to-behave-on-an-internet-forum - Check out this cool roleplay! It is me and Ramen!


ShadFort360	May 28 2009, 09:24 AM Post #9
Sky Sanctuary Zone Posts: 5,933 Group: B Rank Legend Member #182 Joined: August 15, 2006	aafang May 27 2009, 01:51 PM As I said, there is unneccessary violencey. I forgot to say that this roleplay is a mix of horror and action.
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Cee Jay Haych	May 28 2009, 10:37 AM Post #10
"I didn't use the whole thing ...." Posts: 3,252 Group: =SB= Kings Member #9,868 Joined: March 28, 2009	ShadFort360 May 28 2009, 09:24 AM aafang May 27 2009, 01:51 PM As I said, there is unneccessary violencey. I forgot to say that this roleplay is a mix of horror and action. But its not horror, its just mindless bloodshed, there is not suspence or anything that could classify as frightening.



ShadFort360	May 28 2009, 11:38 AM Post #11
Sky Sanctuary Zone Posts: 5,933 Group: B Rank Legend Member #182 Joined: August 15, 2006	Seris May 28 2009, 10:37 AM ShadFort360 May 28 2009, 09:24 AM aafang May 27 2009, 01:51 PM As I said, there is unneccessary violencey. I forgot to say that this roleplay is a mix of horror and action. But its not horror, its just mindless bloodshed, there is not suspence or anything that could classify as frightening. It's horror from how I see it. Also note that it's what I intended it to be. Remember that I write it. Also it's from what I think. (I am trying to be as calm as possible) Sigh.. People fail to reliaze that this is made from MY take on things. You people fail to reliaze it. It is an either "See what we have or leave" thing. So I am closing this as people fail to reliaze.
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